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Old 01-14-2011, 12:36 PM   #1
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I stayed up until 2:00 AM writng these. I love it.

Feel my Heart.......

Feel my heart!
You do not understand me!
You never will!
Do you feel my pain?!
Do you feel my despair?!
Do you feel my sorrow?!
No!!!!
You cannot shed my tears.
You cannot feel my emotions.
You cannot feel my Pain!!!!!!!
All you can do is watch,
making assumptions!
Until you truly under "My heart,"
don't open your mouth!!!!!!!!!!!!






Begone


Begone!
Dissapear from my sight.
Obscure my ears.
Erase your existense from my presense.
Run.
Sprint.
Hide.
Do what you can to leave me alone.
Begone is a flash.
Begone in an instant.
Begone with the clap of thunder.






Lighten the feeling


I'm sinking.
I'm falling.
I'm failing.
Into despair i shall soon fall.
Engulfed by pain i will soon be.
Sorrow will soon cast me to the ground.
Sorrow shall soon defeat me.
Please,
help me!
These emotions will soon manipulate my mind.
I will soon lose my resolve.
I will soon lose my motivation to keep fighting.
Help me!
The darkness will be here soon,
to obliterate what little hope i have.
Help me!!!
Lighten the feeling,
before i fall.........




The Glare.....


His eyes,
i see nothing.
Blan they are.
Stripped of emotion they are.
His eyes carry much pain from reality
There is no feeling
There are no thoughts.
There are no dreams.
They are filled with nothing.
Hollow they are.
I sense nothing.
I feel nothing.
These eyes frighten me so.
I must not lose hope.
I must not become what will soon come to pass.
What i willl see when i look in the mirror.........




The War Inside


Inside my mind,
i fight.
One on one,
i fight.
The feelings of despair, sorrow, and pain,
have all taken shape.
The physical manifestation has cast me down.
I continue to fight;
aimlessly.
It has struck me again,
i fall to my knees.
The figure came closer,
it's hand aimed for my heart.
Will i dodge and continue to fight,
or will it's hand thrust forth into my heart.
These emotions will engulf me.
I wait,
frozen.
My body won't move.
I quickly learn another aspect of pain,
fear.............................
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Old 01-14-2011, 01:19 PM   #2
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I think these are amazing and with a little effort, can be made into songs. =O
Fantastic.
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