Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 83

takuya · 11-03-2009, 05:16 PM

Well I don't expect Toshi to sit out on a fight(she's seems sorta like a hothead.)Hanataro?We haven't seen him in awhile,I wonder what techs he'll show since we know he's a medic and shy.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-03-2009, 05:25 PM

Although it would be more of a joke-fight.
What's your favorite fight so far?

takuya · 11-03-2009, 05:40 PM

Menrui vs Tenso.We finally get to see him do something besides sleep!xD

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-03-2009, 05:46 PM

Lol, are you going to include both parts of the battle, or just the first part, where he fights just Tenso?

Lelouch Vi Britannia · 11-03-2009, 06:10 PM

Dang, I liked the story; very climatic.

takuya · 11-03-2009, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Lol, are you going to include both parts of the battle, or just the first part, where he fights just Tenso?

Just the first part.

Lelouch Vi Britannia · 11-03-2009, 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by takuya

Just the first part.

So you liked the part before Allon and Senso came in?

takuya · 11-03-2009, 06:22 PM

I like both.I like the first part since we see Menrui fight.I like the other part too since it's epic;I thought I was missed something since he said both parts,but I understand now.

Lelouch Vi Britannia · 11-03-2009, 06:27 PM

Oh, I was thinking about that too.
At least now we know Menrui does something besides sleep all day. xD

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-03-2009, 06:55 PM

Well, I'm glad you guys liked the fight.

Nemico · 11-04-2009, 06:01 PM

Sweet...
Just read another chapter this is pretty good.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-04-2009, 06:11 PM

What chapter are you on?

Obito · 11-04-2009, 06:12 PM

Pride, what happened with you and Manga?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-04-2009, 06:14 PM

Chapter Sixty-One~ The Briefing

Note~ Sorry for the missing Chapter yesterday, I was too busy. So here's the new one! Also, since I have a life, I won't be posting new chapters as much, so this will become more usual. It sucks, but we have to deal with it. Anyways, here we go!

Sage quickly glanced at the source of the voice as Izumi slowly turned around. Standing there was Tenso Ukitaro, in the flesh. Tenso was wearing his clothes earlier in his battle with Vatas and Menrui, yet it seemed that his wounds and scratches had been healed, for he was standing unscathed. Sage was somewhat surprised, yet he did not seem to lose his cool demeanor. "I heard the tales, old lady, and I'm surprised to see them to be true." Tenso then commented, as he remained in his position. Izumi then halted, at halfway point into facing Tenso.
"How did you discover a Door to the Dome of Ultimcia?" she then asked slowly, her voice betraying no emotion. Tenso offered a broad smirk. "I had....help," he answered, as his red murderous eyes glanced at every corner of the room. Izumi then said nothing, as she balled up her fists slowly. Faster than the normal eye could even follow, Izumi spun around, unveiling five daggers in her previously hidden hand. The daggers were long, double-edged and curved. A long blue line pattern were on each other daggers. Efficiently, Izumi threw all of them, releasing her hand, as the five dagger flew in an instant. They soared across the fifty yards of the distance between Izumi and Tenso; as the daggers flew, they seemed to stretch, getting longer by the millisecond. In a time span of one and half seconds, they had already reached Tenso, who set up a defensive stance in response. He skittered back, followed with an ungraceful backflip that narrowly avoided the first dagger by three and a half feet.
As the dagger plunged itself into the ground with its sharp point, forming cracks in the ground, Tenso quickly took a glance at it and realized something was wrong. It turned bigger! he realized as he dived to the right, dodging another one by three inches. Tenso quickly got to his toes, glancing at the two daggers plunged into the ground: they were now swords. Somehow, the daggers had grown in size during their flight. They had at least increased in length by five feet, and width by three feet, making the daggers a regular long sword.
Tenso then performed a cartwheel as the third dagger arrived, evading it too. He smirked, thinking of the fact that he could not be beaten by something this weak, as he heard a static sound behind him. Tenso turned, looking at the emotionless face of Izumi Nu, who kicked him upwards. As her knee bone pressed against Tenso's stomach, he was sent flying, zooming into a wall. However, he quickly yet barely caught himself, managing to use his chakra pools to stand on the walls. Tenso grinned, as he saw another dagger heading toward him. You underestimate me, you old hag, he thought as he simply sidestepped on the wall, avoiding the dagger, which had plunged itself into the wall, now a longsword.

