Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 74

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-14-2009, 05:23 PM

Chapter Forty-Nine: Re-Entry! Meeting of the Kages, Restart!

News~ Woot! We are finally done with Nui Gaiden, peeps!

Anyways, this is the Second Part of the Second Arc, the Meeting of the Kages. We will immediately pick up after Chapter Twenty-Five.

~Recap~

On one night, Vatas Shadow Pridus, Nui Onimusha, Toshi Kurosaki, and Menrui Tatski invaded the Bird Clan, Nui battled against the Guard of the Clan, Kama Ikkaku, a Jashinist as Toshi fights against the Head Capturer, the Cager. After defeating their respective opponents, they advance toward the Airakage, the leader of the Bird Clan, as Vatas and his lazy comrade, Menrui, brawls against the Bird Clan Shinobi. As Nui and Toshi, having reunite with each other, are ambushed, a timid and young healer ninja named Hanataro Crane arrives, and therefore, serves as a distraction. Pitying him, they bring/ abduct him along as Vatas and Menrui arrives, just barely missing them. Meanwhiles, two mysterious ninjas arose in the spot of the unconscious Kama, and rescue him. After going through a long scale of enemies, Toshi and Nui arrives at the home of the Airakage, resulting in an intense fight, the Airakage's Kekkai Genkei, and Nui's special object. The Airakage is left captured, and "dead", at least to those who had not fully witness the fierce battle. Then, the remaining shinobi arrive, to avenge their leader, equaling dozens of enemies for our "heroes". However, they are all defeated, yet not killed, in one hit by Vatas, who had arrived. Soon followed a farewell, and the second Arc begins with the introduction of the Crossroads, and Senso Ukitaro, who seems to have a deep past with Nui. Senso then leads them underground, as someone attacks him.....

~Chapter Beginning~
The four remained on their guard, glancing around at every corner and inch of the area. Water from leaker pipes flowed around the area, only a few centimeters from the dirtied concrete. Rats and spiders skittered away swiftly, in an attempt to stay afar from the water.

"Dammit," Toshi muttered to herself, "I hate these moments." "Just watch carefully and we won't die." Vatas stated calmly, gripping his long katana, ready to wield it at any second. Nui remained silent for a moment, but then said, "Can you hear that?" Menrui nodded. "You mean those explosions?" "Hell yeah I can hear them," Toshi replied, "If this continues, we're all going to be buried in the Underground."

__________________________________________________ _______________

"We have an estimated three days left until the operation will occur," Sakura observed, "So you'd better wrap this up." She stood on fresh green grass and was leaning on a heavy olive tree that supported her, as well as its thick branches. Other olives trees were all around her, each of them thick and healthy.
Sakura Helga was in a forest, an ancient one that had existed for many decades. Beyond that forest were the Crossroads. Even from here, about over ten kilometers away in distance, she could still spot the large skyscrapers and buildings of the Crossroads.
Her hair were wrapped and kept in a knot by a ribbon. Sakura wore a long black coat, with bright blue flames decorated on the collars, sleeves, and the bottom of the cloak. The cloak had a hood as well, but it was not put on yet. A radio was on Sakura's left ear. The radio was made for portable uses, able to communicate up to ten kilometers, and fitted her ear perfectly. A wire connected the radio to other ear, which contained the exact portable.

"Make sure you plant the detonators around the area." Sakura finished, "Over and out."

__________________________________________________ _______________

"Over and out." the man replied. The man was of medium height, and wore a dark green coat that extending to beneath his waist, with a hood that covered his face with the exception of a long thread of shaggy long hair and two piercing eyes. A long unsheathed blade hung on his back, brightly crimson. There were two scrolls attached to his back, hung next to his weapon. Three holster pouches were sewn in to his coat, containing many tools and weapons.
The man then glanced behind him, at the pair of the dead ninja, laying in pools of blood, with numerous wounds delivered by taijutsu. He then took a look ahead, at the continuing dark walls, dirty concrete, and dimly heard explosions in the distance.
"So I see." the man finally muttered to himself, and continued advancing silently.

Allon Tosen was back.

