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Old 06-27-2009, 01:24 AM   #1
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Picking up three months after the last Chunin exam, and six after a very tramatic event that caused Konoha to have a large influx of refugees.

Red hair blew in the breeze as sky blue eyes searched the horizon. "Kea, it looks like rain, you should come on inside." The woman waved the voice of her newest friend off. "I'll be fine Kobe, I swear you forget I was once a shinobi." The ginger turned toward the medic and smiled softly. He'd been staying there a while now, the small estate had several other people who hadn't found homes after their little village was destroyed. At least the home wasn't bubbling over anymore. Most of the people had started businesses and bought houses of their own.

As she stepped into the living room she tried to recall how many places had been started in the last six months because of all the people she'd brought to Konoha. There was a new ramen shop nested near the south gate. A beautiful clothing shop at the heart of the city. One family had bought a patch of land and had finally started selling fresh produce on the outskirts to the west. Another had started raising chickens not far from her estate.

They'd brought all sorts of new life to the area. She recalled some of the men putting in a new smithy where they were making tools, weapons, and even sculptors for people. Then there was her buisness, she'd come from the north lands, and had started working with some builders to make boats and other crafts that could handle the rivers that ran thru the Fire country. She felt that the waterways were an untapped resource, and Lady Hokage had agreed to fund her project.

This was a whole new life for so many people. She sat at her kitchen table with Kobe and read over some schematics. The man tapped at her papers to draw her attention, "Yes?" "I finally got the captive to talk." He explained as he smiled at her proudly. It's been six months and now the Order member had finally cracked enough to give useful information. "Do tell," Kea insisted with excitement in her eyes. She had a bone to pick with the Order for destroying her town. If the new info with help her get at them, she was all ears.

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The sound of weapons flying thru the air was easy to pick up on in the training field. Kin bowed back in a strange kind of grace, and Ritoru lept over her onto her opponet. The animal carried Isamu to the ground with sheer momentum. The pup was still small, but old enough to be included in combat now, and he was actually good at it. The cub had started out very shy, but when his master had started teaching him, he took defending her very seriously. The half-wolf rounded on the boy as his master twisted away and met an oncoming blow from behind with a kunai.

Sasoku grinned at her as they tested eachother's strength with their weapons. Around the black blades they were exchanging handstrikes, it was almost like a game to them. They'd been doing this for so long now they knew where eachother would attack, it was just a question of who was faster. The girl had been taunting the boys all day that she could take them both in a fight, and for the last twenty odd minutes she'd been right. Ritoru would guard her back from one assault, which she would deal with the other. She wasn't the defenceless girl she'd been months ago.

Part of her new skill in combat had come from training many young students in the art. Handling two opponets was much easier then taking on ten, even if those ten were just kids. Still fighting the other chunin's was wearing her out, and she didn't think they'd let her take them down this easy. She broke away from her exchange with the red head and flipped out of range to make a quick set of seals, this was ganna be good.

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Gin pulled away from her patient and marked several things down on a chart. She explained what medicine to give to the attenting nurse and walked to the lobby for her next case. She eyed her list and smiled as she looked to her new patient, well new wasn't really the term to use.

"Good afternoon sensei." She chimed as she opened the door to an exam room for her teacher. She told him to sit and glanced over his chart. The blond had him roll back his pants legs and examined the area with chakra. "The fractures are completely healed, I think you can go back into service. You arms were fine a couple of weeks ago, so you should have a clean bill of health." She stared down at him with calculating eyes.

"Sensei, your injuries were so extensive, I hope you realize how impress only needing this long to recover really is." The man looked up at her from his seat and meet her hard gaze full on. "I hope you don't think I missed that you were changed too." He told her with a firm weight in his voice. The medic really didn't want to have this converstation while she was at the hospital, but she knew it'd happen soon, even if she avoided it today.

Gin handed her jonin master his record file and smiled what he knew was a fake. She'd been avoiding him ever sense the battle that had left him so badly injured, and the great serpent... He didn't reach for her as she quickly left the room. This was her place of work, but he'd hunt her down later and finally talk to her about what had happened to them. If he was going back to his position at last, he needed to know exactly how his students had grown and changed.

