Spoiler Prediction Naruto Chapter 535 Iruka vs Naruto

[mrsticky005]

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

I was kinda hoping he would kill Naruto.

Feh. I'd rather Naruto kill Iruka.

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Originally Posted by mrsticky005

Oh and I'm not suggesting that Guy will die at all. I'm just saying he shouldn't die so soon especially when the Kisame vs Guy fight is still in memory.

Indeed. And if he does, RockemSockemLECOM will fill his shoes. Actually, sick as it sounds, I think the story would be better served if Lee dies and Gai becomes a morose recluse. Life has its tragedies.

Originally Posted by mrsticky005

Feh. I'd rather Naruto kill Iruka.

Let the student become the master!

[deidara330]

Honestly, it was quite good, but I think it's somewhat inconsistent.

For one, the discussion between Iruka and Naruto shouldn't be that short. There will most likely be more voice raising/yelling, Naruto saying things like "I can't wait and do nothing while my friends are all killed one by one by the Akatsuki!" And Iruka will say things like "If you go out there and get captured they'll have all died in vain, every single one! This war is to protect you, damn it!" And "We have friends out there, too, fighting, dying... We're not about to let you throw their lives away out of your own carelessness, Naruto." Naruto would probably respond with something like "The Akatsuki only want me... If I'm captured no one else will die." If Naruto were to betray Iruka, he would only do so knowing that as long as Killerbee is still alive, the Akatsuki's plan can't succeed, essentially admitting to the fact that he could very well die by fighting in the war.

Afterwards, Kakashi's division. Although it's already been mentioned, there aren't any Zetsu there. Kakashi being saved is unlike him, he wouldn't allow the enemy to have such an opening in the state he's in. Also too much like Ino saving Shikamaru. Personally, I don't think Maki would just up and die, at least not in that way. These ninja don't let theirs guards down, and having seen the enemy's ability, she would at least try to escape before getting stabbed and dying of mortal injury. There's also considering that Maki is crucial to this battle and would likely be guarded by several others as well.

What happens with the Daimyo is fine, but I personally think Zetsu may have a more specific relationship with Kiri and the Land of Water, so I wouldn't readily say that will happen.

Iruka flashback is actually very good, if Naruto decides to fight it will probably occur.

I doubt Anbu would actually make it to Mountain's Grave, or be able to set up a jutsu. But, I just read (more like skimmed) your following prediction chapter, so that explains some things I didn't quite get reading this one. Although, White Zetsu should still be guarding Sasuke, and there should still be a Kabuto and several others to kill Anbu before they even get within a mile of Mountain's Grave. I simply don't think Sasuke would be let out without Madara's approval.

[mrsticky005]

Originally Posted by deidara330

Honestly, it was quite good, but I think it's somewhat inconsistent.

For one, the discussion between Iruka and Naruto shouldn't be that short. There will most likely be more voice raising/yelling, Naruto saying things like "I can't wait and do nothing while my friends are all killed one by one by the Akatsuki!" And Iruka will say things like "If you go out there and get captured they'll have all died in vain, every single one! This war is to protect you, damn it!" And "We have friends out there, too, fighting, dying... We're not about to let you throw their lives away out of your own carelessness, Naruto." Naruto would probably respond with something like "The Akatsuki only want me... If I'm captured no one else will die." If Naruto were to betray Iruka, he would only do so knowing that as long as Killerbee is still alive, the Akatsuki's plan can't succeed, essentially admitting to the fact that he could very well die by fighting in the war.

True I could do all that...but then the whole chapter be about Iruka. :/

Afterwards, Kakashi's division. Although it's already been mentioned, there aren't any Zetsu there.

Well there's no reason they can't appear there.

Kakashi being saved is unlike him, he wouldn't allow the enemy to have such an opening in the state he's in. Also too much like Ino saving Shikamaru.

I don't really consider it "saving" but more teamwork. Kakashi probably would have dodged it anyways. It's like when Chouza crushed the
Asura Path even though Kakashi already had a plan.

Personally, I don't think Maki would just up and die, at least not in that way.

Maybe not but it would be bad for Divsion 3 if she died since her sealing jutsu is useful in this war.

These ninja don't let theirs guards down, and having seen the enemy's ability, she would at least try to escape before getting stabbed and dying of mortal injury. There's also considering that Maki is crucial to this battle and would likely be guarded by several others as well.

Yeah but...Maki dies.

What happens with the Daimyo is fine, but I personally think Zetsu may have a more specific relationship with Kiri and the Land of Water, so I wouldn't readily say that will happen.

I pretty much just got lazy here as I have no clue what black zetsu's abilities are aside from acting as a remote control for white zetsu.

