06-28-2010, 11:40 AM
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I know the chapters are kind of short but as the story goes on I will lengthen them
You also might have noticed I have put in a little more detail but I am still a novice writer so please cut some slack.
Chapter 2: Announcement
"Gather around, people of Nerron. It is time for an important announcement."
The prince of Nerron (named Keser) rised up on the Great Vines; a big cube of overgrowth. Surrounding it was the forest with trees twice as big as the Earthling Redwood.
"Teklen, please tell us what happened," Keser boomed. His voice was deep and it scared the wits out of small Nerrons, and that was only his normal voice.
You may recognize Teklen, the one who took revenge for the Nerrons by killing Masashi. "You do remember the tragedy that happened 30 years ago when they took one of us... A mere child, in fact." Teklen announced. "I found an Earthling trying to capture more of us, and I avenged us." He explained proudly. "After years and years of training we are able to overpower Earthlings to the point of complete extinction, and the ability to move as supersonic speeds help as well. Earthlings will no longer overpower us. They are scared to death. It is only a matter of time until they try the act again, but until then..." Teklen drew a large breath. "We train."
"Thank you, Teklen," Keser said. "However, in my opinion I must say that we must overpower them now before they use cheap weaponary. Ideas?"
Silence. The crickets chirped.
"Very well. The council will talk it over-" Keser began.
A young Nerron named Hikaru, with short black hair, said, "Why don't we go to Earth?"
Every Nerron on the planet turned to Hikaru, wide eyed in horror.
"Are you kidding me?" The bold prince started. "That is the stupidest idea every thought. Earthlings have weapons. It is only a matter of time until technology defies us." Keser snapped. "A young Nerron like you shouldn't say such a thing. Please do not stop my words with pure nonsense and worthless trash-"
"Sir," Teklen interuppted. "It just might work."
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