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<Aurega?>
07-17-2009, 10:34 AM
I like him because I like Hyuugas and he's a unique one. I'm curious on his character development. ^^

Hoorayz for that! ^^

Couples? I'd go for anyone paired with anyone, seriously. ^^

She's especially into Yaoi pairing btw KT xD

Kuroda Taishi
07-17-2009, 10:36 AM
Hoorayz for that too. xD

Just no pairings like Sarutobi x Sakura. ^^

lol, i dont like those either. Except for maybe Sakura x Kakashi. that one intrigues me a little

Kuroda Taishi
07-17-2009, 10:37 AM
She's especially into Yaoi pairing btw KT xD

Sorry no Yaoi, only Yuri, if you didn't notice it already

<Aurega?>
07-17-2009, 10:48 AM
Sorry no Yaoi, only Yuri, if you didn't notice it already
I did, but just telling you what she's into xD

waterlemon-chi
07-17-2009, 10:52 AM
I did, but just telling you what she's into xD

-___-

Why, Teddy? I'm being your fangirl and you...

*sobs in a corner and grows mushrooms*

Kuroda Taishi
07-17-2009, 10:53 AM
-___-

Why, Teddy? I'm being your fangirl and you...

*sobs in a corner and grows mushrooms*

are they poisoness mushrooms? or are they edible

Kuroda Taishi
07-17-2009, 03:49 PM
All character profiles and Arcs are now on the first page

eagleye54321
07-17-2009, 11:13 PM
Hey Kuroda, how are you?

waterlemon-chi
07-18-2009, 04:26 AM
are they poisoness mushrooms? or are they edible

Poisonous.

So they can poison Teddy, eventually. ^^

Kuroda Taishi
07-18-2009, 06:02 AM
Hey Kuroda, how are you?

....umm fine i guess. Any particular reason for asking?

eagleye54321
07-18-2009, 09:25 AM
....umm fine i guess. Any particular reason for asking?
Not really. :shock: But, on your survey, I still can't answer the couples question. I think it's a bit too early for me.

Kuroda Taishi
07-18-2009, 02:53 PM
Not really. :shock: But, on your survey, I still can't answer the couples question. I think it's a bit too early for me.

Yeah, that is true

Kuroda Taishi
07-19-2009, 12:53 PM
So i decided to give you guys a taste of what is to come.
This is the arc i am currently working on. It is very far ahead of what i have posted so far. Enjoy

“So what are we going to do?” asks Kuroda. Yoshikuni looks in his pack and then brings out two strange looking poles and hands one to Kenta. He explains, “This is a special ninja flare. You just pour some chakra in it and step back, and then it will shoot high in the air and make a big explosion. We should be able to see it from the other village since they are a short distance from each other. You can also press this switch on the side to make the explosion a different color. If they attack your village, use the colors to communicate how many of them there are. White for one, yellow for 2, orange for 3, and Red for 4. You and Yui will head to Fungus Town while Kuroda and I go to Mushroom Town.”
“Don’t you think we should change the teams around?” asks Kuroda. “I admit it was good that we were the ones who encountered them first, but the situation has changed and I think you should go with Kenta or Yui.” “You and I are both faster and stronger than Yui and Kenta,” explains Yoshikuni, “So we will be able to defeat our opponents faster and head over to help them.” “We can handle it Kuroda,” says Kenta. “Well I see your point and you are a Jonin, so I will just have believe in you,” says Kuroda.
They head out in separate directions to set up ambushes in the two towns. Meanwhile in a hidden cave their enemies are lurking. “Stop staring at me!” yells Durza. “I can’t help it,” replies Riku licking his lips, “Seeing you with that scar just makes you look so delicious. I want to cut you up more and lick the blood from your wounds.” “You try it and I will kill you,” warns Durza. Gomi walks back in and asks, “Are you ready to go Durza?” “I’m fine,” says Durza, “So where are we going to next?”
“You and Riku are going to Mushroom Town while Gomi and I are going to Fungus Town,” says Surda. “No Way!” yells Durza, “I am not going alone anywhere with that psycho I can’t be expected to fight off the Petal Ninja and this psycho. Why are we splitting up anyways?” “Fine, I will take Riku and go to Mushroom Town,” says Gomi, “We are splitting up to divide their forces and make it easier to take them out.” “They will know where we are going because of the light,” points out Durza. “I will be using a copy jutsu so it will look like we are going to both places,” explains Gomi.
“I don’t care where I go as long as I get to cut up those Petal Ninja,” says Riku, “Although I would prefer to be with Durza, she is turning me on so much right now I can barely hold myself back.” “Get away from me,” says Durza. “Ohh come on now, I know you would love for me to cut you up and make love to me,” says Riku. Gomi grabs the back of Riku’s shirt and carries him away saying, “Let’s get moving. We have already wasted enough time.”

SakuraGirl
07-19-2009, 02:37 PM
i like it it a great story with great Characters

Kuroda Taishi
07-19-2009, 02:38 PM
i like it it a great story with great Characters

Thank you very much

Ryaque
07-19-2009, 07:49 PM
Keep up Kuroda. I give it two thumbs up!!

SakuraGirl
07-20-2009, 09:42 AM
yea it really good i love the mind people

god of puppets
07-20-2009, 03:25 PM
[QUOTE=Kuroda Taishi;574886]Murder in the Mist Arc
in this arc u put Leaf ninja in stead of Petal ninja, kuroda

KIBAFAN321
07-20-2009, 03:29 PM
Great story Kuroda! I would give you 10 thumbs up...*stares at hand* if I had 10 thumbs....

SakuraGirl
07-20-2009, 03:36 PM
it just keep getting better

Kuroda Taishi
07-20-2009, 04:28 PM
Murder in the Mist Arc
in this arc u put Leaf ninja in stead of Petal ninja, kuroda

I did? where?

god of puppets
07-21-2009, 10:31 AM
I did? where?it was wen that mist jonin was explaining why she failed her mission to the elders, it was close to a "..."

Kuroda Taishi
07-21-2009, 05:32 PM
it was wen that mist jonin was explaining why she failed her mission to the elders, it was close to a "..."

I found it an fixed it, thank you for pointing it out.



On another note I will get back to the story. I'm not sure if you all liked my preview or not. Anyways i will post it later tonight or tomorrow.

INO y....
07-21-2009, 05:32 PM
hello :)

Kuroda Taishi
07-22-2009, 04:29 PM
Rescue Yukiko Arc

Kuroda appears in the Snow Country. He immediately deflects some shuriken that were aimed at Yukiko. Kuroda looks and sees two enemy shinobi from the Village Hidden among the Snow. Behind him is a battered Yukiko. She has a thankful look on her face and says, “I knew you would save me.” Kuroda walks over to her and starts to heal her wounds. One of the enemies throws a few kunai at Kuroda, but he deflects them easily. She yells at him, “Who the Hell are you?” Kuroda does not answer her, and continues to heal Yukiko. This time she fires of a Swallow Blizzard at him. He picks up Yukiko and dodges the attack. He then puts her behind a large rock.
He speaks to the attacker and says, “It is proper to give your own name before asking that of someone else.” She replies, “Why aren’t you a cocky one? You interfere in some other villages business, and don’t even identify yourself.” Kuroda looks confused, and then remembers he has his Petal headband still on. “Oh I see now why you are confused,” he says. He removes his headband and stores it in a pouch, “I am interfering, because you just tried to kill one of my allies. Now why would you do that?” “That weak little piece of ;);););) is your ally? Well then you must have been the one who told her to follow us around. Well my friend Rin and I don’t appreciate people spying on us. I guess I will just have to kill you both then.” She says. “Hey Gina you think you can handle them both on your own?” says her partner. “The girl is only a Genin, and this guy doesn’t look so tough.” Replies Gina. Kuroda yells to them, “Yukiko will no longer be participating in this fight, but I would recommend that you both attack me. You might have a chance then.” “Why you are a cocky one,” says Rin. “Go get him Gina.” “Yeah, this guy is gonna pay,” She says.
Gina starts off attacking him with some basic Taijutsu and ninja weapons, but soon realizes that it won’t work. Then she uses her Ice Weapons Jutsu to make a big mace. She handles it extremely well, coming close to hitting Kuroda. Kuroda decides to use his own Ice Weapons Jutsu and makes a staff. Gina is disgusted; she says, “That brat is a traitor to her country for teaching an outsider our Jutsu. Kuroda does not reply to the comment. Instead he starts his attack on her. She changes her mace into a staff of her own, but he is to fast for her and lands a few blows. She gets angry and then uses an Ice Clone Jutsu. She and her clone change the staffs into swords and counter Kuroda’s attack. At first Kuroda can defend himself, but eventually Gina overpowers him and he is forced to create two shadow clones. He combines with his clones to destroy hers, and injures her badly.
Rin sees that Gina is loosing and decides to step in and uses her Swallow Blizzard to attack. Gina switches back to her mace and they attack him together. He is able to fend them off, but they destroy one of his clones. Rin decides that the battle is taking to long and uses her Wolf-Fang Avalanche Jutsu to destroy Kuroda’s last clone. Kuroda is barely able to escape, but then Gina traps him in an Ice Prison Jutsu. Kuroda tries to break a bar, but instead shatters his staff. Then he tries to throw a kunai outside, but it freezes in between the bars. Gina laughs and says, “You cannot escape unless I release the Jutsu.” Kuroda yells to Yukiko, “Yukiko I need you to come out where I can see you and lift up your shirt so I can see your belly”. Rin and Gina laugh and say, “What ever you are trying to do, it’s not going to work. There is no way you can possibly escape.” Kuroda uses his Flying Thunder God Technique to transport over to Yukiko. “Thank You Yukiko, please return to a safe area now,” he says.
Rin is pissed and fires off a Swallow Blizzard at them. After dodging Kuroda decides to use a summoning Jutsu and summons the mammoth Uthuloxo. Rin and Gina talk together and decide that they will need to use their most powerful Jutsu to defeat Kuroda. Rin and Gina try to use their Wolf-Fang and Ice Prison combo to trap Kuroda and Uthuloxo, but after seeing it once he is smart enough not to get caught again. Then they go on the offense with Kuroda using his Ice Weapon staff and Uthuloxo using a Swallow Blizzard to attack Rin and Gina. Then Gina uses her strongest attack the Freezing Mist Jutsu to stop an attack in mid-air. Uthuloxo notices that the attack has a limited range, and would only affect them if they got to close. Gina tries to create some Ice Clones, so she can extend the range of her attack, but she does not have enough chakra left. Instead Rin uses her Tiger Pierces Dragon attack. The tiger freezes everything it touches, and can chase after its targets. Kuroda is fast enough to escape it, but Uthuloxo is caught and frozen. Kuroda then leads the tiger and gets it trapped in Gina’s Freezing Mist Jutsu.
Rin and Gina start yelling at each other, and Kuroda takes the opportunity to slash Gina across the chest. Rin sees that Kuroda will win if she does not attack, so she uses her most powerful attack. Rin uses her remaining chakra for her Ice Whale Jutsu. Recognizing the Jutsu Kuroda is able to escape the giant whale. Kuroda attacks Rin and she is too exhausted to dodge and he lands a slash on her chest as well.
Kuroda brings Rin and Gina together and prepares to give them a final blow when they ask for mercy. Kuroda is surprised by their request. They tell him that they are actually rogue ninja who left the snow village because they did not like the way it was being run. They tell him that none of the ninja truly cared about each other and would sacrifice their own lives like Kuroda did for Yukiko. They tell him that if he spares their lives they will follow him and do his bidding like Yukiko. Kuroda calls Yukiko to him and asks for her opinion. Yukiko says that if she believes they are like her and are just searching for someone who will be there when they need them. Kuroda decides he will let them live. He has Rin and Gina each sign one of his contracts. Then Kuroda has them take off their clothes. They hesitate and a surging pain goes through their bodies. Kuroda tells them, “This pain will happen every time you do not obey me. It is not fatal, but it hurts a lot.” They take their clothes off. He takes out a kunai and carves a symbol similar to an exploding tag into their flesh. Then he makes a few hand signs and pours some of his chakra into the marks. After a minute the mark dims and soon is no longer visible. Kuroda tells them to tell no one about what he just did, and to put their clothes back on.
Kuroda then starts to heal their wounds. Kuroda decides they should find a place to stay and rest a while. After they reach a suitable cave he has Rin and Gina tell him about the Village Hidden Among the Snow. After a few days of rest he decides he wants to see more of the village first hand. He takes Gina with him and has Rin stay behind to train Yukiko to use her Jutsu’s better. Kuroda and Gina travel to the snow village and pose as a couple of kids who want the village to search for their missing father. They stay in the village for a week and a half. Kuroda uses the time to learn more about how the village is run, and even a few secrets. Gina gets impatient, because Kuroda makes her stay inside for most of the time. After Kuroda is satisfied they return to Rin and Yukiko.

