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Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-02-2009, 03:21 PM
This story takes place in the Leaf Village during which the 8th Hokage has just been chosen.

So if people like my fanfic and posts comments i will keep writing.

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:26 PM
I want to know.

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:31 PM
What's it about?

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-02-2009, 03:31 PM
Takeo Nentou Prologue:

Takeo is a young spiky brown haired ninja. Takeo wears a white shirt that has a collar that goes to the middle of his neck, his clan symbol is on the back of his shirt. He wears black ninja pants ans black ninja shoes , he also wears a black leaf headband.

Takeo was born into the Nentou clan a clan's whose kekkei genkei involves creating genjutsu and having the ability to slightly manipulate people. He seems to have pretty good knowledge on his clan and how to use it.

The Final Academy Test Arc( I will add later today)

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:32 PM
This story takes place in the Leaf Village during which the 8th Hokage has just been chosen.

So if people like my fanfic and posts comments i will keep writing.
cool.Plz. keep writing.:mrgreen:

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-02-2009, 03:33 PM
cool.Plz. keep writing.:mrgreen:


I will

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:34 PM
Takeo Nentou Prologue:

Takeo is a young spiky brown haired ninja. Takeo wears a white shirt that has a collar that goes to the middle of his neck, his clan symbol is on the back of his shirt. He wears black ninja pants ans black ninja shoes , he also wears a black leaf headband.

Takeo was born into the Nentou clan a clan's whose kekkei genkei involves creating genjutsu and having the ability to slightly manipulate people. He seems to have pretty good knowledge on his clan and how to use it.

The Final Academy Test Arc( I will add later today)
Wow!!!!!!!!Cool!!!:mrgreen:

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:34 PM
I will
Thanks.:mrgreen:

madara'
07-02-2009, 03:38 PM
He can manipulate ppl?!Awesome!!!!!!!!!:mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 04:18 PM
cooooool

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-02-2009, 06:04 PM
The Final Academy Test Arc
Takeo was talking with some of the other guys , Roku "the cool guy, Dai "the black spandex suit kid", and Ryo Hyuuga" The strategist". "So guys I heard tody is the Final Exam," said Takeo. "no way , I would know that,"said Ryo.

Takeo looked over to see Yume Tenshi his crush, she was so beutiful her name was dream angel. Her gorgeous brown hair was flowing in the air. She wore a white button down shirt and black shorts. Isao the Academy teacher walked in, all the boys jumped back into their desks. "Class today is your final exam. I need you to make a shadow clone." Everyone was suprised except for Takeo. Dai jumped out of his desk and said," Finally a test for my skills , I'll go first." An hour past and only Takeo and Ryo were left. Then Takeo was called in. He walked into the room , then he made a few handsigns then he shouted, " Shadow Clone Jutsu." An exact carbon copy of Takeo appeared. Isao shouted," Takeo good job you pass, perfect shadow clone. Iso pointed toward a hall , so Takeo went in. As he walked into the big room the 8th Hokage was sitting in a chair. He looked about 27, he was one of the youngest Hokages ever. He had golden blond spiky hair and he had a small goatee. "Good job Takeo, you are now a Leaf Shinobi," said The 8th. The hokage handed over a black headband to Takeo. Takeo grabbed did and pulled it around his head, then he tied it back.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-02-2009, 06:17 PM
morE moRE mORE MORE!! tis awesome so far

madara'
07-03-2009, 10:32 AM
The Final Academy Test Arc
Takeo was talking with some of the other guys , Roku "the cool guy, Dai "the black spandex suit kid", and Ryo Hyuuga" The strategist". "So guys I heard tody is the Final Exam," said Takeo. "no way , I would know that,"said Ryo.

