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EmoSakura 05-14-2011 12:09 PM

Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
I walk alone,
The street classic gray.
The saddening aurora,
Of my dismay.

The gentle depression,
On my movements.
The slowly cryng waves of fears,
I am unable to control them.

Opaque emotions,
Surround my body.
Like thunder clouds,
Except any result may vary.

Then it appears,
Stands there, studying.
Two owl eyes,
Carefully watching.

I reach out a hand,
Then falling to my knees.
Drowning myself,
In my damn sanity.

It walks away,
Not saying another word.
Never looking back,
Never to turn.

I'm locked in an invisible cage,
An experiment in its eyes.
It toys around with my love,
And assumes every feeling of mine.

I know it sucks. >.< Sorry......

Lone_Espada 05-14-2011 12:11 PM

Re: Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
Liked it. o.o

Jonesy 05-25-2011 02:00 PM

Re: Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
Love it!

You need to become a poet. :3

Shikamaru Nara 05-25-2011 02:01 PM

Re: Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
So sad. :(

EmoSakura 09-14-2012 03:59 AM

Re: Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
*bumps ish*

Thanx everyone. =D

WishfulFairie 09-14-2012 11:00 AM

Re: Abandoned Soul in a Cage
 
It didn't suck at all :)


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