Obito
07-22-2009, 04:32 PM
He's a character in what Anime?

Kuroda Taishi
07-22-2009, 04:34 PM
He's a character in what Anime?

Who are you asking about?

Obito
07-22-2009, 04:35 PM
Kuroda Taishi, him, the user name you're using.

KIBAFAN321
07-22-2009, 04:36 PM
Yay! He summoned the mammoth!!! :)

Kuroda Taishi
07-22-2009, 04:36 PM
Kuroda Taishi, him, the user name you're using.

He is an original character I made up.

Kuroda Taishi
07-22-2009, 06:32 PM
Second post updated with new arc

Shika'sgurl
07-22-2009, 08:04 PM
Still loving the story!!

waterlemon-chi
07-23-2009, 06:43 PM
Getting better by the minute, KT. <3

Kuroda Taishi
07-23-2009, 07:17 PM
Getting better by the minute, KT. <3

Should I post something new every minute then? xD

god of puppets
07-25-2009, 11:23 AM
should i post something new every minute then? Xd
yes!!!!!!!!

Kuroda Taishi
07-26-2009, 04:32 PM
Visit the Mist Arc

After two weeks in the Snow County Kuroda decides he should probably return to the Hidden Petal Village, but first he wants to make a side trip. Kuroda, Yukiko, Rin, and Gina pose as siblings and take a freighter all the way to the Land of Water. The journey by water takes them a week and a half. After getting to the port they make their way to the Village Hidden in the Mist.
Kuroda puts on a disguise and makes himself look like an old man with a long white beard. He also has the girls change their faces and hair with jutsu. “I have a very secret and important mission and I require the shinobi known as Kasumi Momochi for the mission,” says Kuroda to the Village elders. “Kasumi is one of our top Jonin, she is very important to our village. What will this mission entail?” asks an elder. “This is a very top secret A rank mission. I will only reveal the details to Kasumi,” replies Kuroda. “Can’t you give us any more information than that?” asks another elder, “And why do you need Kasumi specifically?” “I cannot answer either of those questions,” replies Kuroda in a polite manor. The elders whisper among themselves and then the first one who spoke says, “Kasumi is unavailable at the moment, but her brother Desh Momochi is highly skilled and can take her place.” Kuroda fakes considering it for a moment and then puts a large bag of money on the table saying, “Kasumi is the only one who I trusted will be able to do the mission the way I want it.” Eventually the elders give in and summon Kasumi.
Kasumi does not recognize him because of his disguise. An elder tells her, “This man and his friends have hired you for a mission. They have paid a significant sum for your services. You are to leave immediately.” She asks, “So what exactly is the mission? Can you give me some details?” “I will tell you once we are outside the village,” responds Kuroda, “I trust you are prepared for anything that will come up.” She starts to argue, but the elders tell her, “The matter has already been settled Kasumi. Please complete the mission as fast as possible then return to the village.” She does not say anything else and follows her new employers out of the village.
A few miles away from the village Kuroda stops and turns around to Kasumi. She starts to ask him, “Why was I requested for this mission and what exactly is the mission? And…” Kuroda interrupts her, “Is anyone from the village is following us?” She says, “I was not aware there was any reason for someone to follow us.” Kuroda says, “Let me rephrase that; tell me if anyone was sent by the village to follow us.” Kasumi does not answer and she is hit by a wave of pain, and falls over. She slowly gets up and says, “it’s you isn’t it?” “Answer my question Kasumi, unless you want the pain to continue,” says Kuroda. Kasumi answers, “The village elders told me to watch you closely and abandon the mission if it was too dangerous, but they did not send anyone to follow us.” “Good,” says Kuroda, and then he takes off his disguise.
Kasumi asks who the others are, because they don’t look like they could be the same ones from the last time. “Don’t be foolish.” says Kuroda, “I would never bring any of those people on a personal mission.” “A personal mission? Why are you here? What do you want me for?” asks Kasumi. Kuroda replies, “I have come to see how you are. I also want to know why the Hidden Mist Village has not made any public responses to our encounter in the Tea Country.” Kasumi asks, “Is that all?’ “Yes, that is the only reason I have come. I became concerned when I did not hear any news in my own village and wanted more information. I figured that they might have used poison or some other means to kill you because they did not believe your story.” “Oh the Mizukage believed my story when he heard it, and the village is taking it very seriously,” replies Kasumi. “We have sent out messages to all our ninja to look out for a mysterious and deadly shinobi. We have sent spy’s all over to find out which village he is from. As for our encounter in the Tea Country the Mizukage has decided to wait for the Petal Village to make the first move before responding.” “I see, very interesting,” comments Kuroda.
Kuroda tells the others to take off their disguises. “Kasumi, this is Yukiko, Rin, and Gina. They are other associates of mine. If you ever happen to come across them during a mission for your village I want you to do your utmost to avoid any combat with them. Now you three return to the Snow Country and continue to train and become stronger. Yukiko you can tell the others of the mission I gave you, but I doubt you will find anyone. Do not go near the Village Hidden Among the Snow. If you need to contact me by either sending a note using the aliases Rin and I used; or you can come in person and ask for a ninja called Kayo Yuhi and her squad to go on a freight escort mission.” He throws them a bag of money. “This should be enough if you need to come in person. Now give me your headbands, from this point on you are no longer to associate yourself with that village. If nothing happens I will contact you in two years if nothing comes up, now go.” The three head off.
He turns toward Kasumi, “Now you will wait for a few days and then return to your village saying that you assassinated ninja from the Snow Village.” He tosses her one of the headbands. “In one month you will suddenly remember that you saw the Mystery ninja use a grass type Jutsu. You will suggest that the village give this information to the Hidden Petal Village and that there should be a joint mission to identify if the Mystery ninja hails from the grass village.” Kasumi asks, “Why do you want to blame the grass village? Kuroda replies, “I want to visit the grass village for my own purposes that you don’t need to know at the moment. However I am still a member of the Petal Village and I don’t have any good excuse to go there. So this will give me the opportunity I need.” Kasumi decides to not question it anymore. “Have fun on your mini-vacation,” says Kuroda, “Make sure to be discrete about where you go and what you do.” “That won’t be a problem,” she replies. He nods and then decides to leave and head back to his village.

KIBAFAN321
07-26-2009, 04:40 PM
That was a GREAT one Kuroda!!

So they are going to leave for 2 years? Thats long...

Kuroda Taishi
07-26-2009, 04:48 PM
That was a GREAT one Kuroda!!

So they are going to leave for 2 years? Thats long...

Just the Snow Ninja. Kuroda is going back to his village

Shika'sgurl
07-26-2009, 05:10 PM
Awesome! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Kuroda Taishi
07-26-2009, 05:33 PM
Actually i think i am going to update the one i just did. I haven't looked at that in a while and i think it needs to be redone.

KIBAFAN321
07-26-2009, 05:37 PM
Just the Snow Ninja. Kuroda is going back to his village

Oh. Ok. Just the Snow Village. I see....

Kuroda Taishi
07-26-2009, 07:59 PM
Post 287 updated

eagleye54321
07-27-2009, 09:50 PM
I like it Kuroda! You added Leaf twice.

waterlemon-chi
07-27-2009, 10:00 PM
Lovely updates, KT! <3 But I though you were gonna update every minute. xD

*Must read moar!*

eagleye54321
07-27-2009, 10:03 PM
Lovely updates, KT! <3 But I though you were gonna update every minute. xD

*Must read moar!*
Haha, agreed. :D

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 01:12 PM
I like it Kuroda! You added Leaf twice.

Did I? can you tell me where so i can change it to Petal?

yondaime
07-28-2009, 01:17 PM
Wow looks awesome but it is going to take me a century to get caught up if i start from the first chapter :cry:

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 01:24 PM
Wow looks awesome but it is going to take me a century to get caught up if i start from the first chapter :cry:

Naah, it is a quick read. Plus it is all posted on the first page in a nice, neat, organized manor

yondaime
07-28-2009, 01:27 PM
Naah, it is a quick read. Plus it is all posted on the first page in a nice, neat, organized manor

oh cool i better check it out

yondaime
07-28-2009, 01:41 PM
now i finished the --Introducing Kuroda Taishi Arc--

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 01:44 PM
now i finished the --Introducing Kuroda Taishi Arc--

That is one of the shorter ones.

yondaime
07-28-2009, 01:52 PM
That is one of the shorter ones.

you mean the other ones are long

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 01:53 PM
you mean the other ones are long

Compared to that one, Yes.

yondaime
07-28-2009, 02:10 PM
Compared to that one, Yes.

ok i will just try to read them fast

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 02:28 PM
ok i will just try to read them fast

lol, have fun. I also posted character descriptions in the first post. I reccomend checking them out.

yondaime
07-28-2009, 02:30 PM
lol, have fun. I also posted character descriptions in the first post. I reccomend checking them out.

yeah i read most of it and i finished --Team 3 Formation Arc--

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 02:32 PM
yeah i read most of it and i finished --Team 3 Formation Arc--

How do you like it so far?

Haru
07-28-2009, 02:41 PM
So this is your fanfic Froggy! It's actually really interesting. Update soon! n~n

yondaime
07-28-2009, 02:44 PM
How do you like it so far?

i noticed that some of the characters seem much like the naruto characters and i am not saying that it is bad but i guess it would have been better if you used some of your original character but all in all the story is good so far ;)

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 02:49 PM
i noticed that some of the characters seem much like the naruto characters and i am not saying that it is bad but i guess it would have been better if you used some of your original character but all in all the story is good so far ;)

Like which ones?

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 02:49 PM
So this is your fanfic Froggy! It's actually really interesting. Update soon! n~n

Probably tonight or tomorrow

yondaime
07-28-2009, 02:59 PM
Like which ones?

like ino and sakura same name and almost same personality -fighting over the smart kid i think his name was shun or something like that- but your fanfic is cool

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 04:41 PM
like ino and sakura same name and almost same personality -fighting over the smart kid i think his name was shun or something like that- but your fanfic is cool

Yeah, that's true I wrote it that way to parallel the Naruto story, but thier personalities are different after that.

yondaime
07-28-2009, 04:46 PM
Yeah, that's true I wrote it that way to parallel the Naruto story, but thier personalities are different after that.

yeah i have no problems other than that and i will be sure to tell you if i spot any in the way :cool:

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 04:51 PM
yeah i have no problems other than that and i will be sure to tell you if i spot any in the way :cool:

lol, thanks. I like feedback. Most of the people have just said they like it and not a whole lot more after that.

yondaime
07-28-2009, 05:08 PM
hey Kuroda i was kinda surprised that -Kuroda- could take down a jonin and from his level of performance he does not fight like a genin more like a chunin i would say.what was up with him telling sakura to take her clothes off for a moment there i thought the wrong way but when i realized that he carved some sign on her body i thought he made like a seal or something

PS-you kinda made kuroda a little too powerful or you made their sensei a little too weak

yondaime
07-28-2009, 05:09 PM
hey Kuroda i finished--Genin Test Arc-- and I was kinda surprised that -Kuroda- could take down a jonin and from his level of performance he does not fight like a genin more like a chunin i would say.what was up with him telling sakura to take her clothes off for a moment there i thought the wrong way but when i realized that he carved some sign on her body i thought he made like a seal or something

PS-you kinda made kuroda a little too powerful or you made their sensei a little too weak

yondaime
07-28-2009, 05:10 PM
oops double post excuse me Kuroda

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 05:14 PM
hey Kuroda i finished--Genin Test Arc-- and I was kinda surprised that -Kuroda- could take down a jonin and from his level of performance he does not fight like a genin more like a chunin i would say.what was up with him telling sakura to take her clothes off for a moment there i thought the wrong way but when i realized that he carved some sign on her body i thought he made like a seal or something

PS-you kinda made kuroda a little too powerful or you made their sensei a little too weak


Well those two things are the big mystery of the story, You will just have to keep reading to find out, xD

yondaime
07-28-2009, 05:15 PM
Well those two things are the big mystery of the story, You will just have to keep reading to find out, xD

oh ok seems interesting

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 05:22 PM
I fixed the petal/leaf thing in the latest arc

yondaime
07-28-2009, 05:33 PM
ok i stopped on the --Snow Country Arc-- cuz i g2g and it is way too long so i will read it tomorrow

Kuroda Taishi
07-28-2009, 05:40 PM
ok i stopped on the --Snow Country Arc-- cuz i g2g and it is way too long so i will read it tomorrow

Yeah that is the first really long one.

