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Old 11-01-2009, 08:20 PM   #61
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lol no, not really. It kind of got boring... I'm where she went to jump off the cliff!! ^^ And has been there ever since the end of September!
Silly goose, you are almost at the most exciting part!
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Really? But how exciting is it if she's jumping off a cliff? Does she die or something? Or get hurt...?
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Umikage: Kenta Hamasaki, meaning stong ocean. He's the fifth Umikage of the Ocean Village. He has one daughter, Akira Hamasaki. His village owns the Sapphire Stone.

Akira Hamasaki: Name meaning intelligent ocean, 12 year old Akira is the daughter of the 5th Umikage. She is a very energetic girl who loves to go on adventures. Though she could be clueless at times. Akira's element is water. She as an animal companion, Mo Mo.

Mo Mo: Mo Mo is a stubborn tiger tht wanders off alone. Don't make Mo Mo mad and you're on the safe side. Her human companon is Akira Hamasaki. The two have been together for 6 years. Akira found Mo Mo when she was 6 years old, and the two have been inseperable ever since.

Ken Akiyama: Meaning strong autumn mountain, Ken is the leader of the most famous genjutsu clan, the Akiyama Clan. Well known for their ability to change the battle fields to suit them, with their amazing genjutsu bloodline.

Tsukiko Akiyama: Her name means autumn mountain moon child, is the eldest daughter of Ken Akiyama. Tsukiko, 14 years old, is kind, smart, and is lazy. She dreams of becoming a medical ninja and has been studying to be one for the past 2 years. Her element is earth.

Amaya Shizu: Meaning silent night rain, Amaya was found at the gate of the Ocean Village one morning. The Umikage decided to take her in ad care for her. Amaya, 13 years, is smart, strong, and loves to hang out with her friends, Tsukiko and Akira. She is the only one in the Ocean Village that controls the element fire.

Ayame Kumi: Meaning pretty iris, Ayame became a jonin at the age of 16. Currently 20, Ayame is the sensei of Tsukiko, Amaya, and Akira. Ayame is smart, strong, and as Akira said, cares deeply for her teammates. Ayame has the power of wind, water, and earth.

Akako Aki: Name meaning red autumn, Akako is the sixth Hikage of the Scarlet Village, home to th Scarlet Stone. He has 2 children: Ichijo and Mika.

Ichijo Aki: Currently deceased

Mika Aki: Meaning autumn full moon, Mika is the second child of Akako. Mika, 11, likes to have fun, occasionaly, her "fun" could lead to trouble. The Scarlet Stone, is currently worn as a necklace on Mika, given to her by her older brother. Mika has the power over the element fire.
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Old 11-05-2009, 06:46 PM   #64
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Really? But how exciting is it if she's jumping off a cliff? Does she die or something? Or get hurt...?
You will just have to read it and find out, xD
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An Annoyed Tsukiko

"I'm sooo tired!!" complained Tsukiko. "I don't want to ever play another game of tag ever again!!"
"Yeah I'm pretty tired myself." agreed Amaya.
"Why do we have to play games with her? Can't we just follow her everywhere she goes intead?" sighed Akira. "Look, even Mo Mo's tired."
THe girls look over to see a sleeping Mo Mo.
"Mo Mo has the right idea. We should go to sleep early. Who knows what Mika will make us do tomorrow." said Tsukiko
******
The next day the girls were once again awoken by Mika.
"Can you let me sleep until 8:30 or something? Whey the heck do-"
Tsukiko was once again cut off by Amaya.
Amaya started,"Sorry Mika, Tsukiko doesn't-"
"Like to wake up early. I know, I know. You told me that yesterday." interruped Mika.
Tsukiko finally got Amaya's hand off her mouth, "Well if you knew that, then why the heck are you standing right here at-" Tsukiko looked at the clock, "6:30 in the morning?!?!"
Mika looked at her, "I gave you an extra hour. Remember, I woke you guys up at 5:30 yesterday."
Tsukiko's eyes widen, "An hour?! How about you try waking me up at 8:30 next time?"
Ayame-Sensei came into the room at that moment. "Come on girls, get ready. I'm sure that there are a lot of things Mika would like to do today."
The girls, and Mo Mo. all groaned silently to themselves.
"I feel like I'm babysitting a 6 year old kid..." Tsukiko muttered silently.
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shika, you smartie, you spelled 'tag' wrong.....and 'again'.....xD
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You will just have to read it and find out, xD
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shika, you smartie, you spelled 'tag' wrong.....and 'again'.....xD
*hits Shika on the head with a metal stick* Dumb grasshopper, remember to spell words correctly. There is something called a dictionary....
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shika, you smartie, you spelled 'tag' wrong.....and 'again'.....xD
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*hits Shika on the head with a metal stick* Dumb grasshopper, remember to spell words correctly. There is something called a dictionary....
Hey!! -_-"
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haha ok, hey don't feel bad about her hitting u with a metal stick, that happened to me too. i hit her with her own sledge hammer instead. xD
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Good, but short.

