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Old 12-23-2009, 12:37 PM   #1
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Sitting in here in the dark
i mutter to myself
I sit there in misery and
watch your smile light up the room
I wish to be like you...
I think in silence
Could i really change?
To protect the ones I care for
is a wish
I observe you
You always keep pushing forward
saying you can't give up
we lived the same life
so why are you happier?
could I...?
one day be like you?
I can only ponder and follow your steps...
maybe one day...

I know it sucks but tell me if you liked it

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Old 12-23-2009, 12:56 PM   #2
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Old 12-23-2009, 12:58 PM   #3
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lol it sounds like garras thoughts
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:01 PM   #4
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lol it sounds like garras thoughts
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:02 PM   #5
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well noodle its good t seems a bit to related to garra tho
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:03 PM   #6
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well noodle its good t seems a bit to related to garra tho
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:08 PM   #7
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*is slapped* you said to comment T.T
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:09 PM   #8
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*is slapped* you said to comment T.T
cause i didn't think you'd comment
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Old 12-23-2009, 01:30 PM   #9
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well soooory
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