Iruka flashback is actually very good, if Naruto decides to fight it will probably occur.

Thanks.

I doubt Anbu would actually make it to Mountain's Grave, or be able to set up a jutsu. But, I just read (more like skimmed) your following prediction chapter, so that explains some things I didn't quite get reading this one.

Ok

Although, White Zetsu should still be guarding Sasuke,

White Zetsu's spores are tracking Kabuto so I think he's with Kabuto.


and there should still be a Kabuto and several others to kill Anbu before they even get within a mile of Mountain's Grave.

They came from a different direction.

I simply don't think Sasuke would be let out without Madara's approval.

Meh. I don't think Madara is there to stop Sasuke.

[deidara330]

Originally Posted by mrsticky005

True I could do all that...but then the whole chapter be about Iruka. :/

Well there's no reason they can't appear there.

I don't really consider it "saving" but more teamwork. Kakashi probably would have dodged it anyways. It's like when Chouza crushed the
Asura Path even though Kakashi already had a plan.

Maybe not but it would be bad for Divsion 3 if she died since her sealing jutsu is useful in this war. Yeah but...Maki dies.

I pretty much just got lazy here as I have no clue what black zetsu's abilities are aside from acting as a remote control for white zetsu.

White Zetsu's spores are tracking Kabuto so I think he's with Kabuto.

They came from a different direction.

Meh. I don't think Madara is there to stop Sasuke.

Not quite. More Iruka, Naruto, and how the war will affect them both.

There is, actually. Madara commanded the Zetsu to move underground, the ones that Division 2 fought were only there because Kitsuchi and Kurotsuchi dug them up, and several thousand still got past that. Madara's goal is Naruto, so even if he has an ulterior motive, he wants to make it appear that way. The Zetsu that passed under Division 2 would head straight to the island turtle, which is why I think they may actually attack as Naruto and Iruka are conversing. (The ones fighting Division 1 appeared because they were sent by sea and can't use Mayfly there.)

Hmmm, that didn't seem clear to me. When Kakashi said "That was close" it made me feel more like the Nara clansman had saved Kakashi rather than coordinated with him.

Seems like you just want someone to die or something to go wrong. Honestly, I think the Alliance should be outmatching the Akatsuki, due to the fact that the Akatsuki outnumber the Alliance by 20,000 soldiers. If the Alliance doesn't have an advantage in tactics and skill, most of them will die, and that'd be incredibly grim for the series.

He actually isn't a remote control for Wite Zetsu. When Black Zetsu described White's spore jutsu as his own, he was most likely refering to himself as Zetsu. When he said he is the land itself, he called himself Black Zetsu.

His spores and his main body can be in very different places.

Alright, I suppose. I still find it far-fetched.

Well, he certainly doesn't want Sasuke to die. He can't let Sasuke go until Sasuke's eyes adapt, and Sasuke doesn't seem to know when that'll be.

[mrsticky005]

Originally Posted by deidara330

Not quite. More Iruka, Naruto, and how the war will affect them both.

There is, actually. Madara commanded the Zetsu to move underground, the ones that Division 2 fought were only there because Kitsuchi and Kurotsuchi dug them up, and several thousand still got past that. Madara's goal is Naruto, so even if he has an ulterior motive, he wants to make it appear that way. The Zetsu that passed under Division 2 would head straight to the island turtle, which is why I think they may actually attack as Naruto and Iruka are conversing. (The ones fighting Division 1 appeared because they were sent by sea and can't use Mayfly there.)

Hmmm, that didn't seem clear to me. When Kakashi said "That was close" it made me feel more like the Nara clansman had saved Kakashi rather than coordinated with him.

Seems like you just want someone to die or something to go wrong. Honestly, I think the Alliance should be outmatching the Akatsuki, due to the fact that the Akatsuki outnumber the Alliance by 20,000 soldiers. If the Alliance doesn't have an advantage in tactics and skill, most of them will die, and that'd be incredibly grim for the series.

He actually isn't a remote control for Wite Zetsu. When Black Zetsu described White's spore jutsu as his own, he was most likely refering to himself as Zetsu. When he said he is the land itself, he called himself Black Zetsu.

His spores and his main body can be in very different places.

Alright, I suppose. I still find it far-fetched.

Well, he certainly doesn't want Sasuke to die. He can't let Sasuke go until Sasuke's eyes adapt, and Sasuke doesn't seem to know when that'll be.

Well anywho I'm not Kishi nor perfect so I'm bound to make mistakes.

[deidara330]

Originally Posted by mrsticky005

Well anywho I'm not Kishi nor perfect so I'm bound to make mistakes.