However, things weren't that simple. As Tenso grinned, he heard a whistling sound to the right of him. Tenso glanced at the object, and realized that it was another dagger of Izumi's. He attempted to dodge it, but it was too late: he had noticed of the dagger too soon. As it plunged into his stomach squarely, Izumi waited below. Tenso then fell to the ground, into the arms of the waiting Izumi. He reached just seven feet above the ground, as Izumi swung a fist at his head upward.

Tenso was sent flying. He instantly flew, crashing into the ceiling, as parts of the ceiling concrete fell, to which Izumi easily evaded. No one made a sound, as the pull and strength of the ceiling gave up, and the body plummeted straight to the ground with a dull thud.
Sage was sitting at the computer table, on one of the dozens chairs. In his hand was his trademark cup of coffee, as he took a sip of it, as if nothing had happened.
As the Denkiteki did that, Izumi gazed at the body. "I thought so," she finally said. Sage nodded, taking another sip as he murmured, "I'm guessing that it was another person disguised as this one?" Izumi nodded, replying, "This confirms the fact that the Order of the Illuminus Alliance is involved, since this is clearly the work of their Head Scientist, Mayuri of the Black Puppet Corps."

"Intelligent observing," Yamamoto said. Izumi turned around, as Sage looked up from his cup of hot coffee, to see Yamamoto, accompanied with Vatas and Nui.

To be Continued.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-04-2009, 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Obito

Pride, what happened with you and Manga?

What do you mean by that?

Obito · 11-04-2009, 06:20 PM

You two arn't going out, right?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-04-2009, 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Obito

You two arn't going out, right?

We're married, remember? And we're still together.

Obito · 11-04-2009, 06:29 PM

Thank God.....

(hugs Pride tight) I love you man....

Vatanui AKA Pride · 11-04-2009, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Obito

Thank God.....

(hugs Pride tight) I love you man....

Okay, why are you so relieved?

Obito · 11-04-2009, 06:32 PM

Because I saw your signs. Freaked out.

11-03-2009, 05:16 PM	#1641
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,538 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Well I don't expect Toshi to sit out on a fight(she's seems sorta like a hothead.)Hanataro?We haven't seen him in awhile,I wonder what techs he'll show since we know he's a medic and shy. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

11-03-2009, 05:25 PM	#1642
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Although it would be more of a joke-fight. What's your favorite fight so far? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-03-2009, 05:40 PM	#1643
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,538 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Menrui vs Tenso.We finally get to see him do something besides sleep!xD __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

11-03-2009, 05:46 PM	#1644
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Lol, are you going to include both parts of the battle, or just the first part, where he fights just Tenso? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-03-2009, 06:10 PM	#1645
Lelouch Vi Britannia Genin Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Black Knights Headquarters Posts: 288 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Dang, I liked the story; very climatic.

11-03-2009, 06:22 PM	#1648
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,538 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story I like both.I like the first part since we see Menrui fight.I like the other part too since it's epic;I thought I was missed something since he said both parts,but I understand now. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

11-03-2009, 06:27 PM	#1649
Lelouch Vi Britannia Genin Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Black Knights Headquarters Posts: 288 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Oh, I was thinking about that too. At least now we know Menrui does something besides sleep all day. xD

11-03-2009, 06:55 PM	#1650
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Well, I'm glad you guys liked the fight. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-04-2009, 06:01 PM	#1651
Nemico Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Just Watching Posts: 1,754 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Sweet... Just read another chapter this is pretty good. __________________ "Always account for Variable Change"

11-04-2009, 06:11 PM	#1652
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story What chapter are you on? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-04-2009, 06:12 PM	#1653
Obito Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Coolsville Avenue Posts: 3,663 Rep Power: 10	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Pride, what happened with you and Manga? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. No you.

