06-09-2011, 06:49 PM
Ya, this is about the zombie apocalypse!!!
06-09-2011, 06:49 PM
I sat in my house with my best friend Andrew C. Ethans, or ACE, as I called him. He is a short kid, black hair, pot belly, and always wore stripped tshirts. "Duece...I'm bored of watching Pirates Of The Caribbean...lets go do something." he said. "Well what do you want to do?" I asked. ACE stared at me, "Well, lets go and play pirates...like we always do." He stated in a 'duh' kind of voice. He stood up and walked to the door, looked at me, and swung his head telling me to get up and come out. I waited to stand up until he went outside, and when I did, I almost fell over, because I was just "pooped" as the kool kidz say. I walked outside and smelled something weird...it smelled like musty and wet. "Oh well..." I sighed as I walked over to ACE.
He looked at me, a short kid, who was just a little out of shape, love handles and chubby cheeks kind type of shape. I had short blonde hair, and walked like I had something in my butt, sort of like a waddle...as I walked over to the trampoline and got on, ACE said to me, "Do you smell that? That...I don't know how to explain it...its weird though...do you smell it?" he asked.
"Ya, I smell that...it's weird. I was just thinking about that..." I replied. There was a mutual thought between us of "Well, thats weird, but lets just drop it." I climbed on the tramp and said, "Alright Captain ACE, where are we going today?" "To find us some booty of course! I've heard that there is a marvelous treasure at an island about...5.4 nauts north!" he said with a pirate accent. "Aye, Captain!" I yelled as I grabbed the imaginary steering wheel. I thought to myself as I was doing this, "This is how it always is, he is the captain and I am the first mate. That's why he's Ace and I'm Duece..." I looked at ACE and saw him grab a imaginary telescope out of his pocket and look for land. As he made a circle with his hand and spun about, he saw some girls on the street to the right of us. "Booty is among us!" He whispered to me. That is our code for, "THERE ARE OTHER PEOPLE (normally girls) HERE, THROW ALL OF YOUR WOODEN SWORDS OFF OF THE TRAMP AND PRETEND TO BE COOL!!!" So that is exactly what I did. When we had both gotten rid of our weapons we both sat down non-shalantly and stared at the girls.
They looked over at us and, being the wanna be player that I am, I waved at them and gave them a wink. They both sorta giggled and then ran off. As soon as they passed in front of the house so we where out of view, we jumped of the tramp and got our weapons back on. Suddenly the TV inside my house, that we left on got really loud. We just heard a voice from the TV say, "Stay inside your house...toxic waste...temporary...weapons...Shaqell O'neal...real..zombie." ACE and I looked at each other and had another telepathic talk saying "Lets go inside" so we did.
Now you have to know this, ACE and I have been best friends for all 14 years of my life. We have all the same classes together in school, and we always have. There is barely anything either of us ever do without each other. So that is how we know each other so well.
So we both walked inside and looked at the TV and this is what we saw. A reporter on the TV with the words "BREAKING NEWS!!! TOXIC WASTE CAUSES 'ZOMBIE'" in the background we see a green human looking around. The "thing" has a bunch of holes in its skin, and looks anorexic in the places where he was it. Its face is pulled out, and its eyes are bloodshot. The reporter points toward the thing and says, "This thing right here, is the zombie." The zombie looks at the reporter for a second, then at his finger. Suddenly the zombie looks strait up, opens up its mouth and detaches its jaw and makes a blood curdling screech. Then the zombie lowers its head and looks strait at the reporter, its lower jaw now dangling right above the boob line and its eyes now completely red. The zombie then charges the reporter. It has insane speed. The reporter doesn't notice. The zombie, now about 10 feet away, leaps into the air and lands directly on the reporter, making the reporter fall to the ground. The zombie then grabs onto the reporters head, and rips it off. The zombie sticks its hand strait up where the reporters neck was and rips out his brain. The zombie then stuffs the brain in his mouth. I watch in terror as juices ooze out of the zombie's mouth. The zombie then takes the reporters head and jams it back on his neck. The reporter's neck then heals up in some places and he turns green, and his eyes go bloodshot.
I sit there watching the grotesque thing look around. I then suddenly hear "OH ;);););)!!!!!" from behind the camera. THE CAMERA MAN!! I totally forgot he was there! He drops the camera and you can see him start to run away. The zombie looks at him and begins to chase him down. He lands on the camera man and performs the same ritual he did on the reporter. The reporter then looks at the camera lens and then runs over to where the camera man is. ACE then runs into the bathroom and throws up. I just sit there, dropped jaw, about to cry.
06-09-2011, 06:59 PM
Awesome! A Zombie Apocalypse story! I literally just got done reading a book about that about five minutes ago. xD It's called "The Enemy".
Anyways, it look's pretty cool so far. ^^ I have a strange obession with this particular topic and I'm intrested to find out what happens to "ACE and Duece" as this now obvious Zombie Apocalypse begins to arise. Since it's about a diaster, make sure there are lots of unexpected things throughout the story!
I'm excited to find out what happens! Keep it going! :)
06-09-2011, 08:05 PM
this ish really good! write more...
06-15-2011, 11:59 AM
Might wanna spruce up on the grammar and such, but it's good otherwise.
O_OWOAH that was just.. O_O <3
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