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garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 06:26 PM
-yawns-

Luna Mikazuki
07-06-2009, 06:29 PM
*claps* I LOVE IT!!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 06:30 PM
thats sad and good write more!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 06:31 PM
poor lycans they were exiled...:(

vampire Lycan
07-06-2009, 06:31 PM
wow^^ sad but cool^^

garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 06:46 PM
yesh thank you i will keep writing

spoiler-it might be sad ok

and i will post one chapter(or page)lol a day

you will have to what till tomorrow for the next installment

Anbu-Phoenix
07-06-2009, 07:09 PM
*claps slowly* great job madam gww

garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 07:10 PM
thank you anbu :mrgreen:

vampire Lycan
07-06-2009, 07:34 PM
cool^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6666

Minoru
07-06-2009, 07:36 PM
i gives it a 9.7/10 cuz i can and its awesome

Yajyuu Mikazuki
07-06-2009, 07:39 PM
That was good but you really gotta do more or i will be a saaaahad panda

ryanhidden inshadow
07-06-2009, 07:49 PM
i liked it baby its good

garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 07:53 PM
i liked it baby its good
yay!!:mrgreen:

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-06-2009, 07:57 PM
Nice work GWW not bad 9/10, I got to start typing up Chapter 4 for my book sometime.

garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 07:59 PM
Nice work GWW not bad 9/10, I got to start typing up Chapter 4 for my book sometime.
cool ok

Vidda Hatake
07-06-2009, 10:39 PM
It stops on a 'sad' note, but leaves many possibilities wide open!! Great job, gww!!!!

garraswerewolf
07-06-2009, 10:41 PM
It stops on a 'sad' note, but leaves many possibilities wide open!! Great job, gww!!!!
omg thank you vidda-san

vampire Lycan
07-07-2009, 09:42 AM
i can't wait to hear more^^ 9.9 out of 10^^

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 11:10 AM
same as Vl except 10/10!!!^.^

CutieSakura
07-07-2009, 01:11 PM
Awesome story!!
But sad,it rocked!!!
U should be a novelist!!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-07-2009, 01:17 PM
agreed with cutiesakura!

garraswerewolf
07-07-2009, 01:33 PM
Awesome story!!
But sad,it rocked!!!
U should be a novelist!!
thank you ima try to get the chapter one in today

garraswerewolf
07-07-2009, 06:15 PM
-yawns again-

Luna Mikazuki
07-07-2009, 06:23 PM
I love it!!!

Ryo Uchiha08
07-07-2009, 06:30 PM
its really good!! 8/10! only 8/10 because you didn't use " marks. and you made some other puncuation errors. but still very good!!!

Luna Mikazuki
07-07-2009, 06:32 PM
WHo cares if she didn't make " " marks


I say 10/10 or more if I could...cuz what really matters is that the story conveys feeling....and I felt it

vampire Lycan
07-07-2009, 09:13 PM
WHo cares if she didn't make " " marks


I say 10/10 or more if I could...cuz what really matters is that the story conveys feeling....and I felt it
you said that because you are in the story :lol: still 9.7/10

Vidda Hatake
07-08-2009, 01:19 AM
Ok, now I'm definitely hooked!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!! Thanks!!;)

vampire Lycan
07-08-2009, 07:47 AM
when is the next one :lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 08:23 AM
how high can we go?10? i give it 10 billion and 1 XD

vampire Lycan
07-08-2009, 08:43 AM
:lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 09:48 AM
yes i was supposed to get laughs!!

Minoru
07-08-2009, 06:49 PM
its really good!! 8/10! only 8/10 because you didn't use " marks. and you made some other puncuation errors. but still very good!!!
yes that is what i said before because at times it can get a little confusing without them but i still say 9.7/10. I hope the next part is coming soon and i hope its just as good if not better! Thanks for posting your stories!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:58 PM
agreed with D-bro!*tackles hiim* thats for getting out ur pup's boyfriend dogfood first!

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:00 PM
great job GWW i can't wait for the next chapter hey are you gonna include more people from the blood village
like VL and 007 and stuff cuz i think you putting luna in there was awesome :D

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:03 PM
agreed with D-bro!*tackles hiim* (thats for getting out ur pup's boyfriend dogfood first!
boyfriend????Gekido is my awesome wolf pup u shooda stole the sandwhich and i didnt kno u wer gonna steal it in the 1st place!)
I still say 9.7/10 but i liked this part better and i wanna be in it maybe after all i am a lycous GWW!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 07:04 PM
on one of ur earlier posts it said amy was ur pup*confused*

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:09 PM
on one of ur earlier posts it said amy was ur pup*confused*
no just look at my siggy

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:25 PM
lol yay for yawning

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:31 PM
Great job gww

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 07:32 PM
Good work, I like it.

