Trapped

sakura_blossom · 09-29-2010, 05:06 AM

Well I've been thinking about writing a story on this idea for a while. I probably won't start it right away. I'm just setting things up. Just look at this post and the next few posts for updates and stuff. Also I got really lazy and decided not to put all of it in one post.

Updates

sakura_blossom · 09-29-2010, 05:06 AM

Chapters

sakura_blossom · 09-29-2010, 05:07 AM

Characters

sakura_blossom · 09-29-2010, 05:30 AM

Chapter 1

"Insanity, listen to me." Orchin said holding me by my shoulders. "I do not care how much you want to stay here. You have to leave. This place is no longer safe for you."
I glared at him, my arms crossed. "Why should I have to leave my people? As a princess I should fight and die with them."
"Then who would lead them?" Orchin asked coldly. "No one. Now go. I do not want to hear another word about the matter."
I gritted my teeth and stormed off towards the gate that lead to the human world. It's not that I was upset over not getting my way, I'm not that immature, I was upset because I was being forced to leave my people to fight alone. Behind me, Akuma, a member of the Royal Guard was accompanying me.
Before I go any farther, my name is Insanity. I'm the princess of monsters and considered a goddess. I'm a kind of unusual creature. I'm a Nymph. No not the ones you're always hearing about in Greek Mythology. I could already tell I was going to have problems in the human world. Aside from my unnatural hair an eye color, I also had the issues of my physical features. I was much taller and thinner than most human females. I mean I was five foot and eleven inches and weight maybe fifty eight pounds, but Nymphs are supposed to be light. (Although I'm a little on the light side even for a Nymph.)

Well I'll finish this later. Tell me what you think of it now.

Shikamaru Nara · 09-29-2010, 02:30 PM

Love the first chapter and the title captures the awesomeness as well.

Bacon · 09-29-2010, 02:36 PM

Off to a great start,but what does the gate to the human world look like?

Demise · 09-29-2010, 02:39 PM

Seems intriguing. /Thumbs up

sakura_blossom · 10-09-2010, 07:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

Love the first chapter and the title captures the awesomeness as well.

lolz ty

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bacon

Off to a great start,but what does the gate to the human world look like?

its explained in a later chapter

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demise

Seems intriguing. /Thumbs up

thank you

09-29-2010, 05:06 AM	#1
sakura_blossom Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In a pineapple under the sea Posts: 7,870 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Trapped Well I've been thinking about writing a story on this idea for a while. I probably won't start it right away. I'm just setting things up. Just look at this post and the next few posts for updates and stuff. Also I got really lazy and decided not to put all of it in one post. Updates __________________ Darling, you'd make a lovely corpse. Last edited by sakura_blossom; 09-29-2010 at 05:10 AM.

09-29-2010, 05:06 AM	#2
sakura_blossom Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In a pineapple under the sea Posts: 7,870 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Trapped Chapters __________________ Darling, you'd make a lovely corpse. Last edited by sakura_blossom; 09-29-2010 at 05:09 AM.

09-29-2010, 05:07 AM	#3
sakura_blossom Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In a pineapple under the sea Posts: 7,870 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Trapped Characters __________________ Darling, you'd make a lovely corpse. Last edited by sakura_blossom; 09-29-2010 at 05:10 AM.

09-29-2010, 05:30 AM	#4
sakura_blossom Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In a pineapple under the sea Posts: 7,870 Rep Power: 10 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Trapped Chapter 1 "Insanity, listen to me." Orchin said holding me by my shoulders. "I do not care how much you want to stay here. You have to leave. This place is no longer safe for you." I glared at him, my arms crossed. "Why should I have to leave my people? As a princess I should fight and die with them." "Then who would lead them?" Orchin asked coldly. "No one. Now go. I do not want to hear another word about the matter." I gritted my teeth and stormed off towards the gate that lead to the human world. It's not that I was upset over not getting my way, I'm not that immature, I was upset because I was being forced to leave my people to fight alone. Behind me, Akuma, a member of the Royal Guard was accompanying me. Before I go any farther, my name is Insanity. I'm the princess of monsters and considered a goddess. I'm a kind of unusual creature. I'm a Nymph. No not the ones you're always hearing about in Greek Mythology. I could already tell I was going to have problems in the human world. Aside from my unnatural hair an eye color, I also had the issues of my physical features. I was much taller and thinner than most human females. I mean I was five foot and eleven inches and weight maybe fifty eight pounds, but Nymphs are supposed to be light. (Although I'm a little on the light side even for a Nymph.) Well I'll finish this later. Tell me what you think of it now. __________________ Darling, you'd make a lovely corpse.

09-29-2010, 02:30 PM	#5
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Trapped Love the first chapter and the title captures the awesomeness as well. __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-29-2010, 02:36 PM	#6
Bacon Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Walkin' through the candy-lane with Tifa.~ -.- Posts: 30,043 Rep Power: 28 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Trapped Off to a great start,but what does the gate to the human world look like? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-29-2010, 02:39 PM	#7
Demise Purple Flurp Disciple WS-Genin Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Things people do to see. Posts: 2,129 Rep Power: 6 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Trapped Seems intriguing. /Thumbs up __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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