Another Story- "Unique"

Ayden · 06-20-2009, 03:42 PM

............

animelover · 06-20-2009, 03:46 PM

wow......very "unique" ayden, your a good writer, any other parts?

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 04:02 PM

.......Nice story. But is the guy gay?

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 04:07 PM

LOL! Thats funny. But thats a great story you got there.

Kakashi71 · 06-20-2009, 04:09 PM

not to be rude animelover but he makes storys probuly as good as urs and mine

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 04:09 PM

Really? I like it so far. Its funy. ^_^

animelover · 06-20-2009, 04:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Kakashi71

not to be rude animelover but he makes storys probuly as good as urs and mine

what do you mean?

animelover · 06-20-2009, 04:54 PM

Part 3 plz

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 05:15 PM

Nice story. The cuz is a girl. Right?

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 05:20 PM

What do you mean by on one likes it? Its great! Its funny that the guy is gay. LOL!

animelover · 06-20-2009, 05:22 PM

If you don't write part 3
then I will! >_>

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 05:22 PM

That's not true. animelover reads it. I read it. Kakashi what ever the # were at the end of his name reads it.

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 05:23 PM

WHAT?!?!?!? Why? It was so good though.

animelover · 06-20-2009, 05:26 PM

Part 3:

As i growled, my teeth snarled and-I'm sorry your call has been dis-connected, please try again

awww

KIBAFAN321 · 06-20-2009, 05:27 PM

That's funny animelover. LOL!

animelover · 06-20-2009, 05:29 PM

I am, i'm sorry (i was just joking love)

animelover · 06-20-2009, 05:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Ayden

The aged wolf stood outside the circle and made an amused smiled. "Oh? Why should I, the whole pack is on my side, and your a lone wolf? I can have you killed within a blinks time."

I bared my own fangs at the end of his remark, but he was right, I was clearly unmatched. The pack continued to growl, except for my whimpering cousin. "Fine, I'll listen to your words under one condition." the aged wolf asked with that same amused smile of his. "Don't die" He then snarled and every single wolf lunged at me. No time to think, I lunged at one of my friends and overpowered him to the ground, I dug my fangs into his neck and pulled a big chunk of his flesh, blood splattered across the grass. I gave a crazed look to the pack, red dripping from my fangs. "Stop this, I don't want to, but if you threaten my life I'll take yours."

The pack continued to growl, and two lunged at me, I dove to the right but my evasive action was no good, my own brother had caught my foot and ripped off a huge chunk. I wailed in pain, and fell to the ground. My friend and brother closed in on me, I was caught. I tried to drag my body out of the way, but I couldn't move fast enough. I felt wet at my side as I noticed my brother's fangs were deep into me. The aged wolf growled and they pulled back. "Wait, the father must finish his son off"

My father arose from the crowd and stood in front of me and snarled. I was frightened. He turned to face the aged, and the aged nodded. My father lunged at me and I stared at him. It seemed as if time had stopped, he stood there frozen in the air, the pack howling and laughing, stood there stolid stones. I felt my blood curdle, this was my end. My father made contact, his nails deep in me, and his fangs in my neck. I noticed he had tears overfilling his eye lids. This was the end?

U can't end it like this!!!!! part 4?!?!???

animelover · 06-20-2009, 06:07 PM

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Originally Posted by Ayden

unfortunately there is still more

*kisses you* Thank you love!

Shinobi_Kitten · 06-28-2009, 10:12 PM

What is supposed to be about??

06-20-2009, 03:42 PM	#1
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06-20-2009, 03:46 PM	#2
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06-20-2009, 04:09 PM	#6
KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Another Story- "Unique" Really? I like it so far. Its funy. ^_^ __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

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06-20-2009, 05:15 PM	#9
KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Another Story- "Unique" Nice story. The cuz is a girl. Right? __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

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KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Another Story- "Unique" What do you mean by on one likes it? Its great! Its funny that the guy is gay. LOL! __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

06-20-2009, 05:22 PM	#11
animelover Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: New York. Alternatively, with Roxas in Twilight Town Posts: 6,005 Rep Power: 12 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another Story- "Unique" If you don't write part 3 then I will! >_> __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My boyfriend: Raiden

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KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Another Story- "Unique" That's not true. animelover reads it. I read it. Kakashi what ever the # were at the end of his name reads it. __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

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KIBAFAN321 Madame Spams-Alot Join Date: May 2009 Location: Over the rainbow with Mo Mo Posts: 2,477 Rep Power: 9	Re: Another Story- "Unique" WHAT?!?!?!? Why? It was so good though. __________________ ☾ Summer of 09- Awesome Reala PWNs -SHIKIBAME-

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