11-04-2009, 06:14 PM	#1654
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Chapter Sixty-One~ The Briefing Note~ Sorry for the missing Chapter yesterday, I was too busy. So here's the new one! Also, since I have a life, I won't be posting new chapters as much, so this will become more usual. It sucks, but we have to deal with it. Anyways, here we go! Sage quickly glanced at the source of the voice as Izumi slowly turned around. Standing there was Tenso Ukitaro, in the flesh. Tenso was wearing his clothes earlier in his battle with Vatas and Menrui, yet it seemed that his wounds and scratches had been healed, for he was standing unscathed. Sage was somewhat surprised, yet he did not seem to lose his cool demeanor. "I heard the tales, old lady, and I'm surprised to see them to be true." Tenso then commented, as he remained in his position. Izumi then halted, at halfway point into facing Tenso. "How did you discover a Door to the Dome of Ultimcia?" she then asked slowly, her voice betraying no emotion. Tenso offered a broad smirk. "I had....help," he answered, as his red murderous eyes glanced at every corner of the room. Izumi then said nothing, as she balled up her fists slowly. Faster than the normal eye could even follow, Izumi spun around, unveiling five daggers in her previously hidden hand. The daggers were long, double-edged and curved. A long blue line pattern were on each other daggers. Efficiently, Izumi threw all of them, releasing her hand, as the five dagger flew in an instant. They soared across the fifty yards of the distance between Izumi and Tenso; as the daggers flew, they seemed to stretch, getting longer by the millisecond. In a time span of one and half seconds, they had already reached Tenso, who set up a defensive stance in response. He skittered back, followed with an ungraceful backflip that narrowly avoided the first dagger by three and a half feet. As the dagger plunged itself into the ground with its sharp point, forming cracks in the ground, Tenso quickly took a glance at it and realized something was wrong. It turned bigger! he realized as he dived to the right, dodging another one by three inches. Tenso quickly got to his toes, glancing at the two daggers plunged into the ground: they were now swords. Somehow, the daggers had grown in size during their flight. They had at least increased in length by five feet, and width by three feet, making the daggers a regular long sword. Tenso then performed a cartwheel as the third dagger arrived, evading it too. He smirked, thinking of the fact that he could not be beaten by something this weak, as he heard a static sound behind him. Tenso turned, looking at the emotionless face of Izumi Nu, who kicked him upwards. As her knee bone pressed against Tenso's stomach, he was sent flying, zooming into a wall. However, he quickly yet barely caught himself, managing to use his chakra pools to stand on the walls. Tenso grinned, as he saw another dagger heading toward him. You underestimate me, you old hag, he thought as he simply sidestepped on the wall, avoiding the dagger, which had plunged itself into the wall, now a longsword. However, things weren't that simple. As Tenso grinned, he heard a whistling sound to the right of him. Tenso glanced at the object, and realized that it was another dagger of Izumi's. He attempted to dodge it, but it was too late: he had noticed of the dagger too soon. As it plunged into his stomach squarely, Izumi waited below. Tenso then fell to the ground, into the arms of the waiting Izumi. He reached just seven feet above the ground, as Izumi swung a fist at his head upward. Tenso was sent flying. He instantly flew, crashing into the ceiling, as parts of the ceiling concrete fell, to which Izumi easily evaded. No one made a sound, as the pull and strength of the ceiling gave up, and the body plummeted straight to the ground with a dull thud. Sage was sitting at the computer table, on one of the dozens chairs. In his hand was his trademark cup of coffee, as he took a sip of it, as if nothing had happened. As the Denkiteki did that, Izumi gazed at the body. "I thought so," she finally said. Sage nodded, taking another sip as he murmured, "I'm guessing that it was another person disguised as this one?" Izumi nodded, replying, "This confirms the fact that the Order of the Illuminus Alliance is involved, since this is clearly the work of their Head Scientist, Mayuri of the Black Puppet Corps." "Intelligent observing," Yamamoto said. Izumi turned around, as Sage looked up from his cup of hot coffee, to see Yamamoto, accompanied with Vatas and Nui. To be Continued. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

11-04-2009, 06:20 PM	#1656
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11-04-2009, 06:29 PM	#1658
Obito Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Coolsville Avenue Posts: 3,663 Rep Power: 10	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Thank God..... (hugs Pride tight) I love you man.... __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. No you.

11-04-2009, 06:32 PM	#1660
Obito Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Coolsville Avenue Posts: 3,663 Rep Power: 10	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Because I saw your signs. Freaked out. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. No you.

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