Feari-Te-Ru

TheViolletteHeart · 07-04-2009, 01:11 PM

Hotokegao Feari stood outside the large house, tan arms crossed tight over her chest and waist-length pink hair billowing in the wind. She shivered, shutting her blue eyes to the chilly breeze and creepy sight. The house had an eerie presence about it. The window shutters were beaten, worn and falling off. Paint chipped off the walls. Tiles occasionally slid from the roof and dropped to the wilting grass and weeds in the yard.

"I don't think we should do this, Urufu," Feari warned. "I have a bad feeling."

The adressed male gave a bark-like laugh, lighting up his own rich brown orbs. "It'll be fine. You worry too much." He pulled a comb out of his pocket and raked it through his silver hair.

"Easy for a werewolf to say!" the girl retorted, throwing her hands up. "I am just a small faerie! Do you know how many creatures would eat me for breakfast or sell me as a servant!?!"

Urufu wrapped his arms around her. "It's okay, Feari. I can take care of you. So what do you say?"

I doubt anyone wants me to continue, but if you do, just comment.

takuya · 07-04-2009, 01:17 PM

i like it i wanna see what they do with the orbs and i also wanna see where this story leads to

Sensei : Riku Arashi · 07-04-2009, 03:54 PM

i like it continue

TheViolletteHeart · 07-04-2009, 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by takuya

i like it i wanna see what they do with the orbs and i also wanna see where this story leads to

Actually, as it's used here, "orbs" is refering to his eyes. But I'm glad you guys are interested! ^^

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-05-2009, 09:15 AM

lol u got me interested keep going

TheViolletteHeart · 07-05-2009, 04:56 PM

Feari bit her lip. Before she knew what she was saying, the word "okay" slipped out of her mouth.

Urufu grinned and pulled her by the hand into the building. The faerie gasped at the sudden wind crashing on her delicate wings. Inside the old house, it was dusty and dark. The girl was glowing and werewolves naturally see in the dark, so they had no trouble navigating through the halls, but it didn't change the strange vibes the pink-haired teen was recieving.

"Whoa, look at this!" the male shouted, ducking into one of the rooms.

After a moment of careful consideration, Feari followed her friend inside.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-05-2009, 05:03 PM

oooh interesting go go go go keep writing!

Mai · 07-06-2009, 04:40 PM

MRE more

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-06-2009, 04:50 PM

agreed with mai!

TheViolletteHeart · 07-07-2009, 07:36 PM

Feari shifted from foot to foot before deciding to look at whatever it was that Urufu wanted to show her. She stepped into the room he had gone into. The werewolf held a chest the size of a loaf of bread in his hands.

"It's so dusty," he commented, brushing the box off.

Now, even the faerie was curious. "I wonder what's inside it?"

"I dunno," her friend replied. He tried to pry it open, but it stayed shut.

"There has to be a key around here somewhere..." The female began searching the room, in between furniture and in cracks.

"Ah!" Urufu grabbed a key that was nearby and opened the box. Immediately, it sucked him inside.

07-04-2009, 01:11 PM	#1
TheViolletteHeart Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Halfway to Anywhere Posts: 2,132 Rep Power: 0	Feari-Te-Ru Hotokegao Feari stood outside the large house, tan arms crossed tight over her chest and waist-length pink hair billowing in the wind. She shivered, shutting her blue eyes to the chilly breeze and creepy sight. The house had an eerie presence about it. The window shutters were beaten, worn and falling off. Paint chipped off the walls. Tiles occasionally slid from the roof and dropped to the wilting grass and weeds in the yard. "I don't think we should do this, Urufu," Feari warned. "I have a bad feeling." The adressed male gave a bark-like laugh, lighting up his own rich brown orbs. "It'll be fine. You worry too much." He pulled a comb out of his pocket and raked it through his silver hair. "Easy for a werewolf to say!" the girl retorted, throwing her hands up. "I am just a small faerie! Do you know how many creatures would eat me for breakfast or sell me as a servant!?!" Urufu wrapped his arms around her. "It's okay, Feari. I can take care of you. So what do you say?" I doubt anyone wants me to continue, but if you do, just comment.

07-04-2009, 01:17 PM	#2
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,541 Rep Power: 12	Re: Feari-Te-Ru i like it i wanna see what they do with the orbs and i also wanna see where this story leads to __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

07-04-2009, 03:54 PM	#3
Sensei : Riku Arashi Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: you have to know the secret password Posts: 1,794 Rep Power: 0	Re: Feari-Te-Ru i like it continue __________________ MoonLight Village-genin help, go to Anbu in Technical Issues Heroes TWC Myfanfic: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My Ninja dog : Tyko

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NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Feari-Te-Ru lol u got me interested keep going

07-05-2009, 04:56 PM	#6
TheViolletteHeart Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Halfway to Anywhere Posts: 2,132 Rep Power: 0	Re: Feari-Te-Ru Feari bit her lip. Before she knew what she was saying, the word "okay" slipped out of her mouth. Urufu grinned and pulled her by the hand into the building. The faerie gasped at the sudden wind crashing on her delicate wings. Inside the old house, it was dusty and dark. The girl was glowing and werewolves naturally see in the dark, so they had no trouble navigating through the halls, but it didn't change the strange vibes the pink-haired teen was recieving. "Whoa, look at this!" the male shouted, ducking into one of the rooms. After a moment of careful consideration, Feari followed her friend inside.

07-05-2009, 05:03 PM	#7
NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Feari-Te-Ru oooh interesting go go go go keep writing!

07-06-2009, 04:40 PM	#8
Mai Chunin Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: A place, in the US, on North America, on planet Earth. In the Milkyway Galaxy, which is in Space. Posts: 929 Rep Power: 0 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Feari-Te-Ru MRE more __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Feari-Te-Ru agreed with mai!

07-07-2009, 07:36 PM	#10
TheViolletteHeart Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Halfway to Anywhere Posts: 2,132 Rep Power: 0	Re: Feari-Te-Ru Feari shifted from foot to foot before deciding to look at whatever it was that Urufu wanted to show her. She stepped into the room he had gone into. The werewolf held a chest the size of a loaf of bread in his hands. "It's so dusty," he commented, brushing the box off. Now, even the faerie was curious. "I wonder what's inside it?" "I dunno," her friend replied. He tried to pry it open, but it stayed shut. "There has to be a key around here somewhere..." The female began searching the room, in between furniture and in cracks. "Ah!" Urufu grabbed a key that was nearby and opened the box. Immediately, it sucked him inside.

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