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Zen watched carefully, using his family's special mind's eye technique as he observed the fight going on in his backyard. He smiled as his friends would constantly push at eachother's weakpoints. They didn't know just how much stronger they were making eachother. Gaki and Sabra had both had their skills skyrocket sense training with eachother, and with Kobe so regularly. He was proud of his teammate, but flustered as they still dodged the relationship that everyone could see they had. The pet user was intimidatingly agressive in combat, but so timid when it came to the softer sides of life. A lion in a fight, a lamb while dancing, such a strange woman.

He watched her pink hair fly around, a flickering tail of distraction for her opponet as it whipped about. The ex-hyuuga was trying his best to stay focused on the task at hand, but the woman's fighting style always left him flustered. Her attacks were very swift, and often now he had to fear a ferret leaping out of the many folds of her upper robes to join her assult. With Kuro and Aoi to help along with Ruby and Onyx it really was like she had extra hands to strike with. The younger ferrets were still clumbsy by comparison to the parents, but that didn't make their claws not hurt.

The archer finally called for them both to stop. Dinner for the household would come shortly and sense the girl was staying for it, he was insisting they both get cleaned up. Gaki was living there, but Sabra was a guest, he didn't want to have his parents think he spent his time with some rough girl that they'd disapprove of. As she walked toward him he grinned as the ferret left her clothing and bounded happily around her feet.

Aoi always cought his attention. The small ferret was an almost pearly white with the clearest blue eyes he'd ever seen on an animal. Which amused him to no end as Kuro, his littermate, was pitch black with dark almost black eyes that shone red in light. Her older ferrets were the same as ever. Ruby with fur of a pale color like pudding, and eyes that got her the name. Onyx with his black and brown patterning over a white underbelly, and eyes that also matched his name. The furry accompaniment was always fun to watch when they weren't at work. It was a joy to have Sabra and her pets in his home.

Zen smiled to the woman as she passed, and recieved a momentary glare from his teammate for it. "You have Gin," Gaki reminded him as he headed off to his room. "Oh I have no intentions on your cactus flower, but you can't deny her strange charm." The white haired teen called as he watched the darker haired boy's retreating back.

Sabra has taken over most of the breeding and distribution of ninja pets that her family does, as it seems her mother has become so heavy with child that the poor woman can hardly move around the house. The doctors were speculating she might have multiples due to her size, but she'd insisted on not finding out ahead of time. Maybe she wanted the surprise, or maybe she was just too afraid to want to know.

Either way it had given Sabra more then enough work to keep up with. She's valued every second she can break away now to train somewhere where she didn't have to be in constant contact with her soon to be step-father. She would be most pleased when the baby or babies were born. It would mean she could at least let her mother take over some tasks again, after all her old nursemaid was looking forward to doing most of the work for a new baby. The chunin was sure old Sheu would take care of most things so that her mother could go back to normal.

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Chinsei returned home after his visit with Gin. He couldn't wait to speak with her, 1 on 1. He and Akemi had moved in together finally. They lived in a nice little condo type house, a little bigger than an apartment, but not as big as a house. He knew that Gin was right. With the injuries he suffered, he should be paralyzed, at least from the waist down, if not from the neck. On top of that, he had been worrying about so much. That lizard type thing that had escaped from his dimensional rip, Hijou, and the fact that he knew he would return eventually, Kisa, and her baby, or possibly babies, that were on the way, the development of his students, especially Gin, who was acting strange, to say the least, and last but not least, the hate he felt. The ninja throughout the Leaf would look at him with disdain, ever since the last mission.

He felt this especially from Tanshi, which surprised him, because he didn't seem like one who would be that way. All of the ninja, except the few he was close to, such as Akemi, his students, his friends in the Light, the villagers who he had saved, and even Lady Hokage, were the only ones who stood by him.

Akemi and Chinsei had grown so much closer, that they had become like two halves of a hole. You never saw one without the other. they had both changed because of each other. Chinsei, who was usually more serious, unless around people he trusted, began to branch out, and became more outgoing. Akemi had grown too, in her abilities to trust. She trusted and loved Chinsei more than anything, and the same was true for Chinsei.