Chromekatana
07-29-2009, 12:14 AM
I have finished reading it.XD Its very intresting and I think I can tell what where the story is heading.;) Also,I was going to suggest adding more dialog to your storys but the final arc had a nice bit of that. SO good job.:p

yondaime
07-29-2009, 05:46 AM
I finished --Visit the Mist Arc-- and i am caught up to the whole story and i kinda see where this is going and good job on it Kuroda

Kuroda Taishi
07-29-2009, 09:12 AM
I have finished reading it.XD Its very intresting and I think I can tell what where the story is heading.;) Also,I was going to suggest adding more dialog to your storys but the final arc had a nice bit of that. SO good job.:p

Yeah, everytime i go back and look at stuff i try to add more detail and dialog.

Chromekatana
07-29-2009, 04:19 PM
Yeah, everytime i go back and look at stuff i try to add more detail and dialog.


Yeah, I thought you might.

yondaime
07-29-2009, 05:01 PM
Can't wait till next chapter because you fan fic --Kuroda Taishi (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=8722)-- is cool

Kuroda Taishi
07-29-2009, 05:24 PM
Can't wait till next chapter because you fan fic --Kuroda Taishi (http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=8722)-- is cool

I will try and get it out, I want to go over and redo some stuff, but i am feeling lazy, so we will see what happens

yondaime
07-29-2009, 05:30 PM
I will try and get it out, I want to go over and redo some stuff, but i am feeling lazy, so we will see what happens

ok i hope it is interesting though

Chromekatana
07-29-2009, 07:41 PM
I will try and get it out, I want to go over and redo some stuff, but i am feeling lazy, so we will see what happens

Let the lazyness control you,drive you,and use it to the fullest,or not :lol:.

I'm truly lazy and I know how this is. Don't be expecting the next chapter for awhile.XD

Vatanui AKA Pride
07-29-2009, 07:46 PM
Let the lazyness control you,drive you,and use it to the fullest,or not :lol:.

I'm truly lazy and I know how this is. Don't be expecting the next chapter for awhile.XD

I'm feeling lazy too....I called a Hiatus today for my story. :lol:

eagleye54321
07-30-2009, 12:21 AM
I'm feeling lazy too....I called a Hiatus today for my story. :lol:
Haha. I haven't read your story yet Pride. I might do it when I wake up after I go to bed. :mrgreen:

Chromekatana
07-30-2009, 12:58 AM
I'm feeling lazy too....I called a Hiatus today for my story. :lol:

Thank god. Means less for me to read.:lol:

god of puppets
07-30-2009, 10:22 AM
This is a great story Kuroda, but do you want me to read your stories and then tell you the mistakes from now on?

Kuroda Taishi
07-30-2009, 01:03 PM
This is a great story Kuroda, but do you want me to read your stories and then tell you the mistakes from now on?

Yeah, sure.

god of puppets
07-30-2009, 04:30 PM
alright, now go and write more arcs!

yondaime
07-31-2009, 04:59 PM
when is the next arc gonna be released

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 05:04 PM
Kuroda is Back Arc

Kuroda arrives outside the gates of the Petal Village, and then two guards jump down and block his entrance. They both take out a kunai and get ready to attack. “Who are you? And what are you doing here?” one of them asks. “Relax,” says Kuroda holding his hands up, “My name is Kuroda Taishi, I am a Genin here in the village.” “We know who Kuroda Taishi is,” says the guard, “and there is no way you are him.” “Why not?” asks Kuroda. “Because he vanished from the village two weeks ago,” replies the second guard, “You may look like him, but there is no way you are him.”
“Well if it is going to be like that then I request an audience with the Koukage,” says Kuroda. The guards look at each other and then one of them sends a message on the radio. Raj bursts into the Koukage’s office and immediately falls to his knees bowing, “I am sorry to intrude Lady Koukage but we have urgent news.” She sets down the scroll she was reading and replies, “What is it? Did the Tsuchikage send a reply message?” “No My Lady,” he responds, “There is a report from the East Entrance that there is a boy claiming to be Kuroda Taishi.” She stands up immediately, “What did you say?” “The guards say they stopped a boy trying to get into the village. He claims to be Kuroda Taishi and even looks like him. He has requested an audience with you.” The Koukage jumps out of the window and runs toward the gate leaving Raj behind.
Kuroda sees the Koukage approaching and sighs in relief, “Finally someone rational is coming. Will you tell them who I am Lady Koukage?” “I know who you look like, and who you claim to be,” says the 8th Koukage, “But I find it very hard to believe that you would just suddenly appear after running away from the village for a month.” Kuroda states, “What makes you think I ran away? I could have been kidnapped, or mislead by someone to think I was on a mission.” The Koukage admits, “Those two options are possible, but there is no proof of either of them.” Kuroda replies, “Well then I guess that the only real way to confirm my identity is to have Kayo to use her Mind Interrogation Jutsu on me.”
The Koukage then remarks, “The real Kuroda would not know about that Jutsu.” Kuroda counters, “I am well aware of the Jutsu and I am sure that it has been used on me at least once, due to a time gap in my memories. Plus I have seen Kayo-sensei use it on a mission before and I know it erases all traces of the invasion into the victims mind. The 8th now seems convinced that it is in fact Kuroda. The Koukage grabs him by the ear and drags him all the way to her office.
Once they get there she starts yelling at him about all the ninja they had to use to look for him, and how Sakura got extremely sick from worry and ended up in the hospital, and various other things that could have destroyed the entire village because he disappeared. Then she starts questioning him, “Now I want to know where you went and why you left even though you were under direct orders not to do so.” Kuroda calmly explains, “I was on my way to visit Sakura when a messenger bird flew up to me and gave me a note saying that a friend I met on one of his missions needed my help. So I decided that I would go on my own and help out, partly because I wanted to help and because I wanted to get out of the village for a while. It turns out that my friend was being harassed by some new gang that just showed up in his town. So I helped to get rid of the gang and set up some defenses, so that the people would be safe from any future trouble.”
The Koukage starts yelling at him saying, “We could have easily sent a team on a mission to help out and then this whole mess would have been avoided.” Kuroda replies, “The town was poor and would not have been able to pay for a mission, so I did it for free.” The Koukage admits, “It was the right thing to do, but you should have at least told someone. But now you have forced my hand. You will still be confined to the village like before, but now I will assign someone to follow you everywhere you go to make sure you obeys my orders.” Kuroda exits her office groaning when he runs into Kayo.
She tries to slap him across the face, but the pain of the seal surges through her. “You idiot where have you been? Sakura has been so worried about you. She even tried to kill herself in order to summon you back and make sure you were still alive. But this cursed pain prevented her from doing that. Finally she tried and failed so many times that her body just collapsed and the medical ninja are bewildered because they cannot figure out what is wrong.” Kuroda drags her into a private room and replies, “It was pointless of her to worry so much because if I die you will instantly know because the seal mark would burn off. Kayo snaps back, “How are we supposed to know that? You never told us that, so there was no way for us to know.” Kuroda smirks and says, “I was not aware that Sakura cared that much about my well being. Kayo gets angry, but Kuroda walks away to visit Sakura in the hospital.

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 05:05 PM
when is the next arc gonna be released

Right now, xD

Shika'sgurl
07-31-2009, 05:53 PM
Hurry and post the next arc! I can't wait!!!!! Wait, that means Sakura likes Kuroda right?

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 06:05 PM
Hurry and post the next arc! I can't wait!!!!! Wait, that means Sakura likes Kuroda right?

1. The next arc is a decent size, and i have to go over it and edit it. So if I am not feeling lazy i will do it tomorrow and post it sunday. If i am feeling lazy it will take longer.
2. Yes Sakura likes Kuroda.

Shika'sgurl
07-31-2009, 06:05 PM
Well, don't feel lazy on Sunday......plz?

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 06:10 PM
Well, don't feel lazy on Sunday......plz?

lol, I will try my best.

Shika'sgurl
07-31-2009, 06:12 PM
Thank you! :mrgreen:

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 06:14 PM
Thank you! :mrgreen:

In the meantime, Check out the 2nd link in the first post on the first page.

Shika'sgurl
07-31-2009, 06:16 PM
Okay!

Kuroda Taishi
07-31-2009, 07:31 PM
Okay!

sweet!

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 09:27 AM
Your fan fiction is in the fanfic contest

avamaru
08-01-2009, 09:29 AM
dude u want to much power eventually they will team up on u an d estroy uuu

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 10:06 AM
I read the first 2 arc. It ws good.

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 10:27 AM
Kurodo is serius about is training to get a new sensei like that and did that deal with Sakura. I wonder if he is evil or good.

Kuroda Taishi
08-01-2009, 12:08 PM
Your fan fiction is in the fanfic contest

Thank you sir.

dude u want to much power eventually they will team up on u an d estroy uuu

hmmm?

Kurodo is serius about is training to get a new sensei like that and did that deal with Sakura. I wonder if he is evil or good.

That is a very good question. You will just have to wait and find out, MUHUHAHAHA!

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 12:11 PM
Freaky

<Aurega?>
08-01-2009, 12:16 PM
You still have some leftover words that you missed when going through and changing words to avoid copyright issues. xD

Kuroda Taishi
08-01-2009, 12:19 PM
You still have some leftover words that you missed when going through and changing words to avoid copyright issues. xD

Are they in the last Arc i posted?

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 03:08 PM
Hey when is the next arc. I can't wait for it.

Kuroda Taishi
08-01-2009, 05:31 PM
Hey when is the next arc. I can't wait for it.

Either tomorrow, or sometime next week.

Kuroda Taishi
08-01-2009, 05:46 PM
In the meantime, I posted this a few weeks ago, so feel free to check it out.