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:33 PM
Good work, I like it.
omg yay lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:34 PM
Yes great work GWW

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 07:34 PM
Yeah, the only real downsides are the grammatical things, but since I can understand what the story is saying it's good.

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:38 PM
Yeah, the only real downsides are the grammatical things, but since I can understand what the story is saying it's good.
well its my first book

and like the spelling?

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:38 PM
This is my most favorite chapter so far i like the somewhat sudden plot twist and I give this chapter a 9.8/10. Even though it doesnt have the quotation marks(which doesnt reely bother me anymore)I can still tell what you are saying and I like the lead-on of mentioning the guy out the window running in the forest,Good job!

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:38 PM
Yes great work GWW
thanks :mrgreen:

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:39 PM
10/10

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 07:39 PM
well its my first book

and like the spelling?


Ehh there's some words that are off on spelling but ... you can understand what there saying and unless you are publishing a real book it's not important.

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:40 PM
This is my most favorite chapter so far i like the somewhat sudden plot twist and I give this chapter a 9.8/10
what that i become chikage or the guy in the forest lol

thanks

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:40 PM
Ehh there's some words that are off on spelling but ... you can understand what there saying and unless you are publishing a real book it's not important.
i would have a editor for that lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:41 PM
and she can't use MS Word so there's no spell check

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 07:41 PM
Haha yeah, and I think he means the chikage part ... with you suddenly being Chikage and me saying sure whatever haha.

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:43 PM
what that i become chikage or the guy in the forest lol

thanks

Chikage! You are welcome(and relook at my post i edited)

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:44 PM
Haha yeah, and I think he means the chikage part ... with you suddenly being Chikage and me saying sure whatever haha.
Exactly!

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:45 PM
Both! You are welcome(and relook at my post i edited)
ya im not gunna say who or why hes there just yet

Minoru
07-08-2009, 07:47 PM
ya im not gunna say who or why hes there just yet
cool thats why its called a lead-on

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:47 PM
i know who's in the forest :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 07:49 PM
i know who's in the forest :lol:
your not the only one lol

shhh its a secret till it happens ROTFL

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 07:57 PM
I also know who's in the forest.

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 07:59 PM
we should make "the lycans new moon we know hwos in the forest club.....SPOILER"

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 08:01 PM
we should make "the lycans new moon we know hwos in the forest club.....SPOILER"
omg stop anbu not funny

lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 08:03 PM
Okayz

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 08:13 PM
chapter two is back on page 2

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 08:18 PM
Gha i'm so anxious for the next chapter

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 08:19 PM
Gha i'm so anxious for the next chapter
wont be up till tomorrow lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 08:20 PM
ahh crap oh well :mrgreen:

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 08:29 PM
You know tomorrow is in 30 minutes here ... hmmm

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 08:35 PM
its in 1 hour and 30 minutes here hmmmm

garraswerewolf
07-08-2009, 08:39 PM
it will be posted later tomorrow

i havent even started writing it yet i have the title thats it lol

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-08-2009, 09:14 PM
I don't believe you ^_^

Anbu-Phoenix
07-08-2009, 09:15 PM
iz made a story

http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?p=511087#post511087

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 06:53 AM
very mysterious. i wonder who the guy is........9.8/10

Minoru
07-09-2009, 03:09 PM
i cant wait fer the next chapter today XD!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 03:52 PM
same!!

mangagirl
07-09-2009, 03:59 PM
i love it!!!

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 05:16 PM
yay.........it is coming^^

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 05:20 PM
i can't wait for it to come out...............but intill then you can all read my story its in ma siggy

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 05:33 PM
it will be in about a hour

Minoru
07-09-2009, 05:39 PM
it will be in about a hour
YAY thnx fer the update!

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 05:42 PM
thanks vl

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 05:51 PM
i am talking to her so i knows^^ your welcome^^

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 05:51 PM
in IM

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 06:31 PM
heheh

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-09-2009, 06:38 PM
Pretty good I like that you added the quotes it makes it easier to read.

