Melting Shadows

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-04-2010, 04:51 PM

I give credit to my one of my friends that made this. She did really good writing this.

Melting Shadows

The September night was warm and fragrent. The stadium lights shone on every flective surface; dozen of twinkling stars. A faint beat caught my attention. I turned my head.

At first, I thought I was seeing things. The sight seemed so impossible. I blinked. In the time it took me to blink, more had arrived; their number had practically tripled from the sparse few I had first seen. They seemed to be made from the shadowy night itself. The black on their uniforms perfectly matched the young night. But they weren't all shadows. They had also stolen some of the faint moonlight; the pale color shone on their chests and shoulders. I now knew why there were so few stars; they had stolen the stars' light to make the shiny instruments they all carried.

The group slowly melted from the shadows, materilizing out of thin air, forming themselves from the landscape around them. They crept from their universe to walk onto the bright, glowing stadium, stadium grass.

There was a deliberate quality about the way they walked; there was no fear, no hesitation.

They continued melting from the shadows and faint starlight, the mist swirling and curling around their feet. Finally, the group had come out and none more appeared, though honestly, I wouldn't have been surprised if more materialized. They suddenly stopped, each person in his or hers own speacial position.

The speakers suddenly crackled and the anouncer's voice blared from them. "Presenting... the Tiger Pride Marching Band!"

Jonesy · 10-04-2010, 05:30 PM

Awesome!

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-04-2010, 05:54 PM

Thanks. ^_^

Jonesy · 10-05-2010, 10:15 PM

No problem. Love it. <3

lolohwd · 10-05-2010, 10:17 PM

wow awesome.
lolo worthy

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-06-2010, 05:09 PM

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Originally Posted by lolohwd

wow awesome.
lolo worthy

Thank you!

Jonesy · 10-06-2010, 10:44 PM

Is there gonna be more? D:

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-11-2010, 01:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Jonesy

Is there gonna be more? D:

Hmm... I don't know.... May be, may be not...

I<3Declan · 10-11-2010, 01:15 PM

It's really good. ^^ I'm impressed.... great(:

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-11-2010, 03:50 PM

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Originally Posted by I<3Declan

It's really good. ^^ I'm impressed.... great(:

Thanks!

SakuraGirl · 10-11-2010, 06:20 PM

wow i love it

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-13-2010, 04:57 PM

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Originally Posted by SakuraGirl

wow i love it

I'm glad you like it! ^_^

AkiraNeko · 10-13-2010, 05:02 PM

Ooh, suspense. I like it!

Jonesy · 10-13-2010, 09:19 PM

Is there gonna be more? :o

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-14-2010, 05:36 PM

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Originally Posted by AkiraNeko

Ooh, suspense. I like it!

Thanks!

GaaraXSaiFan · 10-14-2010, 05:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jonesy

Is there gonna be more? :o

Don't know... Maybe...

10-04-2010, 04:51 PM	#1
GaaraXSaiFan Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In the Band! :D Posts: 3,555 Rep Power: 8	Melting Shadows I give credit to my one of my friends that made this. She did really good writing this. Melting Shadows The September night was warm and fragrent. The stadium lights shone on every flective surface; dozen of twinkling stars. A faint beat caught my attention. I turned my head. At first, I thought I was seeing things. The sight seemed so impossible. I blinked. In the time it took me to blink, more had arrived; their number had practically tripled from the sparse few I had first seen. They seemed to be made from the shadowy night itself. The black on their uniforms perfectly matched the young night. But they weren't all shadows. They had also stolen some of the faint moonlight; the pale color shone on their chests and shoulders. I now knew why there were so few stars; they had stolen the stars' light to make the shiny instruments they all carried. The group slowly melted from the shadows, materilizing out of thin air, forming themselves from the landscape around them. They crept from their universe to walk onto the bright, glowing stadium, stadium grass. There was a deliberate quality about the way they walked; there was no fear, no hesitation. They continued melting from the shadows and faint starlight, the mist swirling and curling around their feet. Finally, the group had come out and none more appeared, though honestly, I wouldn't have been surprised if more materialized. They suddenly stopped, each person in his or hers own speacial position. The speakers suddenly crackled and the anouncer's voice blared from them. "Presenting... the Tiger Pride Marching Band!" __________________ The Village Hidden in the Amazon The Village Hidden in the Moonlight Lily: (Partner) Calico she-cat with green eyes.

10-04-2010, 05:30 PM	#2
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,010 Rep Power: 23	Re: Melting Shadows Awesome!

10-04-2010, 05:54 PM	#3
GaaraXSaiFan Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In the Band! :D Posts: 3,555 Rep Power: 8	Re: Melting Shadows Thanks. ^_^ __________________ The Village Hidden in the Amazon The Village Hidden in the Moonlight Lily: (Partner) Calico she-cat with green eyes.

10-05-2010, 10:15 PM	#4
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,010 Rep Power: 23	Re: Melting Shadows No problem. Love it. <3

10-05-2010, 10:17 PM	#5
lolohwd Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 8,207 Rep Power: 12	Re: Melting Shadows wow awesome. lolo worthy

10-06-2010, 10:44 PM	#7
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,010 Rep Power: 23	Re: Melting Shadows Is there gonna be more? D:

10-11-2010, 01:15 PM	#9
I<3Declan Chunin Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: on Cady Moutain with Marcus and Storm!! 8D Posts: 985 Rep Power: 0	Re: Melting Shadows It's really good. ^^ I'm impressed.... great(: __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Call me Dee!!!!<3 I specialize in the ridiculous!! Goodbye forum<3

10-11-2010, 06:20 PM	#11
SakuraGirl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Denton,Texas Posts: 10,186 Rep Power: 13	Re: Melting Shadows wow i love it __________________ SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back.

10-13-2010, 05:02 PM	#13
AkiraNeko Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Housekeeping? I come back later? I come back now? Posts: 1,597 Rep Power: 0	Re: Melting Shadows Ooh, suspense. I like it! __________________ Qu'est-ce qu'un beau sourire Peut-il rester un moment? Sur cette belle nuit Nous ferons tout droit Mon bel amour, mon bel amour ☺Village Hidden in the Aura "Sometimes I wish I could disown my sister, but then I realize we're the only two in the room." ♪ "Peace will find us with Harmony.." ♪ BF: Ishtar To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. I love small, hard-to-read font, don't you?

10-13-2010, 09:19 PM	#14
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,010 Rep Power: 23	Re: Melting Shadows Is there gonna be more? :o

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