Binkie Chronicles!

[Ino] · 09-09-2010, 01:25 PM

*Opens book* "Once upon a time..." No... that's not it... *flips pages* "Long ago in a far far far place lived..." That's not it either... hmm.... *flips more pages, then slams book closed in frustration.* I guess I will have to tell you what I remember! Here is how it goes...

Prologue
This is where we meet our first character, a little boy
named Binkie Biff who was heading off to his first day of Pre-K at a place called Playgarden. Now Binkie had powers, but the only thing was... he did not know what they were. So Binkie, went to Pre-K and met our second character, Candy Clyde, the prettiest girl in all of Playgarden! As soon as Binkie saw her, he fell in love, but alas! There was another man in love with her! Our third character's name is Dan DiCaprio. Binkie had went to talk to Candy, but Dan was on the scene faster. And ever since that first day of Pre-K, Binkie and Dan have been enemies, for Dan always steals the girl Binkie liked. Then one day in the near future, Binkie had had enough.

Find out what happens next in the Binkie Chronicles!

Credits for the name; Shikamaru Nara

Shikamaru Nara · 09-09-2010, 01:27 PM

Looks good, just get rid of the red, it's too distracting.

[Ino] · 09-09-2010, 01:29 PM

Good thinking /edits

Shikamaru Nara · 09-09-2010, 01:30 PM

Much better. And you should probably make it all one color as well.

[Ino] · 09-09-2010, 01:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

Much better. And you should probably make it all one color as well.

I'm a colorful person. I find that it needs to be more than one color.

Shikamaru Nara · 09-09-2010, 01:32 PM

The prolouge is way too hard to read.

[Ino] · 09-09-2010, 01:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

The prolouge is way too hard to read.

Fine I'll change it.

Shikamaru Nara · 09-09-2010, 01:34 PM

Green and purple so don't go!

[Ino] · 09-09-2010, 01:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

Green and purple so don't go!

Who made you Color queen?

Shikamaru Nara · 09-09-2010, 01:36 PM

I'm just giving advice.

09-09-2010, 01:25 PM	#1
[Ino] Apprentice Genin Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: I'm pretty sure that I live on the planet earth... Posts: 115 Rep Power: 0	Binkie Chronicles! Opens book "Once upon a time..." No... that's not it... flips pages "Long ago in a far far far place lived..." That's not it either... hmm.... flips more pages, then slams book closed in frustration. I guess I will have to tell you what I remember! Here is how it goes... Prologue This is where we meet our first character, a little boy named Binkie Biff who was heading off to his first day of Pre-K at a place called Playgarden. Now Binkie had powers, but the only thing was... he did not know what they were. So Binkie, went to Pre-K and met our second character, Candy Clyde, the prettiest girl in all of Playgarden! As soon as Binkie saw her, he fell in love, but alas! There was another man in love with her! Our third character's name is Dan DiCaprio. Binkie had went to talk to Candy, but Dan was on the scene faster. And ever since that first day of Pre-K, Binkie and Dan have been enemies, for Dan always steals the girl Binkie liked. Then one day in the near future, Binkie had had enough. Find out what happens next in the Binkie Chronicles! Credits for the name; Shikamaru Nara __________________ My friend asks me, "If you could bring one book with you on a stranded island, what book would you bring?" and I always say, "The book HOW TO BUILD A BOAT" ~Stephen Wright 98% of teens would cry if Justin Bieber was on the highest building in the world about to jump off. Copy and paste if your the 2% that would bring popcorn, and shout DO A FRONT FLIP!!!! xD Last edited by [Ino]; 09-09-2010 at 01:34 PM.

09-09-2010, 01:27 PM	#2
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Binkie Chronicles! Looks good, just get rid of the red, it's too distracting. __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-09-2010, 01:29 PM	#3
[Ino] Apprentice Genin Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: I'm pretty sure that I live on the planet earth... Posts: 115 Rep Power: 0	Re: Binkie Chronicles! Good thinking /edits __________________ My friend asks me, "If you could bring one book with you on a stranded island, what book would you bring?" and I always say, "The book HOW TO BUILD A BOAT" ~Stephen Wright 98% of teens would cry if Justin Bieber was on the highest building in the world about to jump off. Copy and paste if your the 2% that would bring popcorn, and shout DO A FRONT FLIP!!!! xD

09-09-2010, 01:30 PM	#4
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Binkie Chronicles! Much better. And you should probably make it all one color as well. __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-09-2010, 01:32 PM	#6
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Binkie Chronicles! The prolouge is way too hard to read. __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-09-2010, 01:34 PM	#8
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Binkie Chronicles! Green and purple so don't go! __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-09-2010, 01:36 PM	#10
Shikamaru Nara busybusybusy Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,908 Rep Power: 42 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Binkie Chronicles! I'm just giving advice. __________________ Everybody wanna be a critic, I have my life and I will live it. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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