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Makoto Cifer 07-04-2011 01:43 PM

Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Location:Large Buddist Shrine in the suburbs of a japanese town.
Distance: 5ft
Weather: Heavy rain, high winds
Time of day: Noon
Restrictions: Final bankai, 2nd release is prohibated.

The first move goes to assassin.....

assassin 07-04-2011 01:54 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Makoto Cifer (Post 5222363)
Location:Large Buddist Shrine in the suburbs of a japanese town.
Distance: 5ft
Weather: Heavy rain, high winds
Time of day: Noon
Restrictions: Final bankai, 2nd release is prohibated.

The first move goes to assassin.....

are we inside the shrine or not?

*I face Makoto and remain still. Suddenly I sonido forward at him and quickly make a sharp turn to the side and my scythe has been drawn and moves toward your waste and will cut you clear in half without any resistance if it hits you since it's been coated in my reiatsu and if that misses or just to be sure, once I reach a ten foot distance from you I'll quickly spin around and release the reiatsu from my scythe in the form of a slash at you in an attempt to finish you off. The slash will explode on contact.*

Makoto Cifer 07-04-2011 02:40 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by assassin (Post 5222383)
are we inside the shrine or not?

*I face Makoto and remain still. Suddenly I sonido forward at him and quickly make a sharp turn to the side and my scythe has been drawn and moves toward your waste and will cut you clear in half without any resistance if it hits you since it's been coated in my reiatsu and if that misses or just to be sure, once I reach a ten foot distance from you I'll quickly spin around and release the reiatsu from my scythe in the form of a slash at you in an attempt to finish you off. The slash will explode on contact.*

The dirt, the walk, the trip; all made me happy. Escaping the lonliness of that castle was both healthy and a good way to alleviate what little sadness i had inside me. Ascending the gravel stairs, i tilted my head upward slightly, only to see black clouds manifest rather quickly. Slightly altering the position of my bangs, a strong wind arose suddenly, carrying my straw with it, as it drifted across my elegant black hair. My beautiful blue kimono seemed to follow the wind, revealing it's "wear and tear" from prior confrontations. Passing the threshold of the shrine entrance, a dense spritual pressure equal to my own alerted my pesquisa with a small jolt. "It must be nothing..." My assumption was more than wrong; it was naive. After kneeling and praying, i gently shook the shrine bell. Turning to walk the other way, i was abruptly greeted by an old friend. "Well now, it certainly has been awhile, my friend." To my suprise, my opponent engaged me immediately. Leaping high off the ground, i evaded his first strike, as i instantly placed my left hand upon my blades hilt, pushing upward on the golden guard, all the while gathering immense spiritual energy upon the blade.



Quickly, i sent forth a mass of energy from my blade, by releasing my beautiful blade from it's sheathe. The collision for these two, resulted in a minor explosion. Upon the collision, i appeared on the ground, by an unexpected sonido. Lifting my blade high in the air, i quickly utilized the storm to my advantage. Condensing more and more spiritual energy upon the blade, a bolt of light quickly struck my sword. Just then, i condensed the immense power into a stream. Thrusting my blade toward your vicinity, i sent forth two consecutive bolts of lighting. The immense attack had a special homming ability; it would stop until it hit it's target. Both were aimed for your abdomen, in an attempt to fry your body. These attacks would also result in a rather large explosion, since the initial energy is so unstable. Keeping my blade steady, i erected a barrier to repel the inevitable explosion.

assassin 07-04-2011 07:04 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Makoto Cifer (Post 5222582)
The dirt, the walk, the trip; all made me happy. Escaping the lonliness of that castle was both healthy and a good way to alleviate what little sadness i had inside me. Ascending the gravel stairs, i tilted my head upward slightly, only to see black clouds manifest rather quickly. Slightly altering the position of my bangs, a strong wind arose suddenly, carrying my straw with it, as it drifted across my elegant black hair. My beautiful blue kimono seemed to follow the wind, revealing it's "wear and tear" from prior confrontations. Passing the threshold of the shrine entrance, a dense spritual pressure equal to my own alerted my pesquisa with a small jolt. "It must be nothing..." My assumption was more than wrong; it was naive. After kneeling and praying, i gently shook the shrine bell. Turning to walk the other way, i was abruptly greeted by an old friend. "Well now, it certainly has been awhile, my friend." To my suprise, my opponent engaged me immediately. Leaping high off the ground, i evaded his first strike, as i instantly placed my left hand upon my blades hilt, pushing upward on the golden guard, all the while gathering immense spiritual energy upon the blade.



