Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story

[Yori]

Now I will defiently keep on track this time. Also I posted a spoiler in mines

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Cool.
I'll look.

Also, more of the Twelve will be Revealed.

[The Demon Zabuza]

Was Menrui related to Nui before?

I think I remember that he was Kage of the Light Village.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Nui WAS the Kage of the Light Village....and it's possible. xDD

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Now, to start writing, I mean typing.

*Cracks Knuckles*

Ow!!

*Break fingers*

Oops.

[The Demon Zabuza]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Nui WAS the Kage of the Light Village....and it's possible. xDD

Since he was that Kage, I imagine he also has the element. Keeping back as a surprise.

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Now, to start writing, I mean typing.

*Cracks Knuckles*

Ow!!

*Break fingers*

Oops.

Now you can't type!

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

Since he was that Kage, I imagine he also has the element. Keeping back as a surprise.


Now you can't type!

It's possible, he has shown to be able to use Light Techniques. (Fight with Kama). Even due it was a weak one.

And yes I can! xD

*Attempts to type with my chin by lowering it down to keyboard level* xDD

[The Demon Zabuza]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

It's possible, he has shown to be able to use Light Techniques. (Fight with Kama). Even due it was a weak one.

And yes I can! xD

*Attempts to type with my chin by lowering it down to keyboard level* xDD

*steals keyboard*

Now what you gonna do? xDD

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

*steals keyboard*

Now what you gonna do? xDD

*Buys a new keyboard*

That. xD

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Chapter Fifty-Five~ Farewell, Senso Ukitaro


News~ This chapter was made late, because of certain reasons. If I don't finish this chapter this night, then I'll do it tomorrow.


Gokai grinned wildly. "I'd thought you would say that." He lifted his hand, and reached for something behind his cape. Abruptly, he pulled up two humongous broadswords. Both were gigantic in size, and were one-sided, gleaming in the sunlight. The hilt was made out of pitch black wood that resembled black steel, which the guard was created out of.
Quickly, he raised one broadsword at Allon and his accomplice, Tenso. Gokai then, with his other sword, effortlessly, stabbed it into the moist concrete. It slid perfectly, cracking the ground heavily, as splinters of earth flew.

Suddenly, all the men cloaked heavily in black, who all wore black masks as well, reached their swords, which was next to their waists. Allon made no move, as Tenso grasped his lance and prepared for battle.
"You should know, when a member of Tsuyoryuusei Masurao withdrawals his blade, it means that they have decreed a death match. Basically, no enemies left alive." Tenso started to laugh evilly. "Oh, that so?"

Gokai simply nodded, grinning in turn, and charged toward the battlefield.


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"I am sorry." Sage muttered to Nui. Nui remained impassive from a moment, until he said, "It is alright, Sage-sama." The two were both sitting in dull dark green chairs, in a long row of green chairs, which where placed there for people to wait while the doctors would treat the patient. Sage sat on the far end of the row of chairs, in which Nui sat two seats from him. A small lamp table was next to Sage, decorated with a beautiful lamp that was kept lit. A cup of coffee was placed near it, the coffee somewhat lukewarm.
The two then said nothing for a moment, both gazing at the double green doors before them, in where medic ninja worked on healing Toshi. While in the wait, Sage took sips of his coffee, as he said nothing. Nui exchanged no words as well, seemingly in a state of meditation. A while has passed when a doctor came out of the door. One was a woman, of normal height stature. She had long raven black hair which was wrapped in a large bead behind her. The medic ninja had a gentle look on her face, with her caring blue eyes, and gentle smile. She wore a long white coat, topped over with dozens of scrolls strapped on them, the majority of the scrolls for medical purposes. "The patient is in good condition." she said finally, as Nui sighed in relief, and Sage kept silent. "She has a few injuries, but they are not life-threatening. The patient should be fine in a few days or so." the woman finished. "Thank you, Arya-sama. The medical shinobi, widely known for her medical skills, named Arya Unohana, offered a warm smile, and head once back into the doors with a goodbye.
Sage then stood up, his coffee in his hand. Nui followed suit. "Since we have guaranteed of Toshi Kurosaki's safety, it is time for us to retrieve your other comrades." Sage stated as Nui nodded. Sage then flashed, leaving behind a trail of leaves. Nui made no moves, as he closed his eyes. Concentrating on one main thought alone, he too disappeared, leaving a static bang behind him that frightened nearby nurses.