So i decided to give you guys a taste of what is to come.
This is the arc i am currently working on. It is very far ahead of what i have posted so far. Enjoy

“So what are we going to do?” asks Kuroda. Yoshikuni looks in his pack and then brings out two strange looking poles and hands one to Kenta. He explains, “This is a special ninja flare. You just pour some chakra in it and step back, and then it will shoot high in the air and make a big explosion. We should be able to see it from the other village since they are a short distance from each other. You can also press this switch on the side to make the explosion a different color. If they attack your village, use the colors to communicate how many of them there are. White for one, yellow for 2, orange for 3, and Red for 4. You and Yui will head to Fungus Town while Kuroda and I go to Mushroom Town.”
“Don’t you think we should change the teams around?” asks Kuroda. “I admit it was good that we were the ones who encountered them first, but the situation has changed and I think you should go with Kenta or Yui.” “You and I are both faster and stronger than Yui and Kenta,” explains Yoshikuni, “So we will be able to defeat our opponents faster and head over to help them.” “We can handle it Kuroda,” says Kenta. “Well I see your point and you are a Jonin, so I will just have believe in you,” says Kuroda.
They head out in separate directions to set up ambushes in the two towns. Meanwhile in a hidden cave their enemies are lurking. “Stop staring at me!” yells Durza. “I can’t help it,” replies Riku licking his lips, “Seeing you with that scar just makes you look so delicious. I want to cut you up more and lick the blood from your wounds.” “You try it and I will kill you,” warns Durza. Gomi walks back in and asks, “Are you ready to go Durza?” “I’m fine,” says Durza, “So where are we going to next?”
“You and Riku are going to Mushroom Town while Gomi and I are going to Fungus Town,” says Surda. “No Way!” yells Durza, “I am not going alone anywhere with that psycho I can’t be expected to fight off the Petal Ninja and this psycho. Why are we splitting up anyways?” “Fine, I will take Riku and go to Mushroom Town,” says Gomi, “We are splitting up to divide their forces and make it easier to take them out.” “They will know where we are going because of the light,” points out Durza. “I will be using a copy jutsu so it will look like we are going to both places,” explains Gomi.
“I don’t care where I go as long as I get to cut up those Petal Ninja,” says Riku, “Although I would prefer to be with Durza, she is turning me on so much right now I can barely hold myself back.” “Get away from me,” says Durza. “Ohh come on now, I know you would love for me to cut you up and make love to me,” says Riku. Gomi grabs the back of Riku’s shirt and carries him away saying, “Let’s get moving. We have already wasted enough time.”

Chidori stream
08-01-2009, 05:51 PM
I can't wait for the whole thing.

Kuroda Taishi
08-02-2009, 06:42 AM
I can't wait for the whole thing.

I am almost finished with that arc. but you guys wont see it for awhile in the story.

Nick Tasogare
08-02-2009, 06:48 AM
I am almost finished with that arc. but you guys wont see it for awhile in the story.

Aww man!

Sasuke/Itachi
08-03-2009, 03:55 PM
Good story. I can't wait till next chapter.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 09:43 AM
Great story Kuroda! I finally caught up to the story. When are you going to post the next arc?

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 01:38 PM
Great story Kuroda! I finally caught up to the story. When are you going to post the next arc?

sometime later tonight

Sai's brother
08-04-2009, 01:39 PM
*waits 4 it*

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 01:40 PM
sometime later tonight

Oh..ok then. But why can't you do it now?

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 01:42 PM
Oh..ok then. But why can't you do it now?

I am at work right now, xD

yondaime
08-04-2009, 01:42 PM
well hope it is cool and interesting

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 01:43 PM
Oh...thats why. But if you're at work, how can you go on?

yondaime
08-04-2009, 01:43 PM
enjoy work too

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 01:43 PM
well hope it is cool and interesting

Every arc are cool and interesting!

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 01:46 PM
Oh...thats why. But if you're at work, how can you go on?

because my job is easy and does not require a lot of effort, so i can multitask.

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 01:50 PM
Oh. Thats why. And the story is at home...right?

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 01:57 PM
Oh. Thats why. And the story is at home...right?

Yep, it is at home

KIBAFAN321
08-04-2009, 01:59 PM
Oh..ok then.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 02:21 PM
because my job is easy and does not require a lot of effort, so i can multitask.
dudes can multi-task?!

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 02:24 PM
dudes can multi-task?!

yes, even better than girls can in some cases.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 03:03 PM
i dont believe that, we are the masters of multitasking...

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 03:10 PM
Not to get off topic. But I good at multitasking. I watch Naruto shippuden episodes and on my dsi at the same time.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 04:05 PM
eeeeeeeaaaaaaaasy...

Sasuke/Itachi
08-04-2009, 04:57 PM
I like it. I wonder whta Kuroda dream is. I think he wants to create a feale army or something like it. It has do when he was in the forest I think.

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 05:09 PM
i dont believe that, we are the masters of multitasking...

Not all of you, xD

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-04-2009, 06:41 PM
well definitely me ^.^

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 07:11 PM
Guard the Princess Arc

Kuroda is trapped inside the village for another month and this time he has fellow ninja following him around. He gets irritated very easily because he can never be alone, but is lucky when his escort turns out to be either Ichimaru, Kayo, or Sakura. Kuroda starts to notice that Sakura is getting very attached to him and is very grumpy when she returns from long mission and has not seen him for a few days.
One day a request comes in and all of Team 3 is called to the Koukage’s office. The Koukage starts out by saying, “I am still very angry at you Kuroda and was not planning on letting you go outside the village for another few months; however a request came in asking for you personally to be on the mission.” “A request for me, who is it from?” he inquires. “It seems that the King of the Valley Country asked for you. As you know, from your last visit, the Valley Country is in negotiations for peace with the neighboring Forest Country. Well it seems that there are some people who do not want peace and have threatened the Princess of the Valley Country. So until the negotiations are completed the King has asked that you come and guard her. Now if you did not know the Forest Country has a small ninja village, which is not much of a threat to us, but for a country with no ninja village of its own it is very serious. The King seems to believe that the ninja are very loyal to the leaders of the Forest Country and will not attack the girl. Yet there is still the possibility that someone will act of their own volition, so he wanted your protection. For obvious reasons I am sending the rest of your team with you,” decides the 8th Koukage.
Team 3 travels to the Forest Country and are greeted by Princess Kyoko when they arrive. She is very excited to see Kuroda again and has lots of fun with him. She now starts paying more attention to Jando, but only for the purpose of pulling pranks on him. Everyone is very entertained by this, except of course for Jando. An uneventful week goes by and nothing happens. Sakura uses the time to continue her training and can now produce three fully functional Shadow Clones. Kuroda notices that Jando has also improved and is now able to control his Byakugan better.
One morning Sakura, Kyoko and Kuroda go for a walk in the forest when they are attacked by a female ninja. “So they hired some Petal Ninja to protect the princess,” she says. “Who are you?” asks Kuroda shifting himself in front of Kyoko. She identifies herself, “I am Kohaku from the Village Hidden in the Woods. I do not support the alliance between the Forest Country and the Valley Country, and I have come here to ensure it does not happen. Be warned Petal ninja, I will do anything to stop it.” Kuroda orders, “Sakura, bring Kyoko back to the village. I will deal with her.” “Right, come with me princess,” replies Sakura as she grabs Kyoko and takes off.” Kohaku tries to follow them but is stopped by Kuroda. “You will have to get through me first,” says Kuroda as he engages her with a kunai.
Kohaku leaps back onto the branch of a large tree, “Bad move deciding to take me on by yourself. I have the advantage in the forest.” “I advise you not to underestimate me,” responds Kuroda. “Why because you are from the Petal village?” she asks, “That won’t make any difference. Ninja Art: Stick Needle Jutsu!” Thousands of tiny sticks and branches come flying at Kuroda from all directions. He tries to dodge it, but the attack is very fast and comes from many angles. Kuroda decides to use his Ice Weapon Jutsu and forms a sphere with the water in his pouch. Now Kuroda is able to deflect Kohaku’s attack easily.
“No bad,” comments Kohaku, “I will just have to change my strategy then.” Suddenly Jando, Sakura, and Kayo come to back him up. Kohaku decides, “Four against one, I don’t like those odds. My best option is to retreat for now and come back later.” She runs away deeper into the forest. Kuroda orders, “You three stay here with Princess Kyoko in case any more ninja show up. I will track her down and attempt to capture her.” Jando objects, “You have not even been with the team for a while. I do not know why the others are even listening to you, but I am coming too.” So Jando and Kuroda go after Kohaku.
Kohaku crosses the border into the Forest Country and goes inside a gigantic tree in a large forest. They follow her inside the base of the tree and into a large room with a strange looking tree in it. The tree looks to be half alive and half dead. It has wings and it has a portion of a scroll sticking out of it. Kohaku looks and sees them enter the room. She says, “I thought that all of you would follow me, but since there are only two of you I she won’t have to take the scroll from the tree.” Jando replies, “Don’t get cocky. It is a two on one match and you will need all the help you can get.” “You are the one who is cocky,” replies Kohaku as she quickly uses her Stick Needle Jutsu to attack them.
This time the attack is even more powerful than before. Jando and Kuroda are able to use Escape Jutsu to get away safely. Kohaku follows them outside the tree still attacking. She explains, “This part of the forest is denser than the area we were in earlier. My Jutsu are three times more powerful in here.” Kuroda uses his Ice Weapons Jutsu and creates a large shield that is big enough to protect both of them. Jando activates his Byakugan so he is able to see outside. “Good thinking Jando, now we can see what she is doing out there. You should observe her attacks and see if there is an opening we can use to our advantage.”
They sit under the shield fully protected from everything she throws at them. After a while Jando reports, “There is a pause in her attacks every 30 seconds we can strike then.” “Good work,” compliments Kuroda.” When the time is right they lift the shield and counter with kunai. She dodges behind a tree. Kohaku think, “Damn this isn’t working, that shield is too strong. I don’t see how though seeing as it is made of ice. Whatever it doesn’t matter, I will just have to step it up a bit. Ninja Art: Falling Tree Jutsu!” She barely even touches the tree she is hiding behind and it instantly toples over on top of the boys. Since they are under the shield they cannot dodge the attack, and the trees fall on top of the shield. It gains a small crack in it, but still holds strong.
“What was that?” asks Kuroda. “She threw a tree at us somehow,” explains Jando, “Do you think this shield will hold.” “I don’t know, just be ready if it breaks,” warns Kuroda. After 3 more trees fall, the shield breaks and they scatter for cover. As Kuroda runs her suspects, “The air here is not as cold as when I was in the snow village. I should have realized that the weapons I create will not be as strong. I also lost nearly all my water when the shield collapsed, I will have to be careful.”
Jando decides, “I am tired of hiding, it is time to go on the offensive.” He charges straight at Kohaku. She is so surprised that he lands a punch right in her face. Then Jando uses his Gentle Fist Taijutsu to close up some of her chakra points disabling the flow of chakra to her fingers. She tries to use her jutsu again since they are out in the open, but is unable to. “What the hell did you do to me?” she questions. “I noticed that you use your fingers to control your jutsu,” explains Jando, “So I messed with your chakra points. You wont be able to use those jutsu anymore.” “Not bad,” she says, “But you didn’t think those were my only jutsu did you? Ninja Art: Branch Bashing Jutsu!”
She uses her arms to control the branches of trees and attack Jando. Since the forest is so large Jando is not able to dodge the attacks and is knocked out when a branch hits him right in the back of the head. Kuroda takes the opening and uses his Headhunter Jutsu. He sprouts up from the ground underneath her and grabs her ankles and drags her down, trapping all but her head under the surface. He stands up and brushes his hands off. “Let me out of here!” demands Kohaku as she struggles to break free. “I haven’t practiced this a whole lot on a full-fledged ninja, but it is worth a shot,” comments Kuroda. He uses the Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Genjutsu Technique on Kohaku and makes her believe that she is being burned alive.
She screams in agony as the fire consumes her body. “I can stop this,” says Kuroda, “I can save you from the fire. I am the only one who can save you.” “Please stop, help, save me,” she begs. “I can save you,” he repeats, “But you must pledge your loyalty to me.” She is in such fear that she agrees and instantly signs the contract he gives to her. He releases the Genjutsu and brings her up from the ground. “Thank you,” she says. “ Kuroda tells her, “Take off your clothes.” She hesitates and a surging pain goes through her body. Kuroda explains, “That pain you are experiencing right now will happen every time you try to disobey me. It is not fatal, but it hurts a lot.” She begins stripping her clothes off. “It stopped,” she remarks. “All you have to do is follow orders and you will be fine,” replies Kuroda. “That pain, it was worse than the fire,” she comments as she takes the last article of cloth off.”
“Good that means it is working correctly,” he says, “Now please lie down and relax. When she does he holds out his palm in the space above her body and moves it around until he locates the correct spot. Then he takes out a kunai and carves a symbol similar to an exploding tag into her flesh. Then he makes a few hand signs and pours some of his chakra into the mark. After a minute the mark dims and soon is no longer visible. Kuroda says, “You are not to tell anyone about what just occurred. Oh, and you can put your clothes back on.”
“So what now?” asks Kohaku as she dresses. Kuroda asks, “Are there any other ninja who accompanied you?” “No, just me,” she admits, “There were a few others that agreed with her and did not want our countries to align, but none of them wanted to go against the village.” Kuroda ponders, “What should I do with her? I could send her back to her village, but would they accept her back? Hold on a moment I just remembered something.” “Kohaku, what was that strange tree with the scroll inside the gigantic tree?” he inquires. Kohaku replies, “The tree contains a very powerful summoning scroll, but it is sealed inside and can only be obtained if the person knows the answer to the riddle engraved in the tree.” Kuroda asks, “So what is the answer?” “I was bluffing earlier,” she admits, “I have been trying to figure it out for a while. I was trying to get it before you two got to me, but I would have needed more time to figure it out.”
“I guess I will just have to do it then,” he replies. “Do you really think you can get it?” she asks. “No harm in trying,” he responds. Kuroda walks over to the odd tree and looks for the riddle. It reads one of element and one of animal; both these things are bringers of life and both have three stages of existence. Touch them both to the scroll and it will be released. Kuroda thinks for a moment and then walks outside. He searches around for a while and then returns to the tree. In one hand he holds his water pouch with the last of his water and in the other a butterfly. He pours the water over the scroll and sets the butterfly onto it. Then he pulls and the scrolls slides out from the tree. After the scroll is completely out the wings of the tree recede and the dead portions are returned to life.
Kohaku is amazed by the ease at which Kuroda solved the riddle. Kuroda explains, “Water is a source of life for both plants and animals, while the butterfly spreads pollen from one flower to another and helps them reproduce. Water can also be in the form of ice, water, or vapor. While the butterfly starts out as a caterpillar, then becomes a cocoon, and finally transforms into the butterfly. The scroll will most likely summon a butterfly.” Kohaku requests, “Please allow me to sign the scroll.” Kuroda says, “You already posses some very powerful Jutsu and so I will give it to someone else. Now I need to figure out what to do with you.” “What do you mean?” she asks.
“Well I can’t just bring you back to the Petal village now can I?” he replies. “But then why did you…?” she asks. He interrupts, “I was impressed by your strength and decided I could use you for my plan.” “Your plan?” she inquires. “I will inform you when the time is right, but that won’t be for a while. Anyways I just decided what I will do with you.” “And that is?” she asks. “Well you can’t go back to your village and I can’t bring you back to mine. So I will leave you here. You will become a personal guard for Princess Kyoko and protect her from any future attacks.” “What about the other Petal Ninja?” asks Kohaku. “The princess and the others have signed contracts like you have,” he explains, “and the guy on the ground is not important. We can trick him easily.”
Kuroda brings Kohaku with him back to the mansion. He meets with Kayo and Sakura and has them change Kohaku’s appearance just enough so that no one will recognize her. Then Kuroda goes back for Jando. Jando is just starting to regain consciousness when Kuroda arrives.
“Welcome back,” he greets Jando, “Good work.” “What do you mean?” asks Jando rubbing his head. “You killed that Tree ninja with one of your exploding tags.” “I did?” says Jando still a little groggy. “Yep, but she got you in the head at the same time. You have been out for about an hour.” “What about the girls?” asks Jando. “They are fine,” says Kuroda, “Kayo-sensei sent Sakura to find us a while back. It looks like that girl was on her own, but I sent Sakura back just in case and did a little recon. You were waking up when I got back.” They return to the mansion and Jando does not recognize Kohaku who they say was very helpful during the attack and is being hired as a new assistant for Princess Kyoko. A week later the King returns from successful negotiations and is told of about the attack and the new guard for Kyoko.
Team 3 starts their return journey. Kuroda decides to give his newly acquired summoning scroll to Sakura. Jando is mad because he is now the only one without a scroll. Sakura tests the scroll out and summons a normal sized white butterfly called Papilio. Jando laughs at the size of the butterfly, and Sakura seems disappointed. Kuroda tells her, “Even the smallest creatures can be valuable assets; maybe not in battle, but in other areas. You should get familiar with Papilio and practice with her. You should also practice the Summoning Jutsu so you can get better at it and eventually summon larger butterflies.” “All right I will,” she says with a determined look on her face.
Team 3 arrives back in the village after a successful mission, but Kuroda is immediately put back on suspension and not able to leave the village. Kuroda’s birthday comes and goes, but the only one who notices is Ichimaru. Kuroda does not seem surprised that no one else remembered. The two spend the day together and talk about the times before they became Genin and how much they have changed. At the end of the day Ichimaru mentions, “So the Chunin exams are coming up again in a few weeks. Team 10 is going to participate in them this time. Kuroda says, “I think that my team seems like it would be ready, but I doubt that the Koukage would let me participate.” Ichimaru offers, “I can to talk to the Koukage on your behalf,” Kuroda replies, “I doubt it will make any difference, but go ahead if you want. It is worth a shot.”

