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Old 08-22-2011, 07:26 AM   #1
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A poem foretelling the events of my story: Ishtar

My body, it hurts to move, because of the pain my chest. The horrible pains that life gave to me for so many years, dwells within me. Never seeing the light of day, until now. Now, I don the name of the "Hero of Darkness". A legendary being of darkness. What keeps me going is Mikomi.
"Mikomi" literally meaning "hope."
I will cling to Mikomi. The moment I lose faith, and lose all hope is the moment I should consider myself dead. Mikomi will always be there for me.
Mikomi keeps me going. Hope brings light. Light will always shine with a bright future. But light and darkness are two sides of the same coin. One cannot exist without the other. Darkness will always stalk the light, light will always glow within the shadows. The deeper the light, the deeper the darkness.
The Hero of light, bringing Mikomi with him, will eventually step up to the Hero of Darkness and clash, once again.

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Old 08-22-2011, 07:34 AM   #2
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It's kinda hard to understand and it's vague. But if you read my story til the end, it all makes sense
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Old 08-22-2011, 07:54 AM   #3
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My body, it hurts to move, because of the pain my chest.
The horrible pains that life gave to me for so many years, dwells within me.
Never seeing the light of day, until now.
Now, I don the name of the "Hero of Darkness". A legendary being of darkness.

What keeps me going is Mikomi. "Mikomi" literally meaning "hope."
I will cling to Mikomi. The moment I lose faith,
and lose all hope is the moment I should consider myself dead.
Mikomi will always be there for me.
Mikomi keeps me going. Hope brings light.
Light will always shine with a bright future.

But light and darkness are two sides of the same coin.
One cannot exist without the other.
Darkness will always stalk the light, light will always glow within the shadows.
The deeper the light, the deeper the darkness.
The Hero of light, bringing Mikomi with him,
will eventually step up to the Hero of Darkness and clash, once again.
I think I would have do it like this to make it more look like a poem.
A+ for the content and the message. Its a really good story too!
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Old 08-22-2011, 08:31 AM   #4
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is it like a poem that delivers the idea of the story?
its cool anyway
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