Shin had not yet returned from the Heaven Temple. Chinsei knew he would come back stronger than ever. He began to think about what was most important ever since the last mission, and wanted to act more like a big brother to Shin. He had been acting like a parent, even though he knew Shin was competent. Shin had been gone for a good 2 and a half to 3 months.

Shin was learning mostly about the culture of the falcons, because that was the first step in his new training. He would be at the Heaven Temple for another good month, or two, maybe longer. He wanted to finally finish the training he had started 8 years ago.
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Kisa smiled up at her long time friend as she laid on the couch feeling miserable. Sheu had laid a damp cloth on her, and she felt almost like a child again at being taken care of. "You should go to bed dear." The older woman cautioned as she sat near to the mother-to-be. "This is the second light fever you've run this week, you didn't start doing that till right before Sabra was born before."

The rose haired jonin sighed, the elder woman was right on that. The whole month before her daughter was born Kisa had run fever after fever to the point that Hami had finally forced her to be taken to the hospital. She was worried over the possiblity of delivering early sense the temperture had set in. The woman was somewhat glad that Tanshi wasn't as stubborn as Hami had been. That month waiting on the birth to finally come at the hospital had been miserable. She'd rather wait out the fevers here, in the comfort of her home.

She sipped the cold water that Sheu had been sure to keep near her as they sat in silence. It was a calm silence, that which you might have between two people who really understood eachother. The old woman knew that her charge wouldn't go to the hospital until she had to, the nin had never liked such places. Sheu smiled at memories of one night when Hami had come to her with a desperate plea to talk some sense into his bullheaded wife, that had been a interesting night.

Their quiet was broken as a long red haired nin stepped into the sitting room. His blue eyes only focused on Kisa as he came to her side. He looked tired, and as he all but collapsed beside her he rested his head on the swell of her stomach. He kissed her hand and she reached to stroke his hair. Tanshi had been almost run ragged the last two months. He'd been assigned to an ongoing project for the Hokage. While the work kept him in the village incase something happened to Kisa, he was still coming home to her completely exhausted.

The man smiled at her as he listened to her belly. She knew he couldn't hear much if anything more then her heartbeat, but he'd become insanely sweet about her size. She was so awkward right now, but he at least made her feel like it was something special, rather then being embarassing. He would be a good father, if for no better reason then that he would try at it. That was more then you could expect of some men. Kisa let her old memories fly from her mind as she meet his gentle gaze, this was her new life. This was what she'd desided would be her future, and something told her everything would be alright.
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Haruna studied the horizon with focused, emotionless eyes. Six months. It had been six months since the kunoichi last saw her home. And surprisingly, she didn't miss it one bit. The Mist was a much tougher place to live in than the Leaf. It had made her stronger and more distant.

A girl who looked to be only a few years older sat by her on the hill. "How is the training coming along, Akira?"

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"Hmmm...You mean 'Well, Junko.' Am I correct?"

The strategist nodded. The two of them had now officially spent so much time around each other that the Kiri nin, Junko, could now understand the psychic's daughter no matter how she responded. She also understood that "Akira" would not be her friend forever. The Mist native was more cautious around the other ninja than most people realized; she feared that anyday could be her last. Sure Haruna hadn't been able to make a nail file a long distance weapon, but she could still stab a person to death with it.

