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This is my first fanfic, and its unfinished as of yet. please give comments, and constructive criticism, and general suggestions. As it is my first, please dont insult it too much. And remember, I just started, so even though it's only a few paragraphs, i think that it shows some promise and could be expanded greatly. Ok, here it is:
"Tsunade?" "Yes, what is it, Sakura?" "Well," said Sakura, "I was thinking of a way with which we can greatly increase the Leaf's military strength." "What is it?" said an intrigued Tsunade. "Well, if we were to force all of the varied ninja clans to teach each other their hidden jutsu, we could create the ultimate ninja to possess every single ability of the Leaf. For instance, we could use the Nara clan's Shadow jutsu to immobilize an opponent, while using the Inuzuka's Man-Beast Clone jutsu to attack, without the need for a comrade present. Or, the Aburame's bugs could learn to utilize the Man-Beast Clone, and then one man multiplies into hundreds of thousands of men, similar to the shadow clone jutsu, but much more numerous." "I see..." said Tsunade. "Shizune!" "What is it, Hokage?" "Go inform the clan leaders to assemble here. Now!" |
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Bronze V 4 lyfe
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You have to have an original fanfic. That means nothing like Naruto names and stuff.
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sorry
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Add me if you want a fight! My fanfic!!! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Comment on how to improve it, it's the actual first rough draft of the very beginning. I have no experience in fanfics, so help is dearly appreciated. |
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