__________________________________________________ _______________

Explosions slowly rocked the whole Underground, as Vatas and the group continued their defensive positions. "Ugh, I hate waiting." Toshi muttered. Menrui, however, was beginning to fall into a slumber. He yawned a few times, and then slowly closed his eyes. Before anyone could do anything, Menrui fully closed his eyes and begin to drool. He quickly leaned over to the left side, where Toshi were. As he fell on Toshi's shoulder, he begin to snore loudly, as saliva formed, and drool came out, splashing on Toshi's shoulder. "Eww!" Toshi screeched and pulled back, as Menrui fully collapsed to the dirty concrete floor. Quickly reacting in anger, Toshi stomped Menrui's head into the floor with his shoe as a voice came up:

"Yo!"

Vatas glanced over to look for the source, as Nui followed suit. Toshi turned her attention to the source as well, ignoring the snoring Menrui, who was laying in a puddle of water.
"Yo," the man said once again and grinned brightly, revealing himself as Senso Ukitaro. Senso was standing ten yards ahead of them, bearing no injury and gripping his lance in his hands.
"The intruder's dead." Then came a long silence, until Vatas finally spoke: "Who was it?" he asked. Meanwhile, Nui remained silent, gazing at Senso with a strange look in his eyes. Senso offered a shrug. "Some enemy ninja who had a grudge against the Crossroads, anyways, let's go."
Vatas said nothing, and took a step forward. Before he could fully advance, he felt someone place a hand on him from behind. He quickly turned, using his instincts and saw that it was Nui. Immediately, he realized what Nui meant. He glanced back at Senso, and then at Menrui. Seeing Toshi vacant, he urgently spun around, and saw Toshi running toward Senso hurriedly.

"Toshi, no!!" Nui yelled as Toshi looked back at him with a confused look on her face, now standing within mere inches of Senso. Vatas quickly broke into a mad dash, as if someone's life depended on it.

And unfortunately, that was true as well, as Nui saw Senso's grin drastically transform into a wicked one, as Nui's thought came to a confirmation, as Senso quickly grasped his lance, and skewered Toshi.

Instantly, blood spilled like a shower; Senso laughed hysterically and grinned evilly as he murmured the words, "Long time no see, little boy."

Nui Onimusha glared darkly. "It's you, isn't it, Tenso Ukitaro?"

To be Continued..

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-14-2009, 05:24 PM

Chapter Forty-Nine, OUT!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-14-2009, 05:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

it was a sick ending

Thanks.

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

*discreet cough*

Lol, the new chapter has already been posted.

shinmarubountyhunter · 10-14-2009, 05:36 PM

i just finished 49

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-14-2009, 05:36 PM

And your ideas about it?

shinmarubountyhunter · 10-14-2009, 05:40 PM

i dont realy remember were they are since i was reading nui gaiden

can you refresh me

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-14-2009, 05:41 PM

They were in the Underground, beneath the Crossroads.

If you need further refreshing, read Chapter 25.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-15-2009, 05:58 PM

Anyways, YES, we have our Forums back!!!

And whatcha doing, shaddix?
Remember, comment after you read.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-15-2009, 06:59 PM

Chapter Fifty: The Bloody Gemini

News~ It is our fiftieth chapter, thus our fiftieth anniversary! ^^ Unfortunately, the party will officially kick off tomorrow, not today, with more than one chapter on Friday AND Saturday! And what better way to start it off with a complete psychopath with an unbearable lust for killing? xDDD