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 07:39 PM
That was good. I hope Kuroda can particapate in the chunin exams that wwould be awesome.

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 07:52 PM
That was good. I hope Kuroda can particapate in the chunin exams that wwould be awesome.

......<.<.......>.>......... no comment, xD

Chidori stream
08-04-2009, 07:57 PM
Why are people post wierd stuff these days?

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 08:10 PM
Why are people post wierd stuff these days?

ummmm......idk

Kuroda Taishi
08-04-2009, 08:19 PM
First page updated with new arc!

Shika'sgurl
08-04-2009, 09:29 PM
Love it!!

KIBAFAN: That was a great one, Kuroda!! Now....HURRY UP AND TYPE THE NEXT ONE! Thank you! :D

Kiba, he just posted this one. Oh, i hope that Kuroda can do the chunin exams.

True..............

Sai's brother
08-04-2009, 09:36 PM
That was great Kuroda

takuya
08-05-2009, 06:24 AM
......<.<.......>.>......... no comment, xDi think i know why he said no comment something's going to happen during the chunin exams either Kuroda's plan or something else

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-05-2009, 07:49 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!write more please ^.^

yondaime
08-05-2009, 02:32 PM
I think you misspelled some word in Guard the Princess Arc

Obito
08-05-2009, 02:40 PM
That Demon Illusion, it's the same Tech used by Orochimaru did on Sasuke and Sakura, Good Story, I'll be seeing the next one to come.

Kuroda Taishi
08-05-2009, 05:11 PM
Love it!!

KIBAFAN: That was a great one, Kuroda!! Now....HURRY UP AND TYPE THE NEXT ONE! Thank you! :D

Kiba, he just posted this one. Oh, i hope that Kuroda can do the chunin exams.

True..............


just wait and see.

i think i know why he said no comment something's going to happen during the chunin exams either Kuroda's plan or something else

possibly

I think you misspelled some word in Guard the Princess Arc

did i? which ones?

That Demon Illusion, it's the same Tech used by Orochimaru did on Sasuke and Sakura, Good Story, I'll be seeing the next one to come.

Yes, same technique, just used differently

yondaime
08-06-2009, 04:07 PM
On this part i think you meant Violation and there are some others but can't look for them now cuz it will take a long time

Yet there is still the possibility that someone will act of their own volition, so he wanted your protection.

Kuroda Taishi
08-06-2009, 05:47 PM
On this part i think you meant Violation and there are some others but can't look for them now cuz it will take a long time

Yet there is still the possibility that someone will act of their own volition, so he wanted your protection.

No I did mean volition.

Kuroda Taishi
08-06-2009, 07:40 PM
next part might be out sometime this weekend

Yori
08-06-2009, 07:41 PM
Hey kuroda i really like your story, im writing a new chapter for forever king

Kuroda Taishi
08-06-2009, 07:42 PM
vote for favorite character here: http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/foru...ad.php?t=11456 (http://naruto.vfatality.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=11456)

Sasuke/Itachi
08-06-2009, 07:51 PM
Good story.

Kuroda Taishi
08-06-2009, 08:04 PM
Hey kuroda i really like your story, im writing a new chapter for forever king

is that your fanfic?

Good story.

thank you

Yori
08-06-2009, 08:26 PM
is that your fanfic?



Yea forever king is my fanfic, it's way diff than my angel of darkness, im actually in to it

Kuroda Taishi
08-07-2009, 07:07 AM
Yea forever king is my fanfic, it's way diff than my angel of darkness, im actually in to it

cool i will check it out when i have time

Yori
08-07-2009, 12:37 PM
hey Kuroda i wanted to ask your permission to see will it would be alright if i use the land of snow in my story. I want an criminal organization to come from there

Kuroda Taishi
08-07-2009, 02:28 PM
hey Kuroda i wanted to ask your permission to see will it would be alright if i use the land of snow in my story. I want an criminal organization to come from there

you dont have to ask me to use it, xD

btw, just a warning the mods will delete your fic if you use The Hidden Leaf village, so just change the name like i did.

Yori
08-07-2009, 03:38 PM
The hidden leaf? I dont use the hidden leaf in my story, or the other villages in naruto

Kuroda Taishi
08-07-2009, 03:40 PM
The hidden leaf? I dont use the hidden leaf in my story, or the other villages in naruto

just warning you.

ps. (they said the other villages were ok to use)

Yori
08-07-2009, 03:40 PM
just warning you.

ps. (they said the other villages were ok to use)

Oh ok, thanks for the heads up

waterlemon-chi
08-07-2009, 09:10 PM
I've been neglecting duties for a while. xD But anyway, update as soon as you can, KT! Great storyline! <3

Kuroda Taishi
08-08-2009, 07:40 AM
I've been neglecting duties for a while. xD But anyway, update as soon as you can, KT! Great storyline! <3


I am glad to announce Chi has accepted my invitation to assist me in rewriting the charcer descriptions. I am confident she will do a great job.

god of puppets
08-08-2009, 05:32 PM
Kuroda, in ur latest arc, u wrote that the koukage said that Kuroda was gone for a month, while he was actually gone for 2 weeks.

Kuroda Taishi
08-08-2009, 06:23 PM
Kuroda, in ur latest arc, u wrote that the koukage said that Kuroda was gone for a month, while he was actually gone for 2 weeks.

can you tell me where?

god of puppets
08-08-2009, 08:13 PM
can you tell me where?second paragraph, start on the 3rd sentence wen the Koukage begins to talk to kuroda and keep goin till the end of the quote

Kuroda Taishi
08-08-2009, 08:19 PM
second paragraph, start on the 3rd sentence wen the Koukage begins to talk to kuroda and keep goin till the end of the quote

is this in the Gaurd the princess arc?

god of puppets
08-08-2009, 08:27 PM
is this in the Gaurd the princess arc?no the latest one, the kuroda is back arc

Kuroda Taishi
08-08-2009, 08:32 PM
no the latest one, the kuroda is back arc

i am fine with what is written. It is an exageration

Kuroda Taishi
08-09-2009, 07:40 AM
I should have the next arc posted later today, i might be doing something specail for it, i have not decided yet.

Chromekatana
08-09-2009, 05:12 PM
I should have the next arc posted later today, i might be doing something specail for it, i have not decided yet.


Uh uh,like add one fo the characters from your contest?

Kuroda Taishi
08-09-2009, 05:14 PM
Uh uh,like add one fo the characters from your contest?

no, not yet. I think i found a place where i could fit 1 or more in, but i have to pick which ones i like

Yori
08-09-2009, 05:15 PM
*cough* mines*Cough*

god of puppets
08-09-2009, 05:33 PM
i am fine with what is written. It is an exageration
alright then...