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GAKI AND SABRA MUST GO TOGETHER!!! PLEASE LLET THAT HAPPEN!!! Haruna shouldn't be be unemotional it isn't right D; it just doesn't fit the times she was emotional.
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and as long as i pm u guys i might be able to join now or next thread? either way would be an honor
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and as long as i pm u guys i might be able to join now or next thread? either way would be an honor
((Send us a writing sample and we might add you. Gaki and Sabra are together. Seeing as one of Haruna's goals was to become unemotional again, she's going to be fairly unemotion. Which isn't to say she doesn't have any emotions, just that she is supressing them and keeping them hidden. She doesn't like showing emotion and prefers it when she feels little to nothing.))
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I agree with Zen though Sabra won't openly admit it and that's where they aren't together!! Gaki would soar if Sabra would not act like a Hinata when it comes to the romance part
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I agree with Zen though Sabra won't openly admit it and that's where they aren't together!! Gaki would soar if Sabra would not act like a Hinata when it comes to the romance part
It's less that she's shy, and more that she has no idea how to respond to such attention. She really doesn't even notice half the time. That's why back in Shinobi: The Saga pt 1 he tried kissing her, she just wasn't getting the message any other way. I have plans for the relationship, I think if you haven't read the past parts yet you'd really enjoy them.

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As her seals came together in their fluid pattern the ground below Sasoku shook. He lept up to try to avoid the drop, but to his horror as the earth opened below him a group of kunai shot forth. When had she planted those? He couldn't be sure but as they flew toward him there was nothing he could do to dodge in mid air. He knocked two away, but the others wrapped him in the fine wire that was attached to their ends.

As the red head was sucked back into the hole by the trap Isamu had pinned Ritoru with shackles of stone around the animal's legs. The pet howled to warn his master, but the earth user was fast as he ran at her. The girl instinctively raised a wall before her as he approached. His hand reached thru the shield of earth as if it wasn't there, and he heard an indignate sound.

The wall melted away like it was something less solid then it should of been and the inu-lookalike felt a slap across his face. He followed the line of his arm up to his hand, and an immediate blush rose to color him embarassed. He met those firey gold eyes of Kin's, but didn't know what to do.

"Remove your hand, or I remove it for you." The heat of her tone made the young man jerk away, and backpedal a few steps. "I didn't mean that..." He told her, but the girl was flushed and wrapped one arm around her chest as she raised her hand toward where Ritoru lay. The bindings on his legs shattered, and the animal ran to his master.

"Just what did you think you were going reaching at that height? What kind of ninja are you anyway?" Her voice was high as the chunin glared at Isamu. Her cheeks were still colored, and she was adjusting her vest to where it was more secure.

They could hear Sasoku from his prison within the hole from before yelling something about if he had been forgotten, but they ignored him. Kin seemed to be accusing Isamu of everything she could think of with just her eyes, and he felt small under that heated gaze. What would he do?

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Well I'm happy to see that someone new is joining! I guess my time expired. TT_TT

Nice story so far! Keep up the good work!
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Nice story so far! Keep up the good work!

yeah same thing i was going to say

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"I--I am really sorry. I was trying to grab your shoulder, but I guess I aimed a little too low." The brunet averted his eyes from the seething blonde, but he could still feel her gaze burning a hole in the back of his head.

"The hell you did! How am I supposed to believe you knowing how you've acted in the past!?!"

"Because I'm a chunin now!" Isamu turned his face back towards her. "Obviously the Kage think I've matured enough to be one, so can't you just trust that I'm a different person!?!"

"Uh, guys? A little help, please?" Sasoku begged.

The quarrelers growled and stomped on the ground, throwing the redhead out of the pit.

"I'm late for dinner," the taijutsu specialist grumbled. "Enjoy your evening."


He stormed off and returned to his own house. Itsuki was standing in front of the stove, stirring something in a pot. Kyou was sitting at a nearby table reading something. The chunin's eye twitched as he realized it was a romance novel.

Isamu scoffed as the genin began to cry. 'If only he knew just how hard love really is.'
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Sasoku shook himself off, covered in dirt as he approached Kin. She was fuming still, but all he did was raise an eyebrow at her. "Okay, I missed most of that, but I managed to hear enough to be the gest of what happened." The red head ran his hands thru his hair to try an clear it of dust. "You really didn't have to be so harsh," he continued.

The blond gapped at him liek he grown a second head. "You don't know how much of a womanizer he was when we meet!" She snapped at him at last. The boy sighed and shrugged at her. His blue eyes searched her form and came back to her face. "Yeah, I do, he was in my class at academy." Then he smiled a catish grin. "I can't say I blame him for his taste."