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As Gokai and his army of cloaked shinobi advanced toward Tenso, Allon turned to his right as Senso looked in alarm, as Menrui lowered his strange barrier, and closed his eyes. He immediately collapsed, asleep, to which no one made any notice to. Gokai and his group was now within less than five seconds of engaging Tenso, who was rapidly spinning his lance. Suddenly, Allon yelled, "Tenso, you know what to do!" Tenso grinned. "Aye, aye, boss!" he screeched and formed a jutsu as he spun his lance. "Fire Style-Fireball Jutsu!" he breathed in the oxygen, and then quickly exhaled it, as a medium-sized fireball appeared, zooming toward Gokai. As Tenso continued his spinning, Gokai grinned. "Weak!" he yelled and formed a handsign. "Water Style-Water Drowns Lion!" Suddenly, a rush of water appeared, as water from the flowing pipes arose, and formed into one entity. The water quickly took shape, into that of a large liquid lion, as the lion roared, releasing a high pressured release of sound as the fireball sped toward it. "Such a weak Fire Technique will surely not win over the Water Technique of Gokai-sama." one cloaked shinobi murmured. Tenso grinned, as he whispered, "You underestimated me dearly." He then spun even faster, and formed a one-handed handsign.

"Wind Style-Twirl of Destruction!"
Suddenly, wind erupted heavily as it flew from the spinning lance. The wind created from the lance hit the fireball, quickly enhancing its power, more than enough for it to destroy Gokai's Water Technique. The fireball, now larger than even, made contact with the water lion, and quickly consumed it, as well as Gokai and his shinobi.
Meanwhile, Allon rapidly formed one-handed handsigns. While he did so, with his other hand, he tore the right sleeve of his jacket off. The piece of cloth scattered to the ground, as Allon's exposed right arm was shown. Words written in an ancient language were scribbled on his arm, everywhere. Allon stopped stringing handsigns, and then bit his fingertip. Blood ran down, as he let the drip of blood drop into his exposed arm. Drip.

Immediately, a huge blast of pitch black energy came, swirling around Allon. It released a dark sensation, as well as an uncomfortable feeling. The black energy sent everyone visible on their knees, as it consumed Allon.

And abruptly, it stopped, all of a sudden. Allon stood there, unchanged. However, a pitch black door stood behind him. It had no wall to it, so it stood distinctively. A large aura arose from it, alerting everyone of a dark entity.

Gokai crouched on one knee. He had somehow survived that attack, unscathed as well. That, however, couldn't be said for his shinobi, for half or so of them were sprawled on the ground around him, all in flames and already dead from heavy burning. The other half of the ninja were unharmed, having already got away in time, but at the price of minor injuries and slight fatigue. Menrui laid on the floor far away, in the same spot where he were, and seemingly unharmed from the recent surge. He was snoring loudly as well.

Tenso stood next to Allon, who snapped, as the Black Gate opened with a creak. Allon then quickly spun around and made his way into the door. "Don't pity me!" Gokai screeched and attempted to charge at Tenso, who offered a soft smirk and spun his lance. He then released his lance, and threw it at Gokai at over a hundred miles per hour. Gokai blocked it with his broadsword, but the distraction served, as Tenso leaped into the Black Gate. Gokai then looked to the right, and saw Senso swiftly approaching the Black Gate. "Stop!" he ordered. Senso glanced at Gokai for a moment, as the Black Gate slowly began to creak, signalling of its soon closing. Senso then closed his eyes, and jumped into the Black Gate, as it closed with a bang.

