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Old 09-30-2009, 05:36 PM   #841
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I am busy tonight, so i will post the next part tomorrow night
Already..... I guess you probably finished part two and just posting them slow....
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Already..... I guess you probably finished part two and just posting them slow....
I am far, far, far beyond part 2 of the Chunin exams, xD
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...“All right, everyone listen up,” yells Kenji. Kenji starts handing out consent forms and tells them, “Some people may die during the exam, so you need to sign these wavers before you can participate in it. The 2nd exam is a survival exam in the 55th training area, a circular region surrounded by 55 locked gate entrances dubbed the Forest of Lost Souls.”

Kenji takes out a scroll and rolls it out to reveal a map of the area. He starts to point to places on the map, “There are two rivers, a bunch of caves, a forest, and in the middle is a tower within the area. The area is also infested with vicious monsters and poisonous plants. The exam consists of a competition over two scrolls, the scroll of heaven and the scroll of earth, which will be evenly split among 25 teams. Each team receives either a scroll of heaven or a scroll of earth. To pass, a team must bring both scrolls to the tower within 5 days. That means at least half won’t pass. To make matters worse, each team's fatigue level will rise eventually and they will only have a short time to recuperate.”

Then Kenta asks him, “Are we allowed to quit after the exam starts?”

Kenji shakes his head, “No, you either finish, die, or survive long enough so a relief team can extract you when the test is over.”

“That doesn’t seem that hard,” comments a Rock Ninja from the back of the group.

“The forest is filled with dangerous and unusual animals, poisonous plants, and don’t forget about the other ninja out there that will be trying to get your scrolls,” replies Kenji.

“I don’t see the point in this at all,” comments the same ninja, “It’s just like any other mission. You could just check out our mission records to see how good we are.”

“What are you scared you are going to lose?” yells Rame Tsu.

“Yeah, you are the only one complaining about the exam,” adds Naoko, “Only second rate ninjas would try and get out of something like this.”

“What was that Petal Ninja?” responds the boy.

“You heard us,” replies Rame Tsu, “If you are too afraid to prove yourself in the exam you might as well get out of here now.”

“We don’t want to bother with weaklings like you,” adds Naoko, “Only the strong are going to survive this test.”

“You should watch what you say,” retorts the Rock Ninja.

“Calm down all of you,” interrupts Kenji, “You can settle it once the exam starts.”

“You two really need to stop doing that,” whispers Shun, “Everybody is just going to think we are cocky, not confident, and they will all come after us. I know we are strong and we want to prove we are strong, but we can’t take on everybody and win.”

“Fine, whatever,” says Naoko.

“Way to kill our spirits,” adds Rame Tsu.

“Since some of you seem to have doubts I will inform you of the purpose of this test while the consent forms are still being passed around,” says Kenji, “In the previous stage you were tested in 4 important areas. The first was on your knowledge of rules, regulations, theory, calculations, and other academic things. The second was your ability to determine the real objectives of the exam, or in other words your deductive capabilities. Then third you were tested on your information gathering skills. Finally and most importantly we tested the trust and loyalty you have towards your teammates. The first Proctor, Chiaki Enjoji, explained those things to you when you all passed. The second stage of the exam is also designed to test you on multiple things, but the basic purpose is to see exactly how well your specific team can work together to complete a mission. It is a simple fact that nearly all missions carried out are conducted in 3 man squads. In order to become a Chunin you must be able to work with your team. This stage is all about teamwork.”


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Old 10-01-2009, 07:06 PM   #847
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This is getting very good KT. You and your suspense!
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oh i want more more
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I didn't think that part was very suspensefull. He was just explaining the rules of the exams. The next part is a lot more exciting
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That's what I meant by the suspense. I am excited for the next part.
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That's what I meant by the suspense. I am excited for the next part.
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Look who is talking, xD
Well maybe so but I think you got me beat!

LOL, Anyway. I liked this part. Setting up the rivalry is great! I mean we all know the Petal ninja have targets on their heads.
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Well maybe so but I think you got me beat!

LOL, Anyway. I liked this part. Setting up the rivalry is great! I mean we all know the Petal ninja have targets on their heads.
actually I wasn't setting anything up yet. That was just some random rock ninja that I threw in there so Kenji was not talking the whole time.
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actually I wasn't setting anything up yet. That was just some random rock ninja that I threw in there so Kenji was not talking the whole time.
wow, u must be a great writer, u have us guessing without even trying!
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It was a good chapter but I expect the next chapter to be better and no mistakes I found. Hey Kuroda, I was wondering when this chapter didn't have any action you didn't forget to misspell some words. But when the chapter has a lot of action you tend to misspell some of them. I guess you just get carried away during action time.
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Great stuff as always KT
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It was a good chapter but I expect the next chapter to be better and no mistakes I found. Hey Kuroda, I was wondering when this chapter didn't have any action you didn't forget to misspell some words. But when the chapter has a lot of action you tend to misspell some of them. I guess you just get carried away during action time.
*shrugs* I guess so.
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so when r u adding the next part?
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When I feel like it, xD
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You can't rush someone like this guy xD

...seriously, even if you tried he still wouldn't
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