New Comic in Progress

mrsticky005 · 02-10-2010, 07:41 PM

Hey guys if you haven't read my other comic "Counting" click on the link in my signature.
I'll tell you when Accident Prone is finished but otherwise if you just want to see more pages
again click on the signature and follow the instructions on that page.

Redid the lettering and also edited the script

Vatanui AKA Pride · 02-10-2010, 08:01 PM

Sticky, the links above the comic page doesn't work.

Otherwise, great drawings.

mrsticky005 · 02-10-2010, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Sticky, the links above the comic page doesn't work.

Otherwise, great drawings.

Yeah I just realized it only works for links within the forum.

mrsticky005 · 02-11-2010, 03:10 PM

Ze Bump!

yondaime · 02-11-2010, 03:21 PM

Looks good so far sticky..... I think it is going to be a short one.....

Sage Mode · 02-11-2010, 03:34 PM

Looks like a good start.

Constructive criticism: I'd recommend using a different font. Anything other than Comic Sans. Try blambot.com. And try to format the dialog inside the balloons so there is ample white space around the words. In other words, don't get it too close to the edges of the balloon/captions.

yondaime · 02-11-2010, 03:54 PM

I think you mean more Naruto-like. Plus, it's good to see Admins giving constructive criticism, even though it wasn't meant for me... xD

deidara330 · 02-11-2010, 03:57 PM

"Rubbish"? What are you, British? Well, it's okay, but it's only one page, so there's not much to say about it.

mrsticky005 · 02-11-2010, 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Sage Mode

Looks like a good start.

Constructive criticism: I'd recommend using a different font. Anything other than Comic Sans. Try blambot.com. And try to format the dialog inside the balloons so there is ample white space around the words. In other words, don't get it too close to the edges of the balloon/captions.

Thanks Sage Made. I did the lettering myself in a program called paint.net
but I'll look into this blambot.com the last comic I did "Counting" I paid
a guy to do the lettering but that was for only 7 pages. This comic
will be roughly 20 pages in length. So until I get more money I'm
gonna just try to do the lettering myself.

Thanks again.

It's only British if you want it to be

NarutoRulez · 02-17-2010, 07:23 AM

Nicely done! Sounds like an accident is gonna happen xD.

mrsticky005 · 02-17-2010, 08:46 AM

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Originally Posted by NarutoRulez

Nicely done! Sounds like an accident is gonna happen xD.

Oh no! The secret is out! :P

02-10-2010, 07:41 PM	#1
mrsticky005 Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the White Text House Posts: 13,910 Rep Power: 23 Member's Picture Albums	New Comic in Progress Hey guys if you haven't read my other comic "Counting" click on the link in my signature. I'll tell you when Accident Prone is finished but otherwise if you just want to see more pages again click on the signature and follow the instructions on that page. Redid the lettering and also edited the script __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spam once and the forum will be annoyed. Spam twice and warnings will be deployed Spam thrice and a infraction you will receive Spam 8,984 times and a FAIL Agent you''ll soon be. ...At least in my case. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by mrsticky005; 02-12-2010 at 01:19 AM.

02-10-2010, 08:01 PM	#2
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: New Comic in Progress Sticky, the links above the comic page doesn't work. Otherwise, great drawings. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

02-11-2010, 03:10 PM	#4
mrsticky005 Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: In the White Text House Posts: 13,910 Rep Power: 23 Member's Picture Albums	Re: New Comic in Progress Ze Bump! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spam once and the forum will be annoyed. Spam twice and warnings will be deployed Spam thrice and a infraction you will receive Spam 8,984 times and a FAIL Agent you''ll soon be. ...At least in my case. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

02-11-2010, 03:21 PM	#5
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: New Comic in Progress Looks good so far sticky..... I think it is going to be a short one.....

02-11-2010, 03:34 PM	#6
Sage Mode Site Admin - The Great Toad Sage Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bay Area, CA Posts: 2,074 Rep Power: 10	Re: New Comic in Progress Looks like a good start. Constructive criticism: I'd recommend using a different font. Anything other than Comic Sans. Try blambot.com. And try to format the dialog inside the balloons so there is ample white space around the words. In other words, don't get it too close to the edges of the balloon/captions. __________________ sage mode is reading this what you think is gonna happen A. he is gonna say this is sweet B. leave not saying anything C. he is gonna close the thread --dogboy22

02-11-2010, 03:54 PM	#7
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: New Comic in Progress I think you mean more Naruto-like. Plus, it's good to see Admins giving constructive criticism, even though it wasn't meant for me... xD

02-11-2010, 03:57 PM	#8
deidara330 Mr. Serious Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Everywhere and Nowhere. Posts: 14,489 Rep Power: 14	Re: New Comic in Progress "Rubbish"? What are you, British? Well, it's okay, but it's only one page, so there's not much to say about it.

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