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Old 06-07-2010, 09:28 PM   #1
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His tone held a coarse frame. Truth was exposed, but still unseen. His words made me bewildered, but I take them in as comfort. However, what does he mean by "I won't let it harm you." Plus, there is a question that keeps nagging at my brain. What is it exactly?
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Old 06-07-2010, 10:36 PM   #2
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Chapter 1

The sun blinded me when I stretched out of bed. Smokey was curled up in a ball by my head, he looked peaceful and care free of the new day. Lucky him. I carefully maneuvered out of my bed, and by the window. I hid my eyes from the light and looked down to the world below.

Children were running to their bus stops, and adults walking their dogs. On Sunday, these streets are filled with families walking to parks together, laughing and having fun. Moreover, I would have to stay put here. Whereas Priscilla and her pure bred children go to Jamaica and party the nights away.

Priscilla is my mother, but my father is not the stuck up rich guy who fell for her. My real father is a sex friend of my mother. She met him at a bar and they decided to have “fun”. This was two weeks after she had Mayson and Victoria. Their father, Greg, has a seat in the senate.

My half sister Victoria treats me like crap. To her, I’m a low life. My other half sibling; Mayson, just ignores me, unless he wants something from me. I don’t know much about him, except that he is really gorgeous and popular. Mayson has a strange atmosphere and I think he is responsible for the feeling of someone watching me.
My name is Payge, and just as my name means, I am a servant to the beast "Princess" Priscilla. Even though she is never home, she and her children have my life in their hands. I have absolutely no control over them and I'm sick of it.
Twisting and turning, I slowly stretched out my body. my reflection in the mirror mimicked my movements. My bedridden nightgown draped around my knees. I made this dress with a light fabric since I couldn't find my taste in cheap stores.
I felt that a light blue complimented my, not only, lightly tanned skin but, my facial features. Over the years in not cutting my hair or letting kids put gum, or anything sticky and hard to get out, in it... My black hair reached down to my lower back. My big and deep blue eyes escalated my rare, natural beauty. I may not look it but, I am strong and agile... Of course any girl would be with all the crap Priscilla owns.
Smokey stirred in my bed, I found him a year ago in the cross roads and I am glad I picked him up. I don't know what I would do with out this adorable little kitten.
After my luxurious bath, a 60 minutes later, I changed and relaxed myself with ice tea I found in my mini fridge.
"What do I have in store for myself today." I uttered when I bet down to pat the hungry cat. He purred a meow and I fed him his favorite Tuna dish. Still in the bathroom, I brushed my blow-dried hair into waves of silk and got ready with my black eyeliner.
My phone sounded with the breakfast alarmed, so I grabbed my apron with a slight grimace and rushed down two flights of stairs.

"Payge!" Priscilla shouted to me as I passed her door. I stopped. I need to make her breakfast and prepare her medicine.
"Yes ma'am?" I asked.
"Go prepare my eggs and my medicine! Now! You know the daily." She yelled.
"Yes ma'am." I replied, running down stairs to the kitchen. Her pills were in a cabinet in the fridge, I grabbed them and placed two blue pills on the silver tray.

"Priscilla, what kind of eggs would you like?" I asked.
"The usual!" She ordered. I got back to cooking her usual scrambled eggs.
I finished quickly and hurried up the stairs right when she called to me.
"Payge! Where is my food!?"
"Right here." I opened the door to her layer and set it next to her on the bed and waited for her next order.
"Excellent. Now go wake up you brother and sister." She ordered and I followed. I went down the hallway and woke both Mayson and Victoria, then went back down stairs.
"Payge, I want French toast." Victoria called. Right after she walked into the living room and flipped on the TV, Mayson walked through the hallway and muttered what he wanted.
"Waffles." I got to work quickly while they sat next to each other not paying attention to the news, but, talking about school related events.
"Food." I said and set out the plates of three each. They nodded with thanks-I think, and ate their food greedily.
I didn't have time to eat breakfast so I went to school hungry. My stomach growled through out the classes and it irritated me. I wanted to ditch this class and hit the vending machines.
"Ahaha!" Victoria hollered from across the class room, while snot-nosed-stuck-up brats hung on her every word. They were hanging all around her at school and after. Luckily not at our house.
At school, Priscilla's daughter and son are the rulers of this place. They are the unchangeable queen and king. They are in-charge of everything that happens and most everyone.
They ruin commoner kids and make them laughing stocks of the school. Victoria is most at work, she uses me when she sees me. She threatens me at school and I can't do anything about it.
"Payge!" The teacher yelled. "Stop daydreaming!" I looked surprise.
"Don't you have something to say?" Victoria snickered with the students.
"I'm terribly sorry. Forgive me." I spoke out to the class standing and bowing as were told. The class laughed and the teacher sent me to the hall. But, instead of the hall I left the school and went out to wander the streets.
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Old 06-13-2010, 05:21 AM   #3
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Nice story! I really like it! Poor Payge... The title seems interesting, so I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. Keep it up! ^_^
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Old 06-13-2010, 06:48 AM   #4
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its really goo i like it
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Old 06-13-2010, 10:03 AM   #5
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Awesome!

I remember this other story you wrote a long time ago, it was also good.
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Old 06-15-2010, 01:06 AM   #6
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ありがとう!! ‐arigatou. I have a new keyboard so yea, I wanted to type... Haha
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