Higoshimaru Marimaki - Page 3

Kiseki · 08-26-2010, 01:10 PM

This starts to look like the battlegrounds section... You gotta love it!

Kill kill kill! O wai- wut. No... let them live. I want a longer story :3

Shikamaru Nara · 08-26-2010, 03:26 PM

Hmm, perhaps they will die, perhaps they won't. You won't know until the next update. o_0

Kiseki · 08-27-2010, 02:09 AM

Tssk... I own you, I may know now! >=]
Just kidding, haha. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next!

Shikamaru Nara · 08-27-2010, 07:24 AM

I have a set plot that may or may not change.

Kiseki · 08-27-2010, 12:58 PM

Awesome! I guess it will change a little.
I had a few plot idea's too with Izumi.
But every week it changes a little..

Can't wait to see what plot you came up with :3

Shikamaru Nara · 08-27-2010, 01:07 PM

It's actually quite a twist. The story isn't what you think at all. I promise. :3

Kiseki · 08-27-2010, 01:27 PM

It better not be haha! I guess it's gonna be awesome anyway.
There is a nice tension now and it's gonna be solved,
alot of BOOM and POW if you know what I mean

Shikamaru Nara · 08-27-2010, 01:29 PM

I'll be posting it on Monday probably because I'm anxious to reveal the hidden twist. xDD

Invisible Fog · 08-27-2010, 01:40 PM

I think instead of calling the chapters "chapters" you should call them "parts" and then put the parts all together and it'll seem like a chapter.

Shikamaru Nara · 08-27-2010, 01:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Invisible Fog

I think instead of calling the chapters "chapters" you should call them "parts" and then put the parts all together and it'll seem like a chapter.

That makes sense. But I follow format of regular novels. People have their preferences, for example, Makoto Raiku uses 'Levels' (Creator of Zatch Bell.)

Shikamaru Nara · 09-05-2010, 12:07 PM

Chapter 4:

Yogato suddenly threw the bells out in the open, and Higoshimaru said "Hey look! Sensei left out the bells!" "It's probably a trap," retorted Zarushi. Higoshimaru ran to the bells oh so loudly and Zarushi pursued. "No, you idiot! It's a trap!"

Yogato jumped out from the place he was hiding and laughed, "heheh." He threw the bombs at each of his students and they detonated. "You weren't worthy."

* * *

"Where are we?" said Zarushi. Nobody responded. He repeated the same thing only more loudly this time. A kunai came flying out from a bush, and both of the boys dodged it. "Whoa, we're floating in midair!" said Higoshimaru. "Are-Are we dead? That could be the only explanation..." said Zarushi.

Later that day, after much searching around for inhabatants of this strange place, they found somebody. "Where are we?" asked Zarushi. "We're in pergatory. We're still being judged by our lives to see if we're eligable to go to heaven, or if we'll get sent to the gates of hell." said a man in shades. "So what do we do in waiting?" said Higoshimaru. "We just wait and hope for the best." said the man.

Where will they be sent? What will happen next? Find out in the next chapter of HM!

Kiseki · 09-05-2010, 12:19 PM

Now I wanna know where they are, hehe :P

Shikamaru Nara · 09-05-2010, 01:16 PM

That means I'm doing a good job. ^^

Kiseki · 09-05-2010, 01:33 PM

Yes you do ... :P

[Ino] · 09-07-2010, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

Anything would be fine. You're better than I am, so I'd be very appreciative.

Everyone is better than you are (no offense, but it's probably true...) Yeah I remember one time, you tried drawing a picture of me... I didn't look so good... (in other words... I was bald

pretty embarrassing.)

Kiseki · 09-08-2010, 01:07 AM

/giggles ..

Isn't that kinda... mean?

08-26-2010, 01:10 PM	#41
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki This starts to look like the battlegrounds section... You gotta love it! Kill kill kill! O wai- wut. No... let them live. I want a longer story :3 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-26-2010, 03:26 PM	#42
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Hmm, perhaps they will die, perhaps they won't. You won't know until the next update. o_0 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-27-2010, 02:09 AM	#43
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Tssk... I own you, I may know now! >=] Just kidding, haha. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-27-2010, 07:24 AM	#44
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki I have a set plot that may or may not change. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-27-2010, 12:58 PM	#45
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Awesome! I guess it will change a little. I had a few plot idea's too with Izumi. But every week it changes a little.. Can't wait to see what plot you came up with :3 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-27-2010, 01:07 PM	#46
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki It's actually quite a twist. The story isn't what you think at all. I promise. :3 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-27-2010, 01:27 PM	#47
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki It better not be haha! I guess it's gonna be awesome anyway. There is a nice tension now and it's gonna be solved, alot of BOOM and POW if you know what I mean __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

08-27-2010, 01:29 PM	#48
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki I'll be posting it on Monday probably because I'm anxious to reveal the hidden twist. xDD __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-27-2010, 01:40 PM	#49
Invisible Fog Veteran Chunin Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: I'm a hobo Posts: 1,353 Rep Power: 6	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki I think instead of calling the chapters "chapters" you should call them "parts" and then put the parts all together and it'll seem like a chapter. __________________ The museum of stupid yahoo! answers: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-05-2010, 12:07 PM	#51
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Chapter 4: Yogato suddenly threw the bells out in the open, and Higoshimaru said "Hey look! Sensei left out the bells!" "It's probably a trap," retorted Zarushi. Higoshimaru ran to the bells oh so loudly and Zarushi pursued. "No, you idiot! It's a trap!" Yogato jumped out from the place he was hiding and laughed, "heheh." He threw the bombs at each of his students and they detonated. "You weren't worthy." * * * "Where are we?" said Zarushi. Nobody responded. He repeated the same thing only more loudly this time. A kunai came flying out from a bush, and both of the boys dodged it. "Whoa, we're floating in midair!" said Higoshimaru. "Are-Are we dead? That could be the only explanation..." said Zarushi. Later that day, after much searching around for inhabatants of this strange place, they found somebody. "Where are we?" asked Zarushi. "We're in pergatory. We're still being judged by our lives to see if we're eligable to go to heaven, or if we'll get sent to the gates of hell." said a man in shades. "So what do we do in waiting?" said Higoshimaru. "We just wait and hope for the best." said the man. Where will they be sent? What will happen next? Find out in the next chapter of HM! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-05-2010, 12:19 PM	#52
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Now I wanna know where they are, hehe :P __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

09-05-2010, 01:16 PM	#53
Shikamaru Nara Super \| ɹoʇɐɹǝpoW Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: New York Posts: 43,782 Rep Power: 41 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1 Total Points: 4	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki That means I'm doing a good job. ^^ __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-05-2010, 01:33 PM	#54
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki Yes you do ... :P __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

09-08-2010, 01:07 AM	#56
Kiseki That Sexy Koala Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where you live. Obviously. Posts: 13,438 Rep Power: 25 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Higoshimaru Marimaki /giggles .. Isn't that kinda... mean? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Luna Pink Hikari & Kiseki are the sexy Quad-force <3

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