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Maikeru D. Shinigami 05-30-2010 10:12 PM

Power Surge Discussion Thread
 
Read Power Surge Here

Vatanui AKA Pride 06-02-2010 09:26 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Don't you have another Fan Fic? http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/f...monsteryn0.gif

Sounds like Veritas. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/f...monsteryn0.gif

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-02-2010 09:30 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride (Post 3224386)

Can never have too many fanfics. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/f...monsteryn0.gif

What's Veritas? http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/f...ies/6hq895.gif

Cyl 06-02-2010 09:32 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Nice story dood!
Man, you just keep coming up with good stories! xD
I spotted a mistake though.

Draco: I said your hands off her!

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-02-2010 09:33 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Thanks. Writing is my passion.

Thanks.

Cyl 06-02-2010 09:35 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami (Post 3224413)
Thanks. Writing is my passion.

Thanks.

You'll become a famous writer if you keep this up. xD
I'll support you also, by buying your books, if you do get them published that is. :P
I'll pass them on to friends also.
But, can't get too excited now can we? :p

You're welcome.

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-02-2010 09:41 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Actually, if I start sending my stories in I might have a pretty good shot.
Every person who has sat down and read my stories like them pretty well.
My only "complaint" I've gotten is that I can be "less descriptive".
But then again, what's wrong with a bit of description, eh?

I am planning on sending my stories in though.
If I had drawing skills, I would turn this story into a manga.
Then VIZ would ask to host it.
Then 4Kids would ask to dub it and I would say, "I'll get back to you on that".
Then FUNimation or Adult Swim would ask to dub it and I'd say, "Go ahead!".

After that, I would tell 4Kids to go ahead and make a crappy kids version. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/f...monsteryn0.gif

Cyl 06-02-2010 09:43 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami (Post 3224457)
Actually, if I start sending my stories in I might have a pretty good shot.
Every person who has sat down and read my stories like them pretty well.
My only "complaint" I've gotten is that I can be "less descriptive".
But then again, what's wrong with a bit of description, eh?

I am planning on sending my stories in though.
If I had drawing skills, I would turn this story into a manga.
Then VIZ would ask to host it.
Then 4Kids would ask to dub it and I would say, "I'll get back to you on that".
Then FUNimation or Adult Swim would ask to dub it and I'd say, "Go ahead!".

After that, I would tell 4Kids to go ahead and make a crappy kids version. http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/f...monsteryn0.gif

They'll destroy it I tell ya, don't do it. D;
Don't let them make a crappy kids version. xD
:lol:

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-02-2010 09:47 PM

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4Kids.

4
Krappily and.
Indiscriminately.
Demeaning your.
Stories.

Cyl 06-02-2010 09:49 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami (Post 3224485)
4Kids.

4
Krappily and.
Indiscriminately.
Demeaning your.
Stories.

That deserves tons of rep, some of Jimbobs e-soup, and billions of dollars. xD

Cyl 06-02-2010 09:59 PM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Make with the next chapter dood. NAO.

Bacon 06-03-2010 12:19 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Epic sauce, but you need to stop withholding info. D: xD

Vatanui AKA Pride 06-03-2010 09:03 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami (Post 3224399)

Now I have to do more work to do away with the competition. `:|

A manwha with some epic sauce artwork. It's a martial arts shonen type-manwha.

Anyways, your format is creative. `:|

Your description is nice, but so far, the story is much stereotype.

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-03-2010 09:10 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Thanks.

What do you mean by "stereotype"? http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/f...ies/6hq895.gif

Kuroda Taishi 06-03-2010 09:14 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Why do you have themes for you seasons?

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-03-2010 09:47 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Boredom.

Kuroda Taishi 06-03-2010 09:49 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Fair enough, xD

Vatanui AKA Pride 06-04-2010 09:33 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami (Post 3225703)
Thanks.

What do you mean by "stereotype"? http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/f...ies/6hq895.gif

No problem.

The current plot.

Maikeru D. Shinigami 06-04-2010 09:37 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
How so exactly?

Ohako 06-04-2010 09:56 AM

Re: Power Surge (An Original Work)
 
Congrats o your new Fanfic Maikeru keep up the good work


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