Takeo looked over to see Yume Tenshi his crush, she was so beutiful her name was dream angel. Her gorgeous brown hair was flowing in the air. She wore a white button down shirt and black shorts. Isao the Academy teacher walked in, all the boys jumped back into their desks. "Class today is your final exam. I need you to make a shadow clone." Everyone was suprised except for Takeo. Dai jumped out of his desk and said," Finally a test for my skills , I'll go first." An hour past and only Takeo and Ryo were left. Then Takeo was called in. He walked into the room , then he made a few handsigns then he shouted, " Shadow Clone Jutsu." An exact carbon copy of Takeo appeared. Isao shouted," Takeo good job you pass, perfect shadow clone. Iso pointed toward a hall , so Takeo went in. As he walked into the big room the 8th Hokage was sitting in a chair. He looked about 27, he was one of the youngest Hokages ever. He had golden blond spiky hair and he had a small goatee. "Good job Takeo, you are now a Leaf Shinobi," said The 8th. The hokage handed over a black headband to Takeo. Takeo grabbed did and pulled it around his head, then he tied it back.
Awesome!!!:mrgreen::mrgreen::mrgreen:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 02:54 PM
hurray keep going!!!!!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-03-2009, 03:57 PM
Test of The New Team 2
Takeo was told he would be meeting his new squad today, so he headed off to the training field. When he arrived he saw that the training field was completely different. Pointy stones were sticking out of the ground,small hills were over the area , then he saw his new team Ryo Hyuuga, Yume Tenshi, and one of the top jonin Daisuke Nikkou other known as the sun ninja because he has sun based jutsu, he can emit light, and and he has jutsu that are strengthened by solar power. "Hi guys I'm your sensei, I'm Daisuke Nikkou. Ryo whispered to me and Yume," His chakra elements are fire and earth." "You got all that from your Bykugan," whispered Takeo. "Yeah,' said Ryo. "Only two of you can be come true genin today, you have to get these bells from me. "But yesterday we took a test to be genin how can you test us to really be genin," asked Yume?

"Those are the rules, now the test Begins!" Takeo, Ryo, and Yume got into their battle stances. "Ok guys , Yume you take the left and Ryo you take the right, I'll take the middle," said Takeo. "Ok got it," Yume and Ryo said in unison. "shadow clone jutsu,"said Yume. Ryo was coming was runnig up the landscape when a giant stone rose from the ground , Ryo used his gentle fist to get through the rock. "Twin water shot jutsu," shouted Yume. Water startes spiraling around her amd her clone, then they shot out like a missles straight at Daisuke. yume was breaking through all the rocks and hills Daisuke shot at her, until he shot rocks from all directions at Yume which stopped her spiral. She ended up using some ice blade jutsu as she came straight at Daisuke. Daisuke raised a block of rock which destroyed the clone , but it didn't stop Yume. "8 trigrams 48 palms single strike," shouted Ryo as he came thrusting at Daisuke. "Sun Style: Sun Rising Assault," shouted Daisuke. His hands began to glow with heat. He blocked one of yume's hand then he swung his hand into the ice blade which melted it, then he threw yume to the ground. Just when Ryo was about to thrust his palm into Daisuke, Daisuke thrusted his palm into his stomach.

Takeo was running toward the fight , then he shouted," Gensou Mes please work this time." Takeo's eyes turned purple then a black six point star appeared where his pupil would be. Then as Daisuke palmed Ryo , Takeo appeared right infront of Daisuke. Daisuke and Takeo's eyes met. Takeo asked,"give me the... urghhh.. be...lls." He was using his kekkei genkai to manipulate Daisuke to give him the bells. Daisuke grabbed te bells out of his back pocket , then he said,," uhh Nice try Takeo." Daisuke palmed Takeo and pushed him back. "Sorry but none of you got the bells, but you all are true genin becuase you worked as a team," said Daisuke.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 04:09 PM
hurray!!everyone is using the bell test tho

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-03-2009, 04:10 PM
hurray!!everyone is using the bell test tho

i personally like the bell test

takuya
07-03-2009, 04:24 PM
yeah i like it too mainly cuz it would be too hard to come up with a new test and im glad that ppl use the shadow clone test cuz it would be harsh to use the mist village's test

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 04:34 PM
what is the mist village test? wiat is it the one that u need to kill ur own comrades?!?!?! and yea true