The girl made to slap him, but he grabbed her wrist and pulled her around where her back was to him and his other arm went around her waist. He grinned into her hair. "If it had been me you wouldn't of been half this upset." He pointed out as he blew on her neck. The girl jolted and twisted to kick his legs out from under him. They both tumbled to the ground. "Yes, but you do that with everyone, and you've never been as much of a letch as he came off as. You always make light of it." She said as she rolled away. "Besides, at least you have some level of charm."

The boy laid on the ground looking at her back. "He didn't do it on purpose," Sasoku persisted. The girl shot him a look. "His hand went into my vest!" She almost shreeked at him. "And who's fault is that?" The boy's question left her blinking over at him. "Your vest is shaped where if you're standing at an angle there's no way his hand couldn't of gone under it." The ginger haired boy explained.

Kin thought on that a moment, looking down at her lap. Ritoru was licking at her hand. "I suppose so..." she said finally. Sasoku sat up behind her and laid his hand on her shoulder. "Even zipped up I could slide my hand in there from here." He told her while looked across her chest. "It's kind of your own fault." He said while running a finger along the slope of her single strap vest. "You should go apologize to him. He's been really trying sense he made Genin, even more now that he's Chunin."

Sasoku's hand fell away from her as the girl stood. The blond looked down at him, he could tell she was nibbling her lip, a gester he knew she did when she was confused. It was one of those things you pick up on when you've been around someone so long. "I guess you're right..." she finally admitted. The male chunin didn't get to say anything before his companion was dashing away toward where Isamu's house was.

The red head laid back down on the soft grass and sighed. "Well, at least he can't say I'm not on his side." The boy told himself as he thought of the earth user. They'd never really been friends in academy, but they had known about eachother the year before they graduated. They were the two boys the girls had dreaded being the targets of, but he'd never gotten in quite as much trouble for his flirting.

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Kin hesitated as she raised her hand toward the door of the house. Her pet sat next to her feet watching her repeatedly changed her mind. The dog seemed to understand that she couldn't make the choice herself. Ritoru raised his head back and looked at the door, then suddenly howled at it. Causing his master to panic in her spot there as the door opened.

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Zen smiled to his father as the older man told a joke to his friends. This was one of the few times his family relaxed. Dinner was when they really came together as a normal family. He watched Sabra across the table from him. The girl laughed softly at the joke, she'd been raised without many rules on her behavior, but she was taught manners. Which only made it better to have her around.

Zen felt the heat of a gaze on him. He looked to meet Gaki's hot stare. The boy was becoming all too posessive with his pink haired affection, Zen took great pleasure in making him squirm. The ex-hyuuga was too serious, and the archer seemed to live purely to screw with him. The white haired boy ignored his look to talk to Sabra about how her mother was.

That lead the girl into a deep discussion where his mother was telling her all the things she would be expected to do as an older sister. He almost felt sorry for asking as he watched the girl try to smile and nod at all of it. She'd obviously heard all this before. The green eyed teen was being very polite, but she was looking for a way out.

A knocking from the door drew the attention of the room, and both Zen and Sabra stood to answer. Her looking for any way to escape the conversation, and him used to being the one to respond to such things. The two nodded to eachother and Sabra took her seat again, as a guest she was supposed to relax. The boy mouthed 'Sorry' as he turned where his mother wouldn't catch it.

Stepping into the quiet of the hallway he opened the sliding door to see a tired, but welcome face. "Gin-chan," he stepped onto the porch and grabbed her up in a hug. He breathed in the scent from her blond hair. Under all the medical smells was her's, something similar to raspberries and pineneedles, the natural perfume always intrigued him. As he released her he searched her eyes for why she was here.

The silver eyed woman laid her head on his chest, she sighed heavily. "Are you alright?" Zen questioned as he wrapped his arms around her. "Just tired... I didn't want to go home, I wanted to see you." Her whisper was barely audiable over the sounds of the evening. "Tired?" He leaned her back and laid his hand on her forehead, she grinned up at him and nuzzled it. "I'm not sick," she assured him.

