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Old 05-29-2010, 04:11 PM   #1
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Default pain poem 2

here it is. not my best one, but its ok.

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Bloody Pool
At night,
I sat on a bench.
Waiting until,
My ways end.
As I stand,
I feel annoyed.
There's someone watching me,
I'll try to avoid.
I walk away,
From the place.
Back home to see,
A familiar face.
As I close,
My bedroom door.
I feel kind of scared,
Someone's out there, bored.
As I shut off the light.
And lie on the bed.
I roll over to see,
A guy's head.
I start to scream,
But he places his filthy hand,
On my face,
I don't know this man.
He whispers something,
In my ear.
"Hello,
My sweet dear."
Then he kisses my lips,
While I scream in fear.
He grabs parts,
That I am scared.
I push him away,
So he won't touch anymore, he dare.
He starts to narrow,
And gets out a knife.
He slices my neck,
Does he want me to die?
I fall back on the bed,
As it rapidly flows.
He lays next to me, smirking,
He just won't go.
He slices my body,
More and more.
As the blood now falls,
To the floor.
He then gets up,
And jumps out the window.
He raped me,
I tried to stop it, but no!
I'm laying in a pool of blood,
Dead as I cry.
Damn, that rapist,
Because now, I am to die.
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Old 05-29-2010, 04:14 PM   #2
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here it is. not my best one, but its ok.

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Bloody Pool
At night,
I sat on a bench.
Waiting until,
My ways end.
As I stand,
I feel annoyed.
There's someone watching me,
I'll try to avoid.
I walk away,
From the place.
Back home to see,
A familiar face.
As I close,
My bedroom door.
I feel kind of scared,
Someone's out there, bored.
As I shut off the light.
And lie on the bed.
I roll over to see,
A guy's head.
I start to scream,
But he places his filthy hand,
On my face,
I don't know this man.
He whispers something,
In my ear.
"Hello,
My sweet dear."
Then he kisses my lips,
While I scream in fear.
He grabs parts,
That I am scared.
I push him away,
So he won't touch anymore, he dare.
He starts to narrow,
And gets out a knife.
He slices my neck,
Does he want me to die?
I fall back on the bed,
As it rapidly flows.
He lays next to me, smirking,
He just won't go.
He slices my body,
More and more.
As the blood now falls,
To the floor.
He then gets up,
And jumps out the window.
He raped me,
I tried to stop it, but no!
I'm laying in a pool of blood,
Dead as I cry.
Damn, that rapist,
Because now, I am to die.
O_o.....
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Spoliers end here
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Old 05-29-2010, 04:15 PM   #3
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O_o.....
wat? o.o
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Old 05-29-2010, 04:17 PM   #4
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wat? o.o
its scarier than zombies
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Old 05-29-2010, 04:28 PM   #5
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its good.......
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Old 05-29-2010, 04:34 PM   #6
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thanx ^^
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Old 05-29-2010, 06:59 PM   #7
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its great :3
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It's good. Very sad, but good.
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thanx.
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It's kinda strange (no offence!) but in an odd way I like it.
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Old 06-05-2010, 02:26 PM   #12
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Pain + Poem = Awesome!
Anyways cool poem
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thanx. ^^

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Good... Very good...
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O>O It scared me........>.<
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