To be ConTInued...

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

I didn't thought I would finish it today..

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Sorry, there will be no chapter today. The author will take a break to work on making new characters and jutsus.

[The Demon Zabuza]

Today?

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Yes, I'll be writing today.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Chapter Fifty-Five: The Tsuyoryuusei Masurao


News~ Making characters had taken longer than I had predicted, so no chapter today, sorry. I'll edit this on Saturday. I will be editing this on more than once.


Everyone remained eerily silent as the Black Gate closed with a skittering creak. As it immediately closed, the sound of glass breaking was heard as the Black Gate shattered into pieces. Millions of pitch black pieces rained down. Soon, the Black Gate had been reduced to nothing, as everyone's eyes still remained widened.
An uncomfortable aura of silence passed through them. It was Gokai who had broken the silence.

"Senso Ukitaro had betrayed us." he said in complete shock.


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During the next few hours, both medical and military shinobi rushed to the site of the destruction. It had been confirmed that at least one-fifths of the Underground had been destroyed in the attacks, due mainly to the long ranges of explosions in the battles. Medical ninja worked on Vatas, who was critically injured. Despite having heavy injuries from his battle, the use of Jinsoku Raikou had also proved a heavy toll on Vatas. He was expected to cover at two weeks at least, and three days at most.
Reconstruction on the Underground soon began, as well as for the buildings that were destroyed in the crossfire. It had been confirmed that there well more than thirty-eight deaths, all indirect. The construction on the Underground were expected to be complete in a couple of months, the buildings alone would take a few weeks or so.

Things weren't starting off so greatly.


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The Tsuyoryuusei Masurao: A powerful organization that even rivaled the most powerful of clans. The organization was created over ten centuries or so ago, and still stands today, stronger than ever. It has territories throughout the Shinobi World, its headquarters residing in the Crossroads. It includes many goals, but one of its main ones includes the welfare of the Crossroads. The organization is in charge of protecting as well as warfare matters of the Crossroads, and boasts of an army powerful enough to rival empires. There are three special ranks in the Tsuyoryuusei Masurao: Denkiteki, Haikumi, and lastly, Hikuibumon. The highest class, Denkiteki, only had twelve members in total, thus far. There were the strongest of all in the organization, and commanded much of the lower classes. They were ranked in number of strength and power. Every rarely is someone advanced to Denkiteki, the average being every century or so. The Denkiteki did occasionally change ranks, under special circumstances. The next rank, Haikumi, was the second strongest rank out of the trio. There were only about twenty so far, and they were usually made squad leaders in certain missions. The only way for a Hikuibumon to advance to Haikumi were to either have at least five Haikumi recommend them for a promotion, or for them to pass the Haikumi Exams, a trial that took place every two years, and usually lasted for three months. The last rank of all, the Hikuibumon, were the lowest class. They had few power, of course. There were at least fifty in total, all waiting impatiently for the Haikumi Exams, which were scheduled to take place in half a year, six months, two weeks, three days to be exact.


To Be...........Continued.

[mangagirl]

awww...i cant wait!! ahh!!!

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Sorry, manga, I'll write it as soon as tomorrow.

[takuya]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Chapter Fifty-Five: The Tsuyoryuusei Masurao


News~ Making characters had taken longer than I had predicted, so no chapter today, sorry. I'll edit this on Saturday.

You just wrote that to have it ready?Got me all pysched when I see the title.I should hit you so hard I knock the story out of you and onto the forums.

Originally Posted by mangagirl

awww...i cant wait!! ahh!!!

Can I have permission to knock the story out of your husband?(You get to read the next part faster.)

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Lol, I'm editing it right now.

[mangagirl]

Originally Posted by takuya

You just wrote that to have it ready?Got me all pysched when I see the title.I should hit you so hard I knock the story out of you and onto the forums.

Can I have permission to knock the story out of your husband?(You get to read the next part faster.)

yeyes!! do it XD