Naruto: RANTS! (fanfic shorties)

moonlightshinobi12 · 12-23-2010, 02:31 PM

Shortie #1: Hinata's Rant

It was a white room. It was big and empty. Well not that empty. It had a speaker annocing mik. Also a camera. But that was all. No furniture, food, T.V, radio, disco ball or nothing. A vice from the speaker came on. "Number one come in please."

Then walked in Hinata . Looking as beatuiful as she always is. She stood forward looking at the camera in front of her. She felt nervous about this (not really a surprise). She was playing with her fingers like she always do.

"Hinata. ACTION!"

Hinata closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Then exhailed. She opened her eyes and looked into the camera. "H-hi, I'm Hinata . I'm here to thank all of my fans for supporting me and eveything... I-i'm very greatful..." she smiled. "But there's another reason i'm here... I'I'm here to address all the haters out there."

Her smile faded away. "Oh I don't want to say anything to these sickos!"

"Hinata, tell them how you feel!" moonlightshinobi exclaimed.

"O-Okay...well most of you call me a tramp. B-But your the ones who draw dirty pictures of me!" she highered her voice. "I can't take it."

"Yes Hinata give me the power."

Hinata then put her arms to her back. "A-also you all be pairing me up with Naruto and I appreciate that. But you all be pairing me with boys I barely talk too. Gaara, Sasuke, Lee, Shikamaru the list goes on."

"Your doing well." moonlightshinobi said.

Hinata then blushed. "And all of you call me a stalker. That's not true... I'm not that crazy over Naruto...Even though he's handsome...funny...strong....-

The door opened and it was Naruto. "Hey is it my turn to come out yet?!"

Hinata then was stunned. She was toally Naruto-struked.

"Oh hey Hinata." he greeted her.

Hinata eyes widened. Her heart was beating fast. Her palms were sweating, her legs were shaking, she began to turn red in the face. She was feeling dizzy. She took two steps to the side and fell to the floor.

".....Must be on the pill." Naruto confused.

Jonesy · 12-26-2010, 01:55 AM

You're not allowed to write fanfics about Naruto. It's against the rules.

Please think of your own material.

Thank you.

12-26-2010, 01:55 AM	#2
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12-23-2010, 02:31 PM	#1
moonlightshinobi12 Freshmen Academy Student Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 1 Rep Power: 0	Naruto: RANTS! (fanfic shorties) Shortie #1: Hinata's Rant It was a white room. It was big and empty. Well not that empty. It had a speaker annocing mik. Also a camera. But that was all. No furniture, food, T.V, radio, disco ball or nothing. A vice from the speaker came on. "Number one come in please." Then walked in Hinata . Looking as beatuiful as she always is. She stood forward looking at the camera in front of her. She felt nervous about this (not really a surprise). She was playing with her fingers like she always do. "Hinata. ACTION!" Hinata closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Then exhailed. She opened her eyes and looked into the camera. "H-hi, I'm Hinata . I'm here to thank all of my fans for supporting me and eveything... I-i'm very greatful..." she smiled. "But there's another reason i'm here... I'I'm here to address all the haters out there." Her smile faded away. "Oh I don't want to say anything to these sickos!" "Hinata, tell them how you feel!" moonlightshinobi exclaimed. "O-Okay...well most of you call me a tramp. B-But your the ones who draw dirty pictures of me!" she highered her voice. "I can't take it." "Yes Hinata give me the power." Hinata then put her arms to her back. "A-also you all be pairing me up with Naruto and I appreciate that. But you all be pairing me with boys I barely talk too. Gaara, Sasuke, Lee, Shikamaru the list goes on." "Your doing well." moonlightshinobi said. Hinata then blushed. "And all of you call me a stalker. That's not true... I'm not that crazy over Naruto...Even though he's handsome...funny...strong....- The door opened and it was Naruto. "Hey is it my turn to come out yet?!" Hinata then was stunned. She was toally Naruto-struked. "Oh hey Hinata." he greeted her. Hinata eyes widened. Her heart was beating fast. Her palms were sweating, her legs were shaking, she began to turn red in the face. She was feeling dizzy. She took two steps to the side and fell to the floor. ".....Must be on the pill." Naruto confused.

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