Quickly, i sent forth a mass of energy from my blade, by releasing my beautiful blade from it's sheathe. The collision for these two, resulted in a minor explosion. Upon the collision, i appeared on the ground, by an unexpected sonido. Lifting my blade high in the air, i quickly utilized the storm to my advantage. Condensing more and more spiritual energy upon the blade, a bolt of light quickly struck my sword. Just then, i condensed the immense power into a stream. Thrusting my blade toward your vicinity, i sent forth two consecutive bolts of lighting. The immense attack had a special homming ability; it would stop until it hit it's target. Both were aimed for your abdomen, in an attempt to fry your body. These attacks would also result in a rather large explosion, since the initial energy is so unstable. Keeping my blade steady, i erected a barrier to repel the inevitable explosion.

*when the bolts of lightning are fired at me I slam my scythe into the ground and jump a few steps back and the scythe will act as a lightning rod and the lightning will enter the ground without reaching me and there'll be no explosion. I'll then sonido at supersonic speeds and shoot forward grabbing and my scythe instantly triples in size and power as I add reiatsu into the blade and I'll swing it at you and it'll smash through your barrier and attempt to cut your in half right under your rib cage*

Makoto Cifer 07-04-2011 07:54 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by assassin (Post 5223190)
*when the bolts of lightning are fired at me I slam my scythe into the ground and jump a few steps back and the scythe will act as a lightning rod and the lightning will enter the ground without reaching me and there'll be no explosion. I'll then sonido at supersonic speeds and shoot forward grabbing and my scythe instantly triples in size and power as I add reiatsu into the blade and I'll swing it at you and it'll smash through your barrier and attempt to cut your in half right under your rib cage*

Bland, quiet and angery; those were the aspects that filled my conscious. All the while you wated your time evading my initial attack, i gathered immense spiritual energy upon my blade as it glimmered in the light of a thunderclap that had recently struck the vicinity. Placing my left hand upon my blades sheathe, i pushed upward on the golden guard. Ignoring my useless barrier, i ducked low to the ground, letting my forehead touch the gravel, while the scythe passed over my head, evading your scythe completely. Immediately, i thrusted my arm outward, rolling across the ground, before erecting my body once my feet touched the ground.


"Rain. It's raining."


Rushing toward your vicinity, all the while keeping my other hand upon my swords red hilt. Reaching a moderate distance to which a sword could reach, extended my sword's pummel for your spine by quickly pulling the blade from it's sheathe slightly; in attempt to shatter the bone upon contact. This strike's velocity and speed were also enhanced exponentially by utilizing immense spirit energy. Quickly sheathing my blade, i release it once more from it's sheathe, aiming a horizontal slash for your waist, attempting to cleave you in two.

assassin 07-05-2011 12:15 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
*When you swing your blade at me I'll back step to dodge it. I then compress my reiatsu into my right hand and catch your blade in my hand and grip it tightly, the reiatsu in my hand will prevent any damage greater than a light scratch and prevent any lightning from inside your blade to enter my body. Now that I'm holding your blade I'll then compress more reiatsu into my scythe so it's blade is now 5x larger than normal and 5x as powerful and I'll swing it at your neck where a hierro is non-existant, aiming to cut off your head*

Makoto Cifer 07-06-2011 02:08 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by assassin (Post 5225069)
*When you swing your blade at me I'll back step to dodge it. I then compress my reiatsu into my right hand and catch your blade in my hand and grip it tightly, the reiatsu in my hand will prevent any damage greater than a light scratch and prevent any lightning from inside your blade to enter my body. Now that I'm holding your blade I'll then compress more reiatsu into my scythe so it's blade is now 5x larger than normal and 5x as powerful and I'll swing it at your neck where a hierro is non-existant, aiming to cut off your head*

