Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

kaname

Why?

And oh yeah.

Spoiler:

He's like Might Guy, not knowing many ninjutsu and mostly relying on Taijutsu.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

i have no idea why

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Lol, anyways, today's battles and rumbles!

Sakura Helga VS Hisagi Onimusha!

Senso Ukitaro and Kato VS Kaname Part Two!

Tenso Ukitaro VS Zara!

[shinmarubountyhunter]

yaaaay

[Hiro]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Okay.

Hmm, that reminds me of that recent horror film, "Mirrors".

GAH! they mightve stolen my work XDXD

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

yaaaay

Yup.

Who wants to bet that Sakura will survive against Hisagi? xD

Originally Posted by Hiro

GAH! they mightve stolen my work XDXD

Lol, you sure you didn't use that movie as an inspiration?

[Hiro]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Lol, you sure you didn't use that movie as an inspiration?

*shakes head* hadnt even heard about it until now, anyways my dream was about a year ago, im just now putin it on paper because i have become extremely bored.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by Hiro

*shakes head* hadnt even heard about it until now, anyways my dream was about a year ago, im just now putin it on paper because i have become extremely bored.

lmao, good luck then. Remember to add some girls too it though.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Special: Nui Gaiden!


Chapter Forty-Four: Tenso Ukitaro


Kaname growled in frustration as he blocked Senso's kunai with his fist. He glanced to his other side to see Kato sprinting at him with a small dagger. With a howl, he ducked as Kato's blade barely passed his furry head, by mere centimeters. At that moment, where both Kato and Senso were off-guard for less than even a second, Kaname countered by leaping upwards as Kato's short blade twirled through the air where Kaname had occupied a little ago. Kaname then quickly began to form handsigns as Kato and Senso looked up in alarm.
Wind Scythe Howl! Kaname thought as he opened his mouth, showing his canine-like teeth as he howled and a enormous burst of wind mixed with energy shot out of his mouth, heading swiftly at Kato and Senso. Kato then formed a handsign as Senso stepped back. "Water Style: Water Dome!" Kato shouted as the ice around him began to crack. The rushing cold water gave in, as the ice finally shattered and the water swirled Kato, quickly forming together into a sphere made out of water that had both Kato and Senso standing inside it.
And Kaname's attack struck dead-on on the water dome as everything went white.


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"A light clone, eh?" Zara stated as the body that he had strike slowly evaporated into light. The particles of light slowly drifted into the atmosphere, fading away. He then glanced to his right to see Nui, who gripped his katana in his hands. Stealth-like, Zara ran forward to face his opponent.
Just as he was halfway through reaching Nui, someone emerged. As the newly arrived figured lashed his weapon at Zara, who barely deflected it with his own weapon, the attacker's expression pulled back in a wild broad grinned that seemed to intimidate everyone near him.

"Ready to die, whoever you are?" Tenso grinned wickedly, his intent to kill setting off everyone an uneasy feeling.


__________________________________________________ _______________


The journey that Sakura had endured, through Hell was horrifying as well as thrilling. It was completely unimaginable and truly frightening, and for a normal human to even experience it for a split second would immediately cause them to go insane. To risk from that happening, the author would NOT explain what horrors Sakura had to go through. Instead, he would just advance into the scene of what happens afterwards.


__________________________________________________ _______________


Sakura hit the ground with a loud thud. After a few minutes of just staying sprawled on the ice, she then slowly stood up, shivering and shuddering from her not-so-long-ago experience.

Then, she heard a voice: a voice that had haunted her life, a voice that she resented and loved at the same time, and a voice that brought her back many memories, both pleasant ones and painful ones.

"Welcome, my student." Hisagi said as he sat casually on his throne with a smile on his face.


To be continued..

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Reading, Hiro?

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Drat, he left..

[nine tailed fury]

vote. vampire. story. hurry.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Alright.
BTW, critic.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Special: Nui Gaiden!


Chapter Forty-Five: Passing the Icy Storm


Tenso Ukitaro was a one-man army, or so he claims it. Arrogant and quick to anger, he is considered one of the most dangerous men in the Light Clan, having an endless thirst for homicide.
He was also the twin of of Senso Ukitaro.
His appearance exactly like his brother. Tenso Ukitaro would have made an excellent shinobi if not for his illness, which caused him to have a mental breakdown occasionally and always result in bloodshed, with him killing whoever
he could see. And that issue caused him to be caged in a maximum cell everyday, constantly hated and feared.

And now he stood, blocking Zara's blade with a long lance, the exact lance that Senso had. Zara glared at Senso and opened his mouth to speak. "Well, well, looks like this'll be more interesting than I've thought."


__________________________________________________ _______________


Smoke hung on the horizon of the area of Senso's, Kato's, and Kaname's battle. The smoke quietly drifted, and an aura of calm peace filled the cold winds. And that moment of complete silence immediately stopped as the battlers emerged.
Kaname was in the air, glancing down where his Wind Howl had struck his enemies. As he landed on the ice with a loud thud, he gazed up. Standing there, still protected and unscathed except for a few cuts here and there was Kato, who was still surrounded in his water dome, which was now lazily drifting in the atmosphere, only parts of it remaining from Kaname's attack.
Where's the other guy, Kaname thought. Then he realized it as a lance whipped out of the cloud of smoke, striking Kaname right at the shoulder. Blood immediately spilled, splashing onto the ice, as Senso appeared, five centimeters west of Kato and seven centimeters facing Kaname, who stood, the lance stuck in his left shoulder, in shock. "How did you.." Kaname wondered.
Senso offered a shrug as Kato started forming handsigns. "It was pretty simple. You are strong and swift, but your movements are predictable. In other words, you were slipping up, and now you're gonna pay for it."

