Edmund Cartwright

Cyl · 01-26-2011, 09:11 PM

Spoiler:

Edmund Cartwight
Unknown Age (Born sometime in 29th Century BC)

Zanpakuto: Kokuryuu Command: Set Ablaze what we oppose, Kokuryuu!
Abilities in Shikai: Maximum Fire element control, Super Strength, "Dragon Hard" defence.
Bankai Name: Kokuryuu Kokuou
Bankai Abilities: Increased speed, spiritual pressure/energy, strength, and durability.

Explanation for the eye: During the years he's been alive, he has fought evil with his Soul Reaper powers, but a fight with a very evil opponent changed him forever. His opponent specialized in corruption, and Edmund's heart, which was purely GOOD, started to turn under the effects of the tense battle. This formidable opponent, who was not winning at the time did not realize his big mistake. Upon corrupting Edmund's heart, all hell was unleashed. At the time Edmund tried to fight the corruption, while fighting his opponent at the same time.

The corruption eventually had taken over almost completely when Edmund activated his Final Bankai stage. Edmund destroyed his opponent, and almost the entire world, the evil that had corrupted heart multiplied his skills, and the world was almost left scorched. His opponent, burned to ashes, relieved Edmund at the time, and that was the only thing that saved the Earth. Edmund was a "ticking time bomb", he wanted his opponent dead already, and the corruption had only amplified this desire, and he almost used his strongest inferno attack. Edmund, surely would have destroyed the planet which he was supposed to protect...

Edmund's eyes were fiery red once the corruption began through spread throughout his body, but after his opponent had fell, Edmund immediately fought this corruption before it was too late. This corruption, however, will forever leave one of his eyes filled with fiery hatefulness.

Note: This "opponent" had killed two very close friends of his, and thus his desire to end his opponent.

Devroux · 01-26-2011, 09:15 PM

Awesome.

Cyl · 01-26-2011, 09:16 PM

Thanks. I've changed my Shikai/character twice now. lol

Sheelah · 01-26-2011, 10:54 PM

I love it...Great work!!

You should be proud!!

kg gangster · 01-27-2011, 04:28 AM

This character is awesome. Your current ability is better then that "energy" you used before.

Cyl · 01-27-2011, 01:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sheelah

I love it...Great work!!

You should be proud!!

Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by kg gangster

This character is awesome. Your current ability is better then that "energy" you used before.

Thanks KG. Yeah the energy I used was a bit to hard to compare with others spiritual energy. <<

Chidori 3 · 01-27-2011, 03:32 PM

Cool. Join me in the seritai and become a captain!

Cyl · 01-27-2011, 03:40 PM

I'm a neutral party, sorry.

Chidori 3 · 01-27-2011, 05:08 PM

Neutrality is uncool. It serves no purpose and could use ur power in my group

Devroux · 01-27-2011, 05:19 PM

Neutrality is cool... It gives more opportunities to do what you want and not have to listen to other people...

I'm technically a part of the EA, but I'm more neutral than that.

Cyl · 01-27-2011, 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chidori 3

Neutrality is uncool. It serves no purpose and could use ur power in my group

Being joined up with someone goes against my history... I'm half evil. :\

Cyl · 06-22-2011, 11:15 PM

Bump...

01-26-2011, 09:11 PM	#1
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,495 Rep Power: 13	Edmund Cartwright Spoiler: Edmund Cartwight Unknown Age (Born sometime in 29th Century BC) Zanpakuto: Kokuryuu Command: Set Ablaze what we oppose, Kokuryuu! Abilities in Shikai: Maximum Fire element control, Super Strength, "Dragon Hard" defence. Bankai Name: Kokuryuu Kokuou Bankai Abilities: Increased speed, spiritual pressure/energy, strength, and durability. Explanation for the eye: During the years he's been alive, he has fought evil with his Soul Reaper powers, but a fight with a very evil opponent changed him forever. His opponent specialized in corruption, and Edmund's heart, which was purely GOOD, started to turn under the effects of the tense battle. This formidable opponent, who was not winning at the time did not realize his big mistake. Upon corrupting Edmund's heart, all hell was unleashed. At the time Edmund tried to fight the corruption, while fighting his opponent at the same time. The corruption eventually had taken over almost completely when Edmund activated his Final Bankai stage. Edmund destroyed his opponent, and almost the entire world, the evil that had corrupted heart multiplied his skills, and the world was almost left scorched. His opponent, burned to ashes, relieved Edmund at the time, and that was the only thing that saved the Earth. Edmund was a "ticking time bomb", he wanted his opponent dead already, and the corruption had only amplified this desire, and he almost used his strongest inferno attack. Edmund, surely would have destroyed the planet which he was supposed to protect... Edmund's eyes were fiery red once the corruption began through spread throughout his body, but after his opponent had fell, Edmund immediately fought this corruption before it was too late. This corruption, however, will forever leave one of his eyes filled with fiery hatefulness. Note: This "opponent" had killed two very close friends of his, and thus his desire to end his opponent. __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!! Last edited by Cyl; 06-24-2011 at 09:43 AM.

01-26-2011, 09:15 PM	#2
Devroux Bronze V 4 lyfe Join Date: May 2010 Location: All Pizza Posts: 18,901 Rep Power: 27	Re: Edmund Cartwright Awesome. __________________ 卐 DΣVR To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Uχ Δ\|✝ΣR 卍 To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

01-26-2011, 09:16 PM	#3
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,495 Rep Power: 13	Re: Edmund Cartwright Thanks. I've changed my Shikai/character twice now. lol __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

01-26-2011, 10:54 PM	#4
Sheelah S-Class Ninja Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 23,683 Rep Power: 13	Re: Edmund Cartwright I love it...Great work!! You should be proud!! __________________ Rest in Peace...My Beloved Cat..I will always miss you. 7/9/2012 Second Place in the 2011 Greatest Naruto Character Ever Contest To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

01-27-2011, 04:28 AM	#5
kg gangster Vongola XI Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: The Mezzanotte Familgia Compound Posts: 6,240 Rep Power: 8 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Edmund Cartwright This character is awesome. Your current ability is better then that "energy" you used before. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

01-27-2011, 03:32 PM	#7
Chidori 3 Chunin Exam Participant Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: behind u (^_^) Posts: 819 Rep Power: 0	Re: Edmund Cartwright Cool. Join me in the seritai and become a captain! __________________ Captain of Squad 2 and Leader of the Assassination Corps

01-27-2011, 03:40 PM	#8
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,495 Rep Power: 13	Re: Edmund Cartwright I'm a neutral party, sorry. __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

01-27-2011, 05:08 PM	#9
Chidori 3 Chunin Exam Participant Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: behind u (^_^) Posts: 819 Rep Power: 0	Re: Edmund Cartwright Neutrality is uncool. It serves no purpose and could use ur power in my group __________________ Captain of Squad 2 and Leader of the Assassination Corps

01-27-2011, 05:19 PM	#10
Devroux Bronze V 4 lyfe Join Date: May 2010 Location: All Pizza Posts: 18,901 Rep Power: 27	Re: Edmund Cartwright Neutrality is cool... It gives more opportunities to do what you want and not have to listen to other people... I'm technically a part of the EA, but I'm more neutral than that. __________________ 卐 DΣVR To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Uχ Δ\|✝ΣR 卍 To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

06-22-2011, 11:15 PM	#12
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,495 Rep Power: 13	Re: Edmund Cartwright Bump... __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

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