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-03-2009, 04:36 PM
yeah i like it too mainly cuz it would be too hard to come up with a new test and im glad that ppl use the shadow clone test cuz it would be harsh to use the mist village's test


yeah friends fight to the death

takuya
07-03-2009, 04:40 PM
yep that would suck say that there was this girl u liked now time for the test u have to kill everyone else including the girl which im pretty sure all of this bloodshed would traumatize a few ppl

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-03-2009, 05:59 PM
oh yea that would suck...poor mist village people!!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-03-2009, 11:36 PM
The Team's First C-rank Mission Arc Pt.1
Mission Briefing:Takeo and his team were gearing up for ther hardest mission yet.They had to escort a well known Leaf political figure to Sunagakure. He is being sent to talk with the Kazekage about funds for the next chunin exams. The team is told many rogues will won't his head.

The team sets off at noon so they have time to travel and a place to stay for the night. As the team enter a beautiful forest a gang of rogues appear. Daisuke easily takes down to rogues with his sunlight assault technique. There are 5 other rogues surrounding the young genin of Daisuke's team.

------What will happen you'll have to wait for Part 2-----

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 01:39 PM
The Team's First C-rank Mission Arc Pt.2
Yume made a few handsings then she shouted," Rip Tide Spiral Orb." Water completely surrounded the genin , then it began to spin and rip water around the outer shell of the orb. It gave the rogues rather small cuts. Then Yume released the water cover the ground aroung the genin wit water. Takeo was prepared to use his technique that he was developing. It wasn't ready yet, but he had to try. "Inabikari Rush," shouted Takeo. Light started to surge all around him, then he released it. It knocked one rogue into a tree and another rogue's arm was paralyzed. Ryo and in between to rogues , then he used double gentle fist to kill 2 rouges. Yume used her ice blades to kill another rogue, then Takeo made a few handsigns thne he used fire style: blaze javelin. Fire came from Takeo's hand like a rod, then the rod got thicker and it was in the shape of a large cone of twirling fire. Takeo stabbed one rogue and threw the javelin through another. After that attack it was smooth sailing. Afew sand jonin met then in the middle of the desert., and they took them to the hidden sand. The team returned home safely.

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 05:12 PM
The Meeting of The Teams Arc
For some strange reason the Jonin Sensei's wouldn't allow the teams to meet each other but today they would. Team 2 was intrested in seeing who were on the other teams. Team 3 was made up of the two twins Inomaru and Inomari and Skikashu Nara. Team 4 was made up of Ryo's sister, Hosi Hyuuga, Roshi Inuzuka and his dog Koinu, and Shiro Aburame. The last team was Team 5 made up of Roku Uchiha, Dai Sarutobi, and Aoi Raito. The teams just talked about how they were glad they all made it and who they thought was better.

Hiro
07-04-2009, 06:23 PM
*fangirl scream* lol i love it riku!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 08:14 PM
*fangirl scream* lol i love it riku!


thanks red spade

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 08:45 PM
Genin Royale Arc pt.1
"We are going to have a tournament for you geni,"said Yoshi Nikkou, Daisuke's sister."The winner will get to choose any jutsu from a scroll we wrote," said Goro Hyuuga, the smartest known jonin and the leader of team 5 . Ichiro Sarutobi, the leader team 3, was nodding and staring at Yoshi, Ichiro was thinking(she sure looks hot). What a perve,"whispered Rin Tenshi, Yume's mother and leader of team 4.

