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EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:10 PM

wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
well here it is.

Spoiler:
Fantasy
Life was simpler than what,
It is now.
To my bed is where,
I am now.
I curl up on it,
Tired and glad.
To awaken the dream,
Of which I once had.
I foresight a meadow,
With dozens of flowers.
A land where it never,
Showers.
I see a cliff,
And a girl standing on it.
She's young and beautiful,
As the flowers compliment.
She turns around,
And smiles at me.
I am in shock,
This girl I see.
Is my dead sister,
Who died years ago.
I run up to her,
And let my joy flow.
I hug her tightly,
Not noticing the cliff.
Until I take a wrong step,
And take a trip.
We're screaming in horror,
Not knowing when it ends.
As I close my eyes,
Hoping we won't be dead.
Then I open them again,
And see a familiar face.
And my sister beside me,
With the safety in her place.
I look up again,
As he begins to speak.
"Are you ok?"
He says as he puts me on my feet.
"Yeah," I say in shock,
Of seeing him.
In a place like this,
After what I did.
I start to wobble,
As I'm still kind of scared.
He notices this and smiles,
As I look at my sister with care.
He then grabs my shoulder,
And spins me toward him.
I feel so close as his arm feels warm,
Gently feeling my skin.
"Don't worry," he says softly,
Getting close to my face.
"I'll always protect you," he says,
Then locks our lips in place.
I feel so warm now,
So sweet and so nice.
I wish I could stay like this,
When I'm alive.
Not sleeping,
Like I am now.
I wish this dream,
Could be true somehow.
And in the end,
We hug together.
My love, my forever,
And my little sister.
And while this dream continues,
I smile.
This is my relief,
So I'm not in damn denial.

BloodyKnives 05-28-2010 02:16 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
i love ur death poems but this is good too

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:16 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
I like this one! ^.^

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:22 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
cuz u think ish about u?

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:23 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by EmoSakura (Post 3190930)
cuz u think ish about u?

Hope yes, think yes, is it?`:)

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:26 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
yea...... o.o i wrote it recently........O.o

Kiko-kun 05-28-2010 02:28 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
>.> Is this one of the ones I asked for?

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:28 PM

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Aww...... *hugs*

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:28 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Kiko Hyuuga (Post 3190984)
>.> Is this one of the ones I asked for?

No. Tis about me.

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:30 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Kiko Hyuuga (Post 3190984)
>.> Is this one of the ones I asked for?

*shoots confetti cannon* ta da! xD i ish told u ima not very good. but i came up with this. so SURPRISE!!!!

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:32 PM

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Can it be both? `o.o"

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:33 PM

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sure? O.o

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:33 PM

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Ok? I still love it........*kisses you before you can stop me*

Kiko-kun 05-28-2010 02:35 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Susanoo1620 (Post 3191039)
Ok? I still love it........*kisses you before you can stop me*

Thought you married Trouble88.

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:35 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Kiko Hyuuga (Post 3191050)
Thought you married Trouble88.

-_-`:|`:|`:|`:|`:|

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:35 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
*facepalms self* ish was kiko's order. but i had to think of something while writing or i wont have inspiration so i thought of u. :3

EmoSakura 05-28-2010 02:36 PM

Re: wah...... a happy poem X.X
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Kiko Hyuuga (Post 3191050)
Thought you married Trouble88.

o.o this aint gonna be good. *hides*

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:40 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by EmoSakura (Post 3191058)
*facepalms self* ish was kiko's order. but i had to think of something while writing or i wont have inspiration so i thought of u. :3

I don't really care brooke......xD As long as it comes from your heart.....`:)

Kiko-kun 05-28-2010 02:46 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Susanoo1620 (Post 3191057)
-_-`:|`:|`:|`:|`:|

What happened?

Noctis Arashi 05-28-2010 02:51 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Kiko Hyuuga (Post 3191133)
What happened?

Just leave it alone.....


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