Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Name:Kizia Otawaku
Age: 12
Village:the valley hidden in ash?
Blood type:A
Chakra type: fire (ash)
Personality: hot headed, brave, can be generous sometime, clumsy, and deep down is kind-hearted. And trustworthy
Biography: an orphan since she was born, was raised by wolves, learned from the wolves how to fight, and. Learns she has a sister so she looks for her
Appearance: red long hair with black highlights with a ponytail to the side of her head, black eyes by day and red eyes by night, 5"3, skinny, sometimes wears glasses, long finger nails, barely smiles unless amused, fish net shirt with red sweater over it and very long sleeves and fishnet leggings with mini skirt, two bells on pony tail, large bust and average butt

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

(oooh putting the blood type, fancy)

Nice character. I can tell that you care about your characters and you spend time on making them so I only have a small constructive criticism. I would just make a kennkai gennkai. But really I don't have any criticism on anything that you have written. I am going to make another character as well. I usually don't give constructive critism to characters that I can tell are marry sue or I don't feel like giving it to people sometimes.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Yea... I should add more to my character because you can't not have a chakra nature.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

I am looking for a rival character for the fanfic. Do you want your character to be an option for the rival Hozuki.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Great character you should make more weshir :)

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Thx I will

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Well thx and I will make one

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Yentai Santosu
Age: 15
Blood type: AB
Village: the mountian hidden in snow
Keikei Genkai: his is to reshape or disfigure any type of liquid
Height: 5 feet 7in.
Appearence: long silver and white straight hair, a chain that looks like small rosary seal, a silver scully on, with dark silver gloves matching it, silverish gray eye color, a black as coal sweater under a wolf fur coat, with dark denim pants, silver snow boots (light) with black zipper on the sides , sometimes wear a ninja silverish gray mask, and one long silver night swords with a katana hidden on the bottom of his snow boot
Biography: (add later)
Weapons: long silver and shiny night sword hand crafted by the disciples of the ice lord
And a hand crafyed katana by his mom Naia Santosu

Hes a side character but another one of my creations :)

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Want them in my fanfic?

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Sure that'll be cool

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

#This is for bleach, not Naruto....

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Oops oh well

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Where does it say that?

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It doesent. It is for any freeverse character. Itif FV character creation. Not BFV character creation.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

Lol, I just saw that. I always though it was BFV. :P


Carry on.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

I thougt that at first as well.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

were is ya fanfic

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I haven't started it yet.

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

? ummmm ok then?

Re: Kizia Otawaku (my creation)
 

I am going to start it soon.