Hiro
07-04-2009, 08:51 PM
Genin Royale Arc pt.1
"We are going to have a tournament for you geni,"said Yoshi Nikkou, Daisuke's sister."The winner will get to choose any jutsu from a scroll we wrote," said Goro Hyuuga, the smartest known jonin and the leader of team 5 . Ichiro Sarutobi, the leader team 3, was nodding and staring at Yoshi, Ichiro was thinking(she sure looks hot). What a perve,"whispered Rin Tenshi, Yume's mother and leader of team 4.
awsome, i have copied it all onto my windows office! this would be really cool if you sent this to kishimoto and he liked it xD

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 08:55 PM
awsome, i have copied it all onto my windows office! this would be really cool if you sent this to kishimoto and he liked it xD

that would be really cool

Hiro
07-04-2009, 09:30 PM
that would be really cool
yep, who knows it might happen, he would edit it a little, make it into his manga and beside his name is
co-writer: insert real name here
XDXD

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-04-2009, 11:19 PM
yep, who knows it might happen, he would edit it a little, make it into his manga and beside his name is
co-writer: insert real name here
XDXD


yeah , that would be one of the best things to happen to me

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-05-2009, 10:45 AM
does anybody else want the next part

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 10:50 AM
MEZEZ!!! pweeaze?

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-05-2009, 10:54 AM
it will be up soon

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 11:06 AM
YAAYZEZ!!! i like stories!!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-05-2009, 11:38 AM
Genin Royale Arc:Round 1

Takeo Vs. Roshi Inuzuka
Takeo got into his battle stance just like Roshi and Koinu."Begin, shouted Rin Tenshi. Roshi made a few handsigns then he shouted," man beast clone." Suddenly Koinu turned into another Roshi. "Shadow clone jutsu," shouted Takeo. Takeo was able to create 5 shadow clones , he whispered each of them ,"to throw kunai around." "Come on Koinu, its time for twin twisting fang." The Koinu Roshi began to growl. Then the two turned into a twirling spiral of sharp claws. Right before they hit Takeo he put them in a genjutsu. In the genjutsu he had them being totured by monstrous sized demon cats. The genjustu gave Takeo's clones enough time to get in the trees to prepare for Takeo's next jutsu, takeo released the genjutsu. Takeo shouted," Bring the Rain!" 60 kunai rained from the sky, but not a single kunai hit Roshi or Koinu. "Nice try punk, you missed me." "You'll see," said Takeo as electricity started to surround him and build up. "Inabikari wave," shouted Takeo. Lightning scattered across the whole field first it shocked Roshi and Koinu, but it wasn't done yet. The kunai began to rise from the ground as they got hit by the lightning. The kunai release all of the built up of electricity at Roshi and Koinu, knocking them out. "The winner is Takeo Nentou," Shouted Rin Tenshi.

------Next time Round 1 Dai vs. Ryo------

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-05-2009, 12:01 PM
oh this is good write more!its getting better and better

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 02:41 PM
Round 1 Dai vs. Ryo
Ryo and Dai got into their battle stances, then Ichiro Sarutobi shouted,"Began!" "Dynamic Palm," shouted Dai as he came rushing at Ryo. Ryo attempted to dodge but, Dai was quick enough to palm Ryo's leg decreasing his speed. Then dai used dynamic axe kick. As Dai's kick was about to smash into Ryo's head, Ryo used Gentle fist stye: Gentle Pulse needles. He began to hit certain points on Dais' leg he was kicking with. With Dai unable to move one leg, Ryo easily dodged his attack, then Ryo shouted," 8 trigrams 46 palms single strike." Ryo palmed Dai's chest, dai began to fly back, sunddenly he started to roll on the ground, then he slammed into the arena wall. Ryo was declared the winner of his match, but then Takeo looked over to see that Yume had lost her match to Inomari, Inomari's twin brother Inomaru wasn't battling due to a broken arm.

"Those going into Round 2 are Takeo Nentou, Ryo Hyuuga, Roku, Hyuuga, Inomari Yamanaka," said Yoshi Nikkou.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 02:58 PM
i hope takeo wins XD

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 03:00 PM
i hope takeo wins XD


maybe , just maybe muha,muha, mu *cough*

next arc will be up soon

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-06-2009, 03:30 PM
kk!:mrgreen:

Hiro
07-06-2009, 04:54 PM
maybe , just maybe muha,muha, mu *cough*

next arc will be up soon
you gotta remember, drawing things out, like the fight lasting for more than one episode, and making the main character lose occasionally, and/or coming very close to losing and then miraculously coming, all of these factors make a good story ^_^

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 07:53 PM
that will happen soon

Hiro
07-06-2009, 09:07 PM
that will happen soon
yayz!

