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Old 05-13-2010, 05:35 AM   #81
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Cool chapter, good work on the fight scene.
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Old 05-14-2010, 12:35 AM   #82
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Cool chapter, good work on the fight scene.
Why, thanks. ^_^ It wasn't easy describing the moves the way I imagined them.
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Old 05-27-2010, 01:28 PM   #83
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good chapter as always, tho i was slow in seeing u updated it. so if the dragon has no wings, does he fly like the one from "the neverending story" :P
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good chapter as always, tho i was slow in seeing u updated it. so if the dragon has no wings, does he fly like the one from "the neverending story" :P
I don't know that story. xDDD But you'll find out in the next chapter, muahaha, oh the suspense! Ummm... yeah, so I'll give you a hint though: He can control the air currents around him. ^_^
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sweet. i figured u would, its by a german author. been a long time since i've seen the film
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sweet. i figured u would, its by a german author. been a long time since i've seen the film
GASP! It's by Michael Ende! How come I've never seen it before? >.<! Anyways, I'm sorry the new chapter is taking me so long, I'm writing 5 exams this week... gah...

By the by, I see you have Shino as your avatar again? Awesomeness! ^_^
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GASP! It's by Michael Ende! How come I've never seen it before? >.<! Anyways, I'm sorry the new chapter is taking me so long, I'm writing 5 exams this week... gah...

By the by, I see you have Shino as your avatar again? Awesomeness! ^_^
no worries, u have a patient audience. examinating is far more important than fan fictioning.

n yeah, that lee doll avatar was too bubbly for my liking. emo lurker shino ftw.
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