Well, it was good. The biggest problem I've ever had with people making predictions is that they do it for more than one chapter, sometimes up to five. The further ahead you go into the story with personal predictions, the less likely the events you describe will actually occur.

If you'd be willing to put up with me (as I sometimes have a tendency to annoy people I work together with) we could co-write weekly chapter predictions. Your prediction was good, but I simply felt it could be better if it stuck more with what the story already has. If you don't really care that much, though, then nevermind. It doesn't matter anyways.

I want to improve my writing skills, though, so helping you write predictions might be good for that.

[mrsticky005]

Originally Posted by deidara330

Well, it was good. The biggest problem I've ever had with people making predictions is that they do it for more than one chapter, sometimes up to five. The further ahead you go into the story with personal predictions, the less likely the events you describe will actually occur.

If you'd be willing to put up with me (as I sometimes have a tendency to annoy people I work together with) we could co-write weekly chapter predictions. Your prediction was good, but I simply felt it could be better if it stuck more with what the story already has. If you don't really care that much, though, then nevermind. It doesn't matter anyways.

I want to improve my writing skills, though, so helping you write predictions might be good for that.

Well I write the predictions more for what it be fun to happen but also at the same time what could be possible to happen. I mean I kinda figure
things like Iruka getting pummelled by Naruto wouldn't happen and that
their probably wouldn't be as much happening in the chapter but as long
as I'm writing the prediction I'm gonna try and make it entertaining.
Because really who cares if I'm right or wrong. It's really just something
(hopefully) fun to read while waiting for the spoilers or actual chapter.

A co-author prediction could be fun.

Though I think I did fairly well with the accuracy of the prediction.
I mean sure a lot less happened in the real chapter and Naruto's juggernauting through wasn't as violent but those were things I did
more for the heck of it than actually expecting them to happen.

Though I did think it was neat how Naruto used Sage Mode to find out about the war.

[Wind Style Naruto]

And as always the manga version is better than any fan made prediction but your prediction was good although but one thing you need know.....each chapters aren't that long.

[deidara330]

Originally Posted by mrsticky005

Well I write the predictions more for what it be fun to happen but also at the same time what could be possible to happen. I mean I kinda figure
things like Iruka getting pummelled by Naruto wouldn't happen and that
their probably wouldn't be as much happening in the chapter but as long
as I'm writing the prediction I'm gonna try and make it entertaining.
Because really who cares if I'm right or wrong. It's really just something
(hopefully) fun to read while waiting for the spoilers or actual chapter.

A co-author prediction could be fun.

Though I think I did fairly well with the accuracy of the prediction.
I mean sure a lot less happened in the real chapter and Naruto's juggernauting through wasn't as violent but those were things I did
more for the heck of it than actually expecting them to happen.

Though I did think it was neat how Naruto used Sage Mode to find out about the war.

I'm simply concerned with plausablity. If you put something in that won't or can't happen, it takes more away from the prediction and makes it more fanfiction. In my personal opinion, a full-length chapter prediction is simply a fanfiction of things that could happen. When you get that specific, you can't expect it to turn out as you want, but it's less fun (at least in my view) when you put in something that can't happen.

You were right, but I was right as well. Iruka flashback? Happened. Naruto charging? Happened. (Albeit in Sage Mode.) And Shino's father's specific unwillingness to be truthful certainly happened, including insect usage. Your chapter was actually quite accurate for a prediction, considering. However, I was right about more of the chapter being about Iruka and Naruto and the greater length of dialogue between them.

I agree. I more particularly enjoyed Iruka's new jutsu, Naruto's rememberance of Nagato's words, and Iruka's message to Naruto. I couldn't have predicted that.

If we did co-author predictions, it'd be more of me simply giving you suggestions and you having the final say. Even I know I take things more seriously than other people, so if you think something shouldn't be changed, you don't have to change it. I'd rather you post it than me.

Another thing is that I see you've done a few of these predictions before, and even some groups like this time, but not on any particular basis. If we both worked on something, we could afford to more of them, maybe weekly or bi-weekly. It'd be something fun to read and 50% likely to happen anyways.

So yeah, I think it'd be fun too.

[iMario999]

Complete fail lol, anyways, it was nice to read!

[mrsticky005]

Originally Posted by Wind Style Naruto

And as always the manga version is better than any fan made prediction but your prediction was good although but one thing you need know.....each chapters aren't that long.

That's because it's the original, Kishimoto knows the story best, and he has drawings...I don't. And yes I know each chapter isn't that long but it would be awesome if they were.

Originally Posted by iMario999

Complete fail lol, anyways, it was nice to read!

I don't think it was failed. I mean it was for fun in the first place and I wasn't really going for accuracy.