Hiro
07-06-2009, 10:58 PM
HURRY! IM ready for the addition! please?! :D

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:03 PM
coming up with match-ups

what do you think of

Takeo vs. Roku

Inomari vs. Ryo

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:23 PM
coming up with match-ups

what do you think of

Takeo vs. Roku

Inomari vs. Ryo
hmm, i dont know, let me review the story again, oh and there is something wrong with the whole plot,....... NO UCHIHA!!! or is he cming in later? :D

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:26 PM
hmm, i dont know, let me review the story again, oh and there is something wrong with the whole plot,....... NO UCHIHA!!! or is he cming in later? :D


Oh wait the naruto story never happened in Fanfics, yes I can have uchiha's , lets say not many were born in Takeo's generation.

But when my tory has a time skip ,New teams form and some of the teams break up

the next part will come tomorrow, to tired to post it now

well Roku and Inomari haven't show their abilities

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:27 PM
Who thinks I should change Roku into an Uchiha

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:34 PM
Oh wait the naruto story never happened in Fanfics, yes I can have uchiha's , lets say not many were born in Takeo's generation.

But when my tory has a time skip ,New teams form and some of the teams break up

the next part will come tomorrow, to tired to post it now

well Roku and Inomari haven't show their abilities
Who thinks I should change Roku into an Uchiha
idk, it sounds good seeing as he is "the cool guy" hmmmm... oh and i think im gonna try to draw some of the characters based on their descriptions, im not that good so this will be good practice ^_^

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:34 PM
well I will post like great descriptions soon, if you want to wait for that

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:38 PM
well I will post like great descriptions soon, if you want to wait for that
mmk ^_^... when?

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:40 PM
mmk ^_^... when?


well I can post a few right now

takeo's is on the first post

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:40 PM
oh, how do you like my sig.? *points at sig.*

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:42 PM
well I can post a few right now

takeo's is on the first post
oh, could you give me a description of his clan symbol?

takuya
07-06-2009, 11:43 PM
good story uve got going riku im gonna top u soon also if ppl would go to my story(Daichi Katsumi)lol sorry but not many ppl visit my story

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:44 PM
good story uve got going riku im gonna top u soon also if ppl would go to my story(Daichi Katsumi)lol sorry but not many ppl visit my story
gimme a hyper link, it cant be that bad XD :lol:

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:46 PM
Inomaru: Inomaru has short golden hair, win redish orange highlights, him and his twin sister of complete opposites, Inomari likes to were a white skirt, with a white button shirt, while Inomaru likes to where a black leather jacket with to white stripes on the sleeves, and inomaru also wheres black ninja pants and white ninja shoes.

Ryo Hyuuga: A nice kind person, he is Takeo's best friend. Unlike most Hyuuga men, likes his brown hair short, he usually wears a white zipper shirt, then shirt has one thick black stripe down the middle on one thick black stripe on each sleeve. Ryo is a battle genius, he the guy with the best strategy, he is well known for his move 8 trigrams 48 palms single strike.

takuya
07-06-2009, 11:47 PM
oh if thats not comforting(sarcasm) heres the link http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=9061 start at the beginning

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:49 PM
oh, could you give me a description of his clan symbol?


ok Takeo's clan symbol is : a shuriken shape with diamond in the middle. The shape is surrounded by a circle and on the circle are 4 triangles: one on the top of the circle, one on the bottom, and one on the left and right side of the circle

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:49 PM
oh, how do you like my sig.? *points at sig.*


nice sig

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-06-2009, 11:51 PM
good story uve got going riku im gonna top u soon also if ppl would go to my story(Daichi Katsumi)lol sorry but not many ppl visit my story


you wish you could top my art, but you can't because my ART= COOL

takuya
07-06-2009, 11:52 PM
for the last time my art is an explosion of my talent and its an explosion of beauty say art=cool im gonna kick u to the moon and i already got stuff planned out some to the chunin exam arc im like shikamaru always 3 steps ahead

Hiro
07-06-2009, 11:56 PM
Inomaru: Inomaru has short golden hair, win redish orange highlights, him and his twin sister of complete opposites, Inomari likes to were a white skirt, with a white button shirt, while Inomaru likes to where a black leather jacket with to white stripes on the sleeves, and inomaru also wheres black ninja pants and white ninja shoes.