"You haven't felt tired enough to act like this in months... What's wrong?" The boy swept her toward a bench on the porch and sat her there. Gin leaned on him as he rested beside her. "Don't worry about it," she murmured as her eyes fluttered closed. "I always worry about you..." The girl smiled against his sleeve at his words. "You shouldn't." "But I do." They sat there in silence for a moment.

Zen started to say something when he realized she was slipping a bit and quickly found himself with her head in his lap, she was out cold. He checked her temperture again, and swollowed, not sure what to do. He ran his hand across her body, channeling chakra as she'd shown him once. He'd been curious how medical jutsu worked, she hadn't tought him much, but he knew how to find injuries with chakra, or detect poison.

The white haired boy sighed in relief, she seemed fine as far as he could tell. He stroked her cheek as she slept. He'd been worried over her for months, she was different then she had been half a year ago. Their relationship hadn't changed, but she had started to. He looked up at the sound of footsteps, and watched Sabra peek her head out of the open door. He raised a finger to his lips before she could ask what happened.

The girl came closer and whispered the question so as not to wake her teammember. Zen explained that he knew as little as she did about the situation as he stared at the young woman. He closed his eyes and listened for a bit before looking up to Sabra's minty gaze. "Please go on inside. Tell my family that I have a friend here who needed to talk to me. That should be enough for them to leave us alone." The chunin nodded to his request and started back inside.

"Take care of her," she said as she stepped away. Zen looked down at Gin again and smiled, like he needed to be told that... He'd let her sleep like that a while before he'd move her, or wake her. He would question her later, for now he could just enjoy petting her hair.

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Itsuki smiled. "Kin, hi! You're just in time for dinner!"

Isamu froze at the sound of the name. Kyou looked up from his novel as the designer pulled the blonde into the house. She sat down on a cushion across from the youngest male at the table. The crossdresser closed his book and set it aside.

The kunoichi looked around. "So...It's just you three?"

The other chunin cast his eyes down at his lap. "Yeah. Dad's on a mission won't be back until late tonight or tomorrow morning."

"And your mom?"

Instantly, Kyou's book was back out and a crash was heard in the kitchen. Kin's face jolted in the direction of the noise. Itsuki had dropped a bowl and it had shaddered on the floor. The older brunet smiled and murmured something that sounded like "oops."

The girl bit her lip. "Oh."

Isamu looked up, a forced smile on his face. "It's okay. She died when I was just a baby. I don't remember her that much."

"Well, it's time to eat!" The designer stepped into the room, a bowl of soup in each and and balancing a bowl more each on his arms.

The genin set his book back down and rushed towards his caretaker. "You're going to burn something like that! Let me take a couple of those bowls." He stood on his tiptoes and the non-ninja bent down enough for him to take the bowls from his arms. Kyou set one down in front of Kin and kept the other for himself.

The four ate in silence. Finally, the blonde cleared her throat. "Um, Isamu, the reason I came is...I wanted to apologize for earlier. I know you didn't mean anything it was an accident."

The taijutsu specialist twirled around the remainder of his food for a minute, then looked to his brother. "I'm not hungry anymore. May I be excused?"

Recieving a nod in response, he stood and left the room. The older Inuzuka look-alike grabbed his brother's bowl and stacked it on top of his own empty one. When Kyou finished, the designer took his bowl and put it under his own. The crossdresser then pulled the book back out.

"What are you reading?" the kunoichi asked, looking up from her soup.

"Aiko-chan lent Kyou a romance novel," the boy chirped. "The story is about a man who used to be a pervert named Jirou. Jirou falls in love with a kunoichi named Kaori, but because of Jirou's past, Kaori doesn't trust Jirou. They get into a fight, but Jirou holds grudges for a long time, so even when Kaori tries to apologize, Jirou stays upset for weeks."

Kin finished her dinner quietly and thanked Itsuki before she left.

