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05-29-2010, 04:11 PM	#1
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	pain poem 2 here it is. not my best one, but its ok. Spoiler: Bloody Pool At night, I sat on a bench. Waiting until, My ways end. As I stand, I feel annoyed. There's someone watching me, I'll try to avoid. I walk away, From the place. Back home to see, A familiar face. As I close, My bedroom door. I feel kind of scared, Someone's out there, bored. As I shut off the light. And lie on the bed. I roll over to see, A guy's head. I start to scream, But he places his filthy hand, On my face, I don't know this man. He whispers something, In my ear. "Hello, My sweet dear." Then he kisses my lips, While I scream in fear. He grabs parts, That I am scared. I push him away, So he won't touch anymore, he dare. He starts to narrow, And gets out a knife. He slices my neck, Does he want me to die? I fall back on the bed, As it rapidly flows. He lays next to me, smirking, He just won't go. He slices my body, More and more. As the blood now falls, To the floor. He then gets up, And jumps out the window. He raped me, I tried to stop it, but no! I'm laying in a pool of blood, Dead as I cry. Damn, that rapist, Because now, I am to die.

05-29-2010, 04:14 PM

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here it is. not my best one, but its ok.

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O_o.....

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05-29-2010, 04:15 PM

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O_o.....

wat? o.o

05-29-2010, 04:17 PM

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wat? o.o

its scarier than zombies

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05-29-2010, 04:28 PM	#5
BloodyKnives Freshmen Academy Student Join Date: May 2010 Location: In the dense storm of Hell Posts: 26 Rep Power: 0	Re: pain poem 2 its good....... __________________

05-29-2010, 04:34 PM	#6
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 thanx ^^

05-29-2010, 06:59 PM	#7
Watermelon Love Ninja Academy Student Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: On a fluffy cloud of cotton candy Posts: 36 Rep Power: 0	Re: pain poem 2 its great :3 __________________ Love comes from a fluffy cloud called feelings.~Me Spoiler: Meow! I am a kitty....or am I? ^^ I, I don't know what to say.... To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

05-29-2010, 07:05 PM	#8
Scarlet the Heroine Genin Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Standing right behind you with a dagger in my hand and a smile of pure happiness on my face... Posts: 231 Rep Power: 8	Re: pain poem 2 It's good. Very sad, but good. __________________ *Gone Forever*

05-29-2010, 07:10 PM	#9
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 thanx.

06-04-2010, 12:50 AM	#10
Chidorimaster22 Genin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Somewhere over that gosh darn rainbow. Posts: 229 Rep Power: 9	Re: pain poem 2 It's kinda strange (no offence!) but in an odd way I like it. __________________ "And I'm taking all your memories off the shelf, 'Cause I don't need you or anybody else."

06-05-2010, 02:23 PM	#11
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 thanx ^^

06-05-2010, 02:26 PM	#12
Noctis Arashi is rapidly losing blood from Naijeru's jugular attack Formerly Susanoo Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Transcendent of Space. Denizen of Fate. Posts: 24,200 Rep Power: 27 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 Your on! __________________ ~~ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ~~ "Memento Mori" ______________ Feel free to PM me if you need help with anything.

06-05-2010, 02:28 PM

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Re: pain poem 2

Pain + Poem = Awesome!

Anyways cool poem

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06-05-2010, 06:53 PM	#14
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 thanx. ^^ @susanoo- i no...

06-08-2010, 02:10 PM	#15
Shinagami Genin Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: In the darkness, navigating by starlight. Posts: 210 Rep Power: 7	Re: pain poem 2 Good... Very good... __________________ ♥ Time has fallen asleep in the afternoon sunshine. ♥ "The world isn't perfect. But it's there for us, doing the best it can. And that's what makes it so damn beautiful." ~Roy Mustang あなたがさよならを言わずに去った </3

06-13-2010, 09:12 AM	#16
EmoSakura Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 6,600 Rep Power: 13 Member's Picture Albums	Re: pain poem 2 thanx-sies :3

07-11-2010, 04:03 PM	#17
Bunny Ninja Academy Student Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Lost in the garden. Dx Someone find me. Posts: 51 Rep Power: 6	Re: pain poem 2 O>O It scared me........>.< __________________ O.O sniffle, sniffle, sniffle........

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