Ryo Hyuuga: A nice kind person, he is Takeo's best friend. Unlike most Hyuuga men, likes his brown hair short, he usually wears a white zipper shirt, then shirt has one thick black stripe down the middle on one thick black stripe on each sleeve. Ryo is a battle genius, he the guy with the best strategy, he is well known for his move 8 trigrams 48 palms single strike.

oh if thats not comforting(sarcasm) heres the link http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=9061 start at the beginning
thank you both, goes to see if takuya's fanfic. is "that bad" XDXD :lol:

takuya
07-06-2009, 11:59 PM
thank you both, goes to see if takuya's fanfic. is "that bad" XDXD :lol:everyones a credit:lol:

Hiro
07-07-2009, 12:05 AM
everyones a credit:lol:
wow, you write alot, i cant read it all right now, but i have it on my windows office, so ill read it eventually.... XDXD:lol:

takuya
07-07-2009, 12:07 AM
im gonna slow down some of the stuff and also pm what u think when u get finished with it

Hiro
07-07-2009, 12:10 AM
im gonna slow down some of the stuff and also pm what u think when u get finished with it
will do takuya, ok now im really leavin' peace out peeps :D:cool:

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-07-2009, 11:22 PM
no new part today, I couldn't get on all day and I don't want to post right now to tired

Hiro
07-08-2009, 02:45 PM
no new part today, I couldn't get on all day and I don't want to post right now to tired
NOOOO! XDXDXD:lol::roll:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 02:55 PM
SENSEI RIKU POST RIGHT NOW!or else i guys angry mob that has a puppet holding a gun!

Hiro
07-08-2009, 03:40 PM
SENSEI RIKU POST RIGHT NOW!or else i guys angry mob that has a puppet holding a gun!
umm.... hes offline:|

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 06:16 PM
dangit...

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-08-2009, 08:01 PM
ok I'll post it, don't kill me

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-08-2009, 08:02 PM
yays!sorry puppet, maybe another time*puppet walks away sadly*

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-08-2009, 08:28 PM
Battle of the Kekkei Genkai: Genin Scroll Royale: Takeo Nentou vs. Roku Uchiha

Takeo and Rokku's battle has begun, kunai to shuriken, kick, to punch, the two were evenly matched in battle. Takeo made a few hand signs, and so did Roku." Fire style :Great Fire of The Fallen whirlwind," said Takeo. "Great Dragon fire," said Roku. Both fire jutsu clahsed, the jutsu were dueling in a battle of Greatest fire, " Now Roku prepare for my next level of the move, Great fire of The Rainbow," shouted Takeo! Then rainbow colored fire began to spin with the whirlwind, the fire whirlwind over powered the fire dragon. Roku was burn badly on both of his legs due to the jutsu." Prepare Takeo for my, sharingan." Roku began to charge at Takeo, he could still run, he reached Takeo, Takeo attempted to dodge, but Roku's sharingan knew where he was moving. Roku landed a punch dead in the middle of Takeo's stomach, then Roku did an uppercut on Takeo. Takeo smashed into a tree. Takeo was able to run up the tree , then he felll above from Roku, Takeo made a few hand sings as he was falling then he said," Assault of the great tree. The tree behind Takeo grew larger then limbs thrusted from the tree toward Roku, they started to wrap all around Roku, then Takeo come down and axe kicked him, Roku was knocked out. "Takeo Nentou is the winner," said Rin Tenshi. " Yes, I will not lose, I must win tha scroll," said Takeo.