Kaname growled in frustration. "I see.....in other words..I was getting sloppier. I see no way to avoid this now: unfortunately for you, I will have to use it. Now.....goodbye, Light Clan Ninja."

As Kato and Senso prepared themselves for the worst to come, Kaname whispered these words:

"Ninja Art: Impure of Darkness- World End."


To be continued

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Sorry today's chapter was a bit short.

[Hiro]

.... im on chapter 33!

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

You're catching up, and fast.

[takuya]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Special: Nui Gaiden!


Chapter Forty-Four: Tenso Ukitaro


Kaname growled in frustration as he blocked Senso's kunai with his fist. He glanced to his other side to see Kato sprinting at him with a small dagger. With a howl, he ducked as Kato's blade barely passed his furry head, by mere centimeters. At that moment, where both Kato and Senso were off-guard for less than even a second, Kaname countered by leaping upwards as Kato's short blade twirled through the air where Kaname had occupied a little ago. Kaname then quickly began to form handsigns as Kato and Senso looked up in alarm.
Wind Scythe Howl! Kaname thought as he opened his mouth, showing his canine-like teeth as he howled and a enormous burst of wind mixed with energy shot out of his mouth, heading swiftly at Kato and Senso. Kato then formed a handsign as Senso stepped back. "Water Style: Water Dome!" Kato shouted as the ice around him began to crack. The rushing cold water gave in, as the ice finally shattered and the water swirled Kato, quickly forming together into a sphere made out of water that had both Kato and Senso standing inside it.
And Kaname's attack struck dead-on on the water dome as everything went white.


__________________________________________________ _______________


"A light clone, eh?" Zara stated as the body that he had strike slowly evaporated into light. The particles of light slowly drifted into the atmosphere, fading away. He then glanced to his right to see Nui, who gripped his katana in his hands. Stealth-like, Zara ran forward to face his opponent.
Just as he was halfway through reaching Nui, someone emerged. As the newly arrived figured lashed his weapon at Zara, who barely deflected it with his own weapon, the attacker's expression pulled back in a wild broad grinned that seemed to intimidate everyone near him.

"Ready to die, whoever you are?" Tenso grinned wickedly, his intent to kill setting off everyone an uneasy feeling.


__________________________________________________ _______________


The journey that Sakura had endured, through Hell was horrifying as well as thrilling. It was completely unimaginable and truly frightening, and for a normal human to even experience it for a split second would immediately cause them to go insane. To risk from that happening, the author would NOT explain what horrors Sakura had to go through. Instead, he would just advance into the scene of what happens afterwards.


__________________________________________________ _______________


Sakura hit the ground with a loud thud. After a few minutes of just staying sprawled on the ice, she then slowly stood up, shivering and shuddering from her not-so-long-ago experience.

Then, she heard a voice: a voice that had haunted her life, a voice that she resented and loved at the same time, and a voice that brought her back many memories, both pleasant ones and painful ones.

"Welcome, my student." Hisagi said as he sat casually on his throne with a smile on his face.


To be continued..

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Special: Nui Gaiden!


Chapter Forty-Five: Passing the Icy Storm


Tenso Ukitaro was a one-man army, or so he claims it. Arrogant and quick to anger, he is considered one of the most dangerous men in the Light Clan, having an endless thirst for homicide.
He was also the twin of of Senso Ukitaro.
His appearance exactly like his brother. Tenso Ukitaro would have made an excellent shinobi if not for his illness, which caused him to have a mental breakdown occasionally and always result in bloodshed, with him killing whoever
he could see. And that issue caused him to be caged in a maximum cell everyday, constantly hated and feared.

And now he stood, blocking Zara's blade with a long lance, the exact lance that Senso had. Zara glared at Senso and opened his mouth to speak. "Well, well, looks like this'll be more interesting than I've thought."


__________________________________________________ _______________


Smoke hung on the horizon of the area of Senso's, Kato's, and Kaname's battle. The smoke quietly drifted, and an aura of calm peace filled the cold winds. And that moment of complete silence immediately stopped as the battlers emerged.
Kaname was in the air, glancing down where his Wind Howl had struck his enemies. As he landed on the ice with a loud thud, he gazed up. Standing there, still protected and unscathed except for a few cuts here and there was Kato, who was still surrounded in his water dome, which was now lazily drifting in the atmosphere, only parts of it remaining from Kaname's attack.
Where's the other guy, Kaname thought. Then he realized it as a lance whipped out of the cloud of smoke, striking Kaname right at the shoulder. Blood immediately spilled, splashing onto the ice, as Senso appeared, five centimeters west of Kato and seven centimeters facing Kaname, who stood, the lance stuck in his left shoulder, in shock. "How did you.." Kaname wondered.
Senso offered a shrug as Kato started forming handsigns. "It was pretty simple. You are strong and swift, but your movements are predictable. In other words, you were slipping up, and now you're gonna pay for it."

Kaname growled in frustration. "I see.....in other words..I was getting sloppier. I see no way to avoid this now: unfortunately for you, I will have to use it. Now.....goodbye, Light Clan Ninja."

As Kato and Senso prepared themselves for the worst to come, Kaname whispered these words:

"Ninja Art: Impure of Darkness- World End."


To be continued

Wow I missed two chapters when I was gone for what I think was one day.I've read them now so I give it an 8 out of 10.Why?We did not get to read what exactly happen to Sakura,but we found her teacher was the Ex-Kage,Hisagi Onimusha,father of Nui Onimusha,I'm interested to see what follows next.I also like the touch of the pschyo twin,Tenso Ukitaro showing up.Nice touch,actually this deserves 10 out of 10,but I wanted the chapters to be longer.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Okay, thanks.
Who is your favorite character in Nui Gaiden so far?

[takuya]

Nui and Senso.