Dark-red blood splashed everywhere, flowing into the water on the concrete and mixing along. Without a sound, Toshi collapsed, a small and narrow hole on her shoulder. "Whoops, I missed." Tenso said, grinning evilly as he saw Vatas catch the falling Toshi in his arms.
Before Tenso could attack, Vatas quickly closed his eyes, as he suddenly vanished, along with the unconscious Toshi. The disappearance of Vatas followed with a loud static noise, which put a dent on everyone's ears for a moment.
Vatas reappeared again, this time behind Nui. He was standing on both legs, but was leaning down, due to carrying Toshi in his arms. "Ooh, a Jinsoku Raikou (Swift Lightning), eh?" Tenso observed and swept his weapon at the air as Toshi's blood flew out, dispersing into the floor. Vatas remained silent. Finally, he spoke: "Nui, leave this man to me," Nui glanced at him in shock, for he had never said anything so irrational before. "I know that you have history with him, and that you are stronger than I am, but right now, Toshi needs you. Go elsewhere and heal her wounds." Nui remained silent for a moment, however, Tenso quickly took advantage of the situation and began to form handsigns. Alerted, Vatas and Nui both leaped back swiftly, as Vatas said, "Nui, go!" Nui sighed. He slowly bent down and took Toshi from Vatas and replied, "I am counting on you, Vatas Shadow Pridus. If you die, I will blame the cause of your death as mine." Vatas smirked. "Always the one to be noble."
Nui offered a small smile as he said, "Generally." His eyes gazed off at the Tenso, who continued to form handsigns. "Jinsoku Raikou." he murmured and disappeared, leaving behind a static sound that rang in Vatas's ears. Meanwhile, Vatas's smile vanished off his face, replaced with a small snarl as he witnessed Tenso yell, "Fire Style: Glorious Flame Fist!" Tenso then quickly recoiled his arm, pulling it back and tightened his knuckles. Then, he punched the air, as a large bright fireball appeared, enormous. Senso then formed another handsign, and said, "Fire Style: Oil Spray!" The oil splashed onto the water, prevailing over it and gaining control as the fireball swiftly advanced toward Vatas. The fireball quickly went through the air, as Vatas formed a handsign and muttered, "Earth Style: Earth Wall."
Instantly, the concrete shifted, as a wall of earth were formed over Vatas. The large fireball created from Tenso's fist smashed head-on into the earth wall, as chunks of earth were destroyed. Vatas quickly skittered, retreating from the falling pieces of earth. He watched as the fire continued to glow on the remaining pieces of the wall that was above the water. It continued burner, even though it had used up most of its power, Vatas calmly observed as he saw Tenso, standing in the exact location a few moments ago, grinned broadly and vanished. What followed up was a static noise, as Tenso appeared before Vatas and elbowed him for behind. Coughing form the impact, Vatas was sent flying.

However, he quickly took control, and formed a handsign, yelling, "Lightning Style: Twin Lightning!" Instantly, two lightning bolts shot out of his hands, both equally same in size, as well as speed. The lightning bolts sped toward Tenso, who went on his knees and ungracefully yet effective rolled over, dodging each other bolts as they instead struck the concrete and dispersed into small shocks of lightning. Tenso remained grinning, but then he felt an odd sensation within him. Tenso immediately collapsed, his knees and hands splashing into the water, used to support him. He then realized what had happened, when he saw the small discharges of lightning in the water. "You.."

"Yes. I knew you would be too swift for me to actually catch you with my thunderbolts, so I aimed them in the water near you, where they would release a discharge in impact and shock you, immobilizing you as well." Vatas observed. "You damn kid." Tenso muttered, grinning even though he was in a grim situation.
Vatas then unsheathed his blade, and said, "Now, good bye." Tenso grinned. "Such reckless words of a little boy." He then grinned as Vatas realized he had miscalculated. He glanced back, and saw the fire from Tenso's jutsu, sitting on the oil.
The fire quickly spread, consuming both the sewer waters and its discharged electricity. Before Vatas could realize further, the electricity around Tenso died, sucked in with the sewers' water, as he stood up. Reaching into his holster pouch and scorching the papery part with a matcher, he threw the small kunai, attached with a burned paper bomb, at the large mass of burning flames.

His aim was dead-on.

BOOM

To be continued..

shaddix301 · 10-15-2009, 07:05 PM

kick azz vat

shaddix301 · 10-15-2009, 07:08 PM

uve gotten better at writing!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-15-2009, 07:24 PM

Thank you very much, shaddix, and your comments on this chapter?

shaddix301 · 10-15-2009, 07:34 PM

awesome

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-15-2009, 07:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shaddix301

awesome

Thank you, what were the best things about it?

shinmarubountyhunter · 10-16-2009, 03:28 PM

whens the party start

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-16-2009, 05:05 PM

It'd be more of a celebration.

Hiro · 10-16-2009, 06:37 PM

pride, u can take my name off of the knights list, someone else can hav my rank, due to basketball season, dances, partys and many other things i wont be on much at all anymore, especially not during basketball season, tht takes up ALOT of time, ill be on once or twice a month (maybe) to check up and see how evryones doing, but for the most part, i wont see yall till february

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-16-2009, 06:38 PM

Chapter titles have changed.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-16-2009, 06:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hiro

pride, u can take my name off of the knights list, someone else can hav my rank, due to basketball season, dances, partys and many other things i wont be on much at all anymore, especially not during basketball season, tht takes up ALOT of time, ill be on once or twice a month (maybe) to check up and see how evryones doing, but for the most part, i wont see yall till february

Alright, I hope you have good luck.