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-09-2009, 08:27 AM
okay me no kill you today cause that was good ^.^

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-10-2009, 10:37 AM
the new part is coming soon,

sneak peak: Ryo wins his battle, then its

The final Match/ Batttle of the Best Friends Takeo vs. Ryo

who will come up on top

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-10-2009, 10:46 AM
OOOOOOH oh oh oh oh OOOOOOOOH!ryo vs takeo...ouchie for them both!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-10-2009, 04:53 PM
The final Match/ Batttle of the Best Friends Takeo vs. Ryo
"This is the final match, Ryo Hyuuga vs. Takeo Nentou, Begin," shouted Ichiro Sarutobi.

The Battle: "Gentle fist 8 trigram rising palm," shouted Ryo as he thrusted at Takeo. Takeo barely dodged his palm then Ryo said," finishing palm!" Ryo's second palm hit in the center of takeo's chest, Takeo began to pick up momentum from the blow, Takeo crashed into the wall. " Takeo was charging lightning in his hand before he hit the wall then Takeo shouted," Inabikari Revolution." The ball of lightning chakra ib Takeo's hand began to spin , then Takeo charged ryo, Ryo jumped right before Takeo hit. Then Ryo shouted," genle fist Hammer." Takeo was prepared for Ryo's attack ," Inabikari revolution," shouted Takeo! Ryo and Takeo's attacks clashed, bot were pouring off strong amounts of chakra ," RAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!," shouted the two boys.Then the attacks exploded, sending both Ryo and into the far walls. Then the impact of the wall pushed them forward into the center of the arena. A minute passed then Ichiro said," Both opponents were unable to finish their battle, it is a draw, they will both learn a technique from the scroll.

next time------ The Technique-----

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-10-2009, 08:16 PM
any body want the next part

takuya
07-10-2009, 08:22 PM
any body want the next parti want the next part post it or else we will torture u:twisted::lol:

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-10-2009, 08:22 PM
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEE(one week later)EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEE(two weeks later)EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEE!pweaze?

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-10-2009, 08:24 PM
ok, please don't toture me

takuya
07-10-2009, 08:25 PM
ok, please don't toture me
haha cool also my story is getting good im thinking of a pwnsome finish even tho its nowhere near close to that

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-10-2009, 08:47 PM
The Scroll Technique
Takeo awoke in the middle of the arena, everyone was cheering, he wondered what happened. then he heard it was tie, both him and his bestfriend would learn a technique.

Takeo ran home after the whole arena had calmed down, his dad was home from Anbu mission. "Hey dad me and Ryo , tied in the Genin Royale to learn a special technique," said Takeo. "Good job son, hope you pick the right technique," said Takeo's Father, Lee Nentou, then Takeo's father rubbed his head messing up his hair like he useually did.

Ryo and Takeo met at the training fields, when they got there Daisuke - sensei was already waiting." Hey sents you guys are my students, I'm gonna teach you the technique, I have the best section," said Daisuke. "We want to learn your technique Sunlight Assualt," said Daisuke. After then intense training Ryo and Takeo fell to the ground , Daisuke said," You guys did good we should go get ramen later for your reward.

next time

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-11-2009, 09:05 AM
ooh cool write more ^.^

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 12:39 PM
guys i will be gone for a whole week, but when i get back, you get atleast 6 new arcs in one day

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 01:17 PM
I like the storry.

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 01:51 PM
I like the storry.


Thanks:mrgreen:

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 02:04 PM
no prob, i heard that u shall on a camp in one week! I miss u alredy! * kisses u slowly*

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 02:24 PM
no prob, i heard that u shall on a camp in one week! I miss u alredy! * kisses u slowly*

*keeps kissing you* i'll miss you to

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-11-2009, 02:26 PM
*snaps pictures* the newspaper will pay gold for these!

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-11-2009, 02:26 PM
guys i will be gone for a whole week, but when i get back, you get atleast 6 new arcs in one daywoo hoo six new arcs!!

