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I'm writing yet another story....whooptie freaking do. xD Like my spelling? No? Get over it >_<
Anyway yeah another story. Maybe I'll be a writer when I get older. Summary Spoiler:
Status: Ongoing Archive: Ticket 1 Below Ticket 2 Ticket 3 Ticket 4 Ticket 5 Ticket 6 Ticket 7 Ticket 8 Ticket 9 Ticket 10 Ticket 11 Ticket 12 Ticket 13 Ticket 14 Ticket 15 Ticket 16 Ticket 17 Ticket 18 Ticket 19 Other Works of Mine: Digging Too Deep I am aware that it's not that great but I would still like the commentary and constructive criticism nonetheless. Chapter 1 Spoiler:
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Interesting...I thought of Beelzebub for a moment when I first read the summary.
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How did you think of Beelzebub?
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The part about the delinquent school.
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I just now realized that..O___________________o
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You're so slow sometimes...
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I like it the story is good.Weirdly I thought of death race but It might just because I wanna watch it again.
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I don't even know what Death Race is, but thank you. :'D
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A movie about the top killers in the world in a death race were the only way to win is to kill the others.You win equals receiving your freedom.
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Interesting. Maybe I'll watch it.
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Ticket 2
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Still good. I like it.
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Personally I think it sucks. <________<
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You think everything you do sucks.
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Cool, fighting xD
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xD
I'm not good a writing it but still xDD |
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Ticket 3
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2nd chapter: I'm feeling ninja? xD
3rd chapter: girl's got attitude |
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<_< She has a very bad attitude at times xD |
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xD maybe |
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