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i love it 19 61.29%
i like it 6 19.35%
it is ok 5 16.13%
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:17 PM   #21
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*gasp* WHAT HAPPENED??
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:20 PM   #22
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5 bucks say that was an antivampire shot to kill vampires or turn them back to humans either that or idk what it is
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:21 PM   #23
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5 bucks that his sensei did that because it was a final test ^.^
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:23 PM   #24
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part 4: scared
~five hours later~

i woke up to see my senpai right over me, his neck right in front of my mouth. "what are you--" was all i said because i bit into his neck before i finished talking. i drank only a small amount and let go. "i am sorry senpai" i said as a let go. "i wanted you to drink some. don't freak out but this was in your neck. it was full of Lycan venom. you now have Lycan venom in your stream. drink some more, it will make the Lycan venom not as strong." he said and i bit in again...........
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:25 PM   #25
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o_O lol
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:25 PM   #26
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o_O o_O
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:32 PM   #27
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DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:33 PM   #28
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okay we are both wrong so far im not giving up my 5 bucks!!they will ram u if i even put them in the same house with some1 they dont know ^.^
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:33 PM   #29
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and agreed DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH!!
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:34 PM   #30
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awesome!!!
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:37 PM   #31
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I love it sensei! ^/_\^ Write more please!!
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:48 PM   #32
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part 5: dual spirit

i tried to let go of senpai but he would not let me let go. i am going to kill him if i keep going i though to myself. "i am not letting you turn into one of those dogs!" he said to me, almost yelling. after about 30 minutes of me drinking his blood i started feeling changes. "dang, i am to late!" he yelled as fur started growing and a tail started coming out. senpai ran out the room and came back with a sword. "i am sorry but i am going to get-" right when he was about to say that a Lycan busted through the wall next to me and tackled my senpai. "SENPAI!!!!" i screamed as they tried to kill each other. then they both stopped fighting and looked at me. the looked at me like something was wrong. they both got up and walked to me. "why are you fighting senpai and Lycan" i asked as the started walking towards me. they were right in front of me and they bursted out laughing. the Lycan changed into human form and it was the guy from earlier. i was just staring at them wondering what was going on. "you are a vampire Lycan now" they both said, both stopped laughing and sounding like this was serious. "what are you talking about?" i asked as they stared at me. "you are a legendary Vampire Lycan. you are a special person in this world. they said. they both grabbed me and took me to the academy. i wanted to hide but i could not get away. when i looked in a mirror in the bathroom i looked like a Lycan except i had fangs in the front. i was done in the bathroom and they pulled me towards the council room.

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Old 07-05-2009, 01:51 PM   #33
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oooh this is interesting keep writing this is really good!
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:52 PM   #34
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oooh this is interesting keep writing this is really good!
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:53 PM   #35
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can i continue tomorrow please????? it is up to all of you though
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Old 07-05-2009, 01:55 PM   #36
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just one more part that is long? *prepared to use puppy eyes*
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Old 07-05-2009, 02:09 PM   #37
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part 6: the council

i finally stopped pulling as they started to open the door. i saw everyone in the council there. the vampire the werewolf the lycan the vampire lycan and the human. i was scared that i would be in trouble. "it looks like we need a new transfer from vampire to vampire Lycan school Kaname" the vampire lycan said to the vampire known as Kaname. "yes, i can see that you twit" Kaname said back to the vampire lycan known as Joeshua. "i am disgusted that you decided to change you wolf thing" the human spat out angrily. "shut up human" said the Lycan known as sarah. "why should i listen to dogs and blood suckers like you guys anyways?" the human known as James said. "because, if you wish to live then i expect you to shut up and listen to them" i yelled at the human. " do not mess with me CHILD" the James yelled. "i could kill you right now if you were not on the council you disgusting human" i yelled back. "get this animal out of my sight" the human told the guards. "i am not letting you take this child away" the lycan said. "you are not a smart human" i said and instantly was right behind him with his head forcefully pulled back me ready to bite. "may i?" i asked the rest of the council. "do as you wish" they all said. i bit into the human's neck tasting the warm blood go down my throat. it was diferent than the feeders i thought as i took the last drop from the human and threw him in the incinerator. "now what" i asked as i waited for the council to speak."you are being transfered to a schools for vampire Lycans" the vampire said.....................
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mungo you know how proud i am

ima read the whole thing when i come on later ok
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mungo you know how proud i am

ima read the whole thing when i come on later ok
my sensei likes it^^ thanks GWW!!! *hugs you*
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Old 07-05-2009, 02:21 PM   #40
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i will never be as good as animelover though ^^
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