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joon61 09-02-2012 01:20 PM

Another character
 
Name:Zero hetto
Release:Can manipulate blue flames that will burn my foes until there is nothing left.


2nd release:My fire becomes powerful enough to burn reitsu and heirro.

Vasto lordes: A blue fire barreir forms around me that can only be broken by wind or water.
Then,20 blue fire arrows start to rain down on my opponet at shunpo speed.
My sword turns into 5 inches sharp claws that appear on my hands with blazing blue fire on each of them.

loganace 09-02-2012 06:01 PM

Re: Another character
 
Cough, controlling all solids is uber hax and GM, cough

joon61 09-02-2012 06:22 PM

Re: Another character
 
I didn't know.
This is why i wanted to make a list.
But as long as i do it up to a certain extent then i will be fine.
I cannot control someone's weapon. I can only control what i create,and what i am touching.(the ground)

ILIKEPIE 09-02-2012 06:29 PM

Re: Another character
 
if a freeverse character was in the verse it's based on it would solo that verse lol

joon61 09-02-2012 06:34 PM

Re: Another character
 
IS this good or not?

loganace 09-02-2012 09:45 PM

Re: Another character
 
i think its way to much, but ehh, i'll beat you anyway XD

joon61 09-03-2012 04:32 AM

Re: Another character
 
Just tell me what i should take away.

Noctis Arashi 09-03-2012 04:45 AM

Re: Another character
 
This is what I see wrong with your characters. You give yourself 800000 powers, all of them open ended. And it's kinda OP and hax to some, and it doesn't execute well.

You need to have ONE power, fairly open ended, and make it something special.

If you want to use fire, use fire, but make it original. Not just fire.

joon61 09-03-2012 04:47 AM

Re: Another character
 
Okay.
I will edit it and make a new character.
EDIT:How's this?

Noctis Arashi 09-03-2012 05:03 AM

Re: Another character
 
If the sound aspect is what I think it is, you should stick with just that.

joon61 09-03-2012 05:04 AM

Re: Another character
 
Huh??

loganace 09-03-2012 05:09 AM

Re: Another character
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi (Post 6230071)
This is what I see wrong with your characters. You give yourself 800000 powers, all of them open ended. And it's kinda OP and hax to some, and it doesn't execute well.

You need to have ONE power, fairly open ended, and make it something special.

If you want to use fire, use fire, but make it original. Not just fire.

sorry joon, but he is right XD

joon61 09-03-2012 05:13 AM

Re: Another character
 
I changed it but what is he saying now? D:

loganace 09-03-2012 05:14 AM

Re: Another character
 
what does the soind part do?

joon61 09-03-2012 05:19 AM

Re: Another character
 
I can turn it into sound,making it gain the chaiteristics of sound. It will still burn things though.

loganace 09-03-2012 05:21 AM

Re: Another character
 
what noctis is saying you should just have that and normal fire.That is strong and usefull. Not against my sound guy, but hey, use it against everyone else.

joon61 09-03-2012 05:23 AM

Re: Another character
 
Okay then.
I already have something for my bankai and finai bankai.

loganace 09-03-2012 06:09 AM

Re: Another character
 
no. the second release is just no. I am sure you could tell me whats wrong with it,

joon61 09-08-2012 06:35 PM

Re: Another character
 
Nope.

Hozuki 09-09-2012 11:54 AM

Re: Another character
 
-.-...


2nd release..

Seriously Joon.


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