I'm thinking of posting a story of my own. Should I?
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YEP YEP!! I'll be the first to read it! ^^
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lol, ok. ^ ^ I've started a bit on it, so I think I'll post it later.
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I'm thinking of posting a story of my own. Should I?
do it! do it! do it! xD
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the next chapter pplz! hope ya like it!
The Forest
Amaya sighed, "So what are we doing today Mika?"
Mika thought about this and then said, "Well, we played Hide-N-Go-Seek and tag already...I seriously don't know...Hey, while i think about what we should o, maybe we can take a walk in the forest?"
"Works for me." shrugged Tsukiko
"I'm up for that." agreed Akira.
"So am I." said Amaya.
"Great! Come on,, I'll show you my favorite places in the forest." exclaimed Mika.
So the four gils, and Mo Mo, went into the forest wth Ayame-Sensei silently followiing them, keeping watch here and there.
*********
"You two ready?" asked ninja number one.
"Of course we're ready." answered ninja two.
"Yea, I wanna get paid." said ninha three.
"Well, we have ti find the stone first and the steal it." said ninja one.
"Stop acting so smart." said ninja three.
"Wait, the Scarlet Stone is red...right?" asked ninja two.
Ninjas one and three roller their eyes.
"You're a moron!" shouted ninja three, thinking no duh!
"What color do you think the SCARLET stone is?" exclaimed ninja one.
"Uhh, well, I th-" started ninja two.
Ninja three held up her hand "Don't even answer that."
"Shhh! I hear voices." whispered ninja one.
"Who could that be?" wondered ninja three.
**********
"Well here it is. Wecome to the Red Forest!" shouted Mika.
"Akira looked around her, puzzled, "Why is it called the Red Forest even thought the trees are green?"
"There really isn't an explanation for that Akira. Maybe it's because it belongs to the Scarlet Village. Y'kknow, scarlet, red." Tsukiko replied.
"Huh." said Akira.
"Amaya turned too look at Mika. "So Mika, you said you wanted to show us places in the forest."
"Oh yea, i haven't forgotten. Let's go!"
The girls followed Mika to a field of a red, white, yellow and pink sea of carnations.
"Oh my god! Those are so BEAUTIFUL!" hollered an excited Tsukiko as she ran into the never ending sea.
"She kinda likes flowers, being the earth girl and what not." explained Amaya.
"Someone's here." said Akira with a stern face.
"Are you sure it's not Ayame-Sensei?" asked Amaya
"No I'm sure. I know Ayame-Sensei has been following us. Besides, this is a new scent..three new scents."
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At the sound of these words, Amaya quickly called Tsukiko.
"Hold on! I think I s-"
"Now! Now Tsukiko! NOW!!!" Amaya shrieked.
Tsukiko rushed over angrily.
"What?!?!"
"We've got company," Akira said calmly, "Be on guard."
With that all the girls were on guard, ready for anything. Mika just looked at the girls in confusion. What's going on?
********
"Are they close by Ichijo?" asked ninja three.
There was a pause before Ichijo nodded his head.
"Ninja two looked around at the trees, to see if anybody was near. He stared at the tree to his left and saw read beady eyes.
"Uh guys." said ninja two slowly
"What?" they both said.
"Are trees supposed to have eyes?"
Both ninja starred at each other.
"Quick! Kill it Montaro!" yelled ninja three.
Before he could even reach a kunai, two demon shuriken fly woards his for-arms, stapling him to a tree as if he were paper. Montaro let out a horrifying yell, sending birds to fly out of the vicinity.
