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Kiseki
03-17-2011, 11:03 AM
Silly

Spinning all the same rotation.
Trying to float towards the goal.
Gotten lost while reaching out.
The longer you long, the less you feel strong.
All I wanted was your smile.

Days are days, weeks are weeks.
My heart is the city that never sleeps.
Walking back, moving forth.
On and on, it goes and goes.

I do not forget, the things I regret.
The glorious feeling of your happiness.
It was in my hands.
Being weak from longing.
I accidentally dropped you.

Still spinning, on the last of my energy.
Images float through thoughts of pain.
Everlasting moments of you, smiling.
All the sudden, stepping out of it all.
You're right in front if me.

EmoSakura
03-18-2011, 12:20 PM
Great work, I thought it was amazing. *.*

Kiseki
03-18-2011, 12:22 PM
Awe thank you dear =)

Jonesy
03-22-2011, 09:50 PM
I like it. =3

Sheelah
03-23-2011, 12:56 AM
It was really nice Kiseki. :)

Kiseki
03-23-2011, 02:52 AM
Sankyuuu both :D

kanisawa
03-26-2011, 03:06 AM
Veryyyyyy nice and Kiseki!! Especially I love that part
Days are days, weeks are weeks.
My heart is the city that never sleeps..

And the title is unique ^^

Shikamaru Nara
03-26-2011, 06:20 AM
This is awesome.

Kiseki
03-26-2011, 07:03 AM
Awe thnx gaiz :D