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Kiseki
02-07-2011, 01:53 AM
Like butterfly wings...
You flip to the dark side after showing your true colors.
You tend to fly away, leaving me wondering.
As you stop flying, my heart stops beating.
Reaching out my hand to move closer.
At the second I would touch you, you vanish again.

My little twinkle star, why do you go so far.
So far, far away from me.
Leaving me wondering, what it could be.
If you were here, if you stoke my hair.
If you fly too far, my heart doesn't feel like beating.

Tears for the moment I've seen you smile.
And yet more tears, for the times you're not around.
Longing for the feeling of a cry of happiness.
Everywhere I go I see butterflies.
Why did you have to be the one that stands out the most.
Just stroke my hair once more and fly away.
Leave me in misconception.

Lady Tsunade
02-07-2011, 07:54 AM
I totally thought this said contraception when I first read it xD

Anyway, thats a really cute poem =3

Kiseki
02-11-2011, 06:01 AM
Haha sorry. Thank you so much! It's a very personal poem to me.

Jonesy
02-11-2011, 10:12 AM
I love it, Kiseki! <3

Kiseki
02-11-2011, 02:54 PM
Awe thank you dear! :D

CrackFat
02-12-2011, 06:06 AM
You touched my soul. Slightly inappropriately, but touched nonetheless. /applauds.

Kiseki
02-12-2011, 10:13 AM
You touched my soul. Slightly inappropriately, but touched nonetheless. /applauds.
I cried while writing this...! ;~;
You prolly know who I wrote it for... mehh.
Thank you for being touched! /touches moar P:

CrackFat
02-12-2011, 03:00 PM
I cried while writing this...! ;~;
You prolly know who I wrote it for... mehh.
Thank you for being touched! /touches moar P:

For as far as I know,
it suits the situation perfectly.

Tears are to be expected.
They go well with depth!

Shinagami
02-12-2011, 08:15 PM
Great poem, I really like it :).

Shikamaru Nara
02-13-2011, 09:51 AM
Mystical...ness...

Definitely suits the situation if I catch your drift and i'm sorry.

EmoSakura
02-13-2011, 02:42 PM
So artistic, beautiful, mystical. I enjoyed it so. You are a great writer, Kiseki. ^^

Kiseki
02-14-2011, 01:57 AM
Thank you guys. =)
This really encourages me to write some more.