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Toma RNK 05-11-2009 06:00 PM

REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) CLOSED FOR NOW
 
EDIT: Registration closed till the battle system goes live. Any posts after closure will be approved/denied as soon as the battle system is in lace and the council frees up some time.

So we are revising exactly how we are running the Bloodline limits. Below is my post which was APPROVED by the council.

I wanted to give the original creators a chance to rewrite their stuff, instead of relying on me to do it. So here is the new system, those who want may post their revisions here. Otherwise I will be rewriting them for you sometime tomorrow. [May 13th]

This IS official so I am requesting a sticky for a day or two.

Quote:

As people are writing them now, the sharingan would look like this.

Sharingan: Eye jutsu which allows user to see through genjutsu, copy any technique, create a powerful genjutsu, create black flames that destroy anything ect ect.

Instead I feel that many of those are jutsu requiring a bloodline to use and could be reweitten as:

Sharingan: Grants the user the ability to memorize and replicate any movement it has seen, allowing the user to use an opponent's jutsu against them.

Level 3 Jutsu: True Sight
The Sharingan's second ability grants the user increased clarity of perception, allowing them to track and predict the movements and actions of fast-moving objects. This also allows the user to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra.

Level 3 Jutsu: See what I want you to see
The final standard sharingan technique is a brand of hypnosis that suggests actions and thoughts to the opponent, acting as an effective way to produce genjutsu or implant memories in another person.

level 4 jutsu: BLAA
This jutsu allows the sharingan user to put their opponent in an illusion which can kill.

Level 5 jutsu: Amaterasu
This eye technique can create black flames as hot as the sun and creates a spiritual being that gives ultimate offensive and defensive abilities to him.

and so on.

I propose I rewrite the bloodlines breaking them into their inherrant powers as well as their jutsu components.

People would have to buy each one of thes jutsu with their own points. The 3 points for a Bloodline limit only buy you the inherrant ability.
I will be closing this thread and rewriting any bloodlines as I see fit to conform to this system after 8PM May 13th Eastern time. Any submissions not redone by then will be done by me.

Kuroda Taishi 05-11-2009 06:17 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
These are the 3 Kekkei Genkai of The Village Hidden Among the Towers
[spoiler:38ronyqb][1] Limbus Seperatus (Kekkei Genkai)
This bloodline abilty allows the user to seperate anybody part from the main body instantly and move it independantly. Higher level ninja can seperate more body parts at the same time. The only limitation is the user cannot cut the skull in half, but taking an ear off is possible. Body parts are still able to function if injured in the same way they could if they were attached.

Level 1: User can separate one limb.

Level 2: User can separate up to 3 limbs.

Level 3: User can separate infinite number of limbs, of varying sizes, ex: halves of fingers.

[2] Koutetsu no Hagane: (Kekkei Genkai)
This bloodline ability allows the user to cover themselves with a skin of steel armor. The armor is lightweight and allows them to still move around quickly, but is also extreemely strong. An advanced user can extend the steel skin onto objects, like weapons as long as they stay in contact with the object (this does not work on animals or other ninja). The only way to get rid of the armor is to melt it is with a level 5 fire Jutsu.

Level 1: user can cover two limbs with steel armor

Level 2: User can cover entire body with steel armor

Level 3: User can cover entire body with steel armor, and extend armor onto any inanimate object that they are in contact with.

[3] Wings of the Damned: (Kekkei Genkai)
This bloodline ability allows the user to grow two giant black wings. These wings are made of the ultimate corrosive acid that will burn through any object. By flapping the wings, the acid is launched at the enemy. The wings constantly drip the acid and lose their form, after enough time the wings disappear and the user becomes unable to move. The wings do not allow the user to fly.

Level 1: User can throw up to 3 acid darts at the same time at an enemy, user has 60 minutes before they die.

Level 2: User can throw up to 7 acid darts at the same time at an enemy, user has 30 minutes before they die.

Level 3: User can throw an infinite amount of acid darts at enemy, but can only do so for 10 minutes before they day.[/spoiler:38ronyqb]

zachrex33 05-11-2009 06:48 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
Could u plzz post a list of kekkie genkia that are acceptable or have been accepted. thats if there are any besides the one listed. just asking

Kakashi71 05-11-2009 09:47 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
Heres our kekkei genkai so far im from the lightning im the kage and this is the hanizuki clans keekei genkai for the vill [spoiler:2qdun4wc]Clans Kekei Genkai: Hanizuki: We can move so fast nobody can see us but we can only move that fast once, Quick Flash can do weaker but exstreamly fast versions of lightning jutsu,[/spoiler:2qdun4wc]

AshenREAPER 05-11-2009 10:46 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
Alright I guess I'll try this again.

Spoiler:
Kekkei Genkai - Eye of Truth

Primary function - User is able to perfectly control the chakra flow to the brain making them unaffected by all Genjutsu abilites. Those with this Kekkei Genkai are also able to read enemy movements more accurately allowing for fast reaction and response.

Level 3 Jutsu - Be gone, Fake! - Eye of Truth only, Erases any type of clone jutsu effect and blocks any more clone type jutsu from being performed.

