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Stuffed Animal Zoo.
~*This is possibly the lamest poem/song you will EVER read in your whole life. It sucks but I my friend told me to share it anyways. XD (I secretly kinda like it. Hahahaha. :D )
It's about this zoo I set up with one of me neighbor friends when I was younger. It's all happy and stuff. Hope you like it. Feedback is nice, yes? Just don't be too mean. Bahahahahaha. :)*~ Stuffed Animal Zoo. When we were setting up, I got stung by a huge yellow bee. I scraped my left knee. But the trouble was worth the while. Cause' the result made me smile. Though the set up was rough, We were satisfied in our paradise of fluff. You wrote on a piece of paper and placed it on your back gate. We then decided to sit and wait. We invited our neighbors to our stuffed animal zoo. We had a zebra named Stripes. A bat that hung from water pipes. We had a cowardly lion that sat on your playset. We had a Bluejay named Jet. We had turtles and a frog. And your favorite, the prairie dog. The neighborhood kids gathered around your backyard gate. They wanted in, and didn't want to wait. We explained admissions free. But our zoo closed at exactly three. We led them around like we were a tourguide. We spent our whole day outside. Eventually the clock struck three, By then, there was nothing left in our backyard zoo to see. We invited our neighbors to our stuffed animal zoo. We had a Giraffe named Dots. A Cheetah with hundreds of spots. We had a dolphin who did amazing tricks. A Kangaroo with knockout kicks. We had a bear that wore a hat. And my favorite, the wildcat. It's been years since we made that zoo. I'm glad I got to make it with you. |
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Kitty kat I never knew you had such skills =o
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/Dies from cutness
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Thankies. :) |
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thats really good O__________o better than I could do
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Really really good. My friends and I made a zoo last year, but some where stuffed and some we played the animal parts.
Nice it was amazingly cute. |
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And thanks! :D |
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I love this, you are a really good poet, no lies. now that I think about it, for the fun razor this year, I should make one with friends. |
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Jingles that was so good xDD
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I really love it. I't cute and the idea's great. I do have two tiny-winy suggestions, though:
1. The poem could be just a tad longer, by making the zoo close at, I dunno, six or something. I feel like it needs just a few more stanzas. 2. Syllables. It's sometimes a little too long and a little too short. For example, instead of: Spoiler:
Spoiler:
But they're only suggestions, keep it like this, it's just for the future. =] Great job! :3 |
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Loved it. Wouldn't change a thing.
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