Kuroda Taishi
08-09-2009, 05:48 PM
*cough* mines*Cough*

Hmm? You say something? xD

Kuroda Taishi
08-09-2009, 07:32 PM
Mist Alliance Arc

A day later Team 3 including Kuroda is summoned to the Koukage’s office. She starts off, “As I am sure you are all aware, I restricted Kuroda to the village after his mission in the Tea Country with Team 15. The team and the Mist ninja Kasumi Momochi were attacked by an unknown person, and then on the return to the village Kuroda was attacked again. I have had recent talks with the Village Hidden in the Mist regarding this matter.” “Did you find out what Kasumi was doing in the Tea Country?” inquires Kayo. “The Mizukage did not tell me and I did not ask,” replies the Koukage, “Whatever her assignment was it is not a high priority at the moment.”
“Still it was suspicious,” remarks Kuroda. “Anyways it seems that The Hidden Mist has uncovered evidence that the ninja could possibly be from the Village Hidden in the Grass,” reveals the 8th, “Our two shinobi villages have decided to participate in a joint scouting mission as a sign of good faith between us. You can come in now.” A tall young man with spiky light blue hair walks into the room. He wears light blue pants, a brown vest, and his mist headband is slightly slanted on his forehead. He introduces himself, “I am Desh Momochi, the Mizukage sent me as his representative on this mission.” “Momoshi, are you related to…?” inquires Kayo. “She is my older sister,” says Desh cutting her off. “How come you are alone?” asks Sakura. “How come you are not?” retorts Desh. “Quiet down all of you, I want to go over the mission rules,” says the Koukage.
“Lady Koukage, why am I being sent on a mission where I could possibly encounter the ninja who might have attacked me?” asks Kuroda, “And if the mystery ninja is from the grass village, then its leaders might know what I look like anyways and they might attack.” She replies, I am sending you because there is a possibility that it might trigger some suppressed memories and you might be able to recognize the ninja and confirm his identity.” Kuroda then asks, “As you wish Lady Koukage. Now I have a question for you Desh. Why is the Mist Village only sent one ninja? This is a joint mission, and I would want an equal number of ninja from both villages if I was in charge.” Desh replies, “I am more than capable of conducting the whole mission on my own, and the only reason that your team is going along is to ease relations between our two nations.”
“Are you two done now?” asks the Koukage. “Yes I apologize if I spoke out of turn,” says Kuroda. “Now you are to go to the Grass Country and search for any traces of this mysterious ninja. This mission is strictly to gather information. You are to retreat if you are met with any opposition. Is that understood?” “Yes Lady Koukage,” confirm all of Team 3. “Desh?” she inquires. “Yeah, I was already told by the Mizukage,” he replies. “Good, then you are to head out as soon as you are ready,” she says.
Team 3 and Desh leave on the mission and head to the border of the Land of Fire and the Land of Grass. Desh and Kuroda get into conversation where Desh comments, “You talk a lot. If this mystery ninja had not attacked my sister Kasumi, then you would not even be alive right now.” Kuroda retorts, “It was a four on one situation.” Desh mocks the statement, “So what? My sister is stronger than most of the Jonin in the Hidden Petal Village there is no way she would have lost.” Kuroda then mentions, “You say that, and yet she was apparently not strong enough to defeat the mystery ninja.” Desh starts to get angry, but Kayo interrupts, “Settle down. We are approaching the border.”
Desh says, “I don’t have to follow your orders.” She reminds him, “This is a joint mission, and since I am the highest in rank that you will have to follow my orders in order to ensure the success of the mission.” “Fine, I will follow your command,” replies Desh, “For the moment.” The team passes through the border town, without any hassle. They make camp for the night.
They next day the team disguises themselves as ordinary travelers and they put on long blue traveling cloaks. Then they head for a large city only a few miles away from the border. It is a city known for having lots of information on anything and everything. Kuroda notices that three ninja are following them, but does not mention it to anyone else. When they enter the city Desh suggests, “I am familiar with a few places. We should check them and ask around about any strong or mysterious ninja that have passed through lately.” “Do you really think that will work?” asks Sakura. “Everyone is willing to talk,” explains Desh smirking, “For a price.” “What if they give us bad information?” asks Jando, “What if it is just rumors?” “Every rumor has some sort of factual base,” says Kayo, “besides we are looking for rumors and whispers about this mystery ninja. This will also be good training for your information gathering skills.” “Training?” inquires Jando, “I didn’t think of that.” “I will do my best!” announces Sakura. “I know you will,” says Kuroda patting her head and messing up her hair, making her blush.
“All right, let’s get moving then,” orders Kayo. “Follow me,” says Desh, “We will head to a little flower shop I know of.” The team sets out through the city going to multiple locations trying to find the information they need. Kuroda is curious about how Desh knows all of these information sources and he is very careful to take note of all of them. He advises Sakura to do the same. After a while they are directed to a small restaurant that looks to have very promising information. They enter the restaurant and Kuroda, Jando, and Sakura sit down at a table while Desh and Kayo go to talk to the bartender. After a drink of water Kuroda stands up and starts to walk away. “Where are you going Kuroda?” asks Sakura. “To the washroom, do you want to come?” he replies smirking.
Meanwhile the bartender has directed Kayo and Desh to a man in a black suit sitting alone at a corner booth and smoking a cigarette. “Do you mind if we join you?” asks Kayo as they walk up. “Who is your friend?” asks the man. “Just my younger brother,” she replies. “Well in that case you are welcome to sit with me,” responds the man, “As long as you let me see that pretty face of yours.” Kayo lowers the hood of her cloak and smirks as she sits down. Desh sits next to her and asks, “So are you the one called Byakko?” “That’s what they call me,” confirms Byakko, “and if you don’t mind I would like your sister to do the talking. I much prefer listening to the voice of a woman.” “We were told that you might have some information we have been looking for,” explains Kayo.
“I have information on a lot of things,” replies Byakko. “We are looking for someone,” says Kayo. “I know lots of people,” says Byakko taking another puff of his cigarette. “We are looking for a Ninja,” says Kayo. “A ninja, well why didn’t you say so? So what kind of ninja? Is it a man or a woman? Is there anything special about them? Where are they from?” asks Byakko. “I can’t tell you the gender or give you any facial descriptions. We believe that the ninja is from the Grass Village,” explains Kayo, “However I can tell you the ninja is very strong. They were able to take out 2 jonin with ease, and possibly has an ability to alter memories.”
“A strong ninja from the Grass village you say? Well that is interesting,” comment Byakko. “Why is that?” asks Kayo. “Because there is a very skilled Grass Ninja staying at an inn on the far end of the city,” explains Byakko, “I believe his name is Mazuma Shiranui.” “You are positive about this?” asks Kayo. “Absolutely,” he confirms. “Well I think we will be going then,” she says as she starts to stand and take out some money. “There is no need for that,” says Byakko, “Just make sure you stop by and chat the next time you are in town.” “I will be sure to do so,” replies Kayo.
Meanwhile Kuroda has made a shadow clone while he was in the bathroom. The clone walks out and joins his team when Kayo and Desh rejoin them. “Find anything useful?” asks the clone. “Kayo pulls the hood up on her cloak and replies, “Yes, it seems there is someone in town who fits the profile.” “Really?” asks Jando. “We will find out when we get there,” says Desh. They leave and the real Kuroda emerges from the bathroom and takes a seat in an empty corner of the restaurant.
He waits a few minutes until he spots the ninjas that have been following his team since they entered the city. To be continued...

Kuroda Taishi
08-10-2009, 07:41 PM
second half will be posted tomorrow

Shika'sgurl
08-10-2009, 10:04 PM
Okay. I can't wait!

KIBAFAN321
08-11-2009, 11:55 AM
What's he going to do, Kuroda? Whats he going to do?!

Kuroda Taishi
08-11-2009, 07:12 PM
What's he going to do, Kuroda? Whats he going to do?!

you will just have to wait and see, xD

Anyways sorry i was busy today i wont have the rest posted till tomorrow

Amai Shikome
08-11-2009, 07:14 PM
Can't wait!

Kuroda Taishi
08-11-2009, 07:42 PM
Can't wait!

Hopefully i wont be busy or lazy tomorrow, xD

KIBAFAN321
08-12-2009, 10:19 AM
you will just have to wait and see, xD

Anyways sorry i was busy today i wont have the rest posted till tomorrow

I don't want to wait. I waited long enough!!