"The rain, it's....." A slight sneer came across my face, coming to the realization that i couldn't free me blade. In order to evade your scythe, i ducked quite low to the ground, letting the blade pass over me. Immeditely, i curled into a ball, rolling backward, all the while a strand of spiritual energy was attached to the end of my blades' pummel. Regaining my footing, i lightly tapped the strand. Just then, the strand duplicated mutiple times, surrounding you from all sides and angles. Jerking the strand, i attempted to fillet your body. The speed and trajectory of these strands were manipulated by my spirit energy; therefore they will not stop until they hit thier target...

assassin 07-06-2011 03:56 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Makoto Cifer (Post 5228672)
"The rain, it's....." A slight sneer came across my face, coming to the realization that i couldn't free me blade. In order to evade your scythe, i ducked quite low to the ground, letting the blade pass over me. Immeditely, i curled into a ball, rolling backward, all the while a strand of spiritual energy was attached to the end of my blades' pummel. Regaining my footing, i lightly tapped the strand. Just then, the strand duplicated mutiple times, surrounding you from all sides and angles. Jerking the strand, i attempted to fillet your body. The speed and trajectory of these strands were manipulated by my spirit energy; therefore they will not stop until they hit thier target...

*sigh* please stop wasting my time and die...
*I release the reiatsu in my blade to fire in all directions and take out every single strand surrounding me. I then use more of my reiatsu to crush your sword into dust. I then fire a cero at you at supersonic speeds*

Makoto Cifer 07-06-2011 04:52 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by assassin (Post 5229013)
*sigh* please stop wasting my time and die...
*I release the reiatsu in my blade to fire in all directions and take out every single strand surrounding me. I then use more of my reiatsu to crush your sword into dust. I then fire a cero at you at supersonic speeds*

Jerking the strand, i broke my blade in two. Catching my blade by the hilt, i gazed at the blade. Just then, i erected a condensed barrier of spirit energy, thereby repeling your cero.


"My dear friend, i'm going to kill you. Let's just say i hold a grudge from the past that needs settling."


My bland expressions do not falter, until after letting a diminutive smirk come across my face. Remaining stagnant, i do not utter a sound; i slowly eased my beautiful blade into it's sheathe, while an immense red right revealed itself abruptly from my body.






"Show your Sanity....Vampiro!!" With those words that were spoken, several small torrents of spiritual energy were sent forth in all directions, therefore counter balancing your own spirit energy, resulting in a widespread explosion that leveled several floors of the castle. As the deris settled, i stood upon the rubble, perched procariously, all the while letting a luminious aura enclose my vicinity. A pair of thin white jeans' stood out' amongst my transformation, while a blood-colored luster enclosed my retna:Luster Vision. Two luminious fangs slightly protruded from my lips, complimenting my face. A rather large scar that reached from my right coller bone down to to waist revealed my pale, slander, and shirtless body. The reminsice of my hollow bone fragments had materialized a lower jaw upon my bottom lip that covered my chin and reached to my cheek bones; upon my bottom lip were two large fangs that slightly obscured my upper lip, while two small horns protruded from behind my elegant black hair. All the while, i gathered massive amounts of spirit energy to soles of my feet. Clenching my fingers, i revealed my claws that seemed to pulse my spiritual energy, all the while i used my spirit energy to launch myself high in the air.


Clenching my hands, two small slits' opened upon my viens near my wrist. Just then, i clenched my hands once more, as a small, but leathel torrent of blood was sent forth from both slits' in my wrists'. This blood will corrode flesh and bone, even spirit energy, if the blood remains for a prolonged period of time. With the first stream, i released a concentrated burst of spiritual enegy, resulting in the blood to manifest into a light rain. Halting for a breif moment, i sent forth a condensed stream of blood toward your vicinity. This blood held immense acidic capaility's, in which will corrode flesh, tissue and bone instantly. This stream of blood will also slice and pentrate through most defences and hard or dense substances; even metal. For i enhanced the pressure of this substance which allows it to do so. In addition, this stream of blood's trajectory is manipulated by my spirit energy; it will not stop until it had hit it's target. Sangre 'Acida!


