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SakuraGirl
12-18-2010, 12:57 PM
My heart swam in the sea of my tears.
My words slowly fade along with my fears.
Born from my dreams, and born from within,
go into a sin-filled tommorow.

Moonlight shine down on the cracked mirror,
my heart trembled when I saw you.
Like falling stars that try to crush my hopes;
tears overflow with lonliness.

Wouldn’t it be nice?
If we could walk together hand in hand – side by side.
How I’d love to go back to your town –
back to your home and be in your arms.
Never forget..I will be with you.
My existance is not the same.
Without you here..

Gentle illusions, oh, please halt my words.
Spread out your wings – fly with the wind.
There’s a distant place far beyond the clouds,
and it’s beckoning me forward.

I’ll tell you a dark secret of mine.
My heart is a fragile mirror.
As the rain falls trying to hide my tears,
I can hear the shattering hopes.

Wouldn’t it be nice?
If we could be together in this light – in the dark.
How I’d love to show all of my fears-
and please don’t ever let my trust die out.
I’ll still love you…even when I’m astray.
Please don’t make me say these words.
But I love you…

Wouldn’t it be nice?
If we could walk together hand in hand – side by side.
How I’d love to go back to your town –
back to your home and be in your arms.
Never forget..I will be with you.
My existance is not the same.
Without you here..

kejon16
12-18-2010, 01:02 PM
It's beautiful! ^.^

Danielle
12-18-2010, 01:04 PM
I love it. =)

Sheelah
12-18-2010, 01:08 PM
That was absolutely beautiful and touching SakuraGirl! :) I loved it! Thank you.

Xibitz360
12-18-2010, 01:08 PM
How touching, it's pretty good :).....nice use of imagery and tone!

SakuraGirl
12-18-2010, 01:09 PM
Aww Thank everyone,But it is not mine,I just found it,I don,t think i could write something that good.