Samurai Revolution (A Manga I am Trying to Create)

[Kurisu]

Well I want some feedback. I got the whole thing copyrighted, I am trying to improve my artisitic skills and maybe you have seen some of my drawings I have posted in topics here. Well here it goes.

Title: Samurai Taiken (Revolution)

Three most important Cities/Villages- City/Village of Amerteratsu, City/Village of Tsukiyoma, Village of Susanoo. Together they make the Holy Trinity Allience.

There are Auraists (Those who control body energy) and they're body has one element energy of (Fire, Water, Lightning, Earth) but in special cases (Snow, Ice, and Pure Energy) The way they access these power is by forming into their Samurai Form, by saying "Yabure" which is "break" in Japanese. Each person is unique in their form. Each form has "Three Branches".

There are "Reapers" or those who are human Oni. Their weapons are Sythes. Each Reaper has a special form called, "Retsusendo" which means cold death.

Lastly there are Oni, demons which are threats to both races.

Characters that are Auraists (Samurai):

Haruzo Metsuki (Main Character) Male

Mira Zetsundo (Friend of Haruzo) Female

Zemu Setsuna (Friend of Haruzo) Male

Nuki Komoda (Friend of Haruzo) Male

Mokure Anatamasuko (Shogun of the Village of Ameteratsu) Male

Yukimaru Nobundo (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu, Leader of Haruzo, Mira, Zemu, and Nuki) Male

Hetsuza Chimuru (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Female

Minita Anatamasuko (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Female

Yonbido Itsumode (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Male

Senbonda Hatsuno (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Male

Hano Zemoboda (Daiyamo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Male

Zomodoshi Tenrai (Daiymo of the Village of Ameteratsu) Male

Yondo Zetsundo (Father of Mira Zetsundo, and High Guard of Shogun)




Reapers:

Nuki Komoda

Semuda Komoda (Father of Nuki Komoda)

Hetsune Komoda (Mother of Nuki Yomoda)

(Only known one right now)

Oni:

(There are just Oni as of right now, no specifics)


Orochiakegata:

Hatsuro Metsuza (Leader of Orochiakegata; Human form of Orochi)

Hitomi Ushina

Murako Demo

Dekoru Zenpon

Zeromu Benkoru


Summary:

In the folklore of this world, Orochi was slain by Susanoo. Ameteratsu and Tsukiyoma established villages, as did Susanoo. These villages today became known as "The Village of Ameteratsu", "The Village of Tsukiyoma" and "The Village of Susanoo" together the three make the "Holy Trinity Allience", Long ago the Village of Susanoo had been destroyed by several natural disasters. But our main view point in this is on the Village of Ameteratsu. Each village is ran by a Shogun and the Shogun has Daiyamo's or the few strongest Auraists in the village, be the top leaders of a set group of Auraists. Haruzo and his friends; Mira, Zemu and Nuki are placed under Yukimaru Nobundo. Two powerful families exists in the Village, being the Metsuki and Zetsundo. Each are pure energy weilders, each having a different unique way of using it. Very few groups of auraists have this ability to weild raw energy. The Metsuki are able to infuse it with the main five elements, but each element takes years for even the Family Head to control, yet each family is very small and only very few members exist. The Zetsundo are able to form it into shapes, weapons, armor, ect. The Shogun of the Village of Ameteratsu is Mokure Anatamasuko, his daughter the next in line to take his place when his death occurs. The reapers are only in allience with the Villages of Ameteratsu and Tsukiyoma. Each village though has a stone in a shrine which is under each large statue of the God/Goddess. Each one together can create such power that no eye has ever seen since the creation of the world. This is what the Orochiakegata are after . The leader of the organization is sought to be the reincarnation of Orochi, having both Orochi and Susanoo disappear when the Village of Susanoo was destroyed. (More to come)

[Kurisu]

Comments?

[ThePurpleChidori]

It seems pretty interesting.

[yondaime]

There are 2 Daimyou's from Ameteratsu? Also, it looks interesting. I will wait for more I guess.

[Kurisu]

**UPDATED**

Thanks for the comments!! ^^

[NarutoRulez]

This seems pretty cool! Those must be pretty powerful people O.o... Anyways, this is really cool, keep up the good work !

[kay]

its cool

[LegalBomb]

This seems really good.

[Kurisu]

Thanks Bro. And thanks to you all. Do you think I should try and post a 5 page preview thats hand-drawn?

[MizukiUchiha11]

It seems... Good.. I can not wait for the story........

[Kurisu]

Do you think I should write this as a story (that being an outline) from beginning to end and then sometime try to turn it into the actual comic?