Hiro · 10-16-2009, 06:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Alright, I hope you have good luck.

thanks so i think ill be on for a while tonight, so watcha been up to?

10-14-2009, 05:23 PM	#1461
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story *Chapter Forty-Nine: Re-Entry! Meeting of the Kages, Restart!* News~ Woot! We are finally done with Nui Gaiden, peeps! Anyways, this is the Second Part of the Second Arc, the Meeting of the Kages. We will immediately pick up after Chapter Twenty-Five. ~Recap~ On one night, Vatas Shadow Pridus, Nui Onimusha, Toshi Kurosaki, and Menrui Tatski invaded the Bird Clan, Nui battled against the Guard of the Clan, Kama Ikkaku, a Jashinist as Toshi fights against the Head Capturer, the Cager. After defeating their respective opponents, they advance toward the Airakage, the leader of the Bird Clan, as Vatas and his lazy comrade, Menrui, brawls against the Bird Clan Shinobi. As Nui and Toshi, having reunite with each other, are ambushed, a timid and young healer ninja named Hanataro Crane arrives, and therefore, serves as a distraction. Pitying him, they bring/ abduct him along as Vatas and Menrui arrives, just barely missing them. Meanwhiles, two mysterious ninjas arose in the spot of the unconscious Kama, and rescue him. After going through a long scale of enemies, Toshi and Nui arrives at the home of the Airakage, resulting in an intense fight, the Airakage's Kekkai Genkei, and Nui's special object. The Airakage is left captured, and "dead", at least to those who had not fully witness the fierce battle. Then, the remaining shinobi arrive, to avenge their leader, equaling dozens of enemies for our "heroes". However, they are all defeated, yet not killed, in one hit by Vatas, who had arrived. Soon followed a farewell, and the second Arc begins with the introduction of the Crossroads, and Senso Ukitaro, who seems to have a deep past with Nui. Senso then leads them underground, as someone attacks him..... ~Chapter Beginning~ The four remained on their guard, glancing around at every corner and inch of the area. Water from leaker pipes flowed around the area, only a few centimeters from the dirtied concrete. Rats and spiders skittered away swiftly, in an attempt to stay afar from the water. "Dammit," Toshi muttered to herself, "I hate these moments." "Just watch carefully and we won't die." Vatas stated calmly, gripping his long katana, ready to wield it at any second. Nui remained silent for a moment, but then said, "Can you hear that?" Menrui nodded. "You mean those explosions?" "Hell yeah I can hear them," Toshi replied, "If this continues, we're all going to be buried in the Underground." __________________________________________________ _______________ "We have an estimated three days left until the operation will occur," Sakura observed, "So you'd better wrap this up." She stood on fresh green grass and was leaning on a heavy olive tree that supported her, as well as its thick branches. Other olives trees were all around her, each of them thick and healthy. Sakura Helga was in a forest, an ancient one that had existed for many decades. Beyond that forest were the Crossroads. Even from here, about over ten kilometers away in distance, she could still spot the large skyscrapers and buildings of the Crossroads. Her hair were wrapped and kept in a knot by a ribbon. Sakura wore a long black coat, with bright blue flames decorated on the collars, sleeves, and the bottom of the cloak. The cloak had a hood as well, but it was not put on yet. A radio was on Sakura's left ear. The radio was made for portable uses, able to communicate up to ten kilometers, and fitted her ear perfectly. A wire connected the radio to other ear, which contained the exact portable. "Make sure you plant the detonators around the area." Sakura finished, "Over and out." __________________________________________________ _______________ "Over and out." the man replied. The man was of medium height, and wore a dark green coat that extending to beneath his waist, with a hood that covered his face with the exception of a long thread of shaggy long hair and two piercing eyes. A long unsheathed blade hung on his back, brightly crimson. There were two scrolls attached to his back, hung next to his weapon. Three holster pouches were sewn in to his coat, containing many tools and weapons. The man then glanced behind him, at the pair of the dead ninja, laying in pools of blood, with numerous wounds delivered by taijutsu. He then took a look ahead, at the continuing dark walls, dirty concrete, and dimly heard explosions in the distance. "So I see." the man finally muttered to himself, and continued advancing silently. Allon Tosen was back. __________________________________________________ _______________ Explosions slowly rocked the whole Underground, as Vatas and the group continued their defensive positions. "Ugh, I hate waiting." Toshi muttered. Menrui, however, was beginning to fall into a slumber. He yawned a few times, and then slowly closed his eyes. Before anyone could do anything, Menrui fully closed his eyes and begin to drool. He quickly leaned over to the left side, where Toshi were. As he fell on Toshi's shoulder, he begin to snore loudly, as saliva formed, and drool came out, splashing on Toshi's shoulder. "Eww!" Toshi screeched and pulled back, as Menrui fully collapsed to the dirty concrete floor. Quickly reacting in anger, Toshi stomped Menrui's head into the floor with his shoe as a voice came up: "Yo!" Vatas glanced over to look for the source, as Nui followed suit. Toshi turned her attention to the source as well, ignoring the snoring Menrui, who was laying in a puddle of water. "Yo," the man said once again and grinned brightly, revealing himself as Senso Ukitaro. Senso was standing ten yards ahead of them, bearing no injury and gripping his lance in his hands. "The intruder's dead." Then came a long silence, until Vatas finally spoke: "Who was it?" he asked. Meanwhile, Nui remained silent, gazing at Senso with a strange look in his eyes. Senso offered a shrug. "Some enemy ninja who had a grudge against the Crossroads, anyways, let's go." Vatas said nothing, and took a step forward. Before he could fully advance, he felt someone place a hand on him from behind. He quickly turned, using his instincts and saw that it was Nui. Immediately, he realized what Nui meant. He glanced back at Senso, and then at Menrui. Seeing Toshi vacant, he urgently spun around, and saw Toshi running toward Senso hurriedly. "Toshi, no!!" Nui yelled as Toshi looked back at him with a confused look on her face, now standing within mere inches of Senso. Vatas quickly broke into a mad dash, as if someone's life depended on it. And unfortunately, that was true as well, as Nui saw Senso's grin drastically transform into a wicked one, as Nui's thought came to a confirmation, as Senso quickly grasped his lance, and skewered Toshi. Instantly, blood spilled like a shower; Senso laughed hysterically and grinned evilly as he murmured the words, "Long time no see, little boy." Nui Onimusha glared darkly. "It's you, isn't it, Tenso Ukitaro?" To be Continued.. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Vatanui AKA Pride; 10-14-2009 at 05:26 PM.