Of course if someone had a romance novel, it had to be Aiko's! Aiko is an expert when it comes to love, except in her own relationships. She can help two people get together without even being there. It's just a matter of planting items in the right place with the right person. Kyou is the second smartest person in their original group of three genin...as far as book-smarts go anyway. In everything else, he can be just as clueless as Isamu at times. Kin, on the other hand, is not clueless and sees the connection between the book and her own life.
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Kin left the house with her head down. 'Aiko... Does that woman see into the future or something?' She thought to herself as she watched Ritoru trotting beside her. The pup was staring up at her, as if to ask if she was okay. The tool user reached to one of the pouchs on her vest and drew out a small bake dog treat and held it out for him.

The pet took the offering and darted out in front of her, hopping in happy little circles with his bushy tail waving back and forth. "If only all guys were so easy." "We are if you know what treat we want." The sudden voice made the chunin bolt forward and whip around as if expecting an attack. The speaker laughed, a warm amusing sound, as he watched her.

"Sasoku... Why are you here?" Kin questioned as she relaxed. The boy point on down the street. "I live right over there." He explained as he fell into step beside her. The two walking in silence for a bit. "So how did it go?" The boy finally asked, he didn't really need to, but it was polite. "Badly," Kin sighed as she looked at the ground.

"Figures," Sasoku bumped her shoulder and she meet his eyes. "Don't worry about it, I'm sure he'll come around." The girl's brow furrowed as his words sunk him. "I just don't want a friend of mine to be upset at me. I should of been more willing to listen to him." The red head stoped and turned his body where he was facing her full on. "Friend?"

The two stared for a moment and Sasoku's head went down. "You are oblivious." He put his hands on her and looked her directed in the those golden eyes. "You might think he's only acting like he is because that's how you expect him to act around girls, and he was totally clumbsy when he was after your sister... But he's not acting the same. He's trying to gain your respect, and hoping to make you see him as someone you could be with." The words flew from his mouth with heartfelt emotion in them as he held the girl's gaze.

She finally broke the look and turned her head away. "I'm not looking for a relationship right now..." The little whispering sound carried just far enough, and was responded to with an irritated growl. As she looked back up at the blue eyed chunin she could see his flustration written all over his face. "Sometimes you don't have to want a relationship for one to happen," he practically bit the words out.

"Why are you so upset?" The innocent question made the ginger's cheek twitch. "You are the most ignorant educated woman I do believe I have ever met." The words hung there in the air as he released her shoulders and spun on his heel. She cought his arm before he could take that step away. He looked at her with cold eyes. "Then explain... I'm blind when it comes to things like this." The plea made him have to take a deep breath to calm his temper.

He didn't turn, but did meet her eyes again. "I'll put this simply. You're pretty. You're also kind, sweet, intellegent, and lots of fun to be around. You're like the perfect girlfriend... You're not as tempermental as your sister, and not as aggressive as Sabra. You're even good with kids." He finally twisted back around and grabbed her arms. "A guy would have to be crazy not to want you." The way he said it made it obvious to even her that everything he'd said applied to him too.

The young man broke his hold and stepped away quickly. Laying his hand on the door to a small apartment complex he gave her one more glance before vanishing into the building. The girl stood there stunned for a moment, then finally cursed as she looked down at the ground. "Why, do I have to have this problem?" She wondered aloud as she started walking again. "Most girls are despert to find a guy, now if I understand right there's two who want me, and I don't want them." She followed Ritoru's wagging tail, she didn't want to look up to meet anyone's eyes.

It was a long walk home. As she slid the door open and stepped in she saw Deki laying at the spot where Gin usually put her shoes. The pup looked up at her hopefully, then laid it's head back down in disappointment. The animal was not allowed at the hospital, so she always waited patiently for Gin to come home after work. Kin shot energy into her hand to feel around. Her sister wasn't here, she couldn't feel her, and Deki was always with the girl if she wasn't working.

The golden eyed chunin went to her room and quickly stripped off the vest and changed her dress to one not strained from training. She came back up front and called to the two pups. "Come on, let's find Gin!" Deki all but shot out of the house, and waited at the end of the walk impatiently for the girl and her littermate to hurry up. Her master was missing and the animal was more then ready to hunt the blond down.

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awwww poor gin...more importantly, poor isamu... that's just tragic, tragic!
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