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 02:26 PM
Take hands around youre neck and keeps kissing u* i miss u more than u miss me!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 02:39 PM
*snaps pictures* the newspaper will pay gold for these!


whats the article about, Artist and his beutiful Caring Girlfriend

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 02:39 PM
Take hands around youre neck and keeps kissing u* i miss u more than u miss me!


i miss you more

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 02:44 PM
* stop kissing u* No i miss u more! * goes and hold around u*

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 02:46 PM
* stop kissing u* No i miss u more! * goes and hold around u*


I miss you so much *kisses you again*

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 03:00 PM
* holding aroud youre neck and kisses u* i miss u so much that it hurts inside.:cry:

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 03:09 PM
* holding aroud youre neck and kisses u* i miss u so much that it hurts inside.:cry:


I miss you so much, I'm gonna... fa.... faint*collapses*

kibaxino4ever234
07-11-2009, 03:15 PM
* Take u in my arms and hug u*

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-11-2009, 03:20 PM
* Take u in my arms and hug u*


"thanks' *kisses you*

kibaxino4ever234
07-12-2009, 12:26 AM
* no prob kisses back*

Hiro
07-12-2009, 03:56 PM
* holding aroud youre neck and kisses u* i miss u so much that it hurts inside.:cry:
-__-' ........... when did this happen?! why does everything happen while im gone......... when is he coming back, and good for you riku!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-18-2009, 05:33 PM
whos ready for more

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-18-2009, 07:06 PM
ME!!!more story more story more story!!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-18-2009, 09:10 PM
Supply Escort to The Land of Iron Arc Pt.1
Team 2 and Team5 were called to the hokage's office very early in the morning." I need you to take a rather large supply caravan to a village in The Land of Iron. We usually don't deal with them due to them not having a ninja military, but a samurai army.This time they are in need of supplies, they are low on food and tools, so its your job to escort, about 20 men to The Land of Iron. The men will be carrying supplies and leading the pulling horses to pull the supply carts," said the 8th. Daisuke and Goro began to nod to show they understood, even the two jonin have never entered the The Land of Iron.

takuya
07-18-2009, 09:12 PM
cool i wonder what happens next but i could always force it out of you:twisted::lol:

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-18-2009, 09:13 PM
cool i wonder what happens next but i could always force it out of you:twisted::lol:


its a secret

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-19-2009, 10:06 AM
WRITETH MORETH!!!pleaseth!

takuya
07-19-2009, 11:46 AM
i see u added a poll well i think it deserves maybe a 8 or 9

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-19-2009, 11:56 AM
Supply Escort to The Land of Iron Arc Pt.2
The two squads decided to leave as early as they could, it was about 7:30 in the morning when they were checking to make sure everyone was there, Takeo came running up to the group," guys I'm here," said Takeo. "Ok all the supply carriers are here, so are the horse, and both squads are here," said Goro Hyuuga." Alright guys, lets go," said Daisuke.Takeo, Ryo, and Roku were placed in the front of the group, Aoi, Yume, and Dai were placed in the middle of the group, and Goro and Daisuke were placed in the back of thr group. Woosh!! Ten rogue ninja jumped out of the trees, and aproached the caravan.

----what will happen next!!!-------

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-22-2009, 09:24 PM
I know the story has kind of slowed but right now I am working on new ideas

takuya
07-22-2009, 09:26 PM
i can try to give u some ideas my laptop is going slow

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-22-2009, 09:27 PM
i can try to give u some ideas my laptop is going slow

cool that would help

sasruto
07-23-2009, 02:56 PM
good. keep writing...

Sensei : Riku Arashi
07-23-2009, 09:34 PM
I will I'm just coming up with new ideas

Chromekatana
07-29-2009, 01:25 AM
Nice going so far. Could use alittle work but its a alright story.XD It would be nice if you wrote alot more though.Xd We want moar!;)

NaruSakufluff4ever
07-29-2009, 10:27 AM
what chrome said about wanting more!!

Sensei : Riku Arashi
02-10-2010, 09:28 PM
Its been awhile since I last wrote in the story but there will be a continuation to the story it will be called Takeo Nentou: Path of a Hero

14Tailed
03-25-2010, 07:57 AM
Wow it's been A LONG TIME since i've been on here!!:D