10-14-2009, 05:24 PM	#1462
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10-14-2009, 05:36 PM	#1464
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10-14-2009, 05:40 PM	#1466
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10-14-2009, 05:41 PM	#1467
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10-15-2009, 05:58 PM	#1468
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10-15-2009, 06:59 PM	#1469
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Chapter Fifty: The Bloody Gemini News~ It is our fiftieth chapter, thus our fiftieth anniversary! ^^ Unfortunately, the party will officially kick off tomorrow, not today, with more than one chapter on Friday AND Saturday! And what better way to start it off with a complete psychopath with an unbearable lust for killing? xDDD Dark-red blood splashed everywhere, flowing into the water on the concrete and mixing along. Without a sound, Toshi collapsed, a small and narrow hole on her shoulder. "Whoops, I missed." Tenso said, grinning evilly as he saw Vatas catch the falling Toshi in his arms. Before Tenso could attack, Vatas quickly closed his eyes, as he suddenly vanished, along with the unconscious Toshi. The disappearance of Vatas followed with a loud static noise, which put a dent on everyone's ears for a moment. Vatas reappeared again, this time behind Nui. He was standing on both legs, but was leaning down, due to carrying Toshi in his arms. "Ooh, a Jinsoku Raikou (Swift Lightning), eh?" Tenso observed and swept his weapon at the air as Toshi's blood flew out, dispersing into the floor. Vatas remained silent. Finally, he spoke: "Nui, leave this man to me," Nui glanced at him in shock, for he had never said anything so irrational before. "I know that you have history with him, and that you are stronger than I am, but right now, Toshi needs you. Go elsewhere and heal her wounds." Nui remained silent for a moment, however, Tenso quickly took advantage of the situation and began to form handsigns. Alerted, Vatas and Nui both leaped back swiftly, as Vatas said, "Nui, go!" Nui sighed. He slowly bent down and took Toshi from Vatas and replied, "I am counting on you, Vatas Shadow Pridus. If you die, I will blame the cause of your death as mine." Vatas smirked. "Always the one to be noble." Nui offered a small smile as he said, "Generally." His eyes gazed off at the Tenso, who continued to form handsigns. "Jinsoku Raikou." he murmured and disappeared, leaving behind a static sound that rang in Vatas's ears. Meanwhile, Vatas's smile vanished off his face, replaced with a small snarl as he witnessed Tenso yell, "Fire Style: Glorious Flame Fist!" Tenso then quickly recoiled his arm, pulling it back and tightened his knuckles. Then, he punched the air, as a large bright fireball appeared, enormous. Senso then formed another handsign, and said, "Fire Style: Oil Spray!" The oil splashed onto the water, prevailing over it and gaining control as the fireball swiftly advanced toward Vatas. The fireball quickly went through the air, as Vatas formed a handsign and muttered, "Earth Style: Earth Wall." Instantly, the concrete shifted, as a wall of earth were formed over Vatas. The large fireball created from Tenso's fist smashed head-on into the earth wall, as chunks of earth were destroyed. Vatas quickly skittered, retreating from the falling pieces of earth. He watched as the fire continued to glow on the remaining pieces of the wall that was above the water. It continued burner, even though it had used up most of its power, Vatas calmly observed as he saw Tenso, standing in the exact location a few moments ago, grinned broadly and vanished. What followed up was a static noise, as Tenso appeared before Vatas and elbowed him for behind. Coughing form the impact, Vatas was sent flying. However, he quickly took control, and formed a handsign, yelling, "Lightning Style: Twin Lightning!" Instantly, two lightning bolts shot out of his hands, both equally same in size, as well as speed. The lightning bolts sped toward Tenso, who went on his knees and ungracefully yet effective rolled over, dodging each other bolts as they instead struck the concrete and dispersed into small shocks of lightning. Tenso remained grinning, but then he felt an odd sensation within him. Tenso immediately collapsed, his knees and hands splashing into the water, used to support him. He then realized what had happened, when he saw the small discharges of lightning in the water. "You.." "Yes. I knew you would be too swift for me to actually catch you with my thunderbolts, so I aimed them in the water near you, where they would release a discharge in impact and shock you, immobilizing you as well." Vatas observed. "You damn kid." Tenso muttered, grinning even though he was in a grim situation. Vatas then unsheathed his blade, and said, "Now, good bye." Tenso grinned. "Such reckless words of a little boy." He then grinned as Vatas realized he had miscalculated. He glanced back, and saw the fire from Tenso's jutsu, sitting on the oil. The fire quickly spread, consuming both the sewer waters and its discharged electricity. Before Vatas could realize further, the electricity around Tenso died, sucked in with the sewers' water, as he stood up. Reaching into his holster pouch and scorching the papery part with a matcher, he threw the small kunai, attached with a burned paper bomb, at the large mass of burning flames. His aim was dead-on. BOOM *To be continued..* __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Vatanui AKA Pride; 10-15-2009 at 07:16 PM.