:( So no story yesterday...but there will be story today! YAY! :D

Kuroda Taishi
08-12-2009, 08:07 PM
...He waits a few minutes until he spots the ninjas, which have been following his team since they entered the city, enter the restaurant. They are a young Genin team made of two guys and a girl. They stop and talk to each other, Kuroda overhears them call the girl Midori, and tell her to head back to the village and tell the leader about the enemy ninja’s actions. They head in separate directions, and Kuroda follows Midori. She heads towards the edge of the city and then stops and goes inside an old house. Kuroda follows her inside, but is attacked by a flurry of shuriken. Kuroda is able to perform a Replacement Jutsu to escape to another side of the room.
Midori takes out a kunai and says, “I noticed you following me after I left the others. I probably should have tried to get some help, but you didn’t look that strong so I decided to take you on all by myself.” Kuroda comments, “Confidence is a good thing to have, but looks can be deceiving and you should never underestimate a fellow ninja.” “And what does that say about you?” she replies, “Seeing as you came after me on your own.” “Well said,” compliments Kuroda,” However I know something that you do not.” “And what is that?” she inquires. “You will just have to find that out on your own,” he replies.
“Fine then, here I come,” she shouts as she charges toward him. Midori uses basic Taijutsu to attack Kuroda but he easily counters all of her attacks. He lands a hard kick to her gut and sends her flying into a wall. Her back crashes into it and she slumps to the ground panting. He starts to say, “Well this is disappointing. You are not even worth my time, and I should probably kill you quickly before…” “Not so fast, Grass Style: Vine Spear Jutsu!” A long vine that she wore curled up on her belt unrolls itself and turns into a long sharp spear. Kuroda thinks, “Very intriguing, I wasn’t expecting anything from her. She may be useful after all.”
She jabs the spear at him from across the room, and he neatly slips to the side to avoid it. “That is strange, I thought she was exhausted,” thinks Kuroda. She twists the spear to the side and tries to slash his mid-section. Kuroda nimbly jumps over the spear and it cuts a nearby table in two. “You have been holding back,” comments Kuroda. “You should never attack an unknown enemy at full strength right off the bat,” replies Midori. She twirls the spear back behind her back and raises it above her head, and then brings it down for a powerful blow. Again Kuroda sidesteps, and the jumps over the vine spear when she does a follow up horizontal attack.
The same attack and dodge game continues on for a while. Midori’s attacks are more disciplined, but Kuroda is able to avoid them all with ease. “Well I think I have seen enough,” announces Kuroda. “What do you mean?” she asks. “Haven’t you noticed?” says Kuroda smirking, “I’ve just been testing out your abilities the whole time. Suddenly he lunges forward, straight past her defenses and slashes her across the chest with his kunai. Before she can even react he uses his speed and technique to land a series of painful blows with a kunai. She falls to the ground and drops her vine spear. It loses its shape and returns to a normal vine as soon as it falls from her grasp.
Then he uses his Demonic Illusion Hell Viewing Technique on Midori. A giant white tiger appears on top of her and threatens to bite her head off. She is too frightened to recognize that it is a Genjutsu. Because of the insane fear and panic caused by the jutsu she is in no condition to make a rational decision. So Kuroda is easily able to convince her to sign one of his blood contracts. Then he does his special sealing ritual, transferring a minute portion of his chakra into the carving he makes on her upper thigh. After the ritual Kuroda interrogates her for information. “So why was your team following us?” he asks as he begins to heal her wounds with his medical jutsu. “My squad was sent to investigate why the Petal Village and the Mist Village were working together on a mission in the Land of Grass,” explains Midori.
“I see, and why did your friends send you off on your own?” he asks. “We followed you around all day and all you were doing was searching for information. They sent me back to ask the village if we should continue the mission,” she replies. “And they will continue tracking my team while you are gone?” he asks as he finishes up the final cut on her left breast.” “Yes,” she answers. “You should be fine now,” he says as he stands up, “You can put your shirt back on.” She quickly covers herself, already embarrassed and confused about what happened. “So what now?” she asks.
Kuroda tells Midori, “You will return to your village like you originally planned, and tell your superiors that the enemy ninja were searching for a mysterious and powerful ninja that was rumored to be attacking people and stealing valuable information from their villages. The Petal and Mist village have uncovered evidence that the ninja uses techniques from the Hidden Grass Village and they sent a scouting team to investigate.” “Why do you want me to tell them that?” she inquires. “Because it is the truth,” he replies. She looks at him skeptically, “But why would you want me to tell them what you are really doing here?” “That, you don’t need to know,” he replies. “Fine, is that all then? Can I go?” “Hold on a minute,” he replies.
Kuroda transforms into a perfect replica of Midori. “Why are you…?” she asks. “Because I need to look friendly when I catch up with your team,” explains Kuroda, “Now you can go.” She hesitates for a second and then takes off; he leaves to catch up with her team. Kuroda uses his Flying Thunder God Technique to catch up in a fraction of the time. Kuroda quickly reaches the other two Grass Village Genin and runs up behind them. “Midori, what are you doing?” one asks, “We told you to go back to the village.” He explains, “One of the enemy ninja tried to follow me, but I defeated him and learned that they are looking for a powerful ninja from the Grass Village and were sent to kill him.” “What are you serious?” one exclaims. The other comments, “The only ninja in the area is Mazuma Shiranui because he is on vacation.” “I know,” says Kuroda, “He must be their target. We need to warn him quickly!” They say, “If we take the shortcut we should be able to beat the enemy by a few minutes and warn Mazuma.”
After a speedy race across the village they reach Mazuma right before he enters his hotel. “Muzuma sensei, there is a group of enemy ninja in this village. We have solid information that they have been sent here to assassinate you,” explains one of the boys.”Where are they now?” asks Mazuma. “They are headed this way,” replies a disguised Kuroda. “All right, Midori you head back to the Village and tell the elders about this. We will stay here and see what they truly intend to do,” says Mazuma. “Yes I will go now,” says Kuroda. He heads off just when he sees his team approaching from afar.
As Team 3 approaches the hotel Desh notices that Kuroda is falling back in the formation. “What is that guy playing at?” he wonders. However he quickly forgets when he sees three grass ninja in front of the hotel. While no one notices the real Kuroda switches with the clone and rejoins the group. Desh darts ahead of the group and heads towards the grass ninja while pulling out a kunai. “Wait, what are you doing?” says Sakura as he runs past her. “Damn I told him not to separate from the group!” shouts Kayo as she and the others sprint after him.
Mazuma sees a group sprinting towards him and takes it as a threat. He quickly takes the vine off his belt and hardens it into a spear. Desh doesn’t stop even when he sees this, just mealy raising up his kunai a bit. Mazuma thrusts Vine Spear forward and hits Desh right in the chest, but it is a Water Clone and falls into a puddle. The real Desh appears back where the rest of the group is and they come to a stop. Desh yells, “You just made a big mistake Grass Ninja! Attacking another persoon like that without any warning. Mazuma replies, “Foreign ninja are not supposed to be in the grass country without the permission of the Hidden Grass Village. I had every right to attack,” Desh corrects him, “That rule only applies to the Hidden Village. The entire country is fair game to any ninja from any other village unless you set up strict border entrances like the rain village. By attacking so recklessly you might have just declared war on the Mist Village. I should kill him for attacking someone who so obviously was not attacking him.”
Mazuma responds, I just received information that a group was sent to assassinate me. How am I supposed to react when someone rushes at me with a knife?” Desh laughs, “I don’t even know who you are. You are a nobody! If I had really wanted to kill you i would not have come straight towards you like an idiot.” Kayo steps in and whispers to Desh, “That is enough, our cover is blown and the mission goals are no longer obtainable. We need to retreat.” Desh regretfully agrees, “Fine let’s get out of here then.” “I apologize for the intrusion, we will be leaving now,” Kayo says to the Grass ninja. As they turn to go Desh warns Mazuma, “Hey you! The next time we meet I won’t hesitate to kill you even if it is against my orders.” They leave and head back towards the border.
After passing through the border town they rest at a Petal Village outpost. Kuroda watches as Sakura practices her Summoning Jutsu and is now able to summon two Butterflies about the size of dogs. Kayo yells at Desh, “What were you thinking? You just made all the work we did useless! Now we can’t even go investigate any of the other cities in the Grass village. Desh does not really pay attention and says, “I told you I would have done a lot better on my own.” Jando comments, “Yeah, that was stupid for just charging towards an enemy group all by yourself.” Sakura comments to Kuroda, “Reminds you of someone else we know?” Kuroda snickers and she giggles.
They arrive back in the Hidden Petal Village a few days later and immediately report to the Koukage. It mostly consists of Kayo and Jando complaining about Desh. The Koukage admits, “I knew the mission did not have a high success probability in the first place. I only agreed to it to improve relations with the Hidden Mist.” She excuses Desh and he heads back to his own village. Everyone else leaves after some more complaints, but Kuroda stays behind.
He asks the Koukage, “Was it really a good idea to expose a possible alliance to other ninja villages?” The Koukage replies, “You wouldn’t understand the complexities of the situation or my true intentions. I am not going to bother explaining them.” “I have done a lot of reading about politics,” he replies. “Books can only tell you so much,” she replies, “Practical application is an entirely different thing.” Sensing she wouldn’t say anymore he changes she subject, “So am I going to be put back on suspension now?” She replies, “I have decided to return you to active duty.” Kuroda seems genuinely surprised and asks, “Why the sudden change?” She replies, “The Chunin exams are coming up soon. It will be the first time in over two centuries that the Petal Village will be participating alongside the Rock Village. I want the best Genin in the village to be participating in it, which includes you. Kuroda decides that her answer is satisfying and exits her office. Kuroda goes to find Sakura to see if she has learned any more about her new summons.

Sai's brother
08-12-2009, 08:15 PM
great story Kuroda :D

Kuroda Taishi
08-12-2009, 08:19 PM
The second half of the new arc is now posted. You can read the whole thing on the first page.

Sai's brother
08-12-2009, 08:21 PM
Ive read both parts

Kuroda Taishi
08-12-2009, 08:23 PM
Ive read both parts

It was a general announcement, xD

Sai's brother
08-12-2009, 08:24 PM
It was a general announcement, xD


I know ^^"

Kuroda Taishi
08-12-2009, 08:27 PM
I know ^^"

...ok, xD

Cade
08-13-2009, 12:47 AM
You have a good story Kuroda,but I see that soem of the characters in the fanfic leans a little towards what's in the actual show in Naruto,so try to keep it down a little.

KIBAFAN321
08-13-2009, 10:50 AM
...So they are going to participate in the chunin exam...right? And those butterflies are HUGE!!!

When are you going to post another story, Kuroda?

Kuroda Taishi
08-13-2009, 01:10 PM
You have a good story Kuroda,but I see that soem of the characters in the fanfic leans a little towards what's in the actual show in Naruto,so try to keep it down a little.

elaborate please

Kuroda Taishi
08-14-2009, 10:47 AM
...So they are going to participate in the chunin exam...right? And those butterflies are HUGE!!!

When are you going to post another story, Kuroda?

I will have an announcement about that either later today or tomorrow

KIBAFAN321
08-14-2009, 10:48 AM
Make it today, Kuroda! Make it today!!!! :D :D :D

Amai Shikome
08-14-2009, 11:12 AM
Make it today, Kuroda! Make it today!!!! :D :D :D
I love that custom title of yours. Spams a lot....priceless

Shika'sgurl
08-14-2009, 04:05 PM
Yay! Chunin exams are next!!!! I can't wait!

Cade
08-15-2009, 07:55 PM
elaborate please
Jando Hyuga.Some villages in the story may relate to the villages in the show.

Kuroda Taishi
08-15-2009, 07:58 PM
Jando Hyuga.Some villages in the story may relate to the villages in the show.

Yes, I was told by the mods I could use everything Except The Leaf Village, and any actual charaters from the show.

Cade
08-15-2009, 08:01 PM
Yes, I was told by the mods I could use everything Except The Leaf Village, and any actual charaters from the show.
Really?So we can use Sand,Sound,Mist,etc....

Kuroda Taishi
08-15-2009, 08:05 PM
Really?So we can use Sand,Sound,Mist,etc....

That is what Shryse told me, but it is subject to change.

Yori
08-15-2009, 08:43 PM
Yea im using the mist and lightning as 2 of my villages.

Kuroda Taishi
08-15-2009, 08:49 PM
IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT Coming Tomorrow!

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-16-2009, 07:08 AM
where is the announcement??? tomorrow is today!!

Kuroda Taishi
08-16-2009, 07:15 AM
where is the announcement??? tomorrow is today!!


THE CHUNIN EXAMS ARE COMING! THE CHUNIN EXAMS ARE COMING!

So the chunin exams arc wiil be the longest arc that i will have posted. The longest by far. It may even be the longest in the entire story. So instead of posting the entire thing like usual i am going to break it up. I will post probably a paragraph or 2 every few days. I need to revise the start of the arc, so the 1st part will probably be posted tonight or tomorrow.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-16-2009, 07:38 AM
woa, that is an important announcement! HURRY KURODA AND REVISE IT!!

Kuroda Taishi
08-16-2009, 07:56 AM
I like it Kuroda

Would you mind deleting this post on the 1st page? it is the 4th post i belive.

I want to make it so when i have to start posting story in a new post that it will flow right to it and not be interupted, thank you

yondaime
08-17-2009, 02:41 PM
whow got to catch up with story too bust these days with school lol

Kuroda Taishi
08-17-2009, 04:46 PM
okay i am working on revising the first part right now. I should have it done in the next 3 hours, if i dont get distracted, otherwise it will be pushed back until tomorrow

Yori
08-17-2009, 04:50 PM
There i did it

Kuroda Taishi
08-17-2009, 04:52 PM
There i did it

Thank You!

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:21 PM
Chunin Exam Arc
Chunin Exam Part 1

10 days later the 30 Genin participants from the Hidden Petal Village head out towards the Hidden Rock Village escorted by their Jonin Sensei and some Chunin for extra protection. The Journey to the Hidden Rock Village is mostly uneventful.

Kuroda takes this time to once again reconnect with his old friend Ichimaru. “So I guess that little talk I had with the Koukage worked,” laughs Ichimaru.

“Yeah, thanks I appreciate it,” replies Kuroda.

“Truthfully I think she would have let you come even if I didn’t say anything,” admits Ichimaru.

“Yeah why do you say that?” asks Kuroda.

“Well other than the fact that...” starts Ichimaru.

“I asked you not to speak about that,” interrupts Kuroda.

“Yeah, yeah,” apologizes Ichimaru, “Other than the obvious reason, this is the first time in a long time that Petal ninja have been invited into the Rock village. We need to show that we are still worthy of being called one of the Five Great Shinobi villages. So we need to have all the strong ninja we have competing in the exams.”

“I don’t care about that,” says Kuroda firmly.

“What do you mean?” inquires Ichimaru.

“I am not participating because I want to make the village look good. I don’t care what any of the other villages think of us, especially not the Hidden Rock Village.”

“Look I know you have a grudge because of what happened with the 7th Koukage,” says Ichimaru.

“Yes I do,” admits Kuroda, “And if I was strong enough I would kill the Tsuchikage if I got close enough. But that is not why I am here.”

“Then why are you here?” asks Ichimaru.

“I am here for my team,” explains Kuroda, “I am not going to hold them back because of my personal feelings. They deserve a chance to become Chunin after all the hard work they have done.”

“Good to see some things have not changed,” laughs Ichimaru.

“What do you mean?” asks Kuroda.

“You are always thinking about other people,” explains Ichimaru, “Ever since I met you, you always put other people first.”

“I don’t think I am like that at all,” says Kuroda, “But you would know better than me. You have always been good at reading people.”

“No doubt in my mind,” comments Ichimaru.

“Sorry Ichimaru, but I am going to have to borrow him to talk about some things,” says Kayo stopping in front of them. The two boys land on her branch.

“Well I guess we can talk more when we get there,” says Ichimaru, “I need to talk some things over with my team also.”

“Yeah, see you later,” waves Kuroda as Ichimaru takes off.
__________________________________________________ ________
Kayo and Kuroda jump down to the forest floor and walk to a secluded area to talk.

