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Ishtar 07-14-2010 09:31 AM

Ishtar: Origins
 
Characters:
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Ishtar
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Ishtar has recently graduated from the academy at the age of 12. He lives in the village hidden in the elements. His jutsu consists of lesser fire bullets that he can shoot from his mouth and small water bullets. He has black hair and blue eyes and has acquired his very own sword from Sagara, the Taokage. His swords name is Butaiken literally meaning Elemental Sword.
Description: Blue eyes, spiked black hair.


Katsuro
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To be revealed later on. He also likes to drink liqueur in a flask.


Kejon
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Kejon is the rank of jonin and has privileges of having his own 3 man squad, including Ishtar. He is 30 years old with blonde hair. He sort of has this thing going on with Hugh. Both personal and non-personal. He has a sword named Kinbu, his brother Keo was killed by a mysterious man.
Description: Spiked blonde hair, wears a tao jonin vest. It is blue in color.


The Village hidden in the elements
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This village has no barrier to keep intruders out.


Mugendai Karuto
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The Mugendai Karuto, literally meaning "Infinity Cult."


Mikomi
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Hotheaded? Cheerful 11 year old girl who graduated from the ninja academy. She is learning medical ninjutsu. She also has her pink hair done up in a bun twist with emerald eyes.


Lilina
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She is 11 and she has a big crush on Ishtar, Her weapon is a steel bow with some arrows. Like Mikomi and Ishtar, she is placed in Kejon's squad. She has long purple hair, and pupiless amber eyes, favorite color is green.


Sagara
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The sixth taokage of the elemental village, He has unreal ability in many varieties of elements.


Raiku
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The taokage's assistant, He is also his student, he has started to train Ishtar on how to wield Butaiken.


Kai
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Kai is Raiku's little brother. He is 13 years of age with messy black hair and red eyes.



Toshiro
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He is from the Mugendai Karuto. Toshiro loves to fight. He lives to battle and defeat opponents. Hence the quote: "Man, I am itching to fight!"


Puppet Master Zack
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Zack has been shown to have a mummy wrapped in bandages on the dining room table of the Mugendai Karuto. Not much is known about this puppetmaster.


Naraku
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Naraku appeared to be looking for something.......or someone. His abilities can consist of moving objects on will, wielding a sword, absorbing jutsu and using genjutsu by placing his hand on top of a victim's head, thus taking over the mind. he wears shades, a hood and his mouth is wrapped in bandages.


Queen (of the darkness)
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Queen seems like a twisted person at first, she's not that bad a person once you get to know her. The other members of the Mugendai Karuto has gotten used to her twisted personality, but they know deep inside she is pretending.


Akio, Lord of puppets
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He rivals Zack wirh puppetry.


Akasun
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She acts like the servant for the cult, yet she is still the same rank as the other members.


Hugh
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Little is known about this cheery 29 year old female. She has short spiky brown hair with blue eyes, She has been known to harden her skin so far, She is also Naraku's partner, Or as she likes to call him, "Partner in crime".


Kitsune
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She is a female, The newest addition to the Mugendai Karuto.


"Tanoth"
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No one knows his real name, "Tanoth" is actually his codename that he lives by. He literally hides within peoples shadows without being detected.


Zero
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A spiky blonde haired man with a skull dragon mask on with red glowing eye sockets and two protruding horns. The mysterious leader of the Mugendai Karuto. All cult members wear black robes with flame designs at the bottom of it. Only the zealots have the additional hoods. Normal cult members wear red robes. Zero, the leader wears a purple jewel embedded cloak.


Hana
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Blue eyes with black hair. She is Ishtar's mother, wears an apron


Sosuke
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Ishtar's father has brown hair and blue eyes, also wears glasses.


Emina Kami
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Emina hails from the Kami Clan of the village hidden in the water. She had stolen the comb of transformation and fled the place she used to call home. The Kami clan has been exterminated by an unknown wanderer. She is classified as a missing nin



Chapters:
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The Mugendai Karuto


C-Rank Mission! Delivery of the blade and the Kami ninja!


New training mission: Grasping the element of air!


Katsuro Arc (Unnamed)
Mission Arc 3 (Unnamed)
Chunin Exams Arc Part 1
Chunin Exams Arc Part 2
Katsuro Arc 2 (Unnamed)
Village defection Arc
Ishtar vs Kejon Arc

Ishtar Butai Rekidaishi
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Butai Rekidaishi, literally meaning "Element Chronicles" is part 2 of Ishtar. Stay tuned for Ishtar Butai Rekidaishi, As it is several years into the future.


Just a little reminder to everyone:
When I post a chapter, don't assume I'm done with it yet, I am actually adding more and editing out the mistakes and adding whatever punctuaction I missed. So you'll most likely be reading the "Raw version" when it first gets released within the first ten minutes.

YumYumBubblegum 07-15-2010 02:31 AM

Re: Ishtar
 
Hey, how are ya Ishtar?

Ishtar 07-19-2010 02:43 PM

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Im good. Im currently writing the descriptions of the many charcters that I am including. My favorite character I have been working on is Naraku and Ishtar, Those are my primary goals, second is to come up with a devious plot, and so on and so forth until I finally have a story going on. I already have the plot so far, All I need are character developments. I mean, I have all the characters created, but I still need to fine tweak them and confirm they're roles into the story.

Slack 40 07-19-2010 02:49 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
YES KATSURO FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is the fanfic right?

Ishtar 07-19-2010 02:55 PM

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Yes it is Slack. Say, Whats your favorite part thats going to be included besides Katsuro in thew story? Like whats going to be your favorite part?

Kiko-kun 07-19-2010 03:03 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
Can you write the first chapter? xDD

Naraku 07-19-2010 03:09 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
Yes, I can write the first chapter if you want xD

I'll get to work and It'll be here in the next few days.

Here is a sneak peak of one of my chapters >>>> Link

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 03:37 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
i am in this right right i am a e-warrior

Ishtar 07-19-2010 04:05 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
Yes you are Zack. :P You play an important role in the story.

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 04:06 PM

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i do i do yes i am the only rebel woops do u want me to dellete this

Ishtar 07-19-2010 04:11 PM

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Some people will already know, some dont have a clue whats going on. delete it if you want, Some wont get what you mean.

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 04:12 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Ishtar (Post 3605794)
Some people will already know, some dont have a clue whats going on. delete it if you want, Some wont get what you mean.

ok well so the get a hint and hey will the chapters be posted on here ?

Ishtar 07-19-2010 04:20 PM

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Of course they will.

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 04:21 PM

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ok when is the first one goin to be ready

Ishtar 07-19-2010 04:24 PM

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I'd say roughly tomorrow.

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 04:29 PM

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ok ok good cant wait to read it

Slack 40 07-19-2010 06:10 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Ishtar (Post 3605079)
Yes it is Slack. Say, Whats your favorite part thats going to be included besides Katsuro in thew story? Like whats going to be your favorite part?

Everything else of corse xD

Ishtar 07-19-2010 06:37 PM

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Hey, I got some of the characters up there. But I need to fit in they're descriptions now. Then write the first chapter. What do you think of it?

puppetmaster zack 07-19-2010 06:39 PM

Re: Ishtar
 
.....dam i aint there yet

Ishtar 07-19-2010 07:02 PM

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What do you think of the characters though? Any of them spark your curiousity?


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