10-15-2009, 07:05 PM	#1470
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10-15-2009, 07:08 PM	#1471
shaddix301 Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: En el Barrio, esse! Posts: 398 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story uve gotten better at writing!!! __________________ I enjoy Gummi worms.

10-15-2009, 07:24 PM	#1472
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Thank you very much, shaddix, and your comments on this chapter? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-15-2009, 07:34 PM	#1473
shaddix301 Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: En el Barrio, esse! Posts: 398 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story awesome __________________ I enjoy Gummi worms.

10-16-2009, 03:28 PM	#1475
shinmarubountyhunter Cradle Robber Join Date: May 2009 Location: In front of a closet waiting for Vat to get out. Posts: 8,683 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story whens the party start __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-16-2009, 05:05 PM	#1476
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story It'd be more of a celebration. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-16-2009, 06:37 PM	#1477
Hiro Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: NA Posts: 1,610 Rep Power: 0	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story pride, u can take my name off of the knights list, someone else can hav my rank, due to basketball season, dances, partys and many other things i wont be on much at all anymore, especially not during basketball season, tht takes up ALOT of time, ill be on once or twice a month (maybe) to check up and see how evryones doing, but for the most part, i wont see yall till february __________________ Live Life To The Fullest Extant, Because Death Stalks Everyone ^_^

10-16-2009, 06:38 PM	#1478
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Chapter titles have changed. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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