"I will kill you. The past may be the past, but i wont let it go until i drive you to your knee's...!!!"


Approximately four seconds after i had rambled slightly, i sent forth an abrupt black cero that held a white aura about it. However this cero was larger in size than most and held 5X's more destructive force. The cero also held a special homming ability; it wouldn't stop until it hit it's target. Cero Oscurous Just then, the slits' on my wrist had begun to release a fixed amount of blood; approximately one liter in five seconds. Before wasting valuble time, i began to pivote at high LV's of speed, while in the air. Immediately, hundreds of hardened blood shards were sent forth from my vicinity. However, my blood was hardened by a unique chemical that in released by my rain while in my resurrection form. These shards are propelled by my spirit energy. Each individual shard has the destructive capability to crush a piller upon contact. Not only that, this chemical is highly posioness. In the scenerio that one shard made contact or made a slight laceration, this chemical would enter your body; which has the ability to corrode flesh, tissue, and cells. You would die within minutes or even seconds. These shards also have a homming ability; they will not stop until they have hit their target. I continued my onslaught for several seconds until halting gracfully. Lluvia de Sangre'


Following my onslaught, i appeared directly in front of you, aiming my claws downward for your skull, in an attempt to rip your body to shreds. Pivoting on my right foot, i slid across the ground, making my way around to your back, all the while attempting to shred your body. Enhancing my claws with overflowing spirit energy, they're propelled at speeds equalavent to a sonido.

junchurikioftheleaf 07-06-2011 04:55 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
good to see your still as ruthless as always assassin. i made the right choice in appointing you as dreadnought

Makoto Cifer 07-06-2011 04:58 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by junchurikioftheleaf (Post 5229201)
good to see your still as ruthless as always assassin. i made the right choice in appointing you as dreadnought

Have you added me to your chart of madness? Or is my position already predetermined??

junchurikioftheleaf 07-06-2011 04:59 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Makoto Cifer (Post 5229211)
Have you added me to your chart of madness? Or is my position already predetermined??

im still working on that.

Noctis Arashi 07-06-2011 05:03 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Chart of madness?

assassin 07-06-2011 05:05 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Makoto Cifer (Post 5229195)
Jerking the strand, i broke my blade in two. Catching my blade by the hilt, i gazed at the blade. Just then, i erected a condensed barrier of spirit energy, thereby repeling your cero.


"My dear friend, i'm going to kill you. Let's just say i hold a grudge from the past that needs settling."


My bland expressions do not falter, until after letting a diminutive smirk come across my face. Remaining stagnant, i do not utter a sound; i slowly eased my beautiful blade into it's sheathe, while an immense red right revealed itself abruptly from my body.






"Show your Sanity....Vampiro!!" With those words that were spoken, several small torrents of spiritual energy were sent forth in all directions, therefore counter balancing your own spirit energy, resulting in a widespread explosion that leveled several floors of the castle. As the deris settled, i stood upon the rubble, perched procariously, all the while letting a luminious aura enclose my vicinity. A pair of thin white jeans' stood out' amongst my transformation, while a blood-colored luster enclosed my retna:Luster Vision. Two luminious fangs slightly protruded from my lips, complimenting my face. A rather large scar that reached from my right coller bone down to to waist revealed my pale, slander, and shirtless body. The reminsice of my hollow bone fragments had materialized a lower jaw upon my bottom lip that covered my chin and reached to my cheek bones; upon my bottom lip were two large fangs that slightly obscured my upper lip, while two small horns protruded from behind my elegant black hair. All the while, i gathered massive amounts of spirit energy to soles of my feet. Clenching my fingers, i revealed my claws that seemed to pulse my spiritual energy, all the while i used my spirit energy to launch myself high in the air.


