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Danielle 12-18-2010 01:39 AM

Tears like Pearls
 
Tears like Pearls.

Like sand and rain, falling at my feet
Like drops of beautiful white pearl,
Falling across my face, caressing my cheek
The dew of a morning flower,
Grows crisp and stagnant around my heart
And it was then that I knew:

What ever is white and soft
Must soon yellow and age, wrinkling and aging
In the winds of time, they say it must all blow away.
I knew the stars would fall, but it would never be for me
They would cry at the lose of you, at the sorrow you feel
Watch as you foolishly danced with anyone and no one,
But they would never cry for me.

I knew in these few moments, that the crystalline moon
Would never mourn for me, who am I to expect it to?
Not you, not as brilliant, not as cunning or cruel enough.
What is mine must carry on in silence.
What is mine must burn on it's own,
No yellowed linen is half as deserving of a mourning vigil
As the softest red silk, or the purest white cotton.

And even as the pearls drip from me now,
They are not worthy of pity,
Of soft condolences, for who am I?
Not the blemish free red rose,
Not the tallest of the young slender cherry trees.
I am a meek urchin come up from the sea,
Irregular, and not natural to dry land.

As the words fall across me,
Like a rough sea storm, I know what I am.
The sea foam wrapped around my ankle,
As I shout to the heavens and oceans to take me home,
I have found my voice.
As I throw the petals of the red rose into the unforgiving waves,
I discover myself.
And as I throw my weather begotten linen to the winds,
I have saved my soul.

Though the moon should not wish to smile on me,
He does.
Though the stars should not fall for me,
They rise instead;
To fill my soul, and no one else, with a song.
And though no one would miss me,
I must find my own worth, all my own.

These pearls, these tears,
That fall from my eyes,
And caress my cheek, these are mine.
And I know, someday, they will be worth more to someone,
Than they are to me.

athoatho 12-18-2010 03:02 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
i liked the last part very true

Danielle 12-18-2010 07:06 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Thank you.

♥♥♥♥♥♥ 12-18-2010 09:31 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Awww! This is most cutest poem ever! ^^

Danielle 12-18-2010 11:25 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Aw, thanks. ^^

I was watching a movie last night and it kinda spoke to how I was feeling, so I wrote.

Kiseki 12-18-2010 11:27 AM

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Stunning, fantastic writing work!

Danielle 12-18-2010 11:27 AM

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Thank you, Kiseki. <3

SakuraGirl 12-18-2010 12:32 PM

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Wow so pretty

Danielle 12-18-2010 12:40 PM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Thank you. ^^

Xibitz360 12-18-2010 12:40 PM

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Awwww!! This is excellent, just wonderful!! *sniff, sniff*

Danielle 12-18-2010 12:43 PM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
^__^ Thank you very much! <3

SakuraGirl 12-18-2010 12:56 PM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Danielle (Post 4484836)
Thank you. ^^

Your welcome

Xibitz360 12-18-2010 01:01 PM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Danielle (Post 4484847)
^__^ Thank you very much! <3

You're welcome!! That was great! :D

Danielle 12-18-2010 01:15 PM

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Thanks again. There were some errors I fixed that I didn't catch last night.

Xibitz360 12-18-2010 01:30 PM

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Oh that's good, got always room for improvement huh? Awesome!

Danielle 01-15-2011 05:22 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Box

The box kept secrets, locked up tight.
Dreams, frustrations, pain and dark things...
Things never once comprehensible.
Disorganized and chaotic, but tight and safe.
Though now, I know, safety like this is overrated.


My box was small, but it held onto so much.
There, I stuffed everything, a poor steward,
To a poorly kept field.
Now and then it would burst and well over.
Shame

Guilt

And incomprehensible tangled things.

Now it isn't here, the box vanished
Leaving its key in its place.
This key...fades away too.
What does it mean?

Shikamaru Nara 01-15-2011 07:58 AM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Love it, food friend!!

Danielle 01-15-2011 11:32 AM

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Thank you, Food Friend.

Wooster 11-08-2011 10:39 PM

Re: Tears like Pearls
 
Huzzah. This is awesome =D

Danielle 11-08-2011 11:11 PM

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Wooster read a poem =D

Can you feel your literary horizon broaden? o.o


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