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Kiseki
02-19-2011, 10:29 AM
The piano is playing a song, written by our heart.
Dance with me, til death do us part.
Give me freedom, yet hold on to me tight.
Give me the feeling of love, lasting longer than tonight.
In a moment of dispair I'd hold you tightly.
I'd give my all, just to see you smiling at me.
Live in my dreams and die in everlasting memory.
You kiss my nose and tell me I'm your victory.
A smile so charming and the feeling of bliss.
Leaving an irreplacable impression...

Just by one single kiss.


Song with this poem. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uvhSBGCR3Bk)
By Kiseki.

Kreegah!!!
02-19-2011, 11:00 AM
Nice li'l poem, easy listening music (at least for what loaded up during the ten minutes my patience holds for lol). But I need something a little more upbeat generally.:)

Devroux
02-19-2011, 08:05 PM
I don't read the poems in this section often, but I decided to read yours because you're Kiseki. ;)

It was really good. Keep it up.

Cloukora
02-19-2011, 08:52 PM
wow, that's amazing Kiseki:D

Kiseki
02-21-2011, 07:18 AM
Awe thanks guys! Glad you're still reading mine Dev! =]

Shikamaru Nara
02-21-2011, 07:23 AM
D':

Such a pretty poem.

Kiseki
02-21-2011, 02:07 PM
You're feeling it bruh! <3

Bacon
02-21-2011, 03:22 PM
:'D Am proud. :)