Clenching my hands, two small slits' opened upon my viens near my wrist. Just then, i clenched my hands once more, as a small, but leathel torrent of blood was sent forth from both slits' in my wrists'. This blood will corrode flesh and bone, even spirit energy, if the blood remains for a prolonged period of time. With the first stream, i released a concentrated burst of spiritual enegy, resulting in the blood to manifest into a light rain. Halting for a breif moment, i sent forth a condensed stream of blood toward your vicinity. This blood held immense acidic capaility's, in which will corrode flesh, tissue and bone instantly. This stream of blood will also slice and pentrate through most defences and hard or dense substances; even metal. For i enhanced the pressure of this substance which allows it to do so. In addition, this stream of blood's trajectory is manipulated by my spirit energy; it will not stop until it had hit it's target. Sangre 'Acida!


"I will kill you. The past may be the past, but i wont let it go until i drive you to your knee's...!!!"


Approximately four seconds after i had rambled slightly, i sent forth an abrupt black cero that held a white aura about it. However this cero was larger in size than most and held 5X's more destructive force. The cero also held a special homming ability; it wouldn't stop until it hit it's target. Cero Oscurous Just then, the slits' on my wrist had begun to release a fixed amount of blood; approximately one liter in five seconds. Before wasting valuble time, i began to pivote at high LV's of speed, while in the air. Immediately, hundreds of hardened blood shards were sent forth from my vicinity. However, my blood was hardened by a unique chemical that in released by my rain while in my resurrection form. These shards are propelled by my spirit energy. Each individual shard has the destructive capability to crush a piller upon contact. Not only that, this chemical is highly posioness. In the scenerio that one shard made contact or made a slight laceration, this chemical would enter your body; which has the ability to corrode flesh, tissue, and cells. You would die within minutes or even seconds. These shards also have a homming ability; they will not stop until they have hit their target. I continued my onslaught for several seconds until halting gracfully. Lluvia de Sangre'


Following my onslaught, i appeared directly in front of you, aiming my claws downward for your skull, in an attempt to rip your body to shreds. Pivoting on my right foot, i slid across the ground, making my way around to your back, all the while attempting to shred your body. Enhancing my claws with overflowing spirit energy, they're propelled at speeds equalavent to a sonido.

question...how can you jerk your blade away with a thread that's been destroyed?
Quote:

Originally Posted by junchurikioftheleaf (Post 5229201)
good to see your still as ruthless as always assassin. i made the right choice in appointing you as dreadnought

yes you did...and I'll probably be their leader in not to long.

junchurikioftheleaf 07-06-2011 05:06 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi (Post 5229226)
Chart of madness?

it's just a name really it's not an actual chart. it basically depicts what defines people under madness.

blank version
Spoiler:
I'm your messiah
I am the angel
I am madness
I am the word
I am the law
I am holding truth
I am the key
I am the door
I'm the Good Man
I'm the Dark Man
Redeemer
Deceiver
The demon
The man in black
I am the ageless
I am "Legion"
I'm your lord
I will bring terror
I'm a demon in disguise
Lies beyond the downfall
Touched by the Crimson King
Touched by the Saviour

Noctis Arashi 07-06-2011 05:06 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Meh...This fights ok. I find in funny cause assasin is just doing short little counters to mako's berlin walls of texts.

Noctis Arashi 07-06-2011 05:07 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by junchurikioftheleaf (Post 5229238)
it's just a name really it's not an actual chart. it basically depicts what defines people under madness.

blank version
Spoiler:
I'm your messiah
I am the angel
I am madness
I am the word
I am the law
I am holding truth
I am the key
I am the door
I'm the Good Man
I'm the Dark Man
Redeemer
Deceiver
The demon
The man in black
I am the ageless
I am "Legion"
I'm your lord
I will bring terror
I'm a demon in disguise
Lies beyond the downfall
Touched by the Crimson King
Touched by the Saviour

Now I'm lost.

junchurikioftheleaf 07-06-2011 05:08 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi (Post 5229242)
Now I'm lost.

that's because you don't understand madness enough.

Noctis Arashi 07-06-2011 05:09 PM

Re: Assassin Vs. Makoto
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by junchurikioftheleaf (Post 5229246)
that's because you don't understand madness enough.

No. I literally , don't understand what you just said.

junchurikioftheleaf 07-06-2011 05:12 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi (Post 5229255)
No. I literally , don't understand what you just said.

exactly. because you don't comprehend what i can.


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