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Cyl 01-26-2011 09:11 PM

Edmund Cartwright
 


Edmund Cartwight
Unknown Age (Born sometime in 29th Century BC)

Zanpakuto:
Kokuryuu Command: Set Ablaze what we oppose, Kokuryuu!
Abilities in Shikai: Maximum Fire element control, Super Strength, "Dragon Hard" defence.

Bankai Name: Kokuryuu
Kokuou
Bankai Abilities: Increased speed, spiritual pressure/energy, strength, and durability.

Explanation for the eye: During the years he's been alive, he has fought evil with his Soul Reaper powers, but a fight with a very evil opponent changed him forever. His opponent specialized in corruption, and Edmund's heart, which was purely GOOD, started to turn under the effects of the tense battle. This formidable opponent, who was not winning at the time did not realize his big mistake. Upon corrupting Edmund's heart, all hell was unleashed. At the time Edmund tried to fight the corruption, while fighting his opponent at the same time.

The corruption eventually had taken over almost completely when Edmund activated his Final Bankai stage. Edmund destroyed his opponent, and almost the entire world, the evil that had corrupted heart multiplied his skills, and the world was almost left scorched. His opponent, burned to ashes, relieved Edmund at the time, and that was the only thing that saved the Earth. Edmund was a "ticking time bomb", he wanted his opponent dead already, and the corruption had only amplified this desire, and he almost used his strongest inferno attack. Edmund, surely would have destroyed the planet which he was supposed to protect...

Edmund's eyes were fiery red once the corruption began through spread throughout his body, but after his opponent had fell, Edmund immediately fought this corruption before it was too late. This corruption, however, will forever leave one of his eyes filled with fiery hatefulness.

Note: This "opponent" had killed two very close friends of his, and thus his desire to end his opponent.


Devroux 01-26-2011 09:15 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Awesome.

Cyl 01-26-2011 09:16 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Thanks. I've changed my Shikai/character twice now. lol

Sheelah 01-26-2011 10:54 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
I love it...Great work!! :) You should be proud!!

kg gangster 01-27-2011 04:28 AM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
This character is awesome. Your current ability is better then that "energy" you used before.

Cyl 01-27-2011 01:14 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Sheelah (Post 4671462)
I love it...Great work!! :) You should be proud!!

Thanks!
Quote:

Originally Posted by kg gangster (Post 4671893)
This character is awesome. Your current ability is better then that "energy" you used before.

Thanks KG. Yeah the energy I used was a bit to hard to compare with others spiritual energy. <<

Chidori 3 01-27-2011 03:32 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Cool. Join me in the seritai and become a captain!

Cyl 01-27-2011 03:40 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
I'm a neutral party, sorry.

Chidori 3 01-27-2011 05:08 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Neutrality is uncool. It serves no purpose and could use ur power in my group

Devroux 01-27-2011 05:19 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Neutrality is cool... It gives more opportunities to do what you want and not have to listen to other people...

I'm technically a part of the EA, but I'm more neutral than that.

Cyl 01-27-2011 05:20 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Chidori 3 (Post 4674143)
Neutrality is uncool. It serves no purpose and could use ur power in my group

Being joined up with someone goes against my history... I'm half evil. :\

Cyl 06-22-2011 11:15 PM

Re: Edmund Cartwright
 
Bump...


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