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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Where you live. Obviously.
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He would be a pedobear. She's 16 and he is 20 or so.
But... I can't tell, I haven't decided yet! XD At this moment she hates him alot
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 39
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Guess who? Now, who wants an autograph? (;
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Sweet Green T
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Stalking Demise. P:
Posts: 5,969
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Ooh ooh me me! xD
*Raises hand*
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To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Soul friend: DA Musketeers: GG suki Dance partner: shinmaru Lover: manga Perfect friends: Meg KU Nabris Muffin Ryu Vex Kiseki 88 Hockey sasu Dee LT Kuro Luna Epic friends: Magic Dem CU Bacon Maik Neisie KGT Woo Sticky Shikamaru Semog Yori Pat azal Cornbread Jin tks Jonesy Vat Nick Shika Kuroi Sixxy Seph Babies: UPM Kibkib Taker AR Adopted by: NJ Bodyguard: Lunar ♥ |
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Ninja Academy Student
Join Date: Jul 2010
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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Where you live. Obviously.
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Haha, wow, I did not know there was an actual member with that name :P
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 3,955
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I thought thats your alt....small world........
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: You tell me. ;p
Posts: 3,615
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It's not hers.
Last edited by VampireCat; 08-06-2010 at 02:27 PM. |
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 3,955
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Hey, VC how are you?
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: You tell me. ;p
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Pretty fine, you? (:
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Nov 2009
Posts: 3,955
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Fine. Just bored a bit.....
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: You tell me. ;p
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Same. :/
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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Where you live. Obviously.
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The walk pt. 3
"Where are you leading me to?" he asked while they were walking in the direction of the mountaintops, wich were at least a hundred meters away from them. Izumi remained silent and switched the tempo up to running so they could reach the top sooner. Her face looked slighty tensed by stress, there was alot going on in her mind and she wasn't willing to lose those during the walk. Katzuyuki followed her and once in a while he looked in the distance around them to check if there weren't any wilde animals approaching. He couldn't hear the owl's sound anymore and the only thing he heard was the wind blowing through the forest. On the top they book took a break and stopped to calm down a bit. "Izumi, are you planning to go any further? It's too dangerous behind these tops." he said while he hopped on a huge rock, which was a few times larger than himself. In this much silence you could only hear them breathing and one more time they looked at eachother. Izumi hopped on the same rock where Katzuyuki sat on. "We're not going any further" she said abrupt while she kept staring at a large tree which stood right in front of them. Again a short moment of silence and Izumi thought about what she exactly was going to ask him and when she realized that there was no point of avoiding the exact issueshe said "Why did you both changed so much? What happend while you were on the mission in Kiri?" Quickly she moved her face towards his to see his reaction. "Do you really want to know?" he asked and he jumped off the large rock and started to loosen up his obi to put off his sleeves. Izumi was shocked by his action, looked the other way of shyness. "Look at me" he said and almost yelled it. When he pulled the remaining cloth aside she saw a huge scar on his chest. Her mouth fell open a bit and she could not stop staring at his scar. It must have hurt alot and what creatures were so strong to make such damage? "Hiro..." she said in shock. "Hiro-san is fine. He actually saved me and prevented my death when I wasn't on guard when the Kiri attacked me" he said and lowered his head. Izumi jumped off the rock and walked towards Katzuyuki and helped him to die down his obi again. An akward silence. He felt weak, she felt dumb. A tear of shock rolled down her cheek, but she wanted to avoid him from seeing her in this state, so she quicky put her arms gently around his waist. She felt his heartbeat, which was everyhing but calm and Izumi had the feeling he could probably feel hers too. She felt guitly about the fact she behaved to him and wished she could take all those words back. "Katzuyuki-san. I'm sorry..."
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Academy Graduate
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: Konoha
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So far the story is interesting
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Actually I think its gonna get more and more interesting.....
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: You tell me. ;p
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I'm loving it, it's just awesome. :*
Spoilers? :F Some typos I saw: Second sentence, "wich" instead of "which". Sixth sentence, "owl's" instead of "owls". |
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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
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I just h8 the word which
Haha thanks again mommy =D Spoilers? Hmm. I don't wanna reveal too much. But.... Spoiler:
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: You tell me. ;p
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/momhug.
Enuff. :F |
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Chunin Exam Participant
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: under your bed
Posts: 751
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You know what........
What the french toast is a nymph? XD
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That Sexy Koala
Join Date: Jun 2010
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Look at the edit XDD
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Originally they are only woman. But I decided there are men too How do you like the story so far? =0
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Special Jonin Candidate
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What the french toast is french toast? lol
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