Level 4 Jutsu - Hellz Rollin' - Eye of Truth only, can only be done at close range. User casts a powerful genjutsu on the enemy through physical contact(a punch for example). This genjutsu places the enemy into a world controlled by the user. The weakness to this jutsu is it can only be cast upon 1 person at a time but the user can still maintain its effect from a distance.

lite yagami 05-12-2009 11:53 AM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
Did myne and evil buzzards get accepted?



kekkie genkie frost(alowes me to freeze any thing and i can move thrue ice.)
if i need to change it up a bit let me know.

TheBlackChidori 05-12-2009 12:10 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. READ HERE
 
Sounds to me like he's giving people a chance to resubmit it, Id take the chance if I were you and not worry about acceptance.

Be within reason people.

Yori 05-12-2009 02:21 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Kamimeh-Tokiro clan-

our attacks and speed is 2x better and we can have the power to control darkness,fire,space/time. We can enter into any realm we want to and we can manipulate time. Can use genjutsu but have to look at the opponent eyes and can copy jutsu's(certain types)

TheBlackChidori 05-12-2009 02:37 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Yori Uchiha
Kamimeh-Tokiro clan-

can slow down fast attacks and our attacks and speed is 2x better and we can have the power to control darkness,fire,space/time. We can enter into any realm we want to and we can manipulate time. If some one use the elments fire we can repel thier attacks right back to them. Can use genjutsu but have to look at the opponent eyes and can copy jutsu's(certain types)

This qualifies as overpowered. =)

Yori 05-12-2009 02:40 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by TheBlackChidori
Quote:

Originally Posted by Yori Uchiha
Kamimeh-Tokiro clan-

can slow down fast attacks and our attacks and speed is 2x better and we can have the power to control darkness,fire,space/time. We can enter into any realm we want to and we can manipulate time. If some one use the elments fire we can repel thier attacks right back to them. Can use genjutsu but have to look at the opponent eyes and can copy jutsu's(certain types)

This qualifies as overpowered. =)

Kamimeh-Tokiro clan-

our attacks and speed is 2x better and we can have the power to control darkness,fire,space/time. We can enter into any realm we want to and we can manipulate time. Can use genjutsu but have to look at the opponent eyes and can copy jutsu's(certain types) what about now?

Soro Hanosh 05-12-2009 03:08 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Hanosh clan Kekki Genkai:

Spoiler:
~Lightning Style: Speed of Light~ [level 2]: gifts the user with super speed [hence the title ^^] allowing him to catch up with someone using space/time jutsu, NOT overpowering the opponent, and always stays at the opponents pace.


~Lightning Style: Thunder

TheBlackChidori 05-12-2009 03:19 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

our attacks and speed is 2x better and we can have the power to control darkness,fire,space/time. We can enter into any realm we want to and we can manipulate time. Can use genjutsu but have to look at the opponent eyes and can copy jutsu's(certain types) what about now?
How about this.

The attack and speed of your Darkness Jutsu is 2x better. We can copy darkness element Jutsu up to level 4 when the enemy tries to use it on us.



Time manipulation and and all that is impossible to work into the system.

Yori 05-12-2009 03:26 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
can i still have my genjutsu

TheBlackChidori 05-12-2009 03:28 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Yori Uchiha
can i still have my genjutsu

There really isnt going to be much Genjutsu in this system.

Luiyud 05-12-2009 03:29 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Heres mine:

Entenal Charkra:Allows user to make their charkra into a phisical form and usable.The users are able to manupulated(use) as Garra with his sand.You can make into a chield or use it to attack.The charkra gives the user a black cloack that steadly regenerates chakra.It coulld be use in any phisical way.
Is mine ok?

Yori 05-12-2009 03:30 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by TheBlackChidori
Quote:

Originally Posted by Yori Uchiha
can i still have my genjutsu

There really isnt going to be much Genjutsu in this system.

fine

Toma RNK 05-12-2009 03:37 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Luiyud
Heres mine:

Entenal Charkra:Allows user to make their charkra into a phisical form and usable.The users are able to manupulated(use) as Garra with his sand.You can make into a chield or use it to attack.The charkra gives the user a black cloack that steadly regenerates chakra.It coulld be use in any phisical way.
Is mine ok?

So your chakra, makes a cloak, which can regenerate chakra?

If I am reading that right, the answer is no.

Luiyud 05-12-2009 03:40 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Toma RNK
Quote:

Originally Posted by Luiyud
Heres mine:

Entenal Charkra:Allows user to make their charkra into a phisical form and usable.The users are able to manupulated(use) as Garra with his sand.You can make into a chield or use it to attack.The charkra gives the user a black cloack that steadly regenerates chakra.It coulld be use in any phisical way.
Is mine ok?

So your chakra, makes a cloak, which can regenerate chakra?

If I am reading that right, the answer is no.

Heres mine:

Entenal Charkra:Allows user to make their charkra into a phisical form and usable.The users are able to manupulated(use) as Garra with his sand.You can make into a chield or use it to attack.The charkra gives the user a black cloack that slowly regenerates chakra.It coulld be use in any phisical way.

How about now?

nejipwns101 05-12-2009 03:44 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
hmm so is this the kekki genkai approval thing

Toma RNK 05-12-2009 03:57 PM

Re: REVISED Kekki Genkai (bloodline) Thread. Ends May13, 8PM EST
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by nejipwns101
hmm so is this the kekki genkai approval thing

Yes, read the first post.


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