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With the sound of wings shooting out of a section of the forest, the girls shipped thier heads.
"That's probably where the three new scents are." said Tsukiko.
"That means Ayame-sensei is taking care of them." said Amaya.
"Which means we should get out of here." Akira said finishing all of their sentences.
"Wait! What's going on?! Who's attacking the forest?" Mika asked.
"There's ninjas here who want your neckalce. We have to protect it and you at all costs." Tsukiko said
Mika stood there paralyzed in the thought of someone wanitng her dead. What has she done to them? Why do they want her gem?
"Come on Mika, let's go home." Amaya said gently.
Mika nodded her head and turned the other directon. When she turned around, she was dumbfounded at who she was staring at: her brother Ichijo.
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Ichijo's alive?!
"I-Ichijo?" said Mika weakly. Tears erupted and began flowing like Niagra Falls. She took a step foward but was stopped my a hand.
"Mika, no. He's one of the three that stole the gems." Tsukiko said.
"Mika? Do you really believe a couple of ninjas that you knew for a couple days? Don't you trust me?" Ichijo said in a coaxing voice.
"You were DEAD two years ago." said Akira with a kunai in her hand
"An older sibling wouldn't let her think that he was dead and just suddenly reappear two years later. Mika, think about this: What was he doing the past two years?" Amaya said calmly, reaching for her chakra wire.
Mika started wondering about her brother's death.
"No, don't believe them." interrupted Ichijo. "Who do you believe? Your brother or people you met for a few days? Answer that question, Mika." Mika starred in confusion. She doesn't know who to choose. Tsukiko nods her head, showing that she has gotten a good thought.
"Think about this Mika. Your brother has been dead. Remember when was the last time you saw him."
"A-About two years ago..."
"Two years ago. What happened in that two years?"
"Well, he was set off on a mission. It was supppose to be about a week or two. About a month later, he never came back. Worried, my father sent out another team to see what's wrong. When they came back, the were holding two dead bodies. Father and I took a peek at the dead bodies, and one of them was Ichijo."
"SO THAT MEANS HE DIED!!!" shouted Akira. "He's dead! You saw the body! You see it! You believe It!"
"Calm down, Akira." said Tsukiko.
"What do you have to say Ichijo?" asked Amaya
"Well, surely these people are lieing." he replied
"You're the LIAR!!!" screeched Akira with smoke coming out of her ears now.
Ichijo starred...and went back talking. "As I was saying, 'cause i was so rudely interrupted, why w-"
"RUDELY INTERRUPTED?!?!?!? RUDELY??!! How can you say rudely when you are rude enough to coax this young girl into giving you the stone?!?!?" Akira blurted out once again. She throws a kunai at Ichijo and he deflects it back. He throws four kunais. One at Akira, Amaya, Tsukiko, and another at Mika. The girls easily deflected the kunais. Mo Mo comes and swishes the kunai back at Ichijo with her tail.
"You tried to hurt me..." Mika said with fear. "B-But you m-my brother." Tears still stinging her eyes.
"No! My hands just slip. I meant to throw it at that tiger right there!" he denied the fact that he meant to throw at her.
"How?" Akira questioned. "She was standing about ten feet away from her."
"That's it! I'm going now. But remember Mika, I am your brother." Ichijo said, and leaped over the bushes.
"Wait! Don't go Ichijo!!!" Mika cried. Mika ran with all her might but was stopped by Amaya.
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