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 06:39 PM
Awesome^^ it is more detailed and uses " " marks^^ and you got 2 more people in there^^ 10/10 for this one

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 06:40 PM
Pretty good I like that you added the quotes it makes it easier to read.
yup thanks :mrgreen:

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 06:42 PM
Awesome^^ it is more detailed and uses " " marks^^ and you got 2 more people in there^^ 10/10 for this one
yay omg thank you

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 06:47 PM
awesome job GWW

vampire Lycan
07-09-2009, 06:49 PM
:lol: i can't wait for more

abby750
07-09-2009, 06:50 PM
is so coooool

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 06:57 PM
i can't wait for more

Minoru
07-09-2009, 07:38 PM
that was reely good because the "" marks i give you a 9.9/10 it was reely good but i liked the last chapter a little better but still reely good!

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 07:38 PM
i know a little of whats going to happen in the next chapter and its gonna be SWEET

Luna Mikazuki
07-09-2009, 07:40 PM
It is great Tenshi Ane-Chan!!!

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 07:49 PM
that was reely good because the "" marks i give you a 9.9/10 it was reely good but i liked the last chapter a little better but still reely good!
thanks you should go back and see i fixed the spelling and marks there as well

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 08:12 PM
im so hyped up for the next chapter

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 08:51 PM
this must be a long chapter

ryanhidden inshadow
07-09-2009, 08:54 PM
it really great baby keep it up :cool::cool:

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 08:57 PM
this must be a long chapter
i havent even started writing

garraswerewolf
07-09-2009, 08:58 PM
it really great baby keep it up :cool::cool:
omg im so happy now :mrgreen:

Anbu-Phoenix
07-09-2009, 08:59 PM
i havent even started writing
0.o oh that makes sence:lol:

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 05:42 PM
that was a lot to delete

Luna Mikazuki
07-10-2009, 05:46 PM
I love it!! (again)

vampire Lycan
07-10-2009, 05:59 PM
wow^^ scary at the end but cool^^

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 06:06 PM
i dont get it hows it scary

vampire Lycan
07-10-2009, 06:09 PM
PEOPLE ARE DIEING AND DISAPPEARING BY UNKNOWN FORCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*runs in circles*

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-10-2009, 06:21 PM
freaky and awesome dude! err dudette! keep writing!

vampire Lycan
07-10-2009, 06:24 PM
^^........i is in the story^^

Maikeru D. Shinigami
07-10-2009, 06:25 PM
Ooooh Death ^_^

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 06:27 PM
freaky and awesome dude! err dudette! keep writing!
dudes fine

but yesh im a girl lol

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 06:28 PM
PEOPLE ARE DIEING AND DISAPPEARING BY UNKNOWN FORCES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*runs in circles*
omg calm down mungo lol

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-10-2009, 06:40 PM
VL is mungo?cool!

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 06:45 PM
VL is mungo?cool!
yesh he is lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 06:53 PM
yay that was great and im in it :mrgreen:

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 07:23 PM
yay that was great and im in it :mrgreen:
no are you lol


was it good

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 07:25 PM
it was great one of my favorite chapters :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 07:26 PM
it was great one of my favorite chapters :lol:
whats the other

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 07:26 PM
i really liked chapter 2

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 07:39 PM
i really liked chapter 2
really lol

thats cool

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 07:54 PM
yeah im working on the next chapter of my story

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 07:56 PM
thats cool so am i

i have half of it done already

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 08:00 PM
same here im at the part where you come in :mrgreen:

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 08:05 PM
same here im at the part where you come in :mrgreen:
cool lol

thats awesome

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 08:23 PM
alright its up

ryanhidden inshadow
07-10-2009, 08:26 PM
that was really good baby i must say your a really good story teller baby

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 08:29 PM
that was really good baby i must say your a really good story teller baby
thank you

am i really

ryanhidden inshadow
07-10-2009, 09:55 PM
thank you

am i really

nope just thought id say that.......... of cores you are well at least i think so

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 09:56 PM
hey chapter 3 and 4 of my story are up

ryanhidden inshadow
07-10-2009, 09:58 PM
hey chapter 3 and 4 of my story are up
were at

garraswerewolf
07-10-2009, 10:00 PM
nope just thought id say that.......... of cores you are well at least i think so
awww

thank you :mrgreen:

mes thinks your great to

Anbu-Phoenix
07-10-2009, 10:01 PM
were at
its in ma siggy "blazing blood"

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 05:40 PM
it is almost here^^

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 05:41 PM
hey mungo

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 05:45 PM
hey zipp :lol:

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 05:58 PM
.......................

