[joon61]

Manny:We arrived at the vile peaks but everyone's morale was down."Ok guys,let's go!!"
Zach:I got off fiona's edolon and looked at fiona. "What are we supposed to do?" She looked at me with disgust and turned away,not saying a word. "If that's how your gonna be then give me this." I tried to take the note that breeze eft us but she jumped back and ran away. "Dammit!"
Manny:"You wanna go follow her?"
Zach:"She thinks that breeze's death was my fault. She's not wrong really. If i would not have joined breeze,he might still be alive. My parents would also......Still be alive....."
Manny:"What's done is done. Let's go."
Zach:"Right,i wouln't expect you to understand."
Manny:"Well-"
Zach:"Let's go."
I pursue fiona as we see a pack of thexterons.
I casted fira on the thexterons but they did not die. I then casted thunder seaveral times on them.
Manny:I tried to hit one of the thexterons but it jumped on top of me and bit my chest as i kicked it off.
Zach:I use thundara on the thexterons as they fall to the ground,dead. I then look at manny. "Are you ok?"
Manny:"I'll be fine."
Zach:"I pick up manny and put him on my back as we continue to look for fiona.
We found fiona siting on a rock,weeping. I put manny down and walked over to her. "You okay?" She looked at me the same way as last time. "What's wrong with you?! So it might have been my fault that breeze died but that does not mean that we should just sit around crying!!! I don't want to stay here no longer than you do so just give me the note so i we can get out of here.
Fiona:"It is your fault!!!!! If you would have become a L'Cie in the first place,he would still be here!"
Zach:"I know that but-"
Fiona:"You don't know what's like to have someone taken away from you!!!"
Zach:"There was a explosion when i went to see my parents. It was their house. they are dead and the only thing i have left to remember them by,is this necklace!!! So don't you dare tell me i don't know what it's like to lose someone so important to you!!!!"

PSICOM soilder:"They are over here!!!!"
Zach:"I'm sick of running from PSICOM soilders." MY brand starts to glow as i feel imense pain. Exodus appears as PSICOM soilders run over to us. Exodus casted meteor on the PSICOM soilders,killing them. He then turned to us,like we were his enemy. "What the hell is that thing!!!!!"

To be continued.