“So what did you need sensei?” he asks.

“The Koukage wanted me to give you a few messages before we enter into the Hidden Rock Village,” explains Kayo.

“Go on then,” he replies. “First of all you are to remain on your best behavior the entire time you are there. We don’t want any incidents,” says Kayo.

“What makes her think I won’t be?” he asks.

“I know why I would think that, but she didn’t give me a reason why she does,” replies Kayo.

“Interesting,” comments Kuroda.

“Moving on, she wants you to be on watch,” says Kayo, “We may be allies, but this is still foreign territory. Other villages might try to attack you, and even worse that mysterious ninja might show up again.”

“Haven’t you figured out that I am the mysterious ninja Sensei?” asks Kuroda.

“I suspected as much, but your jutsu prevents me from telling anyone other than you about it,” she replies.

“Good, I thought you might be slipping a bit,” jokes Kuroda.

“And finally the Koukage has mandated that you stay by my side for the duration of your stay in the Hidden Rock village, other than attending the exams,” says Kayo.

“It looks like we will be spending a lot of time together then Sensei,” he smirks.

“Good, maybe then you can tell me what you promised to tell me,” she counters.

“Patience,” he replies, “So since we are talking about the exams, can you give me any information about the other villages participating?”

“From what I was told including the 30 Genin from our village there will be 72 Rock ninja, 21 Grass ninja, 15 Rain ninja, 12 Snow ninja, 6 Wood ninja, and 6 Smoke ninja participating. Those are just preliminary numbers though. There could be more or less.”

“Interesting numbers,” he comments. “If there is nothing else, we should catch up with the group,” says Kayo.

“That’s all I wanted to know,” says Kuroda, “I don’t need to cheat to pass the exams.” They jump back into the trees and dart after the group.
__________________________________________________ ____________
As Petal ninja arrive in the village a large figure watches them from a high cliff. If anyone were to investigate they would actually find that it is not one figure, but two. A young but mature looking female with brown hair done up in a unique ponytail is sitting on top of the shoulders of a large man with long, wild brown hair. Some would think the girl is proactively dressed, wearing only a short skirt and a fishnet shirt with a long brown overcoat over the top.

“So what do you think of them Kuma?” asks the girl.

“Some of them look tough, but I don’t sense any with any special abilities,” responds Kuma.

“That’s what I was thinking,” says the woman kicking her heels against his chest playfully, “Some of them have chakra levels so low I can barely feel their presence at all. If I didn’t see them with my own eyes, I probably wouldn’t even notice they were there.”

He lets out a light chuckle, “So this is what the mighty Petal village has to offer.”

“Don’t be so quick to underestimate them Kuma,” she teases, “The Tsuchikage did make the alliance for a reason.”

“Yeah I know Tatsuki, you don’t need to remind me,” he replies, “But still I am worried. I wish Lord Tsuchikage would let me help you out.”

“You know the rules Kuma,” reminds Tatsuki, “Each phase can only have 1 proctor.”

“Yeah, but what if something happens? What if they decide to break the alliance and attack?” he questions.

“I am a big girl Kuma. I can take care of myself. I don’t need you protecting me every moment,” she replies.

“I made a promise Tatsuki,” he says firmly.

“I know, I know, but sometimes you can’t do what you want to,” she says, “Just busy yourself with some other things and try not to worry about it too much.”

Kuma gets a disappointed look on his face, Tatsuki moves to try and comfort him. Suddenly he shifts his weight causing her to fall off his shoulder. He catches her in his big arms and proceeds to tickle her belly. She laughs so hard tears come to her eyes. “Okay, okay enough,” she says.

He tosses her back up onto his shoulder. “Do you want to keep watching?” asks Kuma.

“No, I have seen enough. We can come back later when the Ice ninja arrive,” she replies.
__________________________________________________ ___________
Kuroda is standing in the middle of the path staring up at a cliff. “Something wrong Kuroda?” asks Sakura as she walks up beside him.

“No, just enjoying the scenery,” he replies, “we should catch up with the others.”

“I think they went this way,” says Sakura taking the lead.

“Kayo-sensei said that we will have to wait a few days before the exams start. There are a lot of ninja from a lot of villages participating this year,” comments Kuroda.

“I guess we will have some time on our hands to explore then,” she responds.
__________________________________________________ ____________
Kuroda decides not to explore the village, just so there are no incidents. After 2 days all the participants are called for the first phase of the exams.

To be continued...

KIBAFAN321
08-18-2009, 07:28 PM
Woo hoo! The Chunin Exams are starting! Woo hoo!!!

Will the next one be tomorrow, Kuroda? :D

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:35 PM
Woo hoo! The Chunin Exams are starting! Woo hoo!!!

Will the next one be tomorrow, Kuroda? :D

we will see.


btw, just so you know. that entire thing used to be just 6 sentances up until i started rewriting it yesterday.

KIBAFAN321
08-18-2009, 07:36 PM
No! You need to write it now!!

Really? That whole thing use to be 6 sentances? Wow...

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:40 PM
No! You need to write it now!!

Really? That whole thing use to be 6 sentances? Wow...

Too lazy, lol


Yep only 6. It is alot better this way right? xd

Amai Shikome
08-18-2009, 07:43 PM
I am caught up!

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:53 PM
I am caught up!

How is it so far?

Sai's brother
08-18-2009, 07:55 PM
http://i441.photobucket.com/albums/qq136/LordZeara/ErrorMessage.png

I choose the only option^

takuya
08-18-2009, 07:56 PM
Wow pretty good,but if you don't mine can I give you a little criticism.

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:57 PM
http://i441.photobucket.com/albums/qq136/LordZeara/ErrorMessage.png

I choose the only option^

nothin even happened yet, xD

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 07:57 PM
Wow pretty good,but if you don't mine can I give you a little criticism.

Please do

takuya
08-18-2009, 07:59 PM
Please doOk you're missing only a few things that would make this perfect you nearly always have perfect grammar and spelling,but when you do the fighting scenes,I feel you don't get really indepth in them and the characters you rarely show off their personalities,you never said how Sakura's crush for Kuroda developed or expanded on that or anything

Sai's brother
08-18-2009, 08:00 PM
nothin even happened yet, xD


so? =D

Amai Shikome
08-18-2009, 08:01 PM
How is it so far?
I think you softend Kuroda a little in this one. I don't remember him using the term Sensei as much before either. :D But my answer is i still like it.:mrgreen:

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 08:04 PM
Ok you're missing only a few things that would make this perfect you nearly always have perfect grammar and spelling,but when you do the fighting scenes,I feel you don't get really indepth in them and the characters you rarely show off their personalities,you never said how Sakura's crush for Kuroda developed or expanded on that or anything

I disagree on the fight scenes, but as for the other stuff you mentioned you are spot on. Those are some of the things i try to work on when i revise it.

so? =D

lol

I think you softend Kuroda a little in this one. I don't remember him using the term Sensei as much before either. :D But my answer is i still like it.:mrgreen:

he is using it in more of a ......... condescending manor. I think that is the right word

Yuukimaru
08-18-2009, 08:42 PM
nice kuroda!!!! im not as caught up as the rest of you so don't spoil the rest for me

X(

i've only read the first arc. but im gonna keep on readin until my eyes bleed.

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 08:45 PM
nice kuroda!!!! im not as caught up as the rest of you so don't spoil the rest for me

X(

i've only read the first arc. but im gonna keep on readin until my eyes bleed.

Have fun!

Shika'sgurl
08-18-2009, 09:33 PM
Yay! Chunin Exams are out! You got to write the other parts! I hate waiting!.........plz?

eagleye54321
08-18-2009, 09:41 PM
I have been behind Kuroda, and I plan on reading the remaining chapters now. I hope I'm satisfied. :)

Kuroda Taishi
08-18-2009, 09:54 PM
Yay! Chunin Exams are out! You got to write the other parts! I hate waiting!.........plz?

lol

I have been behind Kuroda, and I plan on reading the remaining chapters now. I hope I'm satisfied. :)

Me too, xD

eagleye54321
08-18-2009, 10:40 PM
Alright, I'm caught up. I am excited for the Chunin Exams, they should be fun.

Kuroda Taishi
08-19-2009, 01:37 PM
I might be doing another round of character descriptionss tonight.Haven't decided yet.

NaruSakufluff4ever
08-19-2009, 03:18 PM
*waiting for more exam writing* *almost falling off seat in impatience*

Hockey Otaku
08-19-2009, 03:20 PM
You know your contest, did you choose a new character yet?

Kuroda Taishi
08-19-2009, 04:54 PM
You know your contest, did you choose a new character yet?

I will be making an announcement in the other thread about that later

Hockey Otaku
08-19-2009, 04:56 PM
I will be making an announcement in the other thread about that later
Ok cool

Kuroda Taishi
08-19-2009, 05:50 PM
Character Descriptions

Rin age 17
A rogue Chunin from the Village Hidden Among the Snow. She has long flowing white hair and deep blue eyes. She is skilled in the Ice Style, and specializes in large scale attacks. She abandoned her village along with Gina because of a lack of loyalty and trust between ninja.

Gina age 17
A rogue Chunin from the Village Hidden Among the Snow. She has curly white hair down to her shoulders and brown eyes. She is skilled in the Ice Style and sepcializes in close range combat. She abandoned her village along with Rin because of a lack of loyalty and trust between ninja.

Kohaku age 19
A ninja from the Village Hidden in the Woods. She did not agree with her country's intention to ally with a neighboring nation and went off on her own to attack the daughter of the neighbors leader. She wears her short brown hair in a ponytail. She has a fear of being burned to death. She specializes in Jutsu involving trees.

Desh Momochi age 17
A Chunin from the Village Hidden in the Mist. He is the younger brother of Kasumi Momoshi. He is hostlie towards his sister because of her talents, however he will vigorously defend her skills if anyone challanges them. Desh has short spiky blue hair and hazel eyes. He wears light blue pants and a brown sleeveless vest. His full skills are unkown, but he is very confident in his abilities.

Midori Obani age 11
A Genin from the Village Hidden in the Grass. She wears her short black hair in a pony tail with a green ribbon intertwined in her hair beside her left cheek, and dark green eyes. She is young , confident, and eager to prove herself.

Kuroda Taishi
08-20-2009, 01:04 PM
Winners of the contest are announced in the other thread!

dark man
08-20-2009, 01:28 PM
hello kuroda i begin to work one character! it's Hanabiramaru Sarutobi age 64
stand that i scan the image 10 min!:D;)

Kuroda Taishi
08-20-2009, 01:32 PM
hello kuroda i begin to work one character! it's Hanabiramaru Sarutobi age 64
stand that i scan the image 10 min!:D;)

really? Cool!. Just post it in that other thread when you are finished

dark man
08-20-2009, 01:46 PM
woow it was difficult !;)
http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img44.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)

Kuroda Taishi
08-20-2009, 01:52 PM
woow it was difficult !;)
http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img44.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)


WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! That is great!

I was looking for a more gentle looking Koukage. But i definetly want to use this guy. Could you change symbol to the mist village symbol so he can be Mizukage?

dark man
08-20-2009, 02:29 PM
wath sort of signe would you like?

Kuroda Taishi
08-20-2009, 02:31 PM
wath sort of signe would you like?

the symbol on the hat should be the water symbol, like the mizukage has. You can probably find it on Narutopedia. or just look at the recent manga featuring the mizukage.

dark man
08-20-2009, 02:56 PM
i rectified the signe!:D
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)

Vatanui AKA Pride
08-20-2009, 03:13 PM
i rectified the signe!:D
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)

Whoa!
Sweet! :D

Kuroda Taishi
08-20-2009, 04:55 PM
i rectified the signe!:D
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)

Perfect!!! Alright do you want to do another character or characters?

yondaime
08-20-2009, 05:19 PM
i rectified the signe!:D
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7954/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/hanabiramarusarutobiage.jpg/)

Wow that looks great dude

--Earns you some Rep--

yondaime
08-20-2009, 05:20 PM
I would like to help you out with the characters Kuroda cuz I am a good drawer but I don't have a scanner