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 06:00 PM
sry went to take a small shower why did you call me zipp

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 06:01 PM
i remember your IM said Zippy or something like that.....i think that was you lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 06:03 PM
Ziggy its Ziggy :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 06:34 PM
-loves tieberuse-

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 06:40 PM
that was great :D

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 06:50 PM
that was great :D
thank you anbu

was it to sad or what?

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 06:56 PM
very sad im glad you hit him is he supposed to be anyone on the forum :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 06:58 PM
very sad im glad you hit him is he supposed to be anyone on the forum :lol:
no hes just someone i made up lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-11-2009, 07:01 PM
alright well ima gonna be finishing up the next chapter of mine

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 07:02 PM
i would have killed him "cry"

Yoshi-Chan
07-11-2009, 07:02 PM
i like it!!!

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 07:03 PM
i like it!!!
thank you :mrgreen:

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 07:05 PM
i would have killed him "cry"
well mungo you liked it


it was a looooong wait huh

Luna Mikazuki
07-11-2009, 07:10 PM
Awwww it is beautiful!!!
Nice job Big Sister!!

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 07:12 PM
Awwww it is beautiful!!!
Nice job Big Sister!!
thank you

Luna Mikazuki
07-11-2009, 07:16 PM
thank you
No prob!:cool:;):D:mrgreen::!:

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 07:26 PM
i love it

ryanhidden inshadow
07-11-2009, 09:53 PM
its sweet and cute in a way

garraswerewolf
07-11-2009, 10:22 PM
its sweet and cute in a way
in a way lol

vampire Lycan
07-11-2009, 10:30 PM
:lol:

ryanhidden inshadow
07-12-2009, 07:05 PM
baby were are you

Luna Mikazuki
07-12-2009, 07:06 PM
Where is Big Sister Millie?!?!?!??!!

vampire Lycan
07-12-2009, 08:48 PM
she is almost done

garraswerewolf
07-12-2009, 09:00 PM
night

Luna Mikazuki
07-12-2009, 09:06 PM
Nice!!!

vampire Lycan
07-12-2009, 09:10 PM
cool......

ryanhidden inshadow
07-12-2009, 09:34 PM
that was great baby but i want more now i need to know what happens next lol :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-12-2009, 09:42 PM
that was great baby but i want more now i need to know what happens next lol :lol:
lol yay im glad you liked it

Anbu-Phoenix
07-12-2009, 10:00 PM
CHAPTER SIX
THE NIGHTS SHADOW


Kanna woke up with tie laying next to her.She rubbed his back and he looked up at her and yawned.Kanna got up and got dressed.When she turned around and looked at at tie she noticed that he had grown about four inches and gained about five pounds."Its my blood,"said kanna worried.She walked over and rubbed his head then left to the office which was across the hall.As kanna sat down something caught her attention.She was staring out the window into the eyes of the man she had seen at the base of the tree before.Kanna hurried to the window that she now left open for the wind to come through."Hey you what are you doing,"yelled kanna."Why cont you come and find out,"yelled the man back as he walked back into the forest.Kanna turned around to find luna standing in the door way with tie standing next to her."Dont go he will kill you all the storys say people go in there but they dont come out,"yelled luna grabbing kannas arm."No hes probably not that bad,growled kanna so luna would let go.Kanna made her way downstairs and out the front door and around the house.Just then as she was about to enter the forest luna yelled from the office window"its a full moon he will be able to change."Kanna smiled up at luna and ran into the forest.Kanna sniffed the air hoping to pinpoint where the man went but all she could smell was the forest around her.She went in alittle farther to where the trees started to grow closer together.As she stumbled through the thicket she could sense she was being followed.Kanna stopped walking and listened but she could still no tell where he was.After a half a day of searching and coming up with nothing she turnd around and he was standing no more then two feet away from her.There was just enough light for kanna to see what he really looked like.He was tall roughly built and had dark forest green eyes he looked strong and had a good weight to have lived in a forest his whole life.He also had a feraless about him that kanna found intriguing.The man smiled and said"so your the bloods new kage you dont seem to be like the rest of the villagers but i think i know why."Kanna backed up another foot or so ready to fight if she need to.Just then she realized that she left hothgar at the house."So what if i am the new kage,and you know why?"kanna blurted out.Kanna hated to feel cornered and to her she felt cornered she also knew that he knew the woods better then she did so running was out.He started to circle her as he did she noticed that he had started to grow fur."Great hes going to attack me,"thought kanna.As she started to talk he held up his hand and said"you are not a vampire or a werewolf or for that matter human."He was almost fully changed when kanna asked trying to defuse the situation"who are you?""My names not important right now,"he said.Kanna now looked at the werewolf infront of her.In his werewolf form his eyes were still green his claws were black and his medium length fur was dark forest green so he blended well in to the back ground of the forest.He weighed about two hundred pounds and was atleast five inches taller.Kanna said"i dont want to fight you."But by the time she had said that he was already on her he picked her up and threw her.She hit a nearby tree.She staggered to her feet and growled which stopped him from moving.He looked at kanna who was now changing herself.As her fur started to come in she grabbed her face.All he could see through her fingers was that all the brown gold in her eyes was slowly being replaced by black.Her fur was the color gold with dark gold streaks running through it her claws were black and she grew atleast fifteen inches taller and weighed about five hundred and fifty pounds.Do to the extreme amount of weight she feel to her hands and looked more wolfish.He stood looking at the beast that snarled at him.He attacked one more time by attack her neck.She grabbed him and pulled him off slamming him to the ground.He yelped in pain as he did kanna felt like something hit her she let go of him then looked at him confused.He got up and staggered away about ten feet"i knew it i could tell since the first time i saw you your a lycan,"he said shaking his head.Kanna looked at him and said"yes i am a lycan."Kanna watch as he changed back into his human form.He was bleeding from his arm were kanna had grabbed him.He wasnt paying attention so kanna turned around and started to leave changing back herself."Hey im not done talking to you yet,"he said."I am you attacked me you wernt talking,"kanna said in anger still walking away."I had to be sure,"he said now walking beside her but keeping his distance."Well you could have just asked,"said kanna mildly annoyed."Well i didnt think of that at the time,"he said looking away from kanna"im shadow,"introduced shadow jumping over a tree that was on its side."Im kanna blodgarm,"said kanna trying to get over the tree but couldnt.She sat down hoping he would go away.Kanna was strangely attracted to him and she didnt know why yet."Well where did you go,"yelled shadow from the other side.He jumped over and sat down next to her."Im sorry i attacked you like that,"said shadow."Ya,"said kanna standing and walking around the tree.She was almost to the edge of the forest and he was still behind her.She expected him to follow her out of the forest but he didnt he stopped."You can come in the village if you want,"told kanna."I cant,"said shadow still standing there."Why not,"asked kanna."I just cant,"shadow then ran back into the forest."Huh that was strange,"thought kanna going back to her house.



that was really good :D

garraswerewolf
07-12-2009, 10:06 PM
anbu why did you quote it lol

Anbu-Phoenix
07-12-2009, 10:09 PM
idk :lol:

garraswerewolf
07-12-2009, 10:09 PM
idk :lol:
ok lol thats cool though now people can read it

ryanhidden inshadow
07-12-2009, 10:59 PM
ok lol thats cool though now people can read it
lol yeah a silver lining lol

garraswerewolf
07-12-2009, 11:12 PM
lol yeah a silver lining lol
yup lol

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 06:44 PM
lol........

Luna Mikazuki
07-13-2009, 06:49 PM
Yay!!! Romance is in the air

Anbu-Phoenix
07-13-2009, 06:50 PM
that was great i loved it can't wait for more

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 06:53 PM
thank you both :mrgreen:

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-13-2009, 07:20 PM
Terrific!

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 07:22 PM
Terrific!
thank you very much :mrgreen:

Iruka Umino
07-13-2009, 07:26 PM
very nice person i have never met id like to get to know you better you seem like an awesome person

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 07:32 PM
very nice person i have never met id like to get to know you better you seem like an awesome person
ok sure lol

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-13-2009, 07:54 PM
thank you very much :mrgreen:

But I'm only on the Second Chapter........:oops:

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 08:04 PM
But I'm only on the Second Chapter........:oops:
that is fine

lol

vampire Lycan
07-13-2009, 08:05 PM
cool^^

ryanhidden inshadow
07-13-2009, 08:55 PM
very romantic baby and its a good way to exstend a story

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 09:05 PM
very romantic baby and its a good way to exstend a story
thank you :mrgreen:

ryanhidden inshadow
07-13-2009, 09:28 PM
thank you :mrgreen:
you very welcome baby its really a good story so far i cant wait to here more

garraswerewolf
07-13-2009, 10:27 PM
you very welcome baby its really a good story so far i cant wait to here more
thank you really im glad you like it

vampire Lycan
07-14-2009, 08:15 AM
CAN'T WAIT!!!!!:cry: she only writes one a day.....

Soccer Ninja 21
07-14-2009, 08:20 AM
Well done.

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-14-2009, 01:29 PM
Good job.

Soccer Ninja 21
07-14-2009, 02:00 PM
I like it muchly.

Anbu-Phoenix
07-14-2009, 06:22 PM
im on for about 5 minutes

Soccer Ninja 21
07-14-2009, 06:23 PM
ANBU omg WHY THE H*** DID YOU LEAVE AND WHY???!!!!

Anbu-Phoenix
07-14-2009, 06:28 PM
i sent you a pm

Soccer Ninja 21
07-14-2009, 06:30 PM
ok thx...

Anbu-Phoenix
07-14-2009, 06:31 PM
i'll get on heres as much as i can

Soccer Ninja 21
07-14-2009, 06:32 PM
ok that would be cool.^^

garraswerewolf
07-14-2009, 07:38 PM
demons

vampire Lycan
07-14-2009, 07:43 PM
:shock: OMG..........awesome

Anbu-Phoenix
07-14-2009, 07:44 PM
*claps* awesome!

Luna Mikazuki
07-14-2009, 07:45 PM
Wow....that was good

Anbu-Phoenix
07-14-2009, 07:47 PM
im involving this part in blazing blood

ryanhidden inshadow
07-14-2009, 07:56 PM
this was good but now i really have to see what the next one is

Luna Mikazuki
07-14-2009, 07:59 PM
this was good but now i really have to see what the next one is
Ooooo I almost forgot Ryan
I have GWW's brain I borrowed it for something
Please it is a gift
*hands over GWW's brain*

ryanhidden inshadow
07-14-2009, 08:04 PM
Ooooo I almost forgot Ryan
I have GWW's brain I borrowed it for something
Please it is a gift
*hands over GWW's brain*
:shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::shock:: shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::shock::s hock: wow ok ill give it back to her :shock::shock::shock::shock:

garraswerewolf
07-14-2009, 08:05 PM
thank you baby

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-14-2009, 08:11 PM
Cool, GWW.
Chapter Two of my Story is up.

garraswerewolf
07-14-2009, 08:12 PM
Cool, GWW.
Chapter Two of my Story is up.
yesh

cool

ryanhidden inshadow
07-14-2009, 09:27 PM
your doing good baby keep it up

garraswerewolf
07-14-2009, 09:31 PM
your doing good baby keep it up
thank you mi corazon

Soccer Ninja 21
07-15-2009, 06:40 AM
Very nice.^^

Soccer Ninja 21
07-15-2009, 06:40 AM
Nice one.^^;

garraswerewolf
07-15-2009, 07:49 PM
growl

Luna Mikazuki
07-15-2009, 07:52 PM
That was great!

garraswerewolf
07-15-2009, 07:58 PM
thank you

vampire Lycan
07-15-2009, 08:04 PM
wow.......that was awesome!!!

Soccer Ninja 21
07-16-2009, 06:19 AM
Can't wait for the next one^^

garraswerewolf
07-17-2009, 06:47 PM
hahahahahaha wondering what was here yet

Luna Mikazuki
07-17-2009, 06:51 PM
I loved it! Teehee Krone

vampire Lycan
07-17-2009, 06:57 PM
kool.....

garraswerewolf
07-17-2009, 06:58 PM
thank you both :mrgreen:

Soccer Ninja 21
07-18-2009, 06:12 AM
Buda da da da, I'm loving it!

garraswerewolf
07-19-2009, 06:27 PM
mungo

Soccer Ninja 21
07-19-2009, 06:29 PM
*reading it*

vampire Lycan
07-19-2009, 06:43 PM
Awesome^^

Soccer Ninja 21
07-19-2009, 06:59 PM
very gud!^^

Sai's brother
07-30-2009, 07:26 PM
Very Good G.W.W :D

Oh and the next part of my story is up

sasruto
07-31-2009, 12:30 PM
it rocks!

sasruto
07-31-2009, 12:30 PM
keep on writing

garraswerewolf
08-06-2009, 01:44 PM
no barn

Luna Mikazuki
08-06-2009, 06:49 PM
I like it!