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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: In the White Text House
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Hey guys if you haven't read my other comic "Counting" click on the link in my signature.
I'll tell you when Accident Prone is finished but otherwise if you just want to see more pages again click on the signature and follow the instructions on that page. Redid the lettering and also edited the script ![]()
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has a farm...
WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat.
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Sticky, the links above the comic page doesn't work.
Otherwise, great drawings.
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Yeah I just realized it only works for links within the forum.
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Ze Bump!
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Jonin
Join Date: Apr 2009
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Looks good so far sticky..... I think it is going to be a short one.....
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Site Admin - The Great Toad Sage
Join Date: Mar 2009
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Looks like a good start.
Constructive criticism: I'd recommend using a different font. Anything other than Comic Sans. Try blambot.com. And try to format the dialog inside the balloons so there is ample white space around the words. In other words, don't get it too close to the edges of the balloon/captions.
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Jonin
Join Date: Apr 2009
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I think you mean more Naruto-like. Plus, it's good to see Admins giving constructive criticism, even though it wasn't meant for me... xD
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Mr. Serious
Join Date: Apr 2009
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"Rubbish"? What are you, British? Well, it's okay, but it's only one page, so there's not much to say about it.
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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but I'll look into this blambot.com the last comic I did "Counting" I paid a guy to do the lettering but that was for only 7 pages. This comic will be roughly 20 pages in length. So until I get more money I'm gonna just try to do the lettering myself. Thanks again. It's only British if you want it to be
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Miss Naruto 2009 Runner Up
Join Date: Sep 2009
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Nicely done! Sounds like an accident is gonna happen xD.
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Village Hidden in Aura ☺ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. I ish a writer. :3 Well, excuuuse me, Princess. xD I'm not a Naruto Fangirl, I just couldn't think of a name ... Conversation of the month: Spoiler:
Falling head-first, with a slight sense of fear. Crashing through clouds, with a sick knot of dread. Tumbling past air with nobody near. Nothing but blurs, of feelings I've fled. Monstrous joy, for all that appears gone but is really there. And yet as I fall all I can do, is watch while I'm falling through air. |
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Join Date: Apr 2009
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Oh no! The secret is out! :P
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