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Old 07-04-2009, 01:11 PM   #1
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Hotokegao Feari stood outside the large house, tan arms crossed tight over her chest and waist-length pink hair billowing in the wind. She shivered, shutting her blue eyes to the chilly breeze and creepy sight. The house had an eerie presence about it. The window shutters were beaten, worn and falling off. Paint chipped off the walls. Tiles occasionally slid from the roof and dropped to the wilting grass and weeds in the yard.

"I don't think we should do this, Urufu," Feari warned. "I have a bad feeling."

The adressed male gave a bark-like laugh, lighting up his own rich brown orbs. "It'll be fine. You worry too much." He pulled a comb out of his pocket and raked it through his silver hair.

"Easy for a werewolf to say!" the girl retorted, throwing her hands up. "I am just a small faerie! Do you know how many creatures would eat me for breakfast or sell me as a servant!?!"

Urufu wrapped his arms around her. "It's okay, Feari. I can take care of you. So what do you say?"

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Old 07-04-2009, 01:17 PM   #2
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i like it i wanna see what they do with the orbs and i also wanna see where this story leads to
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Old 07-04-2009, 03:54 PM   #3
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i like it continue
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Old 07-04-2009, 05:17 PM   #4
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i like it i wanna see what they do with the orbs and i also wanna see where this story leads to
Actually, as it's used here, "orbs" is refering to his eyes. But I'm glad you guys are interested! ^^
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Old 07-05-2009, 09:15 AM   #5
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lol u got me interested keep going
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Old 07-05-2009, 04:56 PM   #6
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Feari bit her lip. Before she knew what she was saying, the word "okay" slipped out of her mouth.

Urufu grinned and pulled her by the hand into the building. The faerie gasped at the sudden wind crashing on her delicate wings. Inside the old house, it was dusty and dark. The girl was glowing and werewolves naturally see in the dark, so they had no trouble navigating through the halls, but it didn't change the strange vibes the pink-haired teen was recieving.

"Whoa, look at this!" the male shouted, ducking into one of the rooms.

After a moment of careful consideration, Feari followed her friend inside.
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Old 07-05-2009, 05:03 PM   #7
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oooh interesting go go go go keep writing!
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Old 07-06-2009, 04:40 PM   #8
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agreed with mai!
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Feari shifted from foot to foot before deciding to look at whatever it was that Urufu wanted to show her. She stepped into the room he had gone into. The werewolf held a chest the size of a loaf of bread in his hands.

"It's so dusty," he commented, brushing the box off.

Now, even the faerie was curious. "I wonder what's inside it?"

"I dunno," her friend replied. He tried to pry it open, but it stayed shut.

"There has to be a key around here somewhere..." The female began searching the room, in between furniture and in cracks.

"Ah!" Urufu grabbed